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Darcy vs Bingley
What if Fitzwilliam Darcy didn’t shun Elizabeth Bennet at the Meryton Assembly? And what if he found that he was dealing with coup de foudre, love at first sight, of this delightful young woman?
However, Caroline Bingley is determined to wed Darcy even if she has to compromise him. Will she succeed? And what kind of havoc will George Wickham create when he appears on the scene?
Join our dear couple in a whirlwind courtship that will make you both laugh and sigh as they reach for their ‘happily ever after.’
A Pride and Prejudice Variation
However, Caroline Bingley is determined to wed Darcy even if she has to compromise him. Will she succeed? And what kind of havoc will George Wickham create when he appears on the scene?
Join our dear couple in a whirlwind courtship that will make you both laugh and sigh as they reach for their ‘happily ever after.’
A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- GenresFiction
239 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 3, 2017
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About the author
Gianna Thomas
29 books51 followers Gianna has been in love with Historical Romance/Mysteries, and especially Regency Romance, for many years. But it wasn’t until 2013 that she started writing in this genre.
Gianna discovered Pride and Prejudice, and its many variations, what ifs and fan fiction. She was totally fascinated by the variety of plots that eager authors had utilized. After reading several of these fascinating books, she realized why others loved them and Jane Austen’s books so well.
Gianna was aware of the storyline of Pride and Prejudice after reading it many years ago and seeing the 1940’s movie as well as the 2005 movie with Keira Knightley and Matthew MacFadyen. She loved the 2005 movie and the musical score. Yes, the movie wasn’t 100% accurate, but isn’t the goal to entertain and touch the heart? And this movie touched her heart and helped her to appreciate more the talent of Jane Austen.
Rereading Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice has given her greater insight into Ms. Austen’s genius in depicting different personalities and situations and the society of her day. As a mature adult, Gianna sees much more in her books now than ever before.
After reading nearly 200 variations and fan fictions, Gianna now had P&P plots running through her head. She finally decided that they needed to be put to paper (today, on the computer), to see how they would develop. She is having an absolute ball in writing about Darcy and Elizabeth and is pleased with how things are developing. Her goal is to entertain and touch hearts. Hopefully, with her first rendering 'Darcy Chooses', she achieved that goal and touched your heart also.
More recently, Gianna started looking beyond Pride and Prejudice, with her first foray into Regency Romance generally, with The Four Lords’ Saga Series.
Gianna Thomas is a ghostwriter of poetry and e-books who became a widow after twenty-two years with her very own Mr. Darcy, who was her second husband. She lives a quiet life in a small Illinois town with her cats and loves to read regency romance, Jane Austen’s works and the many variations done by other lovers of Pride and Prejudice.
Learn more about Gianna and her Historical Romance writings on her website at www.giannathomasauthor.com and on her page at Amazon Author Central at https://www.amazon.com/author/giannat....
Gianna discovered Pride and Prejudice, and its many variations, what ifs and fan fiction. She was totally fascinated by the variety of plots that eager authors had utilized. After reading several of these fascinating books, she realized why others loved them and Jane Austen’s books so well.
Gianna was aware of the storyline of Pride and Prejudice after reading it many years ago and seeing the 1940’s movie as well as the 2005 movie with Keira Knightley and Matthew MacFadyen. She loved the 2005 movie and the musical score. Yes, the movie wasn’t 100% accurate, but isn’t the goal to entertain and touch the heart? And this movie touched her heart and helped her to appreciate more the talent of Jane Austen.
Rereading Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice has given her greater insight into Ms. Austen’s genius in depicting different personalities and situations and the society of her day. As a mature adult, Gianna sees much more in her books now than ever before.
After reading nearly 200 variations and fan fictions, Gianna now had P&P plots running through her head. She finally decided that they needed to be put to paper (today, on the computer), to see how they would develop. She is having an absolute ball in writing about Darcy and Elizabeth and is pleased with how things are developing. Her goal is to entertain and touch hearts. Hopefully, with her first rendering 'Darcy Chooses', she achieved that goal and touched your heart also.
More recently, Gianna started looking beyond Pride and Prejudice, with her first foray into Regency Romance generally, with The Four Lords’ Saga Series.
Gianna Thomas is a ghostwriter of poetry and e-books who became a widow after twenty-two years with her very own Mr. Darcy, who was her second husband. She lives a quiet life in a small Illinois town with her cats and loves to read regency romance, Jane Austen’s works and the many variations done by other lovers of Pride and Prejudice.
Learn more about Gianna and her Historical Romance writings on her website at www.giannathomasauthor.com and on her page at Amazon Author Central at https://www.amazon.com/author/giannat....
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April 10, 2017
An ARC of this story was won in a raffle giveaway with no promise of a review, positive or otherwise.
The title perhaps should be Mr. Darcy vs Miss Bingley. The conflict refers to Caroline Bingley's dogged pursuit of Mr. Darcy, even after she creates a definite compromise situation, trying to force him into marrying her, which does not have the desired effect. The title also refers to Darcy's disgust with Miss Bingley and to his careful avoidance of her as much as possible.
This storyline develops pretty well and very humorously, but its only relationship to the romantic part of the plot between Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet is Caroline's jealousy and desperation whenever she gets a whiff of his attraction to that simple country chit. The appeal of Longbourn is also enhanced as a place of escape from Caroline (in addition to being the home of the ladies they admire) for both Darcy and Mr. Bingley.
The other primary storyline is the variance from canon where Darcy does recognize Elizabeth's fine qualities from the onset and asks her to dance at the Meryton assembly. As usual, Mr. Bingley quickly falls for his "angel," Jane Bennet. Their respective romances are without much in the way of obstacles or drama. Miss Bingley may be a bother to the men when they're at Netherfield but, curiously, she's not a factor at all when it comes to interfering in their relationships.
Generally speaking, the writing is okay. There are only very rare grammar or spelling errors. It seems to have been written for a young reading audience because there's a lot of repetition, a lot of stating the obvious, and there's no attempt at copying Recency style; this is decidedly contemporary-sounding. Bingley is repeatedly referred to as either a bantam rooster or an eager puppy. Characters often laugh so hard that their ribs hurt or they have tears in their eyes when the cause of their mirth just isn't always all that funny. In addition, there's a lot of telling rather than showing.
There's one very odd comment by Mr. Darcy early in the book while he and Bingley are dining at Longbourn, especially since no one in the room reacts. Mrs. Bennet has asked whether Darcy's sister will be attending the ball at Netherfield. "I'm sorry to say... that my sister will not be able to attend. She is still finishing with the masters in Town, but she will be here for our weddings." At this point, the gentlemen have expressed their interest in Elizabeth and Jane, but it's long before any discussion of marriage. It's shocking that Mrs. Bennet doesn't immediately start shrieking. There's no acknowledgement of his surprising statement by Elizabeth, Jane or Bingley, either. Something is amiss here.
There are two Epilogues. I think, considering the book's title, the second one should have been included within the book (the non-Epilogue part, that is) because it pertains to Caroline. It actually resolves her part of the storyline.
The title perhaps should be Mr. Darcy vs Miss Bingley. The conflict refers to Caroline Bingley's dogged pursuit of Mr. Darcy, even after she creates a definite compromise situation, trying to force him into marrying her, which does not have the desired effect. The title also refers to Darcy's disgust with Miss Bingley and to his careful avoidance of her as much as possible.
This storyline develops pretty well and very humorously, but its only relationship to the romantic part of the plot between Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet is Caroline's jealousy and desperation whenever she gets a whiff of his attraction to that simple country chit. The appeal of Longbourn is also enhanced as a place of escape from Caroline (in addition to being the home of the ladies they admire) for both Darcy and Mr. Bingley.
The other primary storyline is the variance from canon where Darcy does recognize Elizabeth's fine qualities from the onset and asks her to dance at the Meryton assembly. As usual, Mr. Bingley quickly falls for his "angel," Jane Bennet. Their respective romances are without much in the way of obstacles or drama. Miss Bingley may be a bother to the men when they're at Netherfield but, curiously, she's not a factor at all when it comes to interfering in their relationships.
Generally speaking, the writing is okay. There are only very rare grammar or spelling errors. It seems to have been written for a young reading audience because there's a lot of repetition, a lot of stating the obvious, and there's no attempt at copying Recency style; this is decidedly contemporary-sounding. Bingley is repeatedly referred to as either a bantam rooster or an eager puppy. Characters often laugh so hard that their ribs hurt or they have tears in their eyes when the cause of their mirth just isn't always all that funny. In addition, there's a lot of telling rather than showing.
There's one very odd comment by Mr. Darcy early in the book while he and Bingley are dining at Longbourn, especially since no one in the room reacts. Mrs. Bennet has asked whether Darcy's sister will be attending the ball at Netherfield. "I'm sorry to say... that my sister will not be able to attend. She is still finishing with the masters in Town, but she will be here for our weddings." At this point, the gentlemen have expressed their interest in Elizabeth and Jane, but it's long before any discussion of marriage. It's shocking that Mrs. Bennet doesn't immediately start shrieking. There's no acknowledgement of his surprising statement by Elizabeth, Jane or Bingley, either. Something is amiss here.
There are two Epilogues. I think, considering the book's title, the second one should have been included within the book (the non-Epilogue part, that is) because it pertains to Caroline. It actually resolves her part of the storyline.
April 28, 2017
I have read a lot of P&P variations. Many worse than this book, but for some reason this book just annoys me. And that is the only word for it... annoys. This is a P&P rehash that seems to follow the original just at an absolutely furious speed. While it starts out promising with Darcy actually dancing twice with Elizabeth at the assembly and asking to call on her the next day. That evening Caroline attempts a forced compromise and receives a set down that is Epic. It almost makes the whole book worthwhile. And then things go pear shaped. As I proceeded through the book scenes, dialogues, interactions just seemed forced. And the more I thought about the odder everything seemed. The writing is more modern than an attempt to copy Regency or JA style and that's fine. I quickly found myself just wondering what the author meant to do. There are several things that stand out as problematic for me.
Every character in the book seems to be working toward the ending. I know that most P&P variations benefit from the reader knowing the source work, but honestly this feels like the characters know the story and are just carry out tasks to get it done.
The pacing is just absurdly fast. Within 3 days of knowing the Bennet sisters both Bingley and Darcy are thinking marriage. Bingley I get – Darcy? Not so much. When they call at Longbourn for the first time Mr. Bennet gives them the third degree about what do they want from his daughters? It is out of character and out of time.
Things happen out of order or off page. Throughout the book Caroline Bingley criticizes Lizzy for behavior that Caroline couldn't have witnessed or that never happened. She brings up the 6 inches deep in mud when Jane never gets sick at Netherfield and Lizzy never visits. While Darcy & Bingley often visit Longbourn they are always alone. Even when the ball invitation is delivered Darcy & Bingley are said to want to do it. Then how suddenly at about 75% through the story can the author drop in a sentence about the times Louisa and Caroline visited the Bennets. Within 5 days the whole Darcy Wickham thing plays out with Lizzy taking Wickham's word as gospel; despite with her affection for Darcy. it makes her seem like a loony.
Immaturity of the characters. There is much laughing, the kind of inappropriate laughing you associate with Junior High students, there is burping, there is Darcy and Bingley not knowing how to restrain their appetite during a multicourse dinner and eating to excess. The servants; especially the footmen, laugh at Caroline. Caroline is a violent brat who spends most of the book in her room.
The lack of effective tension. I can't decide if this was written specifically for people who lack reading comprehension or have ADD; but every time there is any tension it immediately is resolved.
Just plain weird stuff- amid Darcy's lengthy list of Wickham's crimes is included being a White Slaver. Now I understand not wanting your little sister to know bad things about Wickham but I think if he was going around kidnapping women and selling them into prostitution that might be something you warn her against – just saying.
Many favorites like Charlotte, Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine are only mentioned briefly and never come into the story. Georgiana even is barely there.
So what did I like? Honestly I loved the second epilogue that tells of what happened to Caroline Bingley. I would have liked to read a book about Caroline being somewhat compromised and forced to marry a wealthy tradesman and have 8 sons.
Every character in the book seems to be working toward the ending. I know that most P&P variations benefit from the reader knowing the source work, but honestly this feels like the characters know the story and are just carry out tasks to get it done.
The pacing is just absurdly fast. Within 3 days of knowing the Bennet sisters both Bingley and Darcy are thinking marriage. Bingley I get – Darcy? Not so much. When they call at Longbourn for the first time Mr. Bennet gives them the third degree about what do they want from his daughters? It is out of character and out of time.
Things happen out of order or off page. Throughout the book Caroline Bingley criticizes Lizzy for behavior that Caroline couldn't have witnessed or that never happened. She brings up the 6 inches deep in mud when Jane never gets sick at Netherfield and Lizzy never visits. While Darcy & Bingley often visit Longbourn they are always alone. Even when the ball invitation is delivered Darcy & Bingley are said to want to do it. Then how suddenly at about 75% through the story can the author drop in a sentence about the times Louisa and Caroline visited the Bennets. Within 5 days the whole Darcy Wickham thing plays out with Lizzy taking Wickham's word as gospel; despite with her affection for Darcy. it makes her seem like a loony.
Immaturity of the characters. There is much laughing, the kind of inappropriate laughing you associate with Junior High students, there is burping, there is Darcy and Bingley not knowing how to restrain their appetite during a multicourse dinner and eating to excess. The servants; especially the footmen, laugh at Caroline. Caroline is a violent brat who spends most of the book in her room.
The lack of effective tension. I can't decide if this was written specifically for people who lack reading comprehension or have ADD; but every time there is any tension it immediately is resolved.
Just plain weird stuff- amid Darcy's lengthy list of Wickham's crimes is included being a White Slaver. Now I understand not wanting your little sister to know bad things about Wickham but I think if he was going around kidnapping women and selling them into prostitution that might be something you warn her against – just saying.
Many favorites like Charlotte, Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine are only mentioned briefly and never come into the story. Georgiana even is barely there.
So what did I like? Honestly I loved the second epilogue that tells of what happened to Caroline Bingley. I would have liked to read a book about Caroline being somewhat compromised and forced to marry a wealthy tradesman and have 8 sons.
April 9, 2017
The jealous are troublesome to others, but a torment to themselves. ~William Penn
Coup de foudre. Lightning strike. Darcy notices Elizabeth at the Assembly; positively notices her; is struck by lightning notices her and asks for a second dance.
Caroline notices Elizabeth at the Assembly; is horrified to notice her; is struck by lightning terrified to notice her and knows she must move her compromise plans forward.
This was originally posted as a one-shot on FFnet. The opening chapter is very strong and demands interest from the beginning. Darcy not only tells Caroline he will never marry her; he also shows her what her life would be if he did! Not exactly what Miss B had planned.
Jealousy is just love and hate at the same time. ~Drake
This book contains several elements I liked:
1. Both Bennet parents love ALL their daughters
2. Mrs. Bennet supports Mr. Bennet’s restrictions on Lydia.
3. Bad behavior has consequences for Caroline (think financial—attaboy Charlie) and Lydia (think peaches—Mama B, you Rock)
4. Darcy is pro-active in protecting Meryton from Wickham
5. Ah, Netherfield: such a happy place – maids and footmen snickering and coughing – or is it only when Miss Bingley walks past (Charles really MUST fire all those sickly footmen!)
6. Who are the Mud Hens? Why is Elizabeth not the only one “six inches deep in mud”?
Whoever envies another confesses his superiority. ~Samuel Johnson, The Rambler
Wickham (who in this story was in Meryton before Darcy and was well-acquainted with the Bennets) shares his tale with Elizabeth and she believes every word even after Darcy is actively courting her. Instead of allowing the lies to fester, she confronts Darcy who sits her down and gives her the truth. At last – no one allows willful misunderstandings!
What is told in the ear of a man is often heard a hundred miles away. ~Chinese Proverb
Poor Miss Bingley – you know how the lower classes love to gossip! All Meryton knows – but will it spread to London?
Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine are only mentioned in passing – but I didn’t miss them.
At the last – Epilogue 2 – can there be HEA for Miss Bingley?
This is by far my favorite from Gianna Thomas. The book ends at about 88% and contains excerpts from other stories.
I received a free ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Gossip needn't be false to be evil — there's a lot of truth that shouldn't be passed around. ~Frank A. Clark
Coup de foudre. Lightning strike. Darcy notices Elizabeth at the Assembly; positively notices her; is struck by lightning notices her and asks for a second dance.
Caroline notices Elizabeth at the Assembly; is horrified to notice her; is struck by lightning terrified to notice her and knows she must move her compromise plans forward.
This was originally posted as a one-shot on FFnet. The opening chapter is very strong and demands interest from the beginning. Darcy not only tells Caroline he will never marry her; he also shows her what her life would be if he did! Not exactly what Miss B had planned.
Jealousy is just love and hate at the same time. ~Drake
This book contains several elements I liked:
1. Both Bennet parents love ALL their daughters
2. Mrs. Bennet supports Mr. Bennet’s restrictions on Lydia.
3. Bad behavior has consequences for Caroline (think financial—attaboy Charlie) and Lydia (think peaches—Mama B, you Rock)
4. Darcy is pro-active in protecting Meryton from Wickham
5. Ah, Netherfield: such a happy place – maids and footmen snickering and coughing – or is it only when Miss Bingley walks past (Charles really MUST fire all those sickly footmen!)
6. Who are the Mud Hens? Why is Elizabeth not the only one “six inches deep in mud”?
Whoever envies another confesses his superiority. ~Samuel Johnson, The Rambler
Wickham (who in this story was in Meryton before Darcy and was well-acquainted with the Bennets) shares his tale with Elizabeth and she believes every word even after Darcy is actively courting her. Instead of allowing the lies to fester, she confronts Darcy who sits her down and gives her the truth. At last – no one allows willful misunderstandings!
What is told in the ear of a man is often heard a hundred miles away. ~Chinese Proverb
Poor Miss Bingley – you know how the lower classes love to gossip! All Meryton knows – but will it spread to London?
Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine are only mentioned in passing – but I didn’t miss them.
At the last – Epilogue 2 – can there be HEA for Miss Bingley?
This is by far my favorite from Gianna Thomas. The book ends at about 88% and contains excerpts from other stories.
I received a free ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Gossip needn't be false to be evil — there's a lot of truth that shouldn't be passed around. ~Frank A. Clark
December 19, 2017
The title refers to Mr. Darcy fighting off attempts to corner and/or compromise him by Caroline Bingley. And then we read something like Upstairs/Downstairs in that despite threats by Mr. Darcy that Caroline will suffer greatly if she tells anyone, her sister included, about how she tried to force his hand, the servants are soon sharing with the butcher who shares with one of his favorite customers who shares with Lady Lucas, etc. the fact of the matte. And so Caroline and Louisa are puzzled when upon delivering ball invitations it seems that Caroline is being cut.
Frankly, all the giggling, the gaffaws, the snorting and then the coughs to covers those types of laughter seemed a bit overdone. Caroline wants to fire a few when she hears the snickers. And the men are not much different. I was reminded of fraternity brothers who slap each other on the back and wink and laugh at implied actions. Mr. Bingley and Darcy seemed to find a lot of amusement as the story goes on.
There is barely any angst in this story. It goes along very sweetly and love at first sight is basically how ODC comes together. Oh, there is a reference to a slur about no one being tolerable enough to dance with but Darcy does dance with Elizabeth and more than once at the assembly. He also manages to meet her during her walks more then once.
Wickham is dealt with very quickly and Lydia's two parents finally deal with her impertinence and her flirting.
There is an epilogue many years later and as ODC looks back Darcy remembers being struck by love's bolt at his first real look at Elizabeth Bennet.
I read a copy of this before it was published and then borrowed it from KU after it was published as I was told some editing had been added.
Frankly, all the giggling, the gaffaws, the snorting and then the coughs to covers those types of laughter seemed a bit overdone. Caroline wants to fire a few when she hears the snickers. And the men are not much different. I was reminded of fraternity brothers who slap each other on the back and wink and laugh at implied actions. Mr. Bingley and Darcy seemed to find a lot of amusement as the story goes on.
There is barely any angst in this story. It goes along very sweetly and love at first sight is basically how ODC comes together. Oh, there is a reference to a slur about no one being tolerable enough to dance with but Darcy does dance with Elizabeth and more than once at the assembly. He also manages to meet her during her walks more then once.
Wickham is dealt with very quickly and Lydia's two parents finally deal with her impertinence and her flirting.
There is an epilogue many years later and as ODC looks back Darcy remembers being struck by love's bolt at his first real look at Elizabeth Bennet.
I read a copy of this before it was published and then borrowed it from KU after it was published as I was told some editing had been added.
June 9, 2018
I think this is 3.5 stars for me. The story gets going at the Meryton Assembly where Darcy falls instantly in love with Elizabeth and the path to true love is relatively trouble free. Caroline Bingley attempts a compromise very early on in the book. Darcy says he'll marry her but make her life hell... so she says thanks but no thanks.... I struggled with this because everyone, except apparently Caroline, knows Darcy would never behave towards his wife in that way.
There is a lot of laughing in this book. Everyone is laughing all the time at everything. It started to get on my nerves... but maybe because I wasn't in the mood for it!
The pace of this book is positively rocket like.... troubles are easily overcome and Bingley and Darcy laugh their way to the alter. This is a light read that readers will only enjoy if you take it for what it is.... the pace is fast, everything is humorous, the language is really out of keeping with the period.
I have no idea why this book has the name it does.... I'm not particularly keen on it either.
There is a lot of laughing in this book. Everyone is laughing all the time at everything. It started to get on my nerves... but maybe because I wasn't in the mood for it!
The pace of this book is positively rocket like.... troubles are easily overcome and Bingley and Darcy laugh their way to the alter. This is a light read that readers will only enjoy if you take it for what it is.... the pace is fast, everything is humorous, the language is really out of keeping with the period.
I have no idea why this book has the name it does.... I'm not particularly keen on it either.
April 18, 2017
A different but charming story full of humor and love. Our dear couple is struck by love as if by lighting, and their relationship develops wonderfully.
I really enjoyed the laughter from most of our characters and from unexpected people and places.
The Bennets are portrayed differently but keeping to their original traits.
You have to read it, it is a great story!
I really enjoyed the laughter from most of our characters and from unexpected people and places.
The Bennets are portrayed differently but keeping to their original traits.
You have to read it, it is a great story!
May 7, 2018
I would like to thank Austen Authors and Gianna Thomas for the opportunity to win this book.
March 18, 2024
This series is cute, if very sweetly written.
February 10, 2024
I enjoy a good ‘Early Understanding’ story.
I couldn’t decide if the title referred to Darcy against Charles Bingley or Darcy compared to Bingley, or Darcy against Miss Bingley. That last one I think was the intention.
What I loved: Obviously the best part was Darcy falling for Elizabeth earlier than canon, and Elizabeth reciprocating early too. I loved that Bingley had a very determined character in this story, who took Caroline’s compromise attempt very seriously and attempted to take charge of her machinations and attitudes. That took more than a few attempts and which ended satisfactorily for this reader. Boy, was she a determined witch. Louisa and Mr Hurst were a pleasant surprise. Charles was quite determined with his intentions toward Jane in front of his family and Darcy. Thumbs up on that.
Wickham was dealt with in a manner that made for an interesting drama, with action and a scary scene.
I enjoyed the way the misunderstandings between ODC were short lived and solved with conversation between them. I loved Mr Bennet in this story.
All the action took place in Hartfordshire, so no Rosings, very little of the Gardiners (my favorites,) and only a scorching letter from Lady Catherine.
The only minor thing I would have changed is that I thought there was a bit too much repetition and that it could have been tightened up a little. It was well edited otherwise. I have no hesitation to recommend this to readers of JAFF. The two epilogues, yes two!, were first deeply lovely and second, funny and satisfying. Well done.
I couldn’t decide if the title referred to Darcy against Charles Bingley or Darcy compared to Bingley, or Darcy against Miss Bingley. That last one I think was the intention.
What I loved: Obviously the best part was Darcy falling for Elizabeth earlier than canon, and Elizabeth reciprocating early too. I loved that Bingley had a very determined character in this story, who took Caroline’s compromise attempt very seriously and attempted to take charge of her machinations and attitudes. That took more than a few attempts and which ended satisfactorily for this reader. Boy, was she a determined witch. Louisa and Mr Hurst were a pleasant surprise. Charles was quite determined with his intentions toward Jane in front of his family and Darcy. Thumbs up on that.
Wickham was dealt with in a manner that made for an interesting drama, with action and a scary scene.
I enjoyed the way the misunderstandings between ODC were short lived and solved with conversation between them. I loved Mr Bennet in this story.
All the action took place in Hartfordshire, so no Rosings, very little of the Gardiners (my favorites,) and only a scorching letter from Lady Catherine.
The only minor thing I would have changed is that I thought there was a bit too much repetition and that it could have been tightened up a little. It was well edited otherwise. I have no hesitation to recommend this to readers of JAFF. The two epilogues, yes two!, were first deeply lovely and second, funny and satisfying. Well done.
April 27, 2017
Darcy vs Bingley: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Love, love, love Gianna's story. Two love struck gentlemen left the Meryton Assembly that night thoughts of their own delightful Bennet daughter in their hearts and heads. When Caroline witnesses Darcy dance twice with Elizabeth Bennet, she decides that she'll compromise him that night. Thankfully, things don't work out the way she had planned, and Darcy's reaction and set down really rips her up one side and down the other. Bless the man. Bingley takes a few lessons on how to handle his sister, but does Caroline listen? No, further threats are needed from the Darcy/Bingley/Hursts camps before Caroline accepts defeat and is off to London to live on her own. The night of the Netherfield Ball even had many a local matriarch in her face laughing at her failed attempt to compromise her brother's guest. Darcy's feelings from admiration to love, from love to matrimony was a swift leap from start to finish happening in a matter of days. Had not Mr. Bennet required a few months betrothal, Darcy would have married his Elizabeth weeks after meeting her. The author's handling of wicked Wickham was one for the books. A fitting end for a well deserving person came without any effort from Darcy or Fitzwilliam. Humorous situations caused rib tickling laughter to burst throughout this story giving the usually stoic silent Darcy a whole new persona. No wonder Lizzy fell in love quickly. Their HEA was filled with few sorrows, but mostly happiness and love. Happy story.
Love, love, love Gianna's story. Two love struck gentlemen left the Meryton Assembly that night thoughts of their own delightful Bennet daughter in their hearts and heads. When Caroline witnesses Darcy dance twice with Elizabeth Bennet, she decides that she'll compromise him that night. Thankfully, things don't work out the way she had planned, and Darcy's reaction and set down really rips her up one side and down the other. Bless the man. Bingley takes a few lessons on how to handle his sister, but does Caroline listen? No, further threats are needed from the Darcy/Bingley/Hursts camps before Caroline accepts defeat and is off to London to live on her own. The night of the Netherfield Ball even had many a local matriarch in her face laughing at her failed attempt to compromise her brother's guest. Darcy's feelings from admiration to love, from love to matrimony was a swift leap from start to finish happening in a matter of days. Had not Mr. Bennet required a few months betrothal, Darcy would have married his Elizabeth weeks after meeting her. The author's handling of wicked Wickham was one for the books. A fitting end for a well deserving person came without any effort from Darcy or Fitzwilliam. Humorous situations caused rib tickling laughter to burst throughout this story giving the usually stoic silent Darcy a whole new persona. No wonder Lizzy fell in love quickly. Their HEA was filled with few sorrows, but mostly happiness and love. Happy story.
May 21, 2017
This Pride and Prejudice variation is almost entirely a happily ever after. Darcy falls in love with Elizabeth at first sight. The only character that adds any angst to the story is Caroline Bingley and she steps out about half way through. Charles speech to her is one of the best parts of the book, in my opinion. Wickham makes an appearance but his situation is resolved quickly. Everything else is easy, beautiful, and happy.
I believe that Caroline Bingley is intended to be the one "vs" Darcy in this story but the competition just wasn't there for me.
I believe that Caroline Bingley is intended to be the one "vs" Darcy in this story but the competition just wasn't there for me.
January 12, 2018
This book moves away from the original story very quickly with a love at first sight scenario which means we miss a great deal of the extended dance between Elizabeth and Darcy with everything in the garden rosy between the two of them. The Bingley of the title is in fact Caroline who will try to use any method to catch Darcy. It is very easy read which does not give the reader too much to think about but it is an amusing little story if you enjoy seeing Caroline at work and getting her come-uppence.
September 16, 2021
In this P&P variation at the Meryton assembly Darcy asks Elizabeth for a dance, the only problem now for their future happiness is Caroline Bingley. With Darcy and Elizabeth as a couple it becomes easier for the other pair to come to an understanding.
An enjoyable story
An enjoyable story
May 22, 2017
Ugh. Find something better than this
A basic edit would have caught many of the time line and basic storty plot errors. I don't mean spelling errors or missing words, I mean the author wrote this then went back and copy/pasted sections in without making sure they fit with the story. For example when Darcy and a Lizzy aren't even openly acknowledging their mutual attraction Darcy, at a family dinner party, tells everyone they, along with Bingley and Jane, are getting married.
Another thing is that the characters are totally ooc. Example, Lizzy slaps Darcy just for using her Christian name without permission. What?! And his reaction? None! He just apologizes and tells her he loves her.
If you want to read a love story between Darcy and Bingley where they frequently 'laugh until their sides ache' this is for you. Interaction between Darcy and Lizzy is virtually non existent.
I don't understand how this got any better reviews than one star. ONE read through would have caught many of these errors. I was very interested in the premise of this story, Darcy falls in love at first sight, but this story falls short with the amount of errors, lack of understanding for the era and relationships between servants and masters.
A basic edit would have caught many of the time line and basic storty plot errors. I don't mean spelling errors or missing words, I mean the author wrote this then went back and copy/pasted sections in without making sure they fit with the story. For example when Darcy and a Lizzy aren't even openly acknowledging their mutual attraction Darcy, at a family dinner party, tells everyone they, along with Bingley and Jane, are getting married.
Another thing is that the characters are totally ooc. Example, Lizzy slaps Darcy just for using her Christian name without permission. What?! And his reaction? None! He just apologizes and tells her he loves her.
If you want to read a love story between Darcy and Bingley where they frequently 'laugh until their sides ache' this is for you. Interaction between Darcy and Lizzy is virtually non existent.
I don't understand how this got any better reviews than one star. ONE read through would have caught many of these errors. I was very interested in the premise of this story, Darcy falls in love at first sight, but this story falls short with the amount of errors, lack of understanding for the era and relationships between servants and masters.
May 1, 2017
3.5 stars
Very enjoyable short quick read. I was a little disappointed more didn't happen to Caroline, but I suppose I'm vindictive that way. I enjoyed the Darcy and Elizabeth but there is ZERO angst in this book. It's all sweet sappy love. If that's your thing, then this is a very quick enjoyable read. Many humorous bits as well.
Very enjoyable short quick read. I was a little disappointed more didn't happen to Caroline, but I suppose I'm vindictive that way. I enjoyed the Darcy and Elizabeth but there is ZERO angst in this book. It's all sweet sappy love. If that's your thing, then this is a very quick enjoyable read. Many humorous bits as well.
May 10, 2017
A very happy, easy variation
If you could have all of your P&P (clean) wishes come true, the story would look exactly like this. Extremely low angst, and just pleasant, this is an easy read where everyone gets what they deserve, good and bad.
If you could have all of your P&P (clean) wishes come true, the story would look exactly like this. Extremely low angst, and just pleasant, this is an easy read where everyone gets what they deserve, good and bad.
June 24, 2017
You'll Be Surprised
When I saw the title of this book, I assumed that Darcy and Charles Bingley went to court or maybe faced each other in a duel. Wrong assumption. The Bingley referenced is Caroline!
And then the fun begins. One person after another rather lines up to take Caroline down a peg and Darcy is only the first in line. From Darcy to Bingley to household employees, not necessarily in that order, Everyone is ready to cash in Caroline's Karma debt (or their own equivalents). Gianna Thomas has a really good time delivering one blow after another. I enjoyed it anyway!
Of course, Caroline's role is relatively minor to the Darcy/Elizabeth and Charles/Jane story elements. Ms. Thomas has given herself a very pleasant, easygoing task, somewhat unusual to much of the JAFF lit that I've read so far. Nothing is perfect, of course, but heartily enjoyable and sometimes pretty funny.
Does something good happen to Caroline? Doesn't she deserve a break? Oh maybe. You'll enjoy the details! This book is well written and the plot is well constructed. Not everything goes perfectly, but well conceived characterizations deliver an excellent reading experience.
When I saw the title of this book, I assumed that Darcy and Charles Bingley went to court or maybe faced each other in a duel. Wrong assumption. The Bingley referenced is Caroline!
And then the fun begins. One person after another rather lines up to take Caroline down a peg and Darcy is only the first in line. From Darcy to Bingley to household employees, not necessarily in that order, Everyone is ready to cash in Caroline's Karma debt (or their own equivalents). Gianna Thomas has a really good time delivering one blow after another. I enjoyed it anyway!
Of course, Caroline's role is relatively minor to the Darcy/Elizabeth and Charles/Jane story elements. Ms. Thomas has given herself a very pleasant, easygoing task, somewhat unusual to much of the JAFF lit that I've read so far. Nothing is perfect, of course, but heartily enjoyable and sometimes pretty funny.
Does something good happen to Caroline? Doesn't she deserve a break? Oh maybe. You'll enjoy the details! This book is well written and the plot is well constructed. Not everything goes perfectly, but well conceived characterizations deliver an excellent reading experience.
May 21, 2017
This was a very well done retelling of one of my favorite stories! Gianna Thomas has re-imagines how things could have been between
Mr. Darcy and Miss Bennet. It could have been easier, less intimidating and much fewer misunderstandings. Don't get me wrong, there are vexations! Miss Bingley is the biggest! I loathed her in this. Just so thickheaded I wanted to scream at her! LOL
All of the characters are here, and mostly true to cannon. I loved the amount of laughter though. It seems like a lighter version of P&P.
When I read the title I thought, what could Mr. Bingley do to be on the receiving end of Mr. Darcy's displeasure, but you will find it wasn't Mr. Bingley but his guttersnipe of a sister! LOL
I hope you enjoy this one as much as I did!
Mr. Darcy and Miss Bennet. It could have been easier, less intimidating and much fewer misunderstandings. Don't get me wrong, there are vexations! Miss Bingley is the biggest! I loathed her in this. Just so thickheaded I wanted to scream at her! LOL
All of the characters are here, and mostly true to cannon. I loved the amount of laughter though. It seems like a lighter version of P&P.
When I read the title I thought, what could Mr. Bingley do to be on the receiving end of Mr. Darcy's displeasure, but you will find it wasn't Mr. Bingley but his guttersnipe of a sister! LOL
I hope you enjoy this one as much as I did!
April 13, 2021
A laughing Darcy
What a fun read. Darcy was the main character (always a plus) and what a treat it was to see a different side of Darcy. I like how the author showed Darcy's playful side. Darcy and Bingley were able to laugh at one another as well as Darcy and Elizabeth.
Wickham made an appearance, but it was for a short period (good.) This is my second book by this author, and once again I love not having to wait until the end of the book for Caroline to get her comeuppance. Carolina's set downs are just the truth spoken, when it should be spoken. I don't know why I love that so much, but I do, and ready for the next book ;-)
What a fun read. Darcy was the main character (always a plus) and what a treat it was to see a different side of Darcy. I like how the author showed Darcy's playful side. Darcy and Bingley were able to laugh at one another as well as Darcy and Elizabeth.
Wickham made an appearance, but it was for a short period (good.) This is my second book by this author, and once again I love not having to wait until the end of the book for Caroline to get her comeuppance. Carolina's set downs are just the truth spoken, when it should be spoken. I don't know why I love that so much, but I do, and ready for the next book ;-)
July 22, 2018
Very slightly better than her others
The dialog is so sickly sweet and immature, it is hard to like Ms Thomas' writings. Seems to have been written by a pre-teen. I believe innocent and pure can still be done in a mature, adult voice, with a more varied vocabulary. So why is this one better? Perhaps because it is novel length so more happens than in her other work? Some passages are very familiar do my guess it's she stitched together some short stories, especially given some themes (Wickham) totally disappear.
The dialog is so sickly sweet and immature, it is hard to like Ms Thomas' writings. Seems to have been written by a pre-teen. I believe innocent and pure can still be done in a mature, adult voice, with a more varied vocabulary. So why is this one better? Perhaps because it is novel length so more happens than in her other work? Some passages are very familiar do my guess it's she stitched together some short stories, especially given some themes (Wickham) totally disappear.
May 4, 2017
Loved loved this variation
GIanna...you knocked it out of the park with this this P&P variation and the best...Darcy was so funny, cute and lovable!!! Bingley actually took control of Caroline and she finally got her comeuppance from Darcy! Best part....You fixed Wickham's boat....beautifully. What a Joyful read!
GIanna...you knocked it out of the park with this this P&P variation and the best...Darcy was so funny, cute and lovable!!! Bingley actually took control of Caroline and she finally got her comeuppance from Darcy! Best part....You fixed Wickham's boat....beautifully. What a Joyful read!
August 27, 2017
I finally just finished reading Darcy vs Bingley and I must say I thoroughly enjoyed this Pride and Prejudice rendition! I especially liked how Caroline Bingley was tied in and seeing her fate, as well as how Lizzy and Darcy's story continued forward. There were a lot of laughs and I definitely recommend it!
April 17, 2018
Got 15 percent of the way through
I'm leaving this review because I use them to determine if I will read a book. Other than the characters names, this book has very little to do with P and P. Darcy and Elizabeth fall in love at first sight. They act inappropriately for the time period. The writing is pedantic. I don't understand why some readers gave it such high reviews.
I'm leaving this review because I use them to determine if I will read a book. Other than the characters names, this book has very little to do with P and P. Darcy and Elizabeth fall in love at first sight. They act inappropriately for the time period. The writing is pedantic. I don't understand why some readers gave it such high reviews.
July 2, 2017
Enjoyable, sweet read
Darcy seems less cold and distant in this version but still a sweet read not to be missed. Different potential road blocks for the P&P lovers but a pleasant read to get to their happily ever after.
Darcy seems less cold and distant in this version but still a sweet read not to be missed. Different potential road blocks for the P&P lovers but a pleasant read to get to their happily ever after.
May 26, 2018
Very disappointed in this book - I read it expecting something unique and new. I was quite interesting the premise, but the actuality didn't meet my expectations. I found the obsticles to be forced, and things seemed to just be too convenient.
June 15, 2017
Great variation!
Great variation! I stayed up late into the morning to finish this book! I liked the Bennet parents decision to discipline Lydia. About time!
Great variation! I stayed up late into the morning to finish this book! I liked the Bennet parents decision to discipline Lydia. About time!
June 22, 2017
Very dry
This book described everything that happened to everyone. I don't like a lot of angst in my books. However, there was NOTHING interesting happening in this book.
This book described everything that happened to everyone. I don't like a lot of angst in my books. However, there was NOTHING interesting happening in this book.
July 7, 2017
Lovely variation
A lovely variation of Bingley and Darcy's quest for love with new twists and point of views of characters ,but nevertheless a happy ending .
A lovely variation of Bingley and Darcy's quest for love with new twists and point of views of characters ,but nevertheless a happy ending .
May 30, 2018
Could not finish.
August 29, 2020
Pleasant Read
A pleasant read, written in a simple style, with a touch of humour, albeit somewhat forced at times. I thought the idea, as indicated in the title, was good, but seemed lacking in its depth and development. A no angst, feel-good story without the usual misunderstandings between Darcy and Elizabeth.
A pleasant read, written in a simple style, with a touch of humour, albeit somewhat forced at times. I thought the idea, as indicated in the title, was good, but seemed lacking in its depth and development. A no angst, feel-good story without the usual misunderstandings between Darcy and Elizabeth.
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