I liked the idea of this book but didn't like the FMC, so I really struggled to enjoy the story. It could have been so much better, but the author managed to make it quite bland and boring.
Darcy is kidnapped in relation to her fathers death. She potentially has the code that could help access some secret files. As an FMC, she is so annoying, and there is so much inner dialogue that I just wanted her to shut up half the time. She's 18, I think, or maybe a year or two older, but just acts like a stroppy toddler, and she was like this even before her fathers death so she can't blame that trauma.
So the kidnapping... she is actually kidnapped from the FBI, and it's not gentle. One thing I did like about Darcy, and it's probably the only thing, is that she was constantly thinking about escaping and did make several attempts. So many other books with kidnapping have the FMC instantly comply and the fact she didn't make me almost like her.
She's thinking about Stockholm Syndrome... within hours of being kidnapped, and she blamed it for her attraction to the guys! I mean, seriously, within hours!?!? She goes from trying to escape to lusting after them in the blink of an eye. It was so annoying. I think if the kidnap had gone differently, or she'd stayed with the original 'kidnappers' for longer, I think it would have been more believeable, but she just came across as childish.
The premise is that she's been kidnapped by the good guys, but they need to convince her they are the good guys. It takes a while, but in the space of one 'discussion,' she goes from not believing them to fully being on their side. The guys could have been more upfront from the beginning and it would have helped them convince her, but no, she has to be kept in the basement for a few days first (probably so she can fantasise about them a bit first).
I liked the guys, they are the usual harem of all being different, the techy one, the boy next door, the alouf one etc. I could see how the series could have been great..... if it wasn't for the FMC.
I won't be continuing the series, I really can't cope with more of Darcy.
- RH (dark)
- kidnapped fmc
- first book in series