In an alternate, modern-day Edinburgh full of ghosts and magical sweets, Aini MacGregor must hide her magic or face the mad king's firing squad.
But when the most notorious clan in Scotland abducts her father, she must risk death to follow a trail of artifacts to save him. It might just work out.
Until she realizes the man she trusts the most, her father's genius apprentice, is a spy.
Aini is half-Scottish, half-Indonesian, living with her father in Edinburgh. He is a candy maker whose candies have magical effects. The Scottish clan in charge of the area for the King are the Campbells. They have recently been taking liberties with their power to kill those that oppose them and generally make the Scottish people miserable. They are basically a bad, powerful gang that has the King's support. They have been asking Aini's father to weaponize his candy. When he refuses, it makes him a target for the gang. Additionally, above all, the Campbells have been hunting anyone with specific "sixth-sense" abilities. Aini secretly has one of these abilities.
Then there is Thane. Thane is a Campbell by birth, but not especially happy about it. At the clan's bidding, he is a spy currently disguised as an intern in Aini's father's candy lab. When Aini's father is seized, it sets off a chain of events that brings Aini's gift to light while they track down some prophesized relics that will help save Scotland from the tyrannical king. Along the way, Thane begins to question his loyalty to the clan and the laws they pass down....he also might be a little in love with Aini. Aw.
It took me a bit to get into this one as the world building unfolded. It's an interesting set up once you get through it - basically an alternate reality for Scotland/England in current times. I liked the candy making aspect of the characters; that was different and unexpected. Aini is still growing on me, but I like Thane. His struggle might be a little cliche, but it still made me like him all the more. I actually like the other two side characters a lot too - Myles and Neve provide comic relief and information throughout the book. The group's little scavenger hunt was interesting. Now that it is over, I think the real action will pick up in book 2.
Aini's got a secret that she's never told her candy-making father: she's a seer. As a sixth-senser, her kind are feared and hunted by the king's men, the Campbells. But when her father is kidnapped by the Campbells, she risks exposure to find and bring him back. With the handsome and mysterious Thane, mildly inappropriate green-haired Myles, and local historian Neve (all part of her candymaking team), Aini will follow the clues. But Aini isn't the only one who's been keeping secrets.
I love the fantasy candy-making angle (only ever saw that one other time - see The Confectioner's Guild from the free young adult anthology That Moment When), and it totally rocked. Vision-enhancing taffy? Vision-enducing gum? Yes, please!
I also love the alternate present angle and Scottish setting. There were so many beautiful details in this (like how colonial-raised Aini uses "flashlight" and full Scottish Thane says "torch"), and it was really well done.
Where it fell short for me (if you can call it that) was in the pacing. I love when I get to about the 50%-75% area and find myself so frenzied that I can hardly bear to put a book down (though being a mom means I HAVE to put the book down), but I didn't get that sense with this book.
Still beautifully written and an incredible premise, so well worth a read.
Honestly, this book looked way more interesting before I dove into it. However, once I did.. well I was kind of bored. I feel like it took me forever to get to the end of this book. In it, you will meet Aini. She lives with her father in Edinburgh and he just happens to be a candy maker. He makes magical candy. Unfortunately, people want to use his magical candy powers for bad.
Besides her, there's Thane. He's not proud of where he comes from family-wise but that doesn't stop him from being a spy. He's an intern at Aini's father's candy shop. Of course, there's going to be something happening between these two. Once Aini's father is taken away.. well, that doesn't sit to well with her.
These two were okay characters and I could sort of see the romance blooming between them. However, this book's pace just felt so slow to me. Plus there were things that weren't adding up for me that kind of annoyed me to no end. I have so many questions about this book but I don't think I will dive into book 2 anytime soon. Just not motivated right now.
While I can see the potential for this book, especially with such lush World building, it still managed to fall flat for me. I enjoyed the characters and the setting, and the notion there is a modern world, with a changed history (like the revolution went in Britain’s favor, etc) is fascinating - but something was missing in the narrative. Maybe it was the flow or the way it combined, but it ended up being just a meh read, when it feels like it should have been spectacular.
Third person, multiple POV. Episodic. PNR... kinda? M/F Rating = R for violence. Character age range = 17+
Pros: - Character dialogue can be downright witty. - World building is prime. - I like the way these characters, with flaws and fissures, are crafted.
Cons: - Jumps sounds too much. - Plot is hard to pin down, though the crux of it is startlingly simple. - Too Slow in places and way too fast in others.
I read the prequel Enliven and the first chapter of this book before abandoning the series. I found the writing too clunky and the story failed to engage my attention.
The setting was a very strange mix of old-fashioned and modern. Although it's an interesting idea, it was unfortunately not well executed enough to be convincing. There were some very weird juxtapositions, such as the main character walking past a cage that had previously held victims of capital punishment for witchcraft, while receiving a text message on her mobile phone. I simply did not get how such old-fashioned beliefs could co-exist with modern technology. It seems like an anthropological improbability. I suspect that a more skilled writer who had done INTENSIVE work on the world-building side could perhaps have pulled it off, but in my view, this book did not succeed.
I also found the Americanised language very jarring. The story is supposedly set in Edinburgh, but my suspense of disbelief was immediately killed off at the first use of the word "candy". Other phrases such as a character saying "hold please" upon answering the phone, were also disturbingly non-British, let alone Scottish. This is probably not something that American readers would pick up on, but if the author wishes to write for the larger world - particularly inhabitants of the country she is setting her stories in - I would recommend her to get future books checked by a native of that country before publishing. There were loads of examples in just the first chapter.
When it comes to the writing itself, there were also a lot of weirdly unnatural parts. For example in the first chapter, the main character tries to get a look at the tattoos on her co-worker's hands. Has she never seen his hands before? It didn't make sense that she's only just trying to look. And there's an explanation about never writing anything down, right before the father goes to make some notes. These inconsistencies were annoying and frustrating.
I have to admit that one aspect where this book really and truly succeeds is the amazing cover and the title. Those were what prompted me to give the book a chance. I imagine many people have enjoyed the book since it has a fair amount of positive reviews. But I wasn't one of them.
3.5 stars! For Scotland fans!! A nice story with elements of fantasy, magic, romance and packed with action! Visit my blog for a spoiler free review : http://joantsblog.blogspot.gr/2018/03...
A lot of reviews are comparing this book to Outlander, and I can see the comparisons in terms of location, time period and interesting romance. But there is not the level of sex or violence (no rape or mention of rape) like the first Outlander book had, so for younger readers or readers like me who don't find that as part of their cup of tea, this is an awesome book.
Aini is helping her dad an expert candy maker in Edinburgh along with their 3 apprentices. Unbeknownst to anyone Ainin is a sixth senser and has the ability to see where objects have been and the memories that the people attached to these objects left on them. The king is actively trying to get rid of all sixth sensors and meanwhile one of the local Scottish Clans have become a gang and is trying to take more power than even the king has.
But what really captivated me about this book is the uniqueness of the candy. Making taffy that will cause the consumer to see colors more brightly for a while, or float off the ground. This is almost magical candy, that some want to turn into weapons....
The love story was sweet and a wee bit predictable, but this is certainly the type of book that I would want my young teenagers reading, rather than some of the heavier YA books out there now. Overall a great story and an easy read.
I was lucky enough to receive a free copy of this book for review. However all of my opinions are my own and not influenced by the free copy.
The Edinburgh Seer was a captivating ride that I didn't want to end. The characters feel like real people that I could meet at any time. People that have amazing talents and are living their lives, ready for the next step. But they are also flawed, which draws me to them even more. I loved watching the plot unfold which brings new challenges to the table and just when you think the story couldn't get crazier, something comes along to up the ante. I also love that we get to see multiple pov's! It really helped me get to know the characters individually, but from each others perspectives. I picked up on things that I normally wouldn't have access to if it was a single perspective. If you enjoy Outlander, The Mortal Instruments, or Willy Wonka, then this particular story will speak to you! (Yes, you read that correctly. Willy Wonka. The genius that was tapped into to create these vibrantly delicious treats was incredible. I really hope to see more creations and get a deeper feel of what it would be like to taste them and experience their extraordinary abilities.) You should be super intrigued by now. I give The Edinburgh Seer 5 stars and am (im)patiently waiting for book 2!
Alisha Klapheke has done it again! She created a world, almost like our own, only slightly different. I read 2 short prequels to this book. Kingsman and Enliven. Whereas Kingsman promises that this new series will be dark and mysterious, Enliven shows it also has a light and magical side. Both sides are found in The Edinburgh Seer. The wonderful friendship between Thane, Neve, Myles and Aini gives the story a heart. And it takes place in Edinburgh, one of my favorite cities in the world (even if it is slightly different from the Edinburgh I know...). Wonderful book! I received a copy and chose to review it.
Cover/title: The cover is pretty and the title only hints at the story.
Characters: The characters are ok. I really didn't feel much of a connections to them. I wish I could say I even have a favorite but I don't.
Plot: The plot idea could have been good but the book just didn't keep me interested. Honestly, I fell asleep twice while trying to read this book. I finally just decided to plow my way through.
Overall: It was an ok book but not one of my favorites. I was a bit disappointed because the plot idea had potential. It just didn't live up to it.
The Edinburgh Seer is a mix of urban fantasy and alternate history, with a dash of Romeo-and-Juliet-esque romance thrown in just for fun.
Aini MacGregor works with her father Lewis, a candy-maker who adds some fantastic qualities to his candy—like hallucinogenic and color-enhancing properties or, you know, slight alterations to gravity. He has three interns: Neve, who helps with flavor and works as a tour guide on the side; Thane, who helps come up with new formulas; and Myles, who does marketing. They all live in an alternate-history version of Scotland, in which the United States lost the Revolution and subtle magic lives in the veins of many unfortunate people.
Scotland is in turmoil. The king has outlawed Sixth Sensors, people born with extra abilities such as communicating with ghosts. Clan Campbell has been slowly gaining more and more power, executing sixth sensors and rebels without trial—and the king is looking the other way. Naturally, Aini, our main protagonist, has a particularly rare sixth sense that she’s been hiding from everyone. But she’s not the only one with a secret. Thane, the other character through whom the story is sometimes told (and the other one of our potentially star-crossed lovers), also has a secret—and, to everyone’s surprise, Aini’s father does, too. These secrets throw Aini and her friends into the middle of a war, and, at least at first, neither side looks to be the “good” one.
This book was a good read that was hard to put down. There’s action around every corner, but character development, at least for the main protagonists, is not ignored, either. Everyone involved is shoved far out of their comfort zones, but they persevere anyway. The book makes sense—people have reasonable reactions to things, there are consequences for actions taken. People are fiercely, admirably loyal to their friends, to their cause, or to their family, but that doesn’t prevent them from questioning others' actions when lines are crossed. Everything is swimming with gray, just like real life—there isn’t a lot of black and white, a lot of pure good and pure evil, anywhere in this story.
The only issue I had with the book was that it seemed to rush from event to event. I’m not sure how else it could have been done, if I’m honest—there was a lot going on and war doesn’t usually give people time to think—but it made things seem slightly (and I do mean slightly) choppy.
Otherwise, the book was a great read. I can’t wait to get to the sequel. 4.8/5 stars from me!
(I received a free ARC of this book but promise that everything I wrote is my honest opinion of it.)
There are some minor spoilers here, but nothing too big.
I'm not quite sure if I should give this book one or two stars. I gave two, only because I did finish reading it.
My biggest issue with the book was the characters. I felt they were quite flat. I didn't feel attached to them at all. If the main character would have died in the middle of the book, I wouldn't have cared. The only character that felt a little bit deeper was Myles.
Another issue was the world building. When the story starts, it says it's year 2017. Some things do indicate if as well. But some things during the book, feel like they were from centuries ago. And these things were not mixed well enough to feel believable. I had really hard time imagining how the world was.
The writing could have been better too. There were parts where I just felt confused because of the writing, not quite sure what was happening. Some parts were getting lots of attention, even too much and even repeating, and then some scenes, actions, were over before they even started. For example, once Aini's phone rings. She then starts to talk. There's no indication that she actually answered the phone. Just that it rings. Also, when Aini finds the secret room in the lab, there's no reaction from her part. She finds it and goes in. Just like that. She's not surprised, she doesn't show any emotion, nothing. When Thane escapes the barn where the rebellions were, he leaves by riding a horse. The horse was just suddenly there. Out of the blue. Because he needs it. Little things like these really irritates me
Also, everyone pressing their fist against their mouth, what was with that?!
I have the other books too, the rest of the trilogy, but I doubt I will read them, sorry.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Uncommon World Series: Waters of Salt and Sin #1 - A well written, fast paced, fun adventure with well developed, likeable characters and a well thought out plot that keeps the reader immersed in the story. The author does a wonderful job with her descriptions. 4*
Fever #2 - A short story to be read after Waters of Salt and Sin. Another well written, interesting story with characters from WoSaS and a well thought out plot to keep the reader reading until the last page. 4*
Plains of Sand and Steel #3 - Another well written, fast paced, adventure with more well developed, likable characters and a well thought out plot that keeps the reader wrapped up in the story. The author paints vibrant scenes with her descriptions. 4*
Forest of Silver and Secrets #4 - This book is just as well written, action packed and interesting as the three books previous to this one. Ms. Klapheke's vivid descriptions, twisting storylines and interesting characters keep the reader immersed in the book. All the books of series run the gamut on emotions and adventures. Her characters never fail to deliver and there's humor, too. Start with the first book Waters of Salt and Sin and have fun and adventure through the series and end with this story. 4* Uncommon World Series End.
The Edinburgh Seer - Another well written, intriguing novel with well developed, interesting characters and a well thought out, twisting plot; all that keep the reader immersed in the pages until the end. Hard to put this book down with the vivid descriptions of unfolding scenes. 4*
Aini is a seer and a colonialist living in Scotland at a time when both these facts were unacceptable so she did her best to keep her sixth sense a secret from everyone for fear of endangering the lives of those close to her and did her best to pass as a native to Edinburgh. Her father was a confectioner who created magical sweets which were sought out by many including the King and Aini worked with him in the lab, together with Thane and two other friends in a land which was ruled by the King of England, who kept the Scots under his thumb and rule and had his might enforced by the leader of the Campbell clan the ruthless and power hungry Nathair Campbell. One fine day Aini's father was abducted and she swore she would do anything necessary to get him back alive. Thus she sought out the rebels who believed in the prophecy and the curse attached to it and even when facing death she would not relent, she went in search of artifacts and changed her view about the rebels and their cause to free Scotland from tyranny and to put the rightful leader in his place. In the meantime she was falling in love with Thane who had an even worse secret he was afraid to divulge to her for fear of losing her. A very riveting book from start to finish, with a very charismatic cast of characters and an interesting story line. I just love stories with rebels for a cause and this is one such story. Dying to read further into this magical, historical romance.
Aini MacGregor is a rule follower. She makes sure everything is perfect and orderly. You wouldn't think that she has a deadly secret that would put herself and everyone she cares for in danger. When her father has been kidnapped it puts her in a situation where she has to use her gift to find her father but will she be found out. Is she willing to trust her father's apprentices to help her find her father and with her secret gift as a seer. Thane one of her father's apprentice in particular always seem reserved. Can they save her father despite the war against rebels and kingsmen, particularly the Campbell Clan who stop at nothing for control and power. This book was a fast read. I will say at first it was sort of hard for me to get into the mind set that this was an alternate universe since its set in Scotland present day with all the technology and advances exists but the writing brings forth medieval times where kings ruled and the people were to bend at his will. Also the chapters go back and forth from Aini and Thane point of view, so can be a little confusing at first. Still I enjoyed how it differ from other novels. This is a trilogy so im eager to see how the story unravels.
Ok I’m going to be real- this is my least favorite Alisha K book (and I’m pretty sure I’ve read them all). That being said, it was still a really fun read! The drawback to me was it was almost like everything happened too easily in the story. I also was expecting it to be set in another time period. It doesn’t really matter that it wasn’t, but it just took a bit for my brain to get used to present day storytelling. I still finished wanting more, so within 2 days I finished the series. Yep. Couldn’t put it down. The next 2 books in the series get 5 stars from me. So if you find yourself in a similar situation where you liked it but it wasn’t the most amazing thing ever, I say keep going with the series. Side note- as a former science nerd I really enjoy Thanes love for science and the description of the tattoos of the element symbols on his hands. I mean seriously, how sexy can you get with those glasses, tall and muscular, broad shoulders, tattoos, and then being in love with science?! Where is this guy? If I wasn’t married already, I’d reeeeallly want to meet him 🤤 Also if you haven’t already, go check out the Waters of Salt and Sin by this same author. I’m pretty sure that’s what it’s called- loved that series so much!
An epic story of love, magic and rebellion set in an alternate modern day Scotland. The Edinburgh Seer is the start of a great trilogy by Alisha Klapheke. This fast paced political mystery has wide appeal.
Sixteen year old Aini works in her father's very unique sweets shope in Edinburgh. Since her mother died, he is the only family Aini has. They are totally devoted to each other, but Aini harbors a dangerous secret. She is a sixth senser, something outlawed by Brittain's King. To be discovered would be her death and the ruin of her father.
So Aini hides her ability from everyone and turns to organizing the sweet shop and lab, with apprentices. Her father doesn't produce ordinary treats. His candies imbue people with extrordinary experiences, on the verge of magic.
When Aini's father disappears, aparently arrested, implication arrises that he was at some time involved with the rebellion for Scottish freedom. The land has long suffered harsh rule under the king, and conditions are only worsening with the help of Clan Campbell, the King's law keepers.
Aini bands together with her father's apprentices to try to find and free her father. Do these four youths have any chance against a corrupt Clan and King?
Wow! What a great start of a new series that I thought was amazing and a wild ride. I loved the the twist on our modern world and the introduction of the people who have that extra sixth sense into a modern world were not following the crowd or crown could get you killed. I loved how the world was envisioned and the possibilities in this series. Once I started reading I was sucked in and finished it all at once as i had to see how it would end. I thought Aini, Thane, Myles, and Neve were great characters and were believable friends and partners in crime as the story unrolled. I loved the few minor twists and loved the ending. The writing was great and the story just flowed and before I knew it I was at the end. I really liked that the story was told from Aini and Thane's point of view so I could understand their choices and their fears that made the story just that much better. I thought was amazing and I cannot wait to see what happens next as Thane and Aini go onto greater things as they try to survive this world.
I need to visit Edinburgh again As much as I enjoyed this urban fantasy set in an alternative Scotland, I ended up chasing so many of the book’s scenes all over Edinburgh via Google Maps. I found quite a few spots that I’d either passed while on a walking tour about twenty years ago (e.g. Deacon Brodie’s Tavern) or read about in books (Greyfriars Bobby, for one). Oh, and those expressions!
Scottish history is rife with dark deeds, sinister schemes, and wicked wrongdoings. The author doesn’t hide anything of this from the readers; therefore, we can immerse ourselves in those rich and significant experiences that makes Edinburgh what it is today. And what a backdrop for a crime-solving adventure! We are treated to much more intrigue and drama than in the prequel, but there is so much less of that delicious candy to drool over. However, I did see Scottish tablet mentioned, so I plan to make some soon. Hope it comes out better than my shortbread did…
I *definitely* want to continue reading this series as well as other works by this author (of which I have a few).
The Edinburgh Seer was a delightful read, full of magic, drama and action, action, action!!!! I adored all the characters, especially the main duo Aini and Thane (and Bran has a super special place in my heart!). The world building and setting in Edinburgh was such fun to read and felt super immersive! The plot was fast paced and was filled with twist after twist.
One of my favourite parts of the book was the intense emotional themes depicted and explored, that made the characters journey's all the more fascinating and wonderful to read. I just loved it!
I'll keep this short - I certainly recommend reading this book if you enjoy magic, rebellions, action and a side course of romance. I absolutely can't wait for the next book!
*Thank you to the author, Alisha Klapheke for providing me with a review copy of this book. I reviewed this book voluntarily and this does not influence my rating or opinions*
I really enjoyed the story and I’m definitely going to pick up the next one. There is something very charming about a candy making Seeress trying to save her family and using weaponized sweets. Not to mention Scotland and tall, handsome Scotsmen with their sexy accents. I’m pretty much sold!
The story was creative and entertaining, mixing elements you don’t usually expect to go together. It’s a story of family and heritage set against a backdrop of tyranny and rebellion which is eerily accurate even in the real world.
I got to listen to this book at the courtesy of the author, which lead to My only complaint: that the narration wasn’t super. The good news is she did a decent job of navigating accents, which I don’t think is any small feat! However, when not doing dialogue it was very dry and almost sort of monotone. I think I would have enjoyed the book more if I’d read it, rather than listened to it.
What an amazing adventure! This was a unique read full of rebellion, secrecy, and romance. Klapheke delivers yet another story full of lush details and an innovative spin on a candy store—one of my favorite parts! It's beautifully written, unbelievably creative, and will leave you rooting for the main characters. Another standout of this author is her use of sensory details and authentic language. It creates a more immersive story that draws you in and makes you feel like you're a part of it. I also loved the special abilities and would have liked to see a bit more of them, but feel this may be a better fit for the next book. The ending was climactic and I can't wait for the next book to see what happens next!
I received an ARC from the author in exchange for my review. All opinions are my honest, unbiased own.
In an alternative world where the British colonies never won their freedom and chemistry and candy combine, Aini, of mixed Balinese and Scottish heritage works with her father and others in his amazing candy business. She's a rules follower and list maker, in part because she has secrets that could get her and those around her killed.
She's not the only one with secrets; her father has a few as does Thane, one of the shop's apprentices. Secrets have a way of coming out and causing troubles - and their secrets are no exception. The book is well-paced and inventive. I enjoyed the dialogue and banter that was laced with Scottish, and other slang. Author Klapheke has written a fun start to a series. I'm as impatient waiting to read the next book as I would be waiting for fudge to cool enough to eat it!
I received a free copy of the book and have chosen to review it.
A fast-paced, rollicking good time! Could NOT put this down! I enjoyed learning some new Scottish words! It’s a fantasy set in an alternate Scotland, where the Campbells serve as the King of England’s henchmen. The rebels are trying to find the Coronation Stone and restore Scotland’s rightful heir. Aini is hiding a secret …. She’s a seer; someone the king is deathly afraid of. He kills any he finds. Her father runs an altered sweets shop – and the Campbells want to weaponize them. The Campbells capture her father – which side is he on, if any? Can she follow a trail of artifacts to save him? The romance was a bit predictable. But I still found myself hoping he’d explain himself; that she’d understand …. I appreciated the mildly romantic scenes, as opposed to overt. This was even better than her Uncommon World series. Cannot wait to read the next one.
I received a free audio copy of this book directly from the author for an honest review.
This book has some really great ideas like the ‘candy’ fyi we Brits (including the Scots) do not say candy! 😂 Also the way the English and the Scottish are at odds... oh wait... 🤔 well in a monarchy sort of way 🙃😂 really a clever little touch! I’m glad I got the audio version of this though as for me I think I’d of lost interest reading it whereas I could do other things while listening through a couple of bits I found a bit harder going. I’m not even sure what it was exactly that made it this way except perhaps it was the wording or maybe because it took a little while to get to know the characters I’m not sure. Once I got into the book it was definitely worth while though and as I have the trilogy I’ll be moving onto the next one gladly.
Fate chosen was not what Aini had in mind when she discovers her father secrets, has to use her powers and gets to make new acquaintances. Because every one of those things are breaking the mains rules of the English King for Scotland citizens: not being a six-senser or a rebel. Undercover in the family of the young girl, Thane knows where his loyalties should lie. But that does not prevent him from helping Aini But to save her father and get justice for her fellow citizens Aini might have no choice but embracing both and lead the way for her friends and reveal who is the heir destined to free Scotland. Between secrets of her own and of the people around her that task might be doomed from the beginning. Who said being an instrument of destiny was an easy choice?
I was hoping for a little more supernatural in this. Truly her being a Seer is important to the plot but not in the way I expected. This is a story of rebellion with a touch of special powers. Once you understand that, it's a strong story and the Seer will play a pivotal role and that pushes the reader forward to the next in the series. I want to know what her role truly is. I have to say I loved the candy. It was an unusual touch that was fun and gave the story an edge. The narration was much better than others I have heard recently. The narrator is engaging but is best when narrating the dialogue of those with the Scottish brogue. Overall, this was enjoyable especially when I truly understood the story.
I received a copy from the author; all opinions are my own.