The Devils Daughter

by Cilla Lee

Niya's life has been miserable, an abusive father the disappearance of her mother at the age of four and a life filled with misery and pain. Her father sees her as a punching bag, but she still has faith and that faith leads her to a new life with endless possibilities.
Being a Prospect your expected to do whatever you're told to do, and the day he's told to collect a debt his life changes. Niya is beautiful scared and he's fallen for her with one look.

222 pages, Kindle Edition

Published September 28, 2017

Reviews

[Envywho · Rating 2 out of 5]

Hoping the second book is better.

[Lynsey · Rating 1 out of 5]

I really like the story line of these books, but I just can’t get over how bad the editing is. The problem is it is not just one book it is all of them. If this author wants to keep me as a reader this issue needs to be addressed ASAP

[Céline Mitte · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story has good possibility but god...the editing is so pool !!!

[Kiemo · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoyed the story: the characters, the premise, plot line, back story, etc. Even the fact Niya and Colt's story stretched over two books didn't bother me as much as it usually does. As a writer, you have the ability to tell a great story, but you need to hire an editor. I've read several of the books in this series and each one has the same errors--over and over again. For example, ganna for going to or gonna; where for we're, etc. These errors are very distracting. Moreover, if it wasn't for the main story's ability to hold my attention, I'd give up on reading your books all together (hence, the reason I believe you have so much potential). Others, might not be so willing to overlook this :). I hope this helps ;)

[Lisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

I stumbled across this series and I have to say I love this series. But I have to agree although I have rated 5 stars the editing in all the books in the series is pretty bad. But the characters and story's are good, so good. This series is my go to I think I re read the series at least 2 times a year.

[Peta · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved this book I couldn't put it down , I loved that even though Niya was given a rotten start in life that she never gave up and she didn't loose her fire , I loved when she found Colt these two were made for each other.

[Sara · Rating 1 out of 5]

*DNF*
I only gave it one star so l was able to leave a review.
Oh my god. Did she not have have anyone to check spelling, grammar, punctuation?
That did my head in. It was like a 10 year old transcribed the story as she told it. Although my 10 year old can spell.

[Georgina · Rating 5 out of 5]

Omg i loved this book ... Please tell me the 2nd book is going to be soon..

[Leeann Oguynn · Rating 5 out of 5]

WOW !! I could not put the book down , hated how Niya was raised , but she showed how strong she was . looking forward to the next book.

[Izzie d]

The premise of the story is good.
The editing is awful, spelling mistakes.
Cliffhanger ending.

[Britney · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story was good but the writing was nothing short of atrocious.

[Toni Smith · Rating 5 out of 5]

I'm so in love with this series 😍 hooked from the first page

[Sekena Price · Rating 5 out of 5]

loved it

[Bibliophile at large · Rating 1 out of 5]

The editing was just so hard to bear

[Amanda Fiore · Rating 1 out of 5]

Awful editing. I couldn't get past the first few pages.

Punctuation is key.
Than is not a correct substitute for then.
Spacing means everything.

[Parandoush · Rating 1 out of 5]

The grammar in this book is horrendous. I started highlighting the typo and grammar errors but after about a third way through, even that was boring. I felt like it took me twice as long to read because the author did not use commas, full stops, speech marks etc. A writer cannot rely on spell check because this is not accurate. For example, hear - here, there - their, wear - where - were, there - they're.

My biggest gripe , because the word appears about every other page is "hay". Hay is a noun and refers to grass that has been cut and dried. The word should be "hey" meaning a greeting.