Avalanche brings the secret world Chronicles to an end with even less continuity editing than previous books.
The overall story is okay, with get drama interpersonal problems and resolutions. We get good guys and bad guys and even an epic fight against overwhelming odds. What we don't get is the sense of impending danger. I don't mean doubting they will win, we know they will, we want then to win, but in a story of heroes and grand gestures, there should be great sacrifices, and that just isn't them. Don't bother pointing at the places where the writers try to trick us into thinking people are making sacrifices, if you've read the whole book, you know they didn't.
A writer's job is to make me worry about the characters when they are kidnapped, I shou.d fear for the consequences, and that should be even more true in a book with a cast of dozens. Anyone should be at risk, since there are other characters to pick up the narration. So why is that nowhere in a book written by masters of their craft?
This book, more than the others in the series, feels like someone was rummaging in a box is stories miss Lackey wrote with some friend to have fun, and decided to publish it without running it by an editor first. Writers can write stories like this, but it's a publisher's job the ensure we don't end up reading a first draft of a story.