A Station on the Path to Somewhere Better
by Benjamin Wood (Scribiner London 2018)
I’ve been wanting to read the newish kid on the block for sometime. I’d noticed him when he was short-listed for the Costa First Novel Award in 2012, with his debut, The Bellwether Revivals, but, like a lot of short-listed stuff, I never got the book. Then in 2014 his second novel, The Ecliptic, came out to acclaim and he was shortlisted for the Sunday Times Young Novelist of the Year Award, and described by them by ‘a writer to watch'. In his early forties, he’s moved from the north-west of England to the south-east, where he lives with his family. He teaches at King’s College London.
A Station on the Path to Somewhere Better came out two years ago and I’ve had his name on my ‘must read’ list since reading the review. But it was only after the libraries came out of lockdown that he arrived in a pile of ordered books, in hardback, and I opened it with relish, and enthusiasm. The book starts off like any family drama, a steady rise in tension showing the aftermath of a family break-up. I imagined it would be about a twelve-year-old boys assent into manhood, where he learnt the facts of growing up when he took a trip in1995 with his estranged father. Daniel’s father, Francis Hardesty (a fantastically pertinent family name), is described on the opening page (pg 3) by his son, ‘I believed my father was a good man, somebody whose blood was fit to share.’ That might have been clue enough that things were going to take a dreadful turn, but I didn’t catch on that quickly. It was at the end of the chapter, where Wood takes a huge risk in the writing and breaks a well-known rule…never tell the reader what is going to happen at the start of the story… I read the words that end chapter one; As we drove off, [Mum] was smiling at herself, a limp hand spread across her heart. It was the last I ever saw of her. (pg 14)
What’s the writer doing? I had to ask. This is a dangerous tactic, only to be used when you’re hugely confident it’s the right approach. By the time I was a third into the novel, I could see his rational. The gentle, steady incline up the tension stakes was tempered with vulnerability and behind this is the allure of those earlier words. I still couldn’t see just why he’d never see his Mum again. Okay, Fran Hardesty was clearly a liar, and a cheapskate; he’d cancelled the nice hotel Daniel’s Mum had made him promise to book, and now Dan’s sleeping above a pub, while his dad has sex with a singer in the ensuite. Okay, he’s promised Dan a trip to somewhere special and it���s becoming clear this isn’t going well. Okay, we can see that Fran is someone who hates being backed into a corner where he might have to admit a failing.
As they travel, we see the landscape develop. They’re heading towards the Lake District, but as the story moves through this beautiful landscape, it becomes a place of blood and terror. In Fran’s presence, it’s beauty is replaced by a ragged, tattered, chaotic, menacing. The seedy pub, the rusty gates, the cluttered interior of the Volvo’s boot.
Fran sucks his friend, QC, and an ex-girlfriend, Chloe, into his deceit and Dan has to watch – finally duct-taped to the carseat, as his father’s anger heats into rage and violence.
No one is going to survive this story, and for a while I was sure Dan would be one of those who would perish at his father’s hands.
This is the sort of book that, as you put it down at the end of a chapter, you’re panting. And, until you pick it up again, you’re constantly haunted by the story. It became woven into my brain. If I could have helped Dan, if I could have shouted at him ‘run, Daniel, run!’ I would have. Outloud, across my bedroom. The entire scenario was so real, I was there inside it the nightmare.
Throughout the book we hear extracts from a children’s novel called The Artifex Appears, a science fantasy which became a popular kid’s TV programme, staring Maxine Laidlaw. Dan listens to the cassette, read by Maxine, as they travel north towards the TV studio, where Dan’s been promised a look around the set and the chance to meet the stars. Fran works for the studio, he says, painting scenery. I think the story of the Artifix was the hardest part for me to gel with in this dramatic and, finally, nail-biting novel. I wanted to know how it could fit, this story of a young boy who suffers an asthma attack in a forest and is rescued by alien who appears like a batty old women using alien words and cooking strange potions. She’s sure Albert is from her planet, because normally people can’t see or hear her, and Albert can do both. As Dan and Fran get closer and closer to the TV studio, I started wondering what this had to do with their story – I searched my mind for a link that was symbolic of the horror Dan will experience. And then that horror is over, the story told, but we’re still more than 50 pages away from the end. This is where we learn what happened to Dan after the events of that weekend. He’s thrown himself into his studies, gone to LSE, ended up on Wall Street, loves a girl who understands him, marries her. But he’s not whole. He drugs his nights up with sleeping tablets, he’s cold with other people and too wedded to his job. And one day he gets into a fight and feels his father’s rage inside him.
And that’s when I realised how the symbolism of The Artifex works in this novel. Daniel has become alien to the world he's living in. He is Albert, walking through the normal world after experiencing a totally different, frightening, scarring perspective on it. At the end of the novel, Dan is trying to become healed from his trauma and we learn just why he’s telling us this story – a story that will remain with me for a long time.