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A Beneficial, If Unwilling, Compromise
A Pride and Prejudice Variation. When Mrs. Bennet discovers all her worse nightmares are about to come true, she does not react the way her family expects. Instead the normally silly woman takes matters into her own hands and gives marching orders to her daughters. Will they follow them to the letter? Will any of them find their happy ending? Just remember, the secret to a long and lasting relationship is compromise.
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Published September 15, 2017
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Bronwen Chisholm
11 books35 followersBronwen Chisholm was raised in Central Pennsylvania, the youngest of four sisters. Though she was not introduced to Jane Austen's work until later in life, she grew up reading the Bronte sisters, Gone With the Wind, and other classics as well as watching vintage Hollywood movies. Her love of books and literature almost led her to a career as a librarian. Instead, life and love carried her to Virginia where she took a position as a state employee and began raising her family.
As her children grew and became involved in their own interests, Bronwen returned to her love of the written word. No longer content to simply read it, she began writing. Though the first attempts ended up on a shelf for now, she would not be discouraged. Deciding to set aside her Women's Fiction and Suspense Romance for a time, she finally became a published author with her Pride and Prejudice Alternatives. Bronwen was thrilled with the acceptance of her first offering, The Ball At Meryton: A Pride and Prejudice Alternative Novella. She takes great pleasure in searching for potential "plot twists" and finding the way back to a happy ending. Her current work is told entirely from Georgiana Darcy's point of view and has been well received.
Her love of writing has led her to several writing groups, and she is currently serving as the Vice President of The Riverside Writers.
For more information, visit her at www.bronwenchisholm.wordpress.com.
As her children grew and became involved in their own interests, Bronwen returned to her love of the written word. No longer content to simply read it, she began writing. Though the first attempts ended up on a shelf for now, she would not be discouraged. Deciding to set aside her Women's Fiction and Suspense Romance for a time, she finally became a published author with her Pride and Prejudice Alternatives. Bronwen was thrilled with the acceptance of her first offering, The Ball At Meryton: A Pride and Prejudice Alternative Novella. She takes great pleasure in searching for potential "plot twists" and finding the way back to a happy ending. Her current work is told entirely from Georgiana Darcy's point of view and has been well received.
Her love of writing has led her to several writing groups, and she is currently serving as the Vice President of The Riverside Writers.
For more information, visit her at www.bronwenchisholm.wordpress.com.
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October 26, 2020
Politeness is the art of choosing among one's real thoughts. ~ Abel Stevens
The Beneficial Compromise in the title involves Darcy and Elizabeth. But surprisingly, the emotional growth in this story doesn’t involve ODC as much as it does Bingley and Jane as well as Papa Bennet and Mama Bennet.
Our story starts with Mrs. Bennet snooping in her husband’s bookroom and discovering a frightening letter. She immediately gathers her daughters and issues instructions for finalizing marriages for three of her daughters. Her instructions: Jane is to compromise Mr. Darcy because it appears Mr. Bingley will not make a decision anytime soon; Elizabeth is to compromise Mr. Bingley because she is strong enough to control the rudeness of the Bingley spinster and Mary will be left with Mr. Collins because … just because.
Manners are a sensitive awareness of the feelings of others. If you have that awareness, you have good manners, no matter which fork you use. ~ Emily Post
Mrs. Bennet’s feeling about Elizabeth's ability to be in charge of her household if she were Mrs. Bingley leaves Jane questioning her own attraction to Bingley. Does she truly like him or was she just responding to her Mother’s desire that she marry well? What would she do if Miss Bingley continued to make her home with her brother even after he married? Could Jane be in charge of her household with a spinster sister-in-law holding court?
Whoever one is, and wherever one is, one is always in the wrong if one is rude. ~ Maurice Baring
Jane insists Mr. Bingley address the issues of Caroline’s rudeness to guests in his home and the control the sister exerts over Mr. Bingley himself. Bingley must become the man of his house before he can expect to impress Jane Bennet.
Bingley invites his Meryton neighbors to a dinner. Will his sister behave as he has instructed?
Visitors should behave in such a way that the host and hostess feel at home. ~ J.S. Farynski
Mr. Bennet is also (finally) taking charge of his own home. Mrs. Bennet is making efforts to improve but her youngest daughters find the restrictions unbearable. When Lydia is unwilling to curb her dislike of Darcy, she is left at Longbourn when the family attends the dinner.
What is the letter that Mrs. Bennet finds so distressing?
What secret does Mr. Bennet keep from his family?
What will Lydia do when left unsupervised?
I enjoyed this story very much and can recommend it to anyone who likes JAFF.
Hospitality is making your guests feel at home, even if you wish they were. ~ Author Unknown
The Beneficial Compromise in the title involves Darcy and Elizabeth. But surprisingly, the emotional growth in this story doesn’t involve ODC as much as it does Bingley and Jane as well as Papa Bennet and Mama Bennet.
Our story starts with Mrs. Bennet snooping in her husband’s bookroom and discovering a frightening letter. She immediately gathers her daughters and issues instructions for finalizing marriages for three of her daughters. Her instructions: Jane is to compromise Mr. Darcy because it appears Mr. Bingley will not make a decision anytime soon; Elizabeth is to compromise Mr. Bingley because she is strong enough to control the rudeness of the Bingley spinster and Mary will be left with Mr. Collins because … just because.
Manners are a sensitive awareness of the feelings of others. If you have that awareness, you have good manners, no matter which fork you use. ~ Emily Post
Mrs. Bennet’s feeling about Elizabeth's ability to be in charge of her household if she were Mrs. Bingley leaves Jane questioning her own attraction to Bingley. Does she truly like him or was she just responding to her Mother’s desire that she marry well? What would she do if Miss Bingley continued to make her home with her brother even after he married? Could Jane be in charge of her household with a spinster sister-in-law holding court?
Whoever one is, and wherever one is, one is always in the wrong if one is rude. ~ Maurice Baring
Jane insists Mr. Bingley address the issues of Caroline’s rudeness to guests in his home and the control the sister exerts over Mr. Bingley himself. Bingley must become the man of his house before he can expect to impress Jane Bennet.
Bingley invites his Meryton neighbors to a dinner. Will his sister behave as he has instructed?
Visitors should behave in such a way that the host and hostess feel at home. ~ J.S. Farynski
Mr. Bennet is also (finally) taking charge of his own home. Mrs. Bennet is making efforts to improve but her youngest daughters find the restrictions unbearable. When Lydia is unwilling to curb her dislike of Darcy, she is left at Longbourn when the family attends the dinner.
What is the letter that Mrs. Bennet finds so distressing?
What secret does Mr. Bennet keep from his family?
What will Lydia do when left unsupervised?
I enjoyed this story very much and can recommend it to anyone who likes JAFF.
Hospitality is making your guests feel at home, even if you wish they were. ~ Author Unknown
February 20, 2018
Mrs. Bennet, you've done it now! Her husband has surprised her by not informing her of Collins' arrival until he is almost upon them so she is nervous about what else he might be keeping hidden until the last minute. Thinking that there is now something else going on from his behavior she goes through the letters, notes, etc. on his desk and is startled with one which seems to announce doom. She quickly gathers her daughters and commands immediate action that night at the Netherfield Ball. However what she orders is so against what you might think; but the lady does have her reasons. Jane is a dutiful daughter but she needs that liquid courage as so when she faces Darcy on the terrace she is slurring her words and giving away her intentions. I think this next might be my favorite part: Darcy responds with words to the effect that if it is going to be a compromise I will have it my way. Thus one pairing is quickly taken care of. Darcy has had his misgivings but as we read his thoughts and words we learn that he has reasoned himself into the proper mode in order to have a happy life.
But not so with Bingley. Jane is not shy in this situation. She tells him exactly what she thinks of his relationship with his sister and also that she does not believe he can change. She will not have a man who can't provide some protection for one who should matter more than a sibling.
So much of this story is dedicated to the path Bingley now takes. He gathers information and impressions from those who know him; even his sister, Louisa and Mr. Hurst, are consulted. Caroline is, oh, so manipulative and you will shake your head as you read how she uses the etiquette of society to show her brother who is in charge.
We get information about the early relationship of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet from her brother. Delightfully Mr. Bennet does make some changes in his household after he learns what his wife has done. However, here, too, we read of some rebellion as another Miss thinks she can have things her way.
I enjoyed this book. There are no MA scenes. However I could have enjoyed a few more kisses, touches and quirked eyebrows.
But not so with Bingley. Jane is not shy in this situation. She tells him exactly what she thinks of his relationship with his sister and also that she does not believe he can change. She will not have a man who can't provide some protection for one who should matter more than a sibling.
So much of this story is dedicated to the path Bingley now takes. He gathers information and impressions from those who know him; even his sister, Louisa and Mr. Hurst, are consulted. Caroline is, oh, so manipulative and you will shake your head as you read how she uses the etiquette of society to show her brother who is in charge.
We get information about the early relationship of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet from her brother. Delightfully Mr. Bennet does make some changes in his household after he learns what his wife has done. However, here, too, we read of some rebellion as another Miss thinks she can have things her way.
I enjoyed this book. There are no MA scenes. However I could have enjoyed a few more kisses, touches and quirked eyebrows.
March 16, 2018
What If Mrs. Bennet’s Compromise Scheme Went an Unexpected Direction?
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: The day of the Netherfield Ball through the following weeks
SYNOPSIS:
Desperate times call for desperate measures! Fearful for the future, Mrs. Bennet revises her matchmaking plans for her daughters. Even though there is a strong inclination between Mr. Bingley and Jane, she gives Jane orders to be caught in a compromising position with a different gentleman at the Netherfield Ball. And Elizabeth is no longer pushed towards Mr. Collins, but instead towards someone completely different. Will these new matchmaking plans be successful? Or does Mrs. Bennet embroil everyone into a scheme that leads to broken hearts and ruined reputations?
WHAT I LOVED:
- Interesting Twists: I love it when author decides to shake things up with some clever twists! In this case it was all due to Mrs. Bennet and a discovery she made about Mr. Bennet. It was delightful to see how these changes played out and what other alterations Mrs. Bennet’s actions prompted. I also think it was an accurate supposition at what Mrs. Bennet might do if she did indeed find herself in this situation. I’d like to think she would orchestrate some methods (and they’d probably be a little hare-brained) to save her daughters. I don’t think she is the type to sit back and just let life happen to her. 😉
- Mr. Bennet and Mrs. Bennet: I loved both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet for different reasons in this story! I admired how Mrs. Bennet takes action and has some perceptive insight about the men in the neighborhood. And I appreciated how some of her natural nervous tendencies were explained later on in the story. And I equally loved how Mr. Bennet took a more active role in his daughters’ lives, his sweet relationship with Jane, and how he had a few surprises in store for his family. These characters are sometimes ones that frustrate and exasperate; it was lovely to see them possess some admirable traits in this tale!
- Jane Bennet: Another intriguing change! Jane is usually portrayed as perfectly serene and one who optimistically sees good in everyone. But in this story (thanks to an accidental overindulgence in strong drink) she speaks her mind to Mr. Bingley and shares her reservations about his behavior and family. It was great to see some firmness in Jane’s character, I liked how she knew what she wanted and wouldn’t settle for less.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Some Quibbles: While I enjoyed exploring the fun and inventive twists this story had to offer, there were some conversations that had me quirking my eyebrow and one aspect that left me wanting more. As to the conversations, occasionally some felt a little more open and frank than you’d expect during Jane Austen’s time. For example, I wasn’t so sure about Mr. Darcy revealing all his past dealings with Wickham so quickly to Elizabeth and her parents. In addition, this story does shift focus from Darcy and Elizabeth to Jane and Bingley part way through – which is great, I love seeing this couple receive more attention! But at the same time, I never felt as engaged with their story and conflict as I did with Darcy and Elizabeth. I think it might have to do with Mr. Bingley not being the strongest of heroes and Mr. Darcy (with all his appeal and loveliness) overshadowing him a little bit.
CONCLUSION:
Overall, I found A Beneficial (if Unwilling) Compromise to be a diverting and charming Pride and Prejudice variation. As with her previous novel, Georgiana Darcy, Matchmaker, I greatly enjoyed Ms. Chisholm’s playful style and inventive premise; in this story she serves up some creative twists and delightful surprises that were a delight to encounter!
Austenesque Reviews
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: The day of the Netherfield Ball through the following weeks
SYNOPSIS:
Desperate times call for desperate measures! Fearful for the future, Mrs. Bennet revises her matchmaking plans for her daughters. Even though there is a strong inclination between Mr. Bingley and Jane, she gives Jane orders to be caught in a compromising position with a different gentleman at the Netherfield Ball. And Elizabeth is no longer pushed towards Mr. Collins, but instead towards someone completely different. Will these new matchmaking plans be successful? Or does Mrs. Bennet embroil everyone into a scheme that leads to broken hearts and ruined reputations?
WHAT I LOVED:
- Interesting Twists: I love it when author decides to shake things up with some clever twists! In this case it was all due to Mrs. Bennet and a discovery she made about Mr. Bennet. It was delightful to see how these changes played out and what other alterations Mrs. Bennet’s actions prompted. I also think it was an accurate supposition at what Mrs. Bennet might do if she did indeed find herself in this situation. I’d like to think she would orchestrate some methods (and they’d probably be a little hare-brained) to save her daughters. I don’t think she is the type to sit back and just let life happen to her. 😉
- Mr. Bennet and Mrs. Bennet: I loved both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet for different reasons in this story! I admired how Mrs. Bennet takes action and has some perceptive insight about the men in the neighborhood. And I appreciated how some of her natural nervous tendencies were explained later on in the story. And I equally loved how Mr. Bennet took a more active role in his daughters’ lives, his sweet relationship with Jane, and how he had a few surprises in store for his family. These characters are sometimes ones that frustrate and exasperate; it was lovely to see them possess some admirable traits in this tale!
- Jane Bennet: Another intriguing change! Jane is usually portrayed as perfectly serene and one who optimistically sees good in everyone. But in this story (thanks to an accidental overindulgence in strong drink) she speaks her mind to Mr. Bingley and shares her reservations about his behavior and family. It was great to see some firmness in Jane’s character, I liked how she knew what she wanted and wouldn’t settle for less.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Some Quibbles: While I enjoyed exploring the fun and inventive twists this story had to offer, there were some conversations that had me quirking my eyebrow and one aspect that left me wanting more. As to the conversations, occasionally some felt a little more open and frank than you’d expect during Jane Austen’s time. For example, I wasn’t so sure about Mr. Darcy revealing all his past dealings with Wickham so quickly to Elizabeth and her parents. In addition, this story does shift focus from Darcy and Elizabeth to Jane and Bingley part way through – which is great, I love seeing this couple receive more attention! But at the same time, I never felt as engaged with their story and conflict as I did with Darcy and Elizabeth. I think it might have to do with Mr. Bingley not being the strongest of heroes and Mr. Darcy (with all his appeal and loveliness) overshadowing him a little bit.
CONCLUSION:
Overall, I found A Beneficial (if Unwilling) Compromise to be a diverting and charming Pride and Prejudice variation. As with her previous novel, Georgiana Darcy, Matchmaker, I greatly enjoyed Ms. Chisholm’s playful style and inventive premise; in this story she serves up some creative twists and delightful surprises that were a delight to encounter!
Austenesque Reviews
March 25, 2018
This is a unique P&P what if that begins the day of the Netherfield Ball Mrs Bennet observes her husband's behavior and decides to search his book room for info; she reaches a justified but incorrect conclusion and transforms from a silly, vapid, vulgar woman to a silly, vulgar general launching her troops to save their fate by ending the evening engaged. Jane show herself to be both dutiful and bitchy while Lizzy is taken by surprise by Mr. Darcy and betrothed.
Important point here if you want a book about Lizzy and Darcy together this isn't that book. There are only a few scenes where they are alone and the scenes are pretty much pointless.
This is a book where Jane finds her voice, Bingley gets a spine and Mrs. Bennet is explained; albeit bizarrely. The day following the ball Darcy and Bingley are off to London and we get to go along. So we get Darcy telling his sister and cousin, Darcy confronting Aunt Catherine and Darcy and Bingley meeting the Gardiners. During the latter there is a conversation which is meant to explain Mrs. Bennet, but for the life of me I cannot fathom how it was held in a drawing room amongst almost strangers. It is the kind of conversation I can't imagine blurting out upon first meeting in 2018 let alone 1811.
Then we return to Meryton where more stuff happens none of which seems to have long reaching implications.... a secret about Mr. Bennet is revealed and other stuff happens...
General complaint the phrase is "Hear, hear" NOT "Here, here"
Important point here if you want a book about Lizzy and Darcy together this isn't that book. There are only a few scenes where they are alone and the scenes are pretty much pointless.
This is a book where Jane finds her voice, Bingley gets a spine and Mrs. Bennet is explained; albeit bizarrely. The day following the ball Darcy and Bingley are off to London and we get to go along. So we get Darcy telling his sister and cousin, Darcy confronting Aunt Catherine and Darcy and Bingley meeting the Gardiners. During the latter there is a conversation which is meant to explain Mrs. Bennet, but for the life of me I cannot fathom how it was held in a drawing room amongst almost strangers. It is the kind of conversation I can't imagine blurting out upon first meeting in 2018 let alone 1811.
Then we return to Meryton where more stuff happens none of which seems to have long reaching implications.... a secret about Mr. Bennet is revealed and other stuff happens...
General complaint the phrase is "Hear, hear" NOT "Here, here"
February 9, 2018
This story starts the night of the Netherfield Ball. Mrs Bennet finds a letter in Mr Bennet's study and believes he is dying. In response, she tells Jane to compromise Darcy and Elizabeth to compromise Bingley. Neither want this, but on the night Jane puts the plan into action, forcing Mr Darcy to take action to secure his choice of bride.
I really loved the first part of this book. The situation with Darcy and Elizabeth unfolds beautifully and I loved how she learns to read his facial expressions so early on. However, their situation was resolved quite quickly and I felt a little short changed at not seeing more of them, especially as Darcy tells his family Elizabeth does not love him when they get engaged.
The rest of the book is about Bingley and Jane and I felt the story lost its way a little towards the end. I would like to have witnessed Carolines comeuppance instead of reading about it in the Epilogue. I didn't really see what the final reveal added about Mr Bennet either but this might be because I was losing interest towards the end.
I almost feel this might have been better as two books so each couple could have their moment in the spotlight.
I really loved the first part of this book. The situation with Darcy and Elizabeth unfolds beautifully and I loved how she learns to read his facial expressions so early on. However, their situation was resolved quite quickly and I felt a little short changed at not seeing more of them, especially as Darcy tells his family Elizabeth does not love him when they get engaged.
The rest of the book is about Bingley and Jane and I felt the story lost its way a little towards the end. I would like to have witnessed Carolines comeuppance instead of reading about it in the Epilogue. I didn't really see what the final reveal added about Mr Bennet either but this might be because I was losing interest towards the end.
I almost feel this might have been better as two books so each couple could have their moment in the spotlight.
October 11, 2020
There was a lot to love in the book. Charles and Jane, mean-Jane makes an appearance which is always a good thing, Darcy is lovely, E is the best, Mrs B-yes!, Mr B with Mr W-such fun! Loved it.
Reread: Still think this a fun one!
Reread: Yes, still great!
Reread: The garden scene.
Reread: Still think this a fun one!
Reread: Yes, still great!
Reread: The garden scene.
February 6, 2018
This Pride and Prejudice variation fulfilled so many of my "dreams". Jane becomes almost as snarky as Elizabeth. Mr & Mrs Bennet get a great back story. There is a a good reason Mr. Bennet spends so much time in his study. Kitty and Lydia are reigned in. Evil in the forms of Wickham, Lady Catherine, and Caroline are dealt with. Darcy and Elizabeth are able to find their shared love in a much shorter time by TALKING to each other. Bingley takes ownership for himself. There is so much more and I don't think I even touched on the plot!!
While it didn't have the emotional angst that I love, it is a good story and I will look forward to reading it again.
While it didn't have the emotional angst that I love, it is a good story and I will look forward to reading it again.
January 26, 2018
An interesting Pride and Prejudice variation. While the plot had Darcy and Elizabeth, it played out to be more about Jane and Bingley. Very enjoyable.
June 13, 2023
A cute, quick read.
October 4, 2020
This story seemed to have one goal (spoiler alert): Bingley with a backbone. However, the author chose to change Austen's characterizations of Jane and Bingley to achieve that goal. I don't mind if an author changes one or more of Austen's characterizations to make a book more interesting, but when they base an entire secondary story arc upon this, it's kind of a mega-cheat. It would have been possible to show this without the changes that were so grating. In addition, one gets tired of whining Bingley and bitchy Jane. Yes, bitchy. She wasn't like Lizzy as Mr. Bennet kept saying over and over (an unnecessary redundancy), she was downright unkind. The book isn't long, but this part of the story arc made it drag towards the second half. The first half was a quick resolution for D&E.
The thing was, (spoiler alert) after Bingley should have booted Caroline right off, he got off easily anyways. There was no need for his change. Then, in the end, bitchy Jane booted Caroline. Who has the backbone? So the plot itself wound up being weaker than it could have been.
Aside from these complaints, the writing quality is quite good, but there were more than average editing problems for a self-published book. Modern expressions, misuse of words, non-Regency words, non-British spelling/usages, and homophones, for example, were used. These are rather simple fixes for a basic copy editor. This could have been a four-star book without this, due to its attempt at an interesting premise and its freedom from common writing errors such as head-hopping, continuity problems, etc. It had good language otherwise and great scene-setting.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF writer and some may say my reviews could be biased as a result; however, I am a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial.
The thing was, (spoiler alert) after Bingley should have booted Caroline right off, he got off easily anyways. There was no need for his change. Then, in the end, bitchy Jane booted Caroline. Who has the backbone? So the plot itself wound up being weaker than it could have been.
Aside from these complaints, the writing quality is quite good, but there were more than average editing problems for a self-published book. Modern expressions, misuse of words, non-Regency words, non-British spelling/usages, and homophones, for example, were used. These are rather simple fixes for a basic copy editor. This could have been a four-star book without this, due to its attempt at an interesting premise and its freedom from common writing errors such as head-hopping, continuity problems, etc. It had good language otherwise and great scene-setting.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF writer and some may say my reviews could be biased as a result; however, I am a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial.
January 22, 2018
Funny and romantic story with a lot of surprises.
Enters at the day of the Netherfield ball. Mrs Bennet has sneak-peaked at a letter on Mr Bennet's desk and is certain he is dying. Instead of panicking, cold calculation sets in as she appraises her daughters on who to compromise at the ball. Some of the gentlemen involved have other ideas though...
The ball does not go according to plan as Jane makes an excessive amount of trips to the punch bowl. The effect lead to several surprises and Bingley will need to grow a backbone.
A journey to London follows with some debacle with lady Catherine before a refreshed version of the Wickham debacle.
Ends in a little epilogue of what's to come after the weddings...
Heartily recommend this fun read.
Enters at the day of the Netherfield ball. Mrs Bennet has sneak-peaked at a letter on Mr Bennet's desk and is certain he is dying. Instead of panicking, cold calculation sets in as she appraises her daughters on who to compromise at the ball. Some of the gentlemen involved have other ideas though...
The ball does not go according to plan as Jane makes an excessive amount of trips to the punch bowl. The effect lead to several surprises and Bingley will need to grow a backbone.
A journey to London follows with some debacle with lady Catherine before a refreshed version of the Wickham debacle.
Ends in a little epilogue of what's to come after the weddings...
Heartily recommend this fun read.
June 25, 2018
Good book
I liked the story and Darcy and Lizzy getting together early in the story. Caroline got just what she deserved so did Wickham.
I liked the story and Darcy and Lizzy getting together early in the story. Caroline got just what she deserved so did Wickham.
September 17, 2017
A cute, but short story
Bronwen Chisholm has again proven that she has a love and affinity for P&P and its beloved characters. In this tale, Ms Chisholm allows for Mrs Bennet to interpreting behaviors of her husband and resolving to do an amateur investigation in which she takes things into her own hands and totally botches everything up. It really is a comedy of errors!!! Mrs Bennet feels her worries are coming to fruition and decides who is to be matched up with whom. Where I get totally ass backwards, is how compliant Jane becomes to a point of almost ruthless determination and lashing out at everyone.
We still have the nasty villains: Lady Catherine, Caroline, and Wickham!!! And we have many characters acting OOC: Bingley, Darcy, Elizabeth, Jane, Mr Bennet, Mrs Bennet. And then there is same stupid, outrageous Lydia with her tail, Kitty. D&E's OOC just really results in an earlier understanding, now I will not tell you how and why.
I'd have to say that I really liked Mr Bennet in this story, and I can not usually say that. After certain events come to light, he is a more conscience father and has a surprise for everyone at the end!!! I too enjoyed this D&E. Now this will sound weird, but I tend to enjoy a very altered Jane, I can get so tired of the Angelic Jane that it's nauseating!! And I like how this Jane isn't completely bad, but that she challenges Bingley in some respects. I always feel that J&B get such an easy ride that I love when there is some strife in thief relationship.
My only complaints was that it was too short for my liking, had that I felt there was some detail that was missing or unresolved. But I will highly recommend this book to all JAFFers!!!
Bronwen Chisholm has again proven that she has a love and affinity for P&P and its beloved characters. In this tale, Ms Chisholm allows for Mrs Bennet to interpreting behaviors of her husband and resolving to do an amateur investigation in which she takes things into her own hands and totally botches everything up. It really is a comedy of errors!!! Mrs Bennet feels her worries are coming to fruition and decides who is to be matched up with whom. Where I get totally ass backwards, is how compliant Jane becomes to a point of almost ruthless determination and lashing out at everyone.
We still have the nasty villains: Lady Catherine, Caroline, and Wickham!!! And we have many characters acting OOC: Bingley, Darcy, Elizabeth, Jane, Mr Bennet, Mrs Bennet. And then there is same stupid, outrageous Lydia with her tail, Kitty. D&E's OOC just really results in an earlier understanding, now I will not tell you how and why.
I'd have to say that I really liked Mr Bennet in this story, and I can not usually say that. After certain events come to light, he is a more conscience father and has a surprise for everyone at the end!!! I too enjoyed this D&E. Now this will sound weird, but I tend to enjoy a very altered Jane, I can get so tired of the Angelic Jane that it's nauseating!! And I like how this Jane isn't completely bad, but that she challenges Bingley in some respects. I always feel that J&B get such an easy ride that I love when there is some strife in thief relationship.
My only complaints was that it was too short for my liking, had that I felt there was some detail that was missing or unresolved. But I will highly recommend this book to all JAFFers!!!
October 15, 2025
A great way to compromise!
The story starts out with Mrs. Bennett snooping and coming to the wrong conclusions. I had not thought the events that would follow would make me laugh. Thanks you for that! The plot is serious and makes the Bennett daughters look at themselves and begins a series of changes that benefit the entire family, with Lydia being the only hold out. I liked the character development, and of course the happy ending. I would have given it 5 stars if the story was longer. I wanted more. I hope there is a sequel as the plot lends itself, however the ending lacks nothing, Its my personal opinion that another story would be awsome!
The story starts out with Mrs. Bennett snooping and coming to the wrong conclusions. I had not thought the events that would follow would make me laugh. Thanks you for that! The plot is serious and makes the Bennett daughters look at themselves and begins a series of changes that benefit the entire family, with Lydia being the only hold out. I liked the character development, and of course the happy ending. I would have given it 5 stars if the story was longer. I wanted more. I hope there is a sequel as the plot lends itself, however the ending lacks nothing, Its my personal opinion that another story would be awsome!
October 2, 2018
A compromise gone awry with a HEA
Mrs. Bennet reads a letter to Mr. Bennet that seems to indicate he is dying. As a result, she encourages Jane and Elizabeth to compromise Mr Darcy and Mr Bingley, but with the wrong daughter matches with the wrong man. And so the story begins with lots a laughter, some misunderstandings, and a HEA for both couples.
I really enjoyed the authors portrayal of Jane - much stronger and more like Elizabeth. And Mr Bennett’s character was hilarious is a Dey humor type of way.
Overall, a great story.
Mrs. Bennet reads a letter to Mr. Bennet that seems to indicate he is dying. As a result, she encourages Jane and Elizabeth to compromise Mr Darcy and Mr Bingley, but with the wrong daughter matches with the wrong man. And so the story begins with lots a laughter, some misunderstandings, and a HEA for both couples.
I really enjoyed the authors portrayal of Jane - much stronger and more like Elizabeth. And Mr Bennett’s character was hilarious is a Dey humor type of way.
Overall, a great story.
October 27, 2018
Entertaining, more development for Jane and Bingley.
Entertaining story. Moved well and several laugh out loud moments. Interesting growth journeys for several characters.I liked the focus shift, being not always from Darcy and Elizabeth’s perspective, seeing things from others perspectives was nice. A nice little back story for Mrs Bennett really added a missing dimension for her. Jane lets go and Bingley grows a backbone. I would read this again and also offer it as a suggestion.
Entertaining story. Moved well and several laugh out loud moments. Interesting growth journeys for several characters.I liked the focus shift, being not always from Darcy and Elizabeth’s perspective, seeing things from others perspectives was nice. A nice little back story for Mrs Bennett really added a missing dimension for her. Jane lets go and Bingley grows a backbone. I would read this again and also offer it as a suggestion.
February 6, 2018
Fun!
Great alternative premise, with the same happy outcome. Nice development of our favorite characters with a little twist. Predictable but not boring. Good, clean writing and editing. That in itself makes the reading a pleasure.
Great alternative premise, with the same happy outcome. Nice development of our favorite characters with a little twist. Predictable but not boring. Good, clean writing and editing. That in itself makes the reading a pleasure.
August 10, 2019
A few swoonworthy moments for Darcy.
March 16, 2018
Nice
I'd probably give it three and a half stars, but no real complaints. It was fun to read about Jane forcing Huntley to be a man.
I'd probably give it three and a half stars, but no real complaints. It was fun to read about Jane forcing Huntley to be a man.
October 1, 2017
More Jane than Litzy
While the story is well told and has numerous, enjoyable twists and turns, it is more a story of Jane and Bingley coming together than Lizzy and Darcy (my personal preference). In that way, the synopsis was misleading. This is the only reason for the 3 vs. 4 star review.
Overall, it was a nice correction of ALL of JA's characters' multiple missteps. Although at times, the author seemed a little severe on a couple.
Beautiful backstory on Mrs. Bennett and a delightful rendition of Mr. Bennett.
While the story is well told and has numerous, enjoyable twists and turns, it is more a story of Jane and Bingley coming together than Lizzy and Darcy (my personal preference). In that way, the synopsis was misleading. This is the only reason for the 3 vs. 4 star review.
Overall, it was a nice correction of ALL of JA's characters' multiple missteps. Although at times, the author seemed a little severe on a couple.
Beautiful backstory on Mrs. Bennett and a delightful rendition of Mr. Bennett.
August 31, 2019
Read this on the FanFiction site BeyondAusten. I enjoyed the overall storyline Mrs. Bennet is a bit more anxious then normal and tries to force Jane to compromise Darcy and Elizabeth to compromise Bingley. Jane tries to do as told despite it breaking her heart and Elizabeth sacrifices herself to protect the sister she loves. It was an interesting entangled story but I lost a bit of context waiting for the new chapters to be released on the site. Excited to re-read it in book format.
March 3, 2018
Hmmm.
Darcy fell in love too fast. HATED Jane. HATED Charles. Lydia, ugh! Mrs. Bennet was more annoying than usual. I just wanted to find ish the book so I could move on to something else.
Darcy fell in love too fast. HATED Jane. HATED Charles. Lydia, ugh! Mrs. Bennet was more annoying than usual. I just wanted to find ish the book so I could move on to something else.
March 25, 2019
Lovely
An interesting variation of author Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice. Rather different storyline than usual but still enjoyed it.
An interesting variation of author Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice. Rather different storyline than usual but still enjoyed it.
October 17, 2024
This is really primarily about our two heroes as they seek to become husbands. The characters are well written and Mr Bennet is fantastic. I heartily recommend this variation.
November 15, 2022
To begin with, Mrs. Bennet is convinced that her husband is dying and she tells her daughters that they are to compromise eligible gentlemen at the Netherfield ball. Her theory is that Jane should take on Darcy and leave Bingley to Lizzy because sweet, kind Jane could not stand up to Miss Bingley and Lizzy appears more likely to be able to dispatch Caroline. Things don't go according to Mrs. Bennet's plans as Darcy has his own opinion and acts decisively. The ordeal gives Jane reasons to reconsider her affections to Bingley, who realizes that Jane sees him as a weak man. There are some interesting parallels with Mr. Bennet who also has a history of creating troubles by avoiding conflict.
I liked the writing style. Darcy has done most of his foot-in-the-mouthing by the time this story starts and Elizabeth figures out she could be happy with him pretty fast, so Our Dear Couple's affairs were settled early on in the story. I don't miss pointless misunderstandings but it puts them on the backburner a bit as you don't see a whole lot of tension or romance between them. It's more about whether Bingley and Jane can sort themselves out and deal with Caroline, and a little bit about dealing with Lydia and Darcy's relatives. I am of two minds about this Mr. Bennet, he has some wonderful moments but his attitude towards his wife struck me as wrong. He could easily have reassured her nerves but chose not to. And when Jane shows some frustration he keeps telling her it's his own character, or Lizzy's, coming out, as if Jane couldn't have feelings of her own.
Eventually it's Jane who decides Caroline's fate in a fit of temper, not Bingley acting in a decisive manner, and I wasn't sure about that. I mean, good for Jane, but Bingley's character arc is a bit weaker for it.
I liked the writing style. Darcy has done most of his foot-in-the-mouthing by the time this story starts and Elizabeth figures out she could be happy with him pretty fast, so Our Dear Couple's affairs were settled early on in the story. I don't miss pointless misunderstandings but it puts them on the backburner a bit as you don't see a whole lot of tension or romance between them. It's more about whether Bingley and Jane can sort themselves out and deal with Caroline, and a little bit about dealing with Lydia and Darcy's relatives. I am of two minds about this Mr. Bennet, he has some wonderful moments but his attitude towards his wife struck me as wrong. He could easily have reassured her nerves but chose not to. And when Jane shows some frustration he keeps telling her it's his own character, or Lizzy's, coming out, as if Jane couldn't have feelings of her own.
Eventually it's Jane who decides Caroline's fate in a fit of temper, not Bingley acting in a decisive manner, and I wasn't sure about that. I mean, good for Jane, but Bingley's character arc is a bit weaker for it.
March 25, 2020
This book was not what I expected as it had very little D & E. The focus was on Bingley and Jane, more Bingley than Jane. It was an enjoyable story, but the characters were not very believable in my opinion. I find Darcy's actions at the ball totally out of character for him. A person who has always avoided being manipulated suddenly walks right into a compromise? I understand he did have an attraction to Elizabeth at that time, but he was no where near the point offering for her so I just struggled to wrap my brain around his immediate change in attitude and behavior. I also found that while Bingley certainly needed some growth, he went from being a friendly and amiable person to one who is mopey and depressed and I struggled with that as well. I did like evolution of Jane's character with the exception of some of her words to Lizzy at the ball. I had a hard time imagining even a tipsy and confused Jane saying such hurtful things to her favorite sister. It may have been more believable had Lizzy "stolen" the man she truly cared for, but Jane never had feelings for Darcy, in fact she expressed her repulsion of being attached to him, therefore I don't think her words and feelings were congruent. I did like her developing more strength of character without losing her kind heart. The Mrs. Bennet story line was kind of weird and I have mixed feelings about her portrayal here. With that being said, this was a unique variation and there were some fun aspects. I thought Mr. Bennet's secret was very clever and I absolutely loved that!
August 14, 2020
Everyone is put in check
I'm glad I read this book. I wasn't expecting to like it as much as I did. What I loved the most about this variation was the amount of times I caught myself saying, "about time." I found myself going back to read that section over again because I couldn't believe it actually took place and so early in the story.
What I liked was 1) Darcy came to an understanding with Elizabeth early on. 2) Darcy laid down the law. No one was going to talk and about the woman he loved. 3) Elizabeth didn't mess it up. 4) Someone FINALLY told Caroline her insults will not be tolerated and there will be consequences. 4) Mr. Bennet takes control of his family. All these things happened early enough in the story. I personally get tired of waiting until the very end for everything to be tied in a nice little bow.
So why 4 stars instead of 5? After the tenth chapter or so Elizabeth was an afterthought. I'm okay with that if she was the annoying, judgemental and quick tempered Elizabeth. Im this story she was likable, so it would have been nice to see more Darcy and Elizabeth page time. The main characters was Bingley, Jane, Darcy and even Mr. Bennet. I do recommend the book, not seeing enough of D&E relationship is the only reason for 4stars.
I'm glad I read this book. I wasn't expecting to like it as much as I did. What I loved the most about this variation was the amount of times I caught myself saying, "about time." I found myself going back to read that section over again because I couldn't believe it actually took place and so early in the story.
What I liked was 1) Darcy came to an understanding with Elizabeth early on. 2) Darcy laid down the law. No one was going to talk and about the woman he loved. 3) Elizabeth didn't mess it up. 4) Someone FINALLY told Caroline her insults will not be tolerated and there will be consequences. 4) Mr. Bennet takes control of his family. All these things happened early enough in the story. I personally get tired of waiting until the very end for everything to be tied in a nice little bow.
So why 4 stars instead of 5? After the tenth chapter or so Elizabeth was an afterthought. I'm okay with that if she was the annoying, judgemental and quick tempered Elizabeth. Im this story she was likable, so it would have been nice to see more Darcy and Elizabeth page time. The main characters was Bingley, Jane, Darcy and even Mr. Bennet. I do recommend the book, not seeing enough of D&E relationship is the only reason for 4stars.
August 13, 2020
An Enjoyable Perspective on Compromise
The circumstances leading to the compromise were unexpected and occurred early. That indicated the rest of the story would also have surprises, and it did not disappoint. The characters were just different enough to provide a very enjoyable story.
**Spoiler Alert** Mama B. was most determined to force Jane to compromise Darcy, and that set the scenario for the misunderstandings that followed. Darcy and Elizabeth reached a tentative accord very quickly, something that some readers, not this reader, may find too soon to be believable. I appreciated the way Wickham was handled. Ditto for Miss Bingley. I laughed at the revelation about Papa B’s activities. **End Spoiler**
It was a pleasure to have no editing errors to disturb the flow. If there were editing errors, I didn’t notice them. I do not look for historical or cultural inaccuracies since this is fiction.
Definitely recommended as a welcome, well-written variation I hadn’t previously encountered.
The circumstances leading to the compromise were unexpected and occurred early. That indicated the rest of the story would also have surprises, and it did not disappoint. The characters were just different enough to provide a very enjoyable story.
**Spoiler Alert** Mama B. was most determined to force Jane to compromise Darcy, and that set the scenario for the misunderstandings that followed. Darcy and Elizabeth reached a tentative accord very quickly, something that some readers, not this reader, may find too soon to be believable. I appreciated the way Wickham was handled. Ditto for Miss Bingley. I laughed at the revelation about Papa B’s activities. **End Spoiler**
It was a pleasure to have no editing errors to disturb the flow. If there were editing errors, I didn’t notice them. I do not look for historical or cultural inaccuracies since this is fiction.
Definitely recommended as a welcome, well-written variation I hadn’t previously encountered.
February 18, 2021
An inside examination of a perplexing friendship
Though told third person, with some variations of plot, the biggest change is in the characters. Darcy is more forthcoming here and that reveals a more malleable character. Bingley's thoughts, doubts and actions take center stage as he receives very different guidance from his friend who has easily accepted his own fascination and desires. The obstacles in this story are far more from the two supporting characters than from any other quarter. An interesting variation, 3.5 raised to 4 for originality of theme, though the dialogue is somewhat stilted in awkward pursuit of the period. And they drink a lot ....of everything.
Though told third person, with some variations of plot, the biggest change is in the characters. Darcy is more forthcoming here and that reveals a more malleable character. Bingley's thoughts, doubts and actions take center stage as he receives very different guidance from his friend who has easily accepted his own fascination and desires. The obstacles in this story are far more from the two supporting characters than from any other quarter. An interesting variation, 3.5 raised to 4 for originality of theme, though the dialogue is somewhat stilted in awkward pursuit of the period. And they drink a lot ....of everything.
October 7, 2021
This was a very enjoyable read and I highly recommend it.
I particularly liked Darcy in this variation, and Lizzy was reasonable and kind, which I appreciated.
I wasn't so fond of Jane acting like Elizabeth and I would like to have seen more of the Colonel and Georgiana, but these are miniscule complaints.
Wickham and Lady Catherine are barely present and I did not mind that at all.
In addition, low angst increased my enjoyment and I am sure I will reread several times.
Read this book, even if only to see a less nervous Mrs. Bennet.
I particularly liked Darcy in this variation, and Lizzy was reasonable and kind, which I appreciated.
I wasn't so fond of Jane acting like Elizabeth and I would like to have seen more of the Colonel and Georgiana, but these are miniscule complaints.
Wickham and Lady Catherine are barely present and I did not mind that at all.
In addition, low angst increased my enjoyment and I am sure I will reread several times.
Read this book, even if only to see a less nervous Mrs. Bennet.
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