Yikes, okay, here is the simple breakdown of my review for this book:
Sex: 4/5
Grammar/Writing style: 5/5
Plot line: 2/5
Character development: 1/5
Conflict Resolution: 0.5/5
Okay, okay, okay...l understand how some readers might like this book. It's got hunky Alpha males, spunky females, and sex to last for days. Unfortunately, that's all this book had going for it. I was really disappointed by the 4 star rating this book received. I felt like I finally found another paranormal series I could read like "Immortals After Dark" - but alas, this was not the case. Let me elaborate:
SEX: Alright, this book has sex, and a lot of it. You'll read about sex against the door, sex on top of counters, sex in a bath tub, sex on the bed, sex in water, sex on land, and I'm sure if werewolves could fly, you'll be reading about sex in the air. Unfortunately, there was so much sex, it was literally in every other paragraph of this book. I honestly got BORED of the sex, and that's saying a lot since I LOVE SEX. Seriously though, the sex is hot, hence the 4 stars out of 5 - unfortunately, there was so much sex that it felt forced, repetitive, and overshadowed the plot of this book...
GRAMMAR/WRITING STYLE: Impeccable. Seriously, I loved how the story flowed and how Lauren Dane actually followed proper grammar rules. There were no run on sentences, dialogue was in the correct format, proper words were used, etc. I couldn't find fault with her writing style at all!
PLOT LINE: Oh God, I blame this low score (2 stars out of 5) on the fact that there was little to no plot line AT ALL. It was like reading a long story comprised of short stories that were used as chapters. Too much sex and not enough of plot development. Yes, there was the mystery regarding the attacks on the H&h, but Lauren Dane didn't really elaborate on it.
CHARACTER DEVLOPMENT: Yikes, another low score. I felt like she threw names onto the page so that she could have potential sequels with every character that she mentioned throughout this book. Seriously, Alpha males are hot - the more the merrier! Naming other characters later on in the book with the SAME names as previously mentioned characters makes for confusion and shows a lack of creativity. Furthermore, as a reader, you didn't really get a sense of WHO each person was. The characters in this story were either sexy, annoying, or spunky - no reason why. You were introduced to characters that were put into the story for the sake of causing conflict with the protagonists for a brief span of time and then you move onto new characters who cause new conflicts. It was a nightmare to follow who was dating who, who was fucking who, who was hating on who, who had a previous love interest with who, etc. etc. etc.
CONFLICT RESOLUTION: By far my biggest beef with this book. There was literally no logical and comprehensive conflict resolution. If you call killing off different characters 3-4 times within a book "conflict resolution" then golly, you will REALLY love this book. As for everyone else who enjoys seeing characters develop and who enjoys finding out WHY certain characters do what they do, then you will find yourself as frustrated as I was with this book. Lauren Dane filled so many pages with sex that she only left 1 page, if at all, of room to "solve" any previous problems mentioned. What drove me crazy the most was when she finished this book off the way she did. SERIOUSLY?! An entire book with a flimsy plot line involving a mysterious antagonist and you end it with this?! UGH.
All in all, read if you're looking for a mindless book with lots of sex. Think fanfiction, but along the lines of: plot-what-plot or porn-without-plot.
OVERALL SCORE: 2 stars out of 5 - I gave her 1 star for hot sex and the other star for impeccable editing...