This is a slightly unusual mix of dystopian and erotica. Jude has spent his life under an oppressive system known as the Sorority, a kind of matriarchy in which men are reduced to laboring under a serf-like system in the fields, or are “free men” in the city where they serve one of the Sisters and aren’t really very free at all – in fact are mainly used as f**k puppets. The system came about when Fembots, gorgeous robots programmed to sexually and emotionally gratify their male owner’s every whim, became so popular that women were in danger of becoming redundant and so staged a revolution known as the “Enlightenment,” whereby men became basically enslaved.
Jude, a farm labourer all his life, discovers a long-hidden Fembot on a scavenging mission to a nearby abandoned town, reactivates her and falls in love/erotic thrall to her ageless charms. Of course this is all forbidden and he’s suspected of being up to no good by the merciless Sister Aisha. She takes him away to be her free man in the city, but not to use him as her latest sex toy: turns out they’re more closely related than he knows, but that doesn’t affect her pure antipathy, and poor Jude has to put up, amongst other things, with a most uncomfortable chastity belt-type ordeal to keep his natural male energies in check. And then he catches the eye of a horny high-ranking sister and some more mind-blowing sex ensues, even while he never forgets his true love Jessie the Fembot…
The story races along at a fine old pace, and (having read more erotica in the last few days than I normally do in… well, a lifetime up till now) the erotic scenes seem perfectly steamy. Jude is relatable, a slightly jaded, sexually athletic and apparently highly desirable Mr Ordinary. He’s a decent guy in a very nasty place, who when he’s not servicing the various gorgeous females who cross his path yearns for a freedom he’s never known.
Because I’m that kind of picky reader, and much more attuned to dystopian than erotica, I have to say the mechanism by which this society broke down is a little unclear: where did all the population go? Why are so many towns abandoned? It’s mentioned that maybe people who didn’t like the Sorority system left the area, maybe for the coast: is this an enclave, then, a discrete geographical area, of fanaticism? But then you’d think more men would try and escape. Also, there don’t seem to be many children (and any social system which doesn’t procreate is doomed anyway): maybe because of the “Ultimate Sin” rule which governs this dystopian world. I wasn’t quite clear on this. I presumed the “Ultimate Sin” was sex, and Jude’s original offence in the past was sex with a Sister, Abigail – who is now reduced to genteel prostitution. In a matriarchal society?
For me the Sorority as a system didn’t quite gel. When Rabbit, early in the story, is punished for a picture of a naked woman he is blamed for “objectifying” women – and taken to a Sister’s night club where he is stripped naked, fondled by numerous sisters on stage and then mounted in a public sex display. This is meant to humiliate him, and demonstrate to him what it means to be objectified.
BUT it is preceded by a scene where a dancer in the club is objectified in a far worse way – and she’s female. The sex act she is made to perform is far more humiliating, and she’s not being punished: it’s just part of the normal club’s activities. The waitresses in the club are – GUESS WHAT? female – and walk around in shelf bras, suspenders, stockings and nothing else. In a women’s club? Where the dominant culture absolutely rejects the objectification of women? This makes no sense at all - unless the women of the future are all sexually aggressive lesbians who enjoy the kind of sleazy stuff that generally feeds our contemporary male fantasies. Rather than watching the cast of Bromans swagger round bearing their cocktails (no pun intended!).
Even when the free men are waiting at a much later date to be chosen for night-time fun by a visiting contingent of female dignitaries, the servers performing menial waitressing tasks are women, while the men wait on the sidelines before being paraded like sexy show ponies.
For me, this read as if the author can’t quite make that leap of imagination, to a world where men actually perform the minimum wage menial tasks, female prostitution is not on the radar, and men are the sex objects in a women’s night club. Yes, I think about this stuff a lot - but to me, this world was a half-baked realization of what a true dominant women’s culture/Sorority would look like, and is too inconsistent to hold belief: it reads more like a male fantasy of such a world, with the odd lesbian voyeurism thrown in for good measure.
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I also find it slightly uncomfortable that both Rabbit and Jude end up with a Fembot, the perfectly obliging, ageless sexual superstars. Like they won the lotto and could afford to ditch the real women. Hm. Readable, yes. As social commentary - falls drastically short.
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It was still a fun read, well-paced, with a relatable main character, and hot sex. I just couldn’t take the world-building seriously.