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Ghosted
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October 19, 2017
Overall book rating: 1.5 (Because I like the cover and the over all idea)
Audio Book: N/A
Book Cover: 4.5
I’m a sucker for a good ghost story. This one... it didn’t do it for me. No. Sorry boys and girls, maybe next time. Taking into account that the story is only about 6 pages long, I found it kind of annoying that about 1.5 of those six pages consisted out of swear words.
I didn’t like Hunter. I did like the little bit I got about Stan though. Damn I was so looking forward to it. Sorry for being a cow.
Audio Book: N/A
Book Cover: 4.5
I’m a sucker for a good ghost story. This one... it didn’t do it for me. No. Sorry boys and girls, maybe next time. Taking into account that the story is only about 6 pages long, I found it kind of annoying that about 1.5 of those six pages consisted out of swear words.
I didn’t like Hunter. I did like the little bit I got about Stan though. Damn I was so looking forward to it. Sorry for being a cow.
November 2, 2017
Man gets fucked by ghost. The end.
October 30, 2017
This was truly what I would call a sexy shorty.
October 27, 2017
Uhhh... it was kind of bizarre....
August 13, 2018
1.5 stars - was a cute short story until the last line. That was just too ridiculous.
October 19, 2017
Done and dusted....And weird...
October 29, 2017
This could easily have been 4-stars but what started out as promising, didn’t deliver. Ghost story romances; what fun. This one missed the mark. The dialogue was amateurish and character and plot development were lacking. The whole scene where Hunter was going on about f-ing a ghost was ridiculous. Why was Stan bound to that location? What prevented him from moving on? What was with the ending? It was so abrupt it felt like the author got tired, went to bed and forgot to finish in the morning. Too bad. A little extra and this one could have been wonderful.
December 8, 2017
there are stories with ghosts and haunted places i absolutely love and this shortie was quite promising. it was funny and smart at first and i liked comments similar to that one about watching grass grow (which get a completely new meaning for a stuck up bored ghost). unfortunately, it turned out that after a nice beginning it became just a sex scene.
it was not bad, but it was not good enough to entertain me.
it was not bad, but it was not good enough to entertain me.
November 8, 2017
This was a very different story. Stan, who is a ghost, is interested in a graduate student, Hunter. When Hunter admits to his friends during a Ouija board session that he wouldn't mind having sex with a ghost, Stan takes it as a suggestion. I thought Hunter was funny and Stan was the more down to earth one, despite being dead. Hot and great for a laugh!
September 28, 2018
A truly promising beginning seguing into a weird sex scene and an abrupt ending that isn't even an end. The build and explanation on Hunter and his ghostly life is great- a real feel for this man and what has happened to him, as well as how the afterlife is for him. His joy at watching the recent trio of grads in his old lot is palpable and it makes him very believable. Then we get to see things from Hunter's POV and it is abrupt with no story and he is not exactly likable. There is the odd sex scene between the two of them and bam! Done. There is some introduction of weird instant possible feelings and a mention of ectoplasm/cum but it all just up and ends. Very unsatisfying ending after such a tremendous build up.
October 22, 2017
All I can figure is that this was a really early work that the author pulled out and dusted off because her other works have great ratings. The tense of the wording is very amateur and Hunter's speech sounds like a highschooler not a collage grad student. I'd still give another one of her books a try.
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November 5, 2017
Just some good old fashioned ghost sex. It is what it is and it knows what it is. This short was just the right length.
November 19, 2017
I got this free in a Halloween Giveaway. It's really short, but I enjoyed it and I loved the ending!
December 3, 2017
very short pwp with a ghost. it was fine.
May 8, 2018
Hot short. :)
October 5, 2018
Basically just ghost!sex. Which might have been fine for what it was, but the writing was meh and the author didn't make me care about the characters.
February 17, 2020
Eh, pretty weak. The background in the beginning has no meaning and the sex scene is not even hot. There was no real coherence. The story just felt off to me, no matter how short it was.
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