*sighs* This is a jumble of just-finished-reading thoughts right now, so please bear with me. I'll try to organize later, if I have time (and remember).
Honestly, I'm not sure what to rate this. It wasn't at all what I was expecting (and not in a good way, unfortunately). I'm hovering somewhere around 1.5 stars at the moment. It hurts me to say that because I was in love with the first two books and I can see the series having so much potential...but something was just off about this one. The characters seemed out of character (Gwen and Aeson) and I can think of so many (better) scenarios that could have happened. As it was, it just seemed like a filler and a repeat of the plot of Qualify. Win the Games or die.
I was hoping for something where (even though I know the ending of book 2) Gwen would work as the CP's Aide in the palace and she would slowly get to know the other sides of him as he interacted with his family: doting and smiling and laughing with Manala; loving and kind with his mother; scared of his father. And Gwen would slowly realize that the Imperator is evil and overhear somehow about him wanting to use her as an experiment. Then she could go to Aeson with the news or almost be kidnapped with Aeson saving her and then they get together.
Aeson suddenly being Mr. Sunshine after announcing her as his Bride seemed incongruous with his character and, in turn, made him seem out of character. I hated that Gwen hit Aeson. Yes, she was angry. Yes, she certainly had every right to be. But claiming to love someone and then hitting them? No, that's abuse, I don't care how you coat it. Also, Aeson seemed a bit controlling and Gwen just...went with it. Same with the Imperator. I (hoped) she'd be all riled up about father-in-law being a bully because it was one of the things I loved about her in Qualify: she learned how to stand up for herself - it shouldn't matter who it's coming from. Also, Gwen seemed so lovesick that she wasn't using her brain a lot of the time (yes, I get that she was depressed, but it didn't come across that way to me). Which, if you know me, drove me crazy because I can't stand stupid characters. I loved Gwen for using her brain. At least she did - finally - in the Games. Took over half the book, though. Argh. And what's with that stupid ending? I'm getting real tired of not having any questions answered and having endings just...abruptly...end. Please at least finish out the plot and having a little falling action, not just leaving your readers in the middle of it. It makes us (or me, at least) feeling very disatisfied. And if you must have a cliffhanger ending, there are ways to do it, but not just stopping in the middle of things.
Honestly, parts of this book made me want to just stop reading and I almost did a couple of times: the first bit was WAY too mushy/ooey-gooey lovey-dovey (and when Aeson told Gwen, "I love you," it made me think, "Does he really? Because when you say it like that, it sounds like you're not sure"); and WTF was with the kinky sex ritual??? that just...this series seems geared for young adult (could almost go toward children's/all ages), but when you throw in scenes like that, it just seems to really ruin something and would be more appropriate for adult audiences only; the second half just reminded me way too much of the first book. I think a big part of the problem was that there was way too much telling and not enough showing, and then it seemed like the author was trying to shove too much information into the book...and none of the questions I had got answered. Also, things like this this kept happening: "Oh, wait, I don't like this idea, so we're going back to the original one - haha, tricked you!"...and all it did was make me want to say, "Pick one already!"
I realize all this sounds like I hated it. There were parts I enjoyed: Anu finding out Gwen was the Imperial Lady cracked me up; hearing Anu's backstory; Brie (surprisingly)..and I actually found myself liking her more than Gwen at times when Gwen was being an idiot...and I really don't want to like a terrorist more than the main character..there's something not right there; but Brie was funny; I also loved the Pegasei, much to my surprise; Blayne was funny, as usual; I liked Zaap and the rest of 'Team Lark'; I loved when Gwen pulled down Thalassa's pants and tied her shoelaces together and Gwen's ranting about the Great Pyramid.
As I said, this was just a jumble of post-reading thoughts. I may think things through and change my mind about issues later. So far: 1.5 stars.