awful!
full of errors, whether it was spelling, grammar, continuity, or even completely getting a character's name wrong for an entire scene about here. there were just straight-up numbers inserted into some words, obviously a typo, but god it just makes it feel that much more childish. it reads like the roughest of rough drafts.
it obviously was supposed to be, or was at one point, several books compiled into one novel. i can tell you right now that putting it into one novel was the correct choice, but not without MAJOR editing. due it having been several novels, there is SO MUCH needless description of events and places that were already described 150 pages ago! cut out the double descriptions and the book instantly goes down from 400+ pages, to maybe 350, which this book *desperately* needs. it was just fucking dragging at the end.
plot was also obvious and predictable. characters fell flat across the board, especially when their motivations were completely ill-contrived and bullshit.
also, male author that pays way too much fucking attention to any & all description of female characters. bro is OBSESSED with the protagonist's "black, belted, double-breasted rain coat." like brother stfu