Kudos to Lydecker for keeping me reading today when I had far more pressing projects that I needed to be working on.
Adrian, genetically enhanced, lab produced property of the Company, was designed for the sole purpose of helping people. But now he's becoming obsolete. It isn't cost-effective to help people any more, but the same genetics that make him a super-human also supply him with a Hero-worthy, almost Golden Retriever-worthy, dose of loyalty, friendliness, and the need to help people. And not only has his job been deemed obsolete, many people don't want help from company-owned human property any more. What's a good Hero to do? And how long will he allow his loyalty to drive him? Will it override his sense of self-preservation entirely?
I really liked Adrien's character as the story progress. At first, maybe not so much. He comes off as kind of bland in the beginning, and in a way he is a little bland. He's certainly not the fiery rebel or brooding anti-hero you find in a lot of dystopian books. He's just plain good. Loyal, happy to serve, loves people, puts his life on the line on a daily basis for people who often don't want his help. Sort of reminiscent of Captain America, only without the good captain's strong feelings toward individualism and freedom. How could he have any concept of individual freedom, having been born and raised by a hive of interconnectivity, property of a corporation that controls Every. Single. Thing. His bland character in the beginning softly gives way to a subtle complexity that his newer, more up-to-date Hero friends don't share. He's one of only a few left of a dying breed of Heroes, ones who were truly compassionate and kind and took their oaths seriously. He reminded me a lot of Sonny from "I, Robot." Just another faceless robot created to obey his programming. But like Sonny, there's more under the surface- an intriguing blend of genetic programming vs. free will, of mass production vs. uniqueness, of following orders but not being blind. Adrian, for me, was the best part of the book. Sure, I love a good anti-hero sometimes, but they're SO overused nowadays. Meekness isn't a good word in the English vocabulary any more. But Adrien embodies the true spirit of meekness: power under control. His good-natured, puppy-dog personality actually opens up room for more subtle complexity, I think, than a blunt, sarcastic rebel ever could. It's a more intelligent kind of appreciation, I guess, for a character like this, than it would be for the kind of blazing Hollywood showmanship we get bombarded with all the time. Love that.
The writing here is solid, engaging, and vivid, the world-building poignant and sickening and all too realistic. I'm not a huge fan of dystopian for this reason- that it's so depressing. And there's a lot of depressing, horrible, terrible, icky stuff here- but there's also a thread of hope. Adrian's dream of a river in a canyon he's never seen before, that subconsciously carries him through his many ordeals. The few acts of kindness from a handful of people who haven't succumbed to the soulless, selfish crowd. And of course Adrian's unwavering compassion. I like that.
My biggest complaint about the book is that the plot isn't very tight. It keeps moving with plenty of action, several disturbing reveals, and bone-crunching violence, which makes for an entertaining, can't-put-it-down read, but there doesn't seem to be a big, main goal that carries it, beyond, perhaps, Adrien's subconscious longing to find the river from his dreams. Mostly, it just seems to flow from one escapade into the next, gradually changing course over the length of the book, until it ends up a very different place than I thought it was going to. Not that it was bad, by any means. It just wasn't entirely the direction I saw the story going. Well... sort of. Maybe it wasn't so much that I couldn't see it going where it did, as I thought there would be a few other things that would have happened along the way. Several pretty major things were going on that never had a resolution that we're shown. Adrian's legendary status never really gets put to use the way I'd love to have seen. All in all, it just didn't seem to get fleshed out to its full, and very considerable potential. On the other hand, if there's going to be a sequel, then it's perfect as it is.
The ending is satisfying enough, even if it didn't tie up all the loose ends, or answer all the questions that were raised. But I really, really, want to see a sequel. That would make everything all better. Hint, hint. *smacks author upside the head* Hint.