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Bitten

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What if the guy of your dreams tells you he's a vampire?

When Stephanie packed up everything and moved across country with her boyfriend, she wasn't expecting him to turn into a total jerk the minute they were settled. Crying into her coffee, she's surprised when a tall, handsome stranger tries to cheer her up. He's gorgeous and way out of her league. His flirtation can't possibly be real. But when she bumps into him again (not so accidentally) and he offers her a job, she can't refuse. Now she finds herself growing closer to this mysterious, wealthy man.

But is there any bark to his bite, or is it all in her imagination?
For fans of The Black Dagger Brotherhood, A Shade of a Vampire, and Dark Stranger. It contains hot vampires, page-turning action, and steamy romance. Guaranteed HEA. Mature content. Not suitable for readers under 18.

51 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 31, 2017

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Profile Image for Emily (Mrs B's Books).
1,731 reviews83 followers
October 11, 2018
**My thanks to the author for providing me with a free copy for an honest review**

This book pretty much ends on a cliff hangar and is so short that the story is over before it really goes anywhere.

Stephanie followed her boyfriend to Texas, however things have gone south very quickly, it is only the tall, dark, mysterious handsome man that comes to here while she is crying into her coffee that turns things around for her, however he is holding a secret.

Francisco is protective of Stephanie and has a really sweet heart and does not really act like most vampires you read about.

I would have loved for this story to be more fleshed out and more developed, but i guess this is a good novella to give you an idea at the authors style of writing.
Profile Image for Becky Lawson.
181 reviews4 followers
January 23, 2018
Nice story, but a bit predictable.

I just wanted to smack the hell out of Jeremy for making Samantha feel like dirt, then having the balls to cheat on her to boot.

I felt the book ended on a cliffhanger, and I am NOT keen on those types of books, unless it's part of a box set and I can go right into another book.

I'd recommend this for Vampire genre fans.
Profile Image for Cindy Hardegree.
1,245 reviews7 followers
July 23, 2020
Bitten

Interesting, but I really don't understand the concept. Was he a vampire or not? How could therapy help? Why is he so interested in Stephanie? The author didn't exp!ain enough for me.
Profile Image for Jackie.
2,554 reviews
September 27, 2018
Wish I hadn’t bothered reading this. Too many things didn’t jive together & the story was over before it even got started.
197 reviews2 followers
November 17, 2018
1/5

Started great then seemed to die, complete and utter nonsense. Did not enjoy it at all,waste or time reading it.
1,221 reviews
May 3, 2019
This short entertaining story spotlighted a heroine learning to love herself and move past a failed relationship in order to discover a brighter future. Very fast read!
Profile Image for Jacs.
132 reviews
August 3, 2019
Good Story

I enjoyed this story. I think it ends abruptly though. It should have more about Francisco virus. Not a finished story.
Profile Image for Glittery.
98 reviews20 followers
December 18, 2019
Good Read

Quick Read good intro to the series. This leaves you wanting to know more about the bites. I would read again
Profile Image for Andrea Fernandez .
4,853 reviews22 followers
August 8, 2023
A glimpse

A fast paced glimpse of how Francisco and Stephanie meet. It was cute but way too fast. I wanted a little more.
Profile Image for Cydney Reads.
392 reviews5 followers
March 22, 2018
Synopsis: Stephanie moves to Austin with her boyfriend where they are starting their lives together. But almost as soon as they get settled in a new city things begin to fall apart, this man that she moved across states with is not the same guy he was before. Now, Stephanie is sitting in a little coffee shop crying her eyes out over her lack of a relationship when she is approached by a handsome stranger, Francisco. Soon she catches herself being drawn to this handsome stranger only to find out he has issues of his own.

I thought the story was okay. I think I just had personal issues with the speed at which these two main characters fell into each others arms, but what can you expect from a 51 page book, right? I know this was just a glimpse to get me captivated by the story but it was just to fast for me. I personally would have liked to see Stephanie and Francisco build a little more on their sudden attraction, and maybe leave us with a huge cliffhanger. It might just be my thoughts, but I do love some suspense and maybe some moments of heart break, but ultimately I want to see the happy ending. I just believe this book wasn't for me, but I think I will give the 1st book a shot to see if there is the anticipation, and angst that I was missing.
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