Easy and quick to read, with some reverse harem and mafia in the mix, two things I love reading about.
I did however have a few problems with this novella: - SPOILERS AHEAD-
- I think the MC is a doormat-idiot. Her boyfriend has been cheating on her for two years, even has a baby with her a best friend, a baby who the MC sees with some frequency and looks like her bf, and she doesn't even have the slight suspicion? I find that hard to believe.
- The MC's personality isn't believable at all, from the moment she finds out her bf is cheating on her she completely changes. From a lawyer who fights for equal and animal rights, to a cold-blooded murderess?
- The sex scene, so memorable...wait, not really.
It completely baffled me how her vagina stretched to fit two penises. No, I'm not joking, that's exactly what happens.
Look, here's what I usually expect during a sex scene of a menage book: one penis per hole. Am I being to raunchy? I don't think so, I mean, if you've read this book I'm sure you've read worse. Besides vaginal sex, a blowjob, and even backdoor sex, that's usually what we get from these sort of books. It's a menage after all, with three men. That's usually how you keep three men entertained at the same time.
What I don't expect is two penises on a freaking vagina! Unless you're elastic woman. That whole sex scene seemed to be taken out of a low-cost redtube video, where the poor porn actress is pretending she's loving it, when she's probably wishing to go home and ice her mistreated cooter.
-Besides, she has sex with three men and only gets off once? I feel sad for her. The guys obviously must need a map.
- Last problem I had with this book, again the author doesn't seem like she actually researched correctly about Italian expressions, I don't speak Italian, but I can however assure you, no one in their right mind says in Italian: "I want to have sex with you." - that is just weird, you don't really say it in English either. Please, please, either do a well-done research, get a good editor, or don't write in a foreign language you obviously have no knowledge of. It's so awkward.
With that being said, since I'm a sucker for pain, I'm reading the second book.