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Two Macabre Stories
These two horrifying short stories were selected from, Macabre Stories Vol.1, by the author, Leandro Coria. Learn the fate of a lonely old man as he tries to fight off his demons. See what happens to two young criminals as they tried to hide in the dark woods. Enjoy.
- GenresShort StoriesHorror
31 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 19, 2017
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November 1, 2017
This one was difficult to rate. There are two stories so I'll rate them individually:
The Night Visitors -- ⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Night Visitors is well-crafted. The author does a good job a keeping the mystery going as suspense builds. He succeeds in creating a story that holds the reader's interest as it advances, up to the surprise ending.
The Robbers -- ⭐⭐
The Robbers misses its target. The story has a good beginning to what is a promising mystery. The trouble lies not with the story -- it is a good one -- but in the mechanics. There is much lost in the writing, mostly in content. Some grammar usage, cliche's, and run-on sentences distract from the building tension, so much so, that I almost stopped reading. To be fair, I did finish the story. A lot could be gained from editing, making the read more palatable.
The Night Visitors -- ⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Night Visitors is well-crafted. The author does a good job a keeping the mystery going as suspense builds. He succeeds in creating a story that holds the reader's interest as it advances, up to the surprise ending.
The Robbers -- ⭐⭐
The Robbers misses its target. The story has a good beginning to what is a promising mystery. The trouble lies not with the story -- it is a good one -- but in the mechanics. There is much lost in the writing, mostly in content. Some grammar usage, cliche's, and run-on sentences distract from the building tension, so much so, that I almost stopped reading. To be fair, I did finish the story. A lot could be gained from editing, making the read more palatable.
February 15, 2018
Really enjoyed these two stories. Perfect for reading on the bus (which is where I read my ebooks). Ordered Coria's two other books, hopefully they are equally entertaining :)
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