When starting, the descriptive flow was a little hard to follow, but at the same time the author managed to hook me waiting for what was about to happen and in fact to put me inside the action.
By the time action starts to move I was already totally hooked and than, was a spiral to get what was happening next.
A good point is that when at some point I got a little bit disapointed by what I thought it was a premature end of the main characters, i just found the next chapter where a complete turn back happens, it caught me by surprise, a good one.