Inheriting Miss. Everwich: An Autumn Romance from the Romance for the Seasons Collection

by Darcy Laurent

Jonathan Colborne inherited land, a title and a ward.

Little did he know the ward he inherited along with the title was not who she seemed.

Beautiful, young debutante Sophie Everwich crashes her carriage on a journey back to see her gravely ill uncle... Things will never be the same again.

Inheriting Miss Everwich is a Regency romance set against the stunning backdrop of the autumn English countryside, it makes for a perfect cosy escape no matter the weather outside. Curl up, relax and get lost in this full-length Regency romance novel from the Romance for the Seasons series.

Adult content in places.

Genres: Historical Romance

180 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 13, 2017

Reviews

[Joan · Rating 1 out of 5]

Read late/early during the night. KU book

Sorry, this is just 'meh' and I dnf'd in the end.

The formatting is 'off' for starters - there are no indents for new paragraphs, just double spaces which leaves a lot of white space on some pages and makes me think each new paragraph is a new scene.

The story seems to be all over the place at times. In the prologue Barrington seems to die but then we hear that he is seriously ill. Then we are introduced to Sophie and her Aunt and then to Sir Jonathon Colbourne and his sister and brother (who seem to be remarkably forgotten in the rest of the story) There really needed to be a better link between Barrington and Sophie IMO.

Sophie ends up with a surly ladies maid - Dinah - who ends up acting as her chaperone when Sophie travels to see her uncle Barrington. There is a coach accident and for some unknown reason Dinah pretends to be Sophie. This was never really explained, and I kept waiting for some dark sub-plot involving the fire years ago which killed Barrington's entire family apart from Sophie.

The plot was okay, but really needed tightening up - there is NO way Sophie would not have known the duties of a ladies maid. And going out to cut firewood? That was pretty stupid really.

I think a good editor would have tightened up the writing and made the characters far more believable and ensured that the reader isn't left thinking ... Why??