Great Story but
The errors from grammar , spelling , to the biggest of all CONTINUITY , often caused me to have to re-read a sentence to an entire paragraph.
My question is do you not have spell check, grammar check, an EDITOR, or even a friend to help before you submit these for AMAZON. HONESTLY UNTIL YOU WROTE MADELEINE was a U.S. citizen , I thought the setting was outside of here.
I did enjoy the story, but I hated the constant interruptions from the poor writing skills.