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World of Linaria #2
Palom
‘Now the fighting’s over, you want to pick up where we left off? How? Everything’s changed.’
Linaria’s cities lie in ruin and her lands are scarred following Aciel’s war. The devastation worsens as dragons turn against the survivors in retribution for Aciel slaying their kin and stealing their power.
As the world attempts to recover from one global war and arm itself against another, Palom, hero and creator of the dragon-forged weapons that thwarted Aciel, flees across the Val Sharis wilds to rid himself of unwanted fame.
Overwhelmed by guilt for failing to protect loved ones, his greatest threat is not just the weapons he created, but the new shadow growing over Linaria.
Discover new friends and rejoin old ones in World of Linaria - Book Two.
Linaria’s cities lie in ruin and her lands are scarred following Aciel’s war. The devastation worsens as dragons turn against the survivors in retribution for Aciel slaying their kin and stealing their power.
As the world attempts to recover from one global war and arm itself against another, Palom, hero and creator of the dragon-forged weapons that thwarted Aciel, flees across the Val Sharis wilds to rid himself of unwanted fame.
Overwhelmed by guilt for failing to protect loved ones, his greatest threat is not just the weapons he created, but the new shadow growing over Linaria.
Discover new friends and rejoin old ones in World of Linaria - Book Two.
361 pages, Paperback
Published July 31, 2018
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L.L. McNeil
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My name is Lauren, I'm a fantasy author of character-driven stories and epic adventure. My books usually contain dragons, rarely feature romance, and are typically fun and hopeful.
I have a degree in Psychology and a fascination with MBTI (I'm an INFJ!). I'm a petrol head and thalassophile, and adore castles, sunshine, and dragons. I've always lost myself in fantasy worlds, and it's been an incredible achievement to publish my own.
If you send a friend request and we don't have any similar interests or books in common, I'll probably decline. Feel free to follow me, though.
Check out my website for signed paperbacks, bookswag, and to find out more about my writing world!
www.llmacrae.com
I've previously published under the name L.L. McNeil
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November 10, 2020
A special thank you to TL, as this book began as a buddy read between us. My apologies to her as well, as I may have fallen slightly behind... I believe TL finished this book six months before I did! 🤦♂️
Dramatic (and entirely accurate) reenactment of TL waiting for me to catch up with her during our buddy read!
And now, it's time for another case in...
THE BOOK COURT
OPENING STATEMENTS
A would-be conqueror's attempts to bring all of Linaria under his control were thwarted, but as a result, the world has been left more fractured than ever. Claims to the throne are contested, memories of treachery past haunt the modern day, and neighbors eye each other with suspicion and malice. The world may not have been taken over, but with dragons seemingly launching unprovoked attacks and citizens being overcome by a mysterious malady that clouds their minds in an endless fog, the world has been anything but saved. Now Palom goes off on a journey to try to find his place in this new but broken world. But Palom isn't the only one on the hunt, as an enemy from his past wants to ensure that Palom has no future!
If you try to run from your past, it only winds up chasing after you!
THE DEFENSE
- More attention to worldbuilding this time around.
Full disclosure: I absolutely loved the first book in the World of Linaria series! It moved at such a brisk pace which I appreciated, and it was filled with so many fascinating characters. My only complaint about that book (and it was an admittedly small one), was that it moved a little too fast sometimes, to the point where I wasn't quite sure what the rules of the world of Linaria were. This time around, however, I felt L.L. McNeil spent more time developing the world around the characters. While I had fun reading about the characters of Linaria in the last book, I learned more about Linaria itself in this novel. The tension between different sects was explored, pieces of the backstory motivating the characters were revealed, and even the magic system was detailed more than last time. To give an example of the intricate magic system in this story, one memorable moment for me occurs when a character weaves a magical spell to communicate with someone else through a mirror and seems genuinely surprised when the other person finds someone else watching them in their mirror to be a tad unsettling...
Whatever could be unsettling about something like this?! 😳
- Amarah is still awesome! As are many other characters in this book.
Oh, "Moroda", you were filled with so many wonderful and interesting characters... like Moroda. And Amarah! And Eryn. And Amarah! And Sapora. And Amarah! And Kohl. And... well, you get the idea, I'm being a trifle obvious now!
I'm not Captain Obvious any more... I've been promoted to General Obvious!
Yes, reading the first book, as fascinating as the other characters were, with her acerbic wit and strong personality, sassy sky pirate Amarah quickly became my favorite, to the point where I started adding #TeamAmarah to my posts about L.L. McNeil's books! I was a little concerned that she wouldn't shine as brightly the second time, but once again, Amarah managed to leap off of every page she was on! But she didn't have to carry the book herself, there was an engaging cast of characters throughout the tale. Returning favorites like Sapora and Kohl were amazing to read about once again, Isa (who was introduced in the last book but only appeared briefly in that one) played a much bigger role this time around, and new characters were introduced that got their moments in the spotlight, like Palom's charming niece Solvi. Even characters we weren't supposed to like were entertaining at times, like Sapora's devious brother Tacio who still made me laugh in his more vain moments. After reading "Moroda", I came away believing that one of L.L. McNeil's greatest strengths as a writer is her ability to create enthralling characters, and that belief was only made even stronger after reading the sequel!
- Very captivating and satisfying character arcs.
After you read the first book in the series, do you make up a story in your head of how you think the next book will play out, or is it just me that goes into that much detail?! Okay, anyone who does this, please raise your hand!
*counts hands*
Ummm… just me?!
*counts hands again*
Yep, still just one!
Yes, I entered "Palom" with my own ideas of what would happen next, but I have to give L.L. McNeil credit, she took the characters in completely different directions than I expected. And I must confess, L.L. McNeil's character arcs were far more intriguing than I had devised for them! That's why L.L. McNeil is a successful and respected author, and I have to consult a thesaurus every time I write a review to keep from using the same adjective 100 times! Seriously, if it weren't for Thesaurus.com, this review would just say "The writing was awesome. And the characters were awesome. And the dialogue was awesome!" 😂
- A rare example of a sequel being anything but more of the same!
Sequels are a tricky thing. Giving the audience something completely different is risky, which is why many authors and moviemakers decide to stick with the formula that worked well the first time. In fact, a sequel just being more of the same has become so prevalent that just talking about sequels being more of the same is now just more of the same! How ironic...
To illustrate irony, it was either this well-known Emma Stone gif, or the one-billionth meme pointing out that Alanis Morissette's "Ironic" song isn't really ironic. I made my choice and I stand by it!
However, for her sequel to "Moroda", L.L. McNeil took a genuine chance and gave us a sequel that had a much different tone to the first book. Whereas the characters in the first book were firmly looking ahead to what awaited them, this time they spend a lot of time looking back to what brought them here. The first book focused more on the action, but this one focuses more on the impact of those actions. I applaud L.L. McNeil for bring brave enough to try to tell the second story in a completely different voice, and her gamble pays off... mostly (which brings us to...)
THE PROSECUTION
- This book moves at a much slower pace than the last one.
As much as I respect L.L. McNeil for trying something different for the sequel, I must admit the change in tone didn't always quite work for me. This was particularly noticeable in the chapters focusing on Palom himself. While learning more about Palom's past did add depth to his character, a lot of his story tends to be so introspective that I did find myself really wanting to get back to the action. That's not to say that there is no action in the book, as Amarah isn't going to be able to keep from picking a fight for very long, but there were lulls in the pacing where I was eagerly anticipating the next chapter rather than enjoying the current one as much. When reviewing a sequel, I do try to evaluate the story on its own merits rather than compare it to the earlier books in the series, but there's no getting past the fact that there were parts where I missed the brisk pace of the first novel. Then again, maybe this is actually still a testament to L.L. McNeil's skills as a writer, since it's entirely possible I just have unreasonably high expectations after enjoying the first book so much!
The evil boss from "Office Space" makes perfect sense to me... I'm greatly disturbed by this! 😳
- Palom sometimes feels like a supporting character in his own novel.
Confession time, after reading "Moroda", I was a little concerned to learn that the second book would focus on Palom. That's not to say that I disliked Palom in the first book, but with so many dynamic characters running around in that one, I didn't find him quite as interesting as most of his companions. And while I did appreciate Palom more this time around (particularly after learning more about his past), I did still feel that the other lead characters tended to overshadow him once again. Again, no spoilers, but there are three main plot threads being weaved throughout this novel, and I found the other two storylines to be more absorbing than Palom's. While I may have more respect for Palom now, I don't think he'll be threatening to take Amarah's place as my favorite Linarian any time soon!
The competitive spirit of Amarah in one gif!
THE VERDICT
With the consequence of actions being given more weight than the action itself, L.L. McNeil has crafted a much different tale than the story that came before it. Rather than focusing entirely on the citizens of Linaria, the world itself gets explored this time around. While I did miss the fast pace of the first novel (and I felt Palom himself could be a little too somber for his own good at times), unexpected twists and fulfilling character arcs still made for a brilliant read. Fans of the first book who go into this one knowing it doesn't have as much action as its predecessor may even wind up enjoying this one more than I did. Eagerly awaiting the third book in the series now... especially since that one stars my favorite character from the last two novels!
Dramatic (and entirely accurate) reenactment of TL waiting for me to catch up with her during our buddy read!
And now, it's time for another case in...
THE BOOK COURT
OPENING STATEMENTS
A would-be conqueror's attempts to bring all of Linaria under his control were thwarted, but as a result, the world has been left more fractured than ever. Claims to the throne are contested, memories of treachery past haunt the modern day, and neighbors eye each other with suspicion and malice. The world may not have been taken over, but with dragons seemingly launching unprovoked attacks and citizens being overcome by a mysterious malady that clouds their minds in an endless fog, the world has been anything but saved. Now Palom goes off on a journey to try to find his place in this new but broken world. But Palom isn't the only one on the hunt, as an enemy from his past wants to ensure that Palom has no future!
If you try to run from your past, it only winds up chasing after you!
THE DEFENSE
- More attention to worldbuilding this time around.
Full disclosure: I absolutely loved the first book in the World of Linaria series! It moved at such a brisk pace which I appreciated, and it was filled with so many fascinating characters. My only complaint about that book (and it was an admittedly small one), was that it moved a little too fast sometimes, to the point where I wasn't quite sure what the rules of the world of Linaria were. This time around, however, I felt L.L. McNeil spent more time developing the world around the characters. While I had fun reading about the characters of Linaria in the last book, I learned more about Linaria itself in this novel. The tension between different sects was explored, pieces of the backstory motivating the characters were revealed, and even the magic system was detailed more than last time. To give an example of the intricate magic system in this story, one memorable moment for me occurs when a character weaves a magical spell to communicate with someone else through a mirror and seems genuinely surprised when the other person finds someone else watching them in their mirror to be a tad unsettling...
Whatever could be unsettling about something like this?! 😳
- Amarah is still awesome! As are many other characters in this book.
Oh, "Moroda", you were filled with so many wonderful and interesting characters... like Moroda. And Amarah! And Eryn. And Amarah! And Sapora. And Amarah! And Kohl. And... well, you get the idea, I'm being a trifle obvious now!
I'm not Captain Obvious any more... I've been promoted to General Obvious!
Yes, reading the first book, as fascinating as the other characters were, with her acerbic wit and strong personality, sassy sky pirate Amarah quickly became my favorite, to the point where I started adding #TeamAmarah to my posts about L.L. McNeil's books! I was a little concerned that she wouldn't shine as brightly the second time, but once again, Amarah managed to leap off of every page she was on! But she didn't have to carry the book herself, there was an engaging cast of characters throughout the tale. Returning favorites like Sapora and Kohl were amazing to read about once again, Isa (who was introduced in the last book but only appeared briefly in that one) played a much bigger role this time around, and new characters were introduced that got their moments in the spotlight, like Palom's charming niece Solvi. Even characters we weren't supposed to like were entertaining at times, like Sapora's devious brother Tacio who still made me laugh in his more vain moments. After reading "Moroda", I came away believing that one of L.L. McNeil's greatest strengths as a writer is her ability to create enthralling characters, and that belief was only made even stronger after reading the sequel!
- Very captivating and satisfying character arcs.
After you read the first book in the series, do you make up a story in your head of how you think the next book will play out, or is it just me that goes into that much detail?! Okay, anyone who does this, please raise your hand!
*counts hands*
Ummm… just me?!
*counts hands again*
Yep, still just one!
Yes, I entered "Palom" with my own ideas of what would happen next, but I have to give L.L. McNeil credit, she took the characters in completely different directions than I expected. And I must confess, L.L. McNeil's character arcs were far more intriguing than I had devised for them! That's why L.L. McNeil is a successful and respected author, and I have to consult a thesaurus every time I write a review to keep from using the same adjective 100 times! Seriously, if it weren't for Thesaurus.com, this review would just say "The writing was awesome. And the characters were awesome. And the dialogue was awesome!" 😂
- A rare example of a sequel being anything but more of the same!
Sequels are a tricky thing. Giving the audience something completely different is risky, which is why many authors and moviemakers decide to stick with the formula that worked well the first time. In fact, a sequel just being more of the same has become so prevalent that just talking about sequels being more of the same is now just more of the same! How ironic...
To illustrate irony, it was either this well-known Emma Stone gif, or the one-billionth meme pointing out that Alanis Morissette's "Ironic" song isn't really ironic. I made my choice and I stand by it!
However, for her sequel to "Moroda", L.L. McNeil took a genuine chance and gave us a sequel that had a much different tone to the first book. Whereas the characters in the first book were firmly looking ahead to what awaited them, this time they spend a lot of time looking back to what brought them here. The first book focused more on the action, but this one focuses more on the impact of those actions. I applaud L.L. McNeil for bring brave enough to try to tell the second story in a completely different voice, and her gamble pays off... mostly (which brings us to...)
THE PROSECUTION
- This book moves at a much slower pace than the last one.
As much as I respect L.L. McNeil for trying something different for the sequel, I must admit the change in tone didn't always quite work for me. This was particularly noticeable in the chapters focusing on Palom himself. While learning more about Palom's past did add depth to his character, a lot of his story tends to be so introspective that I did find myself really wanting to get back to the action. That's not to say that there is no action in the book, as Amarah isn't going to be able to keep from picking a fight for very long, but there were lulls in the pacing where I was eagerly anticipating the next chapter rather than enjoying the current one as much. When reviewing a sequel, I do try to evaluate the story on its own merits rather than compare it to the earlier books in the series, but there's no getting past the fact that there were parts where I missed the brisk pace of the first novel. Then again, maybe this is actually still a testament to L.L. McNeil's skills as a writer, since it's entirely possible I just have unreasonably high expectations after enjoying the first book so much!
The evil boss from "Office Space" makes perfect sense to me... I'm greatly disturbed by this! 😳
- Palom sometimes feels like a supporting character in his own novel.
Confession time, after reading "Moroda", I was a little concerned to learn that the second book would focus on Palom. That's not to say that I disliked Palom in the first book, but with so many dynamic characters running around in that one, I didn't find him quite as interesting as most of his companions. And while I did appreciate Palom more this time around (particularly after learning more about his past), I did still feel that the other lead characters tended to overshadow him once again. Again, no spoilers, but there are three main plot threads being weaved throughout this novel, and I found the other two storylines to be more absorbing than Palom's. While I may have more respect for Palom now, I don't think he'll be threatening to take Amarah's place as my favorite Linarian any time soon!
The competitive spirit of Amarah in one gif!
THE VERDICT
With the consequence of actions being given more weight than the action itself, L.L. McNeil has crafted a much different tale than the story that came before it. Rather than focusing entirely on the citizens of Linaria, the world itself gets explored this time around. While I did miss the fast pace of the first novel (and I felt Palom himself could be a little too somber for his own good at times), unexpected twists and fulfilling character arcs still made for a brilliant read. Fans of the first book who go into this one knowing it doesn't have as much action as its predecessor may even wind up enjoying this one more than I did. Eagerly awaiting the third book in the series now... especially since that one stars my favorite character from the last two novels!
May 30, 2020
Buddyread with my good friend David.. I left him in the dust again haha, whoops :)
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This one was a bit slower paced than its predecessor but wasn't lacking for happening or action.
One character I wasn't sure about until the end and we are left with her in a precarious place :(
Sapora I went back and forth too until the end... his ideas, just... oooh boy. He doesn't seem to mind asking for trouble.
Jato... self entitled Brat *glares* I wanted to smack her along with Amarah.
(High compliments to the author btw with these two)
It was interesting to get to know Kohl and Palom more.. .to see more of their history. Some of the things put in perspective stuff from book one and before. The journeys of both throughout the book... I was proud of them near the end.
It was fun to see Amarah again:) I would sail with her anytime.
There certainly is a whole lot of Messes in this installment, personal and otherwise. The road ahead is going to be complicated either way, with more death and destruction coming.
Who will be left standing when the dust clears?
Fancasting:
Solvi
Lathri
Tacio
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This one was a bit slower paced than its predecessor but wasn't lacking for happening or action.
One character I wasn't sure about until the end and we are left with her in a precarious place :(
Sapora I went back and forth too until the end... his ideas, just... oooh boy. He doesn't seem to mind asking for trouble.
Jato... self entitled Brat *glares* I wanted to smack her along with Amarah.
(High compliments to the author btw with these two)
It was interesting to get to know Kohl and Palom more.. .to see more of their history. Some of the things put in perspective stuff from book one and before. The journeys of both throughout the book... I was proud of them near the end.
It was fun to see Amarah again:) I would sail with her anytime.
There certainly is a whole lot of Messes in this installment, personal and otherwise. The road ahead is going to be complicated either way, with more death and destruction coming.
Who will be left standing when the dust clears?
Fancasting:
Solvi Lathri Tacio
August 9, 2018
4.5 Stars.
Full disclosure: I know the author and received a review copy in exchange for an honest review. However, I bought both Moroda and this one because I'm a fan of this type of fantasy, and so far this series does not disappoint.
I always like to get the negative points out of the way first, so I can proceed to gush about the many characters I love. Palom feels a bit slower than Moroda in places. That's mostly because Moroda had an epic conflict going on, and the world of Linaria was in immediate danger. Here, a big portion of the book deals with the fallout of the previous instalment. And, of course, the chess pieces need to be put in place for the third book.
Despite that, it's not a filler book. On the contrary, some of the themes L.L. McNeil deals with are super important and heartbreaking.
We've got Palom, the main character, hailed as a hero, but what happens to the hero after he defeats the enemy? I've often wondered that when reading fantasy books. I would watch the hero fight and kill for the good side, and I'd think, how will you feel once you get to go home? Hello, PTSD.
It's incredible to see a hero after the battle. My heart broke watching him suffer and deal with all the emotional fallout of his past. Palom's struggle to get out of the dark hole he fell into is intense, and it doesn't help that his past lurks just around the corner.
Amarah. The sky-pirate. One of my favourite characters. While Palom struggles not knowing how to move on with his life, Amarah is unwilling to give up. She's broken, but she refuses to let that stop her. I've followed her journey on the edge of my seat, and she continues to be a favourite of mine.
I was a huge fan of Sapora in the first book, but in this one a character emerges, I didn't think I would like quite so much: Isa. She's fantastic. Only part Varkain she shifts into a wild cat instead of a snake, and that's apparently a reason other Varkain think less of her. (I'd like to smack a few of those Varkain by the way, thank you very much.)
Despite my dislike for certain Varkain, the characters I wanted to smack the most were Kohl and Palom. Both for very similar reasons...
We slowly find out more about the characters we got to know in Moroda. What drives them? What is lurking in their past? L.L. McNeil is very good at dripping information into descriptions and conversations, and never dumps it all on the reader at once.
In Palom we get to see the world expand, and we find out more about the history of Linaria. There's a few things that should possibly best be left sleeping, but sigh, when will characters ever learn? The world building is imaginative, with a few very intriguing bits emerging, and I'm excited to find out more in the next book.
L.L. McNeil's prose is straightforward and easy to read, and she moves the plot forward at a good pace. If only the book were longer...I need to know what happens next!
Recommended to people who love dragons, sky-pirates and airships. L.L. McNeil's World of Linaria is a great introduction to fantasy for new fans, but also a treat for old fans of the genre.
Full disclosure: I know the author and received a review copy in exchange for an honest review. However, I bought both Moroda and this one because I'm a fan of this type of fantasy, and so far this series does not disappoint.
I always like to get the negative points out of the way first, so I can proceed to gush about the many characters I love. Palom feels a bit slower than Moroda in places. That's mostly because Moroda had an epic conflict going on, and the world of Linaria was in immediate danger. Here, a big portion of the book deals with the fallout of the previous instalment. And, of course, the chess pieces need to be put in place for the third book.
Despite that, it's not a filler book. On the contrary, some of the themes L.L. McNeil deals with are super important and heartbreaking.
We've got Palom, the main character, hailed as a hero, but what happens to the hero after he defeats the enemy? I've often wondered that when reading fantasy books. I would watch the hero fight and kill for the good side, and I'd think, how will you feel once you get to go home? Hello, PTSD.
It's incredible to see a hero after the battle. My heart broke watching him suffer and deal with all the emotional fallout of his past. Palom's struggle to get out of the dark hole he fell into is intense, and it doesn't help that his past lurks just around the corner.
Amarah. The sky-pirate. One of my favourite characters. While Palom struggles not knowing how to move on with his life, Amarah is unwilling to give up. She's broken, but she refuses to let that stop her. I've followed her journey on the edge of my seat, and she continues to be a favourite of mine.
I was a huge fan of Sapora in the first book, but in this one a character emerges, I didn't think I would like quite so much: Isa. She's fantastic. Only part Varkain she shifts into a wild cat instead of a snake, and that's apparently a reason other Varkain think less of her. (I'd like to smack a few of those Varkain by the way, thank you very much.)
Despite my dislike for certain Varkain, the characters I wanted to smack the most were Kohl and Palom. Both for very similar reasons...
We slowly find out more about the characters we got to know in Moroda. What drives them? What is lurking in their past? L.L. McNeil is very good at dripping information into descriptions and conversations, and never dumps it all on the reader at once.
In Palom we get to see the world expand, and we find out more about the history of Linaria. There's a few things that should possibly best be left sleeping, but sigh, when will characters ever learn? The world building is imaginative, with a few very intriguing bits emerging, and I'm excited to find out more in the next book.
L.L. McNeil's prose is straightforward and easy to read, and she moves the plot forward at a good pace. If only the book were longer...I need to know what happens next!
Recommended to people who love dragons, sky-pirates and airships. L.L. McNeil's World of Linaria is a great introduction to fantasy for new fans, but also a treat for old fans of the genre.
September 20, 2022
I really enjoyed this book. I think we are taking a much needed pacing change to slow down and get to know our characters and enrich the world and it’s lore.
Once again in cannot drive home enough that LL Macrae can write fantastic characters. She brings them to life on the page. I feel like I know these characters now.
If I have 1 critique is I’d have liked a bit more action but I understand why there is t as much. It feels like we are getting ready to springboard the sorry I to the rest of The linaria series.
Once again in cannot drive home enough that LL Macrae can write fantastic characters. She brings them to life on the page. I feel like I know these characters now.
If I have 1 critique is I’d have liked a bit more action but I understand why there is t as much. It feels like we are getting ready to springboard the sorry I to the rest of The linaria series.
February 26, 2020
Palom is the second book in L.L. McNeil’s World of Linaria series, and it’s packed full of fantasy elements that are guaranteed to have you devouring the book in no time at all. If you’ve yet to read Moroda, book one, go and do so now, as Palom builds upon it wonderfully.
With Palom a lot of new elements were introduced to the story. We build upon all that happened in book one, with plenty of twists and surprises being thrown in. The world grows larger, the characters develop well, and new storylines are introduced to suck you in ever deeper.
Although Palom was a slower book than Moroda, it was not a filler second book. It does not suffer from second book syndrome, whereby it does nothing for the plot, instead it is an incredible read that will have you hooked. The moment you finish you’ll be wanting to dive into book three to see what comes next, to see how the twists develop, and to get more of the characters.
Without a doubt, Palom is well worth the read if you enjoyed book one. The story really finds its stride in this one, and I have high hopes for the rest of the series.
With Palom a lot of new elements were introduced to the story. We build upon all that happened in book one, with plenty of twists and surprises being thrown in. The world grows larger, the characters develop well, and new storylines are introduced to suck you in ever deeper.
Although Palom was a slower book than Moroda, it was not a filler second book. It does not suffer from second book syndrome, whereby it does nothing for the plot, instead it is an incredible read that will have you hooked. The moment you finish you’ll be wanting to dive into book three to see what comes next, to see how the twists develop, and to get more of the characters.
Without a doubt, Palom is well worth the read if you enjoyed book one. The story really finds its stride in this one, and I have high hopes for the rest of the series.
July 9, 2019
If Palom could smile, he would have. He didn't have to be afraid anymore - he wasn't alone
Palom is the second book in the World of Linaria series, which started with Moroda. I received this book from the author and then didn't read it for too long and now I'm so angry at myself for putting this off! Because I loved the character development in this book and the focus on examining consequences.
The next book comes out later this month and thank god as that ending left me wanting more!
Full review to come
July 12, 2018
[Received as an eARC from the author]
What can I say about Palom? The second novel in L.L.McNeil's World of Linaria series, Palom follows off almost straight after the final events in Moroda and brings us back into contact with (a now separated group of) Varkain, Arillian, Sky Pirates, and Ittallan...and I cannot express how gripping and exciting this new instalment is!
McNeil has a lot going on in this book but you never seem to get lost in the lore, the world, or the characters.
From chapter to chapter we follow alternating characters from the first book and I was worried I'd want to skip or just slog through some chapters just so I'd meet-up with the other characters who were doing something more exciting or interesting; I am pleased to say that this was not the case! With each chapter I was eager to discover what was happening with that key character whether it be the newly appointed Varkain King (Sapora), the cackling Sky Pirate and wary flying companion (Amarah and Kohl), or the Tiger warrior and title character (Palom), I wanted to know what all of them were doing.
Throughout Palom we see more and more of the characters and what makes them tick, what they hold dear, and what drives them onwards, and it is beautifully crafted in each of their chapters. McNeil does not thrust information onto the reader or down their throat but nudges them to remembering comments and events from Book One, and drips new information into conversations between characters.
Palom takes places after the war between Aceil's army and the rest of Linaria. Each member of the party has been influenced by the war and the losses of Moroda and each deals with the events in their own ways.
We get to learn what Sapora is like as a leader and what lengths he will go through to keep his rule and ensure respect is given to him (after the banquet fiasco in Book One the reader is provided with some understanding of how he deals with things), and what more the reader learns more about the secret the Varkain Royalties have buried deep in their tunnels!
Palom is guilt-ridden, he is a fighter who couldn't save the people he swore to protect, he has lost everything he held close, and each congratulations and cheer of being called a "hero" does nothing but sting and make him angry with himself. We learn more about his past, about the horrors and sadness that he had run away from, and we start to understand his way of thinking. I loved reading about him throughout the book getting small glimmers of hope and confidence and about his past to what drove him to find Anahrik.
If there's something we learnt about Amarah it was that she doesn't like being indebted to anyone, no matter what the other person's intentions were that drove their actions, if they aided her in some way they must be repaid. I love this mentality in pirates, and it suits Amarah down to a tee. We join her and Khanna flying the skies (a little worse for wear) following Kohl to his home, the mythical floating islands, as she searches for a way to repay a debt. The trip reveals more about her flying companion and his past than we ever learnt in Book One, Kohl being the stoic silent type throughout their travels together.
There are so many surprises and questions in Pallom that I wish it were a longer book! But I shall have to wait until Book Three is released!
For any who have enjoyed Naomi Novik's Temeraire Series or Jen William's Copper Cat Series, I suggest they find a copy of Moroda! If anyone has read Moroda and wondered about Palom I cannot recommend it enough! Keep an eye on L.L.McNeil, a fantastic author with an AMAZING dragon fuelled imagination. Linaria awaits!
What can I say about Palom? The second novel in L.L.McNeil's World of Linaria series, Palom follows off almost straight after the final events in Moroda and brings us back into contact with (a now separated group of) Varkain, Arillian, Sky Pirates, and Ittallan...and I cannot express how gripping and exciting this new instalment is!
McNeil has a lot going on in this book but you never seem to get lost in the lore, the world, or the characters.
From chapter to chapter we follow alternating characters from the first book and I was worried I'd want to skip or just slog through some chapters just so I'd meet-up with the other characters who were doing something more exciting or interesting; I am pleased to say that this was not the case! With each chapter I was eager to discover what was happening with that key character whether it be the newly appointed Varkain King (Sapora), the cackling Sky Pirate and wary flying companion (Amarah and Kohl), or the Tiger warrior and title character (Palom), I wanted to know what all of them were doing.
Throughout Palom we see more and more of the characters and what makes them tick, what they hold dear, and what drives them onwards, and it is beautifully crafted in each of their chapters. McNeil does not thrust information onto the reader or down their throat but nudges them to remembering comments and events from Book One, and drips new information into conversations between characters.
Palom takes places after the war between Aceil's army and the rest of Linaria. Each member of the party has been influenced by the war and the losses of Moroda and each deals with the events in their own ways.
We get to learn what Sapora is like as a leader and what lengths he will go through to keep his rule and ensure respect is given to him (after the banquet fiasco in Book One the reader is provided with some understanding of how he deals with things), and what more the reader learns more about the secret the Varkain Royalties have buried deep in their tunnels!
Palom is guilt-ridden, he is a fighter who couldn't save the people he swore to protect, he has lost everything he held close, and each congratulations and cheer of being called a "hero" does nothing but sting and make him angry with himself. We learn more about his past, about the horrors and sadness that he had run away from, and we start to understand his way of thinking. I loved reading about him throughout the book getting small glimmers of hope and confidence and about his past to what drove him to find Anahrik.
If there's something we learnt about Amarah it was that she doesn't like being indebted to anyone, no matter what the other person's intentions were that drove their actions, if they aided her in some way they must be repaid. I love this mentality in pirates, and it suits Amarah down to a tee. We join her and Khanna flying the skies (a little worse for wear) following Kohl to his home, the mythical floating islands, as she searches for a way to repay a debt. The trip reveals more about her flying companion and his past than we ever learnt in Book One, Kohl being the stoic silent type throughout their travels together.
There are so many surprises and questions in Pallom that I wish it were a longer book! But I shall have to wait until Book Three is released!
For any who have enjoyed Naomi Novik's Temeraire Series or Jen William's Copper Cat Series, I suggest they find a copy of Moroda! If anyone has read Moroda and wondered about Palom I cannot recommend it enough! Keep an eye on L.L.McNeil, a fantastic author with an AMAZING dragon fuelled imagination. Linaria awaits!
September 15, 2018
I loved this book and it was an improvement on the first which is unusual (when I love the first book the next ones tend to down hill from there. Like Disney sequels...) I loved the character development apart from Sapora who can die soon hopefully. Isa is my new fav character even if I wish she would take the lead a bit more (not a criticism of the writing, flawed character being flawed is good)
The only thing that is bugging me is the ending. Has Palom missed Amarah? Will they see him from the ship? Are they heading his way anyway because he might have found an ark, is it the same one? Reading the back of the book also points out other questions left unanswered. It asks if the hatchling will be Palom salvation or destruction but by the end of the book the dragon is still being cute and playing in the snow (which was adorable and I loved it) Too many questions. It’s annoying.
The thing I found interesting about this book was that it was almost completely character driven. Plot was there but as a book it had more of the feeling of a deck being reshuffled, of all the people finding their places for the next fight. Palom kind of irritated me at times with his moping but apart from that the book was really enjoyable. The information on the back of the book only accounts for a fraction of what is going on and I really don’t see how it could have been done anyway. This story didn’t fit with the demands of strict structure and linear narratives that make it easy to write on the back of a book. It breaths more and goes where it needs to go. Along with being an enjoyable read I can see this book changing the way I shape my stories in future.
Isa also reminded me of my first ever character Leo and damn now I really want to write
The only thing that is bugging me is the ending. Has Palom missed Amarah? Will they see him from the ship? Are they heading his way anyway because he might have found an ark, is it the same one? Reading the back of the book also points out other questions left unanswered. It asks if the hatchling will be Palom salvation or destruction but by the end of the book the dragon is still being cute and playing in the snow (which was adorable and I loved it) Too many questions. It’s annoying.
The thing I found interesting about this book was that it was almost completely character driven. Plot was there but as a book it had more of the feeling of a deck being reshuffled, of all the people finding their places for the next fight. Palom kind of irritated me at times with his moping but apart from that the book was really enjoyable. The information on the back of the book only accounts for a fraction of what is going on and I really don’t see how it could have been done anyway. This story didn’t fit with the demands of strict structure and linear narratives that make it easy to write on the back of a book. It breaths more and goes where it needs to go. Along with being an enjoyable read I can see this book changing the way I shape my stories in future.
Isa also reminded me of my first ever character Leo and damn now I really want to write
November 23, 2018
I finished this book in only a few days. Why? Because I couldn't put it down.
After reading the first book in the series, 'Moroda', I was left with a few questions, and a curiosity about where the story would lead next. 'Palom' did not disappoint me. I had some questions answered, but the curiosity remains! (I was already eagerly anticipating the next in the series by the time I closed it on the final page).
Like 'Moroda' before it, 'Palom' manages to capture realistic characters and portray a range of personalities that inspire different thoughts and feelings from the reader. They're all equally complex, and I felt that most were given more equal 'screentime' (for lack of a better term) than in the previous book. They were definitely given more room to grow, in my opinion, and the character development for some (Amara in particular) is clear as the story goes on. After reading 'Palom', I am even more endeared to Kohl and Palom after witnessing their struggles (and their strengths). By contrast, Sapora has gone down in my esteem but I still find myself intrigued by his plans and schemes (and he'll likely rise again in future books. I do like myself a good shady character, after all).
In a world where lore and history grows in abundance, it can be difficult to pack the information you need into one book. It's easy to throw in every little detail and end up sounding more like a history textbook than a novel. L.L. McNeil has managed, in my opinion, to feed in what's relevant, when it's relevant. I'm not sure what I'm more interested in at this point - the plot, or the world it's set in!
It's not a flawless book, but then what book doesn't have flaws in some way? Would I still recommend it to others? Absolutely I would (and have).
After reading the first book in the series, 'Moroda', I was left with a few questions, and a curiosity about where the story would lead next. 'Palom' did not disappoint me. I had some questions answered, but the curiosity remains! (I was already eagerly anticipating the next in the series by the time I closed it on the final page).
Like 'Moroda' before it, 'Palom' manages to capture realistic characters and portray a range of personalities that inspire different thoughts and feelings from the reader. They're all equally complex, and I felt that most were given more equal 'screentime' (for lack of a better term) than in the previous book. They were definitely given more room to grow, in my opinion, and the character development for some (Amara in particular) is clear as the story goes on. After reading 'Palom', I am even more endeared to Kohl and Palom after witnessing their struggles (and their strengths). By contrast, Sapora has gone down in my esteem but I still find myself intrigued by his plans and schemes (and he'll likely rise again in future books. I do like myself a good shady character, after all).
In a world where lore and history grows in abundance, it can be difficult to pack the information you need into one book. It's easy to throw in every little detail and end up sounding more like a history textbook than a novel. L.L. McNeil has managed, in my opinion, to feed in what's relevant, when it's relevant. I'm not sure what I'm more interested in at this point - the plot, or the world it's set in!
It's not a flawless book, but then what book doesn't have flaws in some way? Would I still recommend it to others? Absolutely I would (and have).
August 31, 2019
Another excellent foray to Linaria! This picks up straight after Moroda, and deals a lot with the fall out of that.
I do have a niggle that actually there is not a lot of drive forward but a lot of reacting, but it felt honest to the plot. And I think it means book 3 will explode forward, lol!
Palom was more nuanced in this, and we begin to see some of what drives him. I wanted a little more around the struggles he’s had with his family, but it was good to get to see that and provide context to him. And I really enjoyed his relationships throughout - the sadness of his contact with people was nicely contrasted by the dragon! Leillu is so adorable. And I’m also keen to see how the situation with the sword plays out given various different reactions to it - I’m hoping Palom is correct and there is more to it.
Amarah continues to be epic, and I found her amazing throughout. I am definitely looking forward to seeing what she does next, especially given she suffers quite a bit in this book. Her ongoing talks with Kohl were also great, and I really liked how he struggled with them. His relationship with his people and his daughter both changed in different ways, and I wanted to see the former make him feel a bit better.
I really enjoyed Sapora in book one, but here I found him a little two dimensional, he was so focussed on suddenly defending what he had, and concentrating less on what that meant for those around him. Isa however was awesome, and her journey was just amazing. I loved everything about her.
Bring on book 3!
I do have a niggle that actually there is not a lot of drive forward but a lot of reacting, but it felt honest to the plot. And I think it means book 3 will explode forward, lol!
Palom was more nuanced in this, and we begin to see some of what drives him. I wanted a little more around the struggles he’s had with his family, but it was good to get to see that and provide context to him. And I really enjoyed his relationships throughout - the sadness of his contact with people was nicely contrasted by the dragon! Leillu is so adorable. And I’m also keen to see how the situation with the sword plays out given various different reactions to it - I’m hoping Palom is correct and there is more to it.
Amarah continues to be epic, and I found her amazing throughout. I am definitely looking forward to seeing what she does next, especially given she suffers quite a bit in this book. Her ongoing talks with Kohl were also great, and I really liked how he struggled with them. His relationship with his people and his daughter both changed in different ways, and I wanted to see the former make him feel a bit better.
I really enjoyed Sapora in book one, but here I found him a little two dimensional, he was so focussed on suddenly defending what he had, and concentrating less on what that meant for those around him. Isa however was awesome, and her journey was just amazing. I loved everything about her.
Bring on book 3!
August 27, 2020
A sequel is usually difficult to write, especially given the success of Moroda. I was sceptical of all the new characters when I read the synopsis - having read other stories where new characters lose the plot.
Palom is nothing like that. This novel used these new characters effectively to extend the plot of the main characters from Moroda. Full of plot twists and betrayal, I really enjoyed this and it has an essence of Harry Potter meets Game of Thrones.
I am really looking forward to, but also sad thinking about, completing the trilogy with Amarah.
Palom is nothing like that. This novel used these new characters effectively to extend the plot of the main characters from Moroda. Full of plot twists and betrayal, I really enjoyed this and it has an essence of Harry Potter meets Game of Thrones.
I am really looking forward to, but also sad thinking about, completing the trilogy with Amarah.
December 13, 2020
A fantastic follow up to Moroda in which we see the aftermath of what happened in the first book. Exploring the consequences for those who fought and for those who were left behind.
I really enjoyed spending more time with these characters and getting to know more about their back stories. I also enjoyed gaining more insight into the world of Linaria itself.
Overall, an engaging and entertaining story. Can't wait to read the next one.
I really enjoyed spending more time with these characters and getting to know more about their back stories. I also enjoyed gaining more insight into the world of Linaria itself.
Overall, an engaging and entertaining story. Can't wait to read the next one.
December 26, 2018
Was an enjoyable continuation of the series!
It had quite a bit of plot development but I felt focussed more on character development which I liked - I’m interested to see what will happen in the next book following the events of this one - else in relation to Sapora & also Amarah seeing as the last we heard from her sounded very interesting!
Could of easily kept on reading more in this world!
It had quite a bit of plot development but I felt focussed more on character development which I liked - I’m interested to see what will happen in the next book following the events of this one - else in relation to Sapora & also Amarah seeing as the last we heard from her sounded very interesting!
Could of easily kept on reading more in this world!
March 26, 2023
Palom continues on from where Moroda, the first book in the World of Linaria series left off.
The title character, Palom, a tiger shape-shifter, is now a reluctant war hero - recognized wherever he goes and struggling with PTSD from the aftermath of the battle and loss of his friends. I really enjoy the shape-shifting aspect of the characters in this series - the Ittallan and Varkain have the ability to change into an animal form (snakes for the Varkain). This leads to some interesting fight scenarios such as who would win in a fight between a crocodile and a tiger?
Sapora the Varkain is now King, having slaughtered the old royalty in a ‘Red Wedding’ style event at a ball. He has moved into the palace with his half sister, Isa, and half brother Tacio. Isa is coming to see and despise his true nature in this book, but Tacio still supports him. Sapora has evil plans for the realm and now with more power at his fingertips is becoming a formidable villain.
Palom is beset by dark power which according to his beloved Lathri emanates from the sword he forged. She urges him to rid himself of the sword and refuses to marry him - leaving him broken-hearted while she busies herself organising a rebellion against Sapora. His humour improves with the addition of a baby dragon which he hatches in his fireplace! This was a cute addition to his storyline, which was otherwise fairly gloomy.
Amarah is travelling by airship with Kohl to his home realm of the Arillians, based in the clouds. I really enjoyed the world-building around the Arillian home world of Oren. Their ability to fly and wield storm magic is one of my favourite things in this series. The fact they have an army of ice golems standing guard at the entrance to their realm is also very cool.
Amarah wants help to set free Moroda from the fate she consigned herself to in the previous book, sealed inside a huge crystal by a dragon. She has been told the golems might have the answer. Amarah is my favourite character in this series so far. Unfortunately she suffers more tragedy in this book, but doesn’t let it defeat her purpose.
This book has a slower pace than Moroda as characters recover and move on with their lives. There is still action, but less than we saw in Moroda. We get to know the characters better in this book and there is a fair amount of scene setting for the next book, Amarah. This was a 3.5 star read for me - rounded up to 4.
The title character, Palom, a tiger shape-shifter, is now a reluctant war hero - recognized wherever he goes and struggling with PTSD from the aftermath of the battle and loss of his friends. I really enjoy the shape-shifting aspect of the characters in this series - the Ittallan and Varkain have the ability to change into an animal form (snakes for the Varkain). This leads to some interesting fight scenarios such as who would win in a fight between a crocodile and a tiger?
Sapora the Varkain is now King, having slaughtered the old royalty in a ‘Red Wedding’ style event at a ball. He has moved into the palace with his half sister, Isa, and half brother Tacio. Isa is coming to see and despise his true nature in this book, but Tacio still supports him. Sapora has evil plans for the realm and now with more power at his fingertips is becoming a formidable villain.
Palom is beset by dark power which according to his beloved Lathri emanates from the sword he forged. She urges him to rid himself of the sword and refuses to marry him - leaving him broken-hearted while she busies herself organising a rebellion against Sapora. His humour improves with the addition of a baby dragon which he hatches in his fireplace! This was a cute addition to his storyline, which was otherwise fairly gloomy.
Amarah is travelling by airship with Kohl to his home realm of the Arillians, based in the clouds. I really enjoyed the world-building around the Arillian home world of Oren. Their ability to fly and wield storm magic is one of my favourite things in this series. The fact they have an army of ice golems standing guard at the entrance to their realm is also very cool.
Amarah wants help to set free Moroda from the fate she consigned herself to in the previous book, sealed inside a huge crystal by a dragon. She has been told the golems might have the answer. Amarah is my favourite character in this series so far. Unfortunately she suffers more tragedy in this book, but doesn’t let it defeat her purpose.
This book has a slower pace than Moroda as characters recover and move on with their lives. There is still action, but less than we saw in Moroda. We get to know the characters better in this book and there is a fair amount of scene setting for the next book, Amarah. This was a 3.5 star read for me - rounded up to 4.
September 19, 2018
You know that amazing feeling when you become so utterly captivated by a character, a world or a story that you just can't put it down? That was Moroda for me, and after reading the two books back to back I can confidently say that this series, and Palom in particular, has everything I want.
I think it's really important you re-read Moroda first - the story follows on almost immediately afterwards and throws us back into the World of Linaria. Whilst McNeil does a good job of subtly reminding us of key events, or people, in Moroda's book (she's excellent at showing rather than telling which I really appreciate in fantasy) I think I would have really struggled to remember all of the lore and various characters.
My favourite thing about Moroda was even more prevalent in Palom - the complexity of the characters. I love that they each belong to a specific people, with their own lore, be that a thieving sky pirate, a sneaky Varkain or an Ittallan. Somehow it makes the world feel so much more fleshed out. The story is also told from alternating perspectives which kept the plot fresh and exciting - I admit I'm the first one to want to avoid characters I don't like (here's looking at you Bran!) but I really enjoyed each of the perspectives; it's nice to get a more personal insight into the characters.
I know this book is about Palom, and honestly I loved learning about his past and how he's dealing with the events of Book One, but I need to talk about Sapora. From the first moment we met Sapora in a cell in Moroda I adored him - I am literally living for his story. This book really looks at his new role, how he is adjusting to it and McNeil finally starts spilling secrets about what it means to be Varkain (more please ASAP). I'm completely fascinated by Sapora - I admit it! Each of the characters has really been developed in this book though, and anyone who has a favourite will feel like they've managed to find out more about any given character.
There's a really fine balance between developing plot and developing characters and I do think this second instalment falls more towards character development; this sometimes makes the pacing a little on the slower side. Had the book been another 100 pages longer (I know, I'm asking for longer books with a TBR this long, but seriously...) I think it would have perfectly struck that balance.
Nevertheless, this is a really fun book. I love the world, I adore some of the characters and I think this is shaping up to be an exciting, complex series. Roll on book three!
ARC provided from the author in exchange for an honest review.
I think it's really important you re-read Moroda first - the story follows on almost immediately afterwards and throws us back into the World of Linaria. Whilst McNeil does a good job of subtly reminding us of key events, or people, in Moroda's book (she's excellent at showing rather than telling which I really appreciate in fantasy) I think I would have really struggled to remember all of the lore and various characters.
My favourite thing about Moroda was even more prevalent in Palom - the complexity of the characters. I love that they each belong to a specific people, with their own lore, be that a thieving sky pirate, a sneaky Varkain or an Ittallan. Somehow it makes the world feel so much more fleshed out. The story is also told from alternating perspectives which kept the plot fresh and exciting - I admit I'm the first one to want to avoid characters I don't like (here's looking at you Bran!) but I really enjoyed each of the perspectives; it's nice to get a more personal insight into the characters.
I know this book is about Palom, and honestly I loved learning about his past and how he's dealing with the events of Book One, but I need to talk about Sapora. From the first moment we met Sapora in a cell in Moroda I adored him - I am literally living for his story. This book really looks at his new role, how he is adjusting to it and McNeil finally starts spilling secrets about what it means to be Varkain (more please ASAP). I'm completely fascinated by Sapora - I admit it! Each of the characters has really been developed in this book though, and anyone who has a favourite will feel like they've managed to find out more about any given character.
There's a really fine balance between developing plot and developing characters and I do think this second instalment falls more towards character development; this sometimes makes the pacing a little on the slower side. Had the book been another 100 pages longer (I know, I'm asking for longer books with a TBR this long, but seriously...) I think it would have perfectly struck that balance.
Nevertheless, this is a really fun book. I love the world, I adore some of the characters and I think this is shaping up to be an exciting, complex series. Roll on book three!
ARC provided from the author in exchange for an honest review.
August 6, 2018
After reading Moroda last year I was so excited when Lauren emailed me about reading Palom as well! Similar to book 1, I found Palom to have great world building scenes and I enjoyed the different scenery we had throughout. From the ice cold tundra to lush forests to floating rocks in the sky! In all these areas I was enjoying the little descriptions that made my imagination a bit more vivid.
One thing I love about Palom is that it has a summary of book 1 before we're thrown into the story! Recaps are one of those things that would be fantastic for all books series - especially when waiting for the successors.
As with Moroda, the book is split between POV's and I personally loved Amarahs. She's a sky pirate, and a pretty damn good one at that. We see as Amarah she ventures to Oren, a place only Arillians had ever been before. I loved the exploration of a different land, but also different people we hadn't seen much of in book 1 and their different ways of living. There's also a lot of lore and myth around them with the Ice Golems and their magic which was intriguing for me.
As a whole, Palom does suffer from the usual second book syndrome. It isn't quite as action packed as Moroda, and a lot of time is spent more on developing characters and building up this world even more. For me, I enjoyed this as I love world building and watching characters develop, although I know some people may struggle with less action.
Throughout, we get to see Palom, Isa and Amarah grow and develop into their new roles. Palom as as savoir and great war hero. Amarah as someone who's trying to help and to be a good friend to both Moroda and Kohl. And Isa as she navigates being the kings sister, with no real power of her own.
The only character I particularly disliked was Lathri. This is just because I found her to be (quite obviously) a manipulative person who 'preyed' on Palom and then Isa when they were weakened. Throughout the book, Lathri doesn't change much so I do hope she comes back to cause problems in the next instalment.
Palom made me extremely excited for the third book as I loved McNeil's writing. Amarah won't be out for a while but the ending of the book made me hope for the character to be reunited and to start off on a bigger adventure.
One thing I love about Palom is that it has a summary of book 1 before we're thrown into the story! Recaps are one of those things that would be fantastic for all books series - especially when waiting for the successors.
As with Moroda, the book is split between POV's and I personally loved Amarahs. She's a sky pirate, and a pretty damn good one at that. We see as Amarah she ventures to Oren, a place only Arillians had ever been before. I loved the exploration of a different land, but also different people we hadn't seen much of in book 1 and their different ways of living. There's also a lot of lore and myth around them with the Ice Golems and their magic which was intriguing for me.
As a whole, Palom does suffer from the usual second book syndrome. It isn't quite as action packed as Moroda, and a lot of time is spent more on developing characters and building up this world even more. For me, I enjoyed this as I love world building and watching characters develop, although I know some people may struggle with less action.
Throughout, we get to see Palom, Isa and Amarah grow and develop into their new roles. Palom as as savoir and great war hero. Amarah as someone who's trying to help and to be a good friend to both Moroda and Kohl. And Isa as she navigates being the kings sister, with no real power of her own.
The only character I particularly disliked was Lathri. This is just because I found her to be (quite obviously) a manipulative person who 'preyed' on Palom and then Isa when they were weakened. Throughout the book, Lathri doesn't change much so I do hope she comes back to cause problems in the next instalment.
Palom made me extremely excited for the third book as I loved McNeil's writing. Amarah won't be out for a while but the ending of the book made me hope for the character to be reunited and to start off on a bigger adventure.
July 16, 2019
Stopped at l.l mcneil's stall at Birmingham comic con and was so lucky to meet her and her team! Thought I'd give the books a go as I love to support indie writers and I am so glad I did! The books and the world of linaria have a complexity and depth to rival Tolkien. Adore these books, the characters, thier world and thier stories. can't wait for the 3rd instalment. Would definitely recommend to any fantasy reader.
August 17, 2019
After having struggled to put down the first book I decided I would do my best to dedicate half a day to reading this book. I am so glad I did, I only put it down to cook, continued to read while eating, Read it in about 6 hours (I read fast when I get absorbed into a book as good as these) Such a good book to follow Moroda and I cant wait to read Amarah to follow the travels of the characters. Will definitely have to make a dedicated time to read the next one as well.
February 1, 2022
The best part of Palom for me was the character development and the interactions they had with each other. It felt like a book that let the cast breathe and for you to get to know whilst epic and profound shake ups are rippling through the world.
The confrontations and build ups were gripping, the discoveries were awe inspiring and the characters are flawed but loveable.
Excuse me whilst I dive into book 3.
The confrontations and build ups were gripping, the discoveries were awe inspiring and the characters are flawed but loveable.
Excuse me whilst I dive into book 3.
May 15, 2022
A fantastic follow up to Moroda.
The story moved slower this time, but the characters were better developed and the plot felt more intricate and complicated.
Before I knew it I was at the final explosive chapter and itching to continue the tale with Amarah!
The story moved slower this time, but the characters were better developed and the plot felt more intricate and complicated.
Before I knew it I was at the final explosive chapter and itching to continue the tale with Amarah!
May 29, 2019
Utterly loved this book, could hardly put it down in between reading and sleeping. Would recommend to anyone and everyone!
I will have to read it again soon, its so gripping.
I will have to read it again soon, its so gripping.
April 15, 2020
Awesome second book of this series, Lauren continues to keep readers spellbound as the adventures just keep coming... Read this in a day as I couldnt put it down.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 7, 2022
Anyone keeping up on my reads would realize I just finished book one of the World of Linaria last month. I wasn't sure I'd be able to get to the second book in November due to so much going on but it ended up fitting perfect into one of my readathon prompts so I quickly slid it into the TBR.
Even though book two was quite a bit different, it still kept to the overall feel from book one. It just seemed a bit darker and slowly building to what felt like inevitable tragedy. I dropped the author a note about midway through just to share my observation of this and how I felt so strongly for our characters in this book. There was so much struggle and burden being felt by so many of them. I still felt the first book had a lot more edge of your seat waiting for the next thing to happen where this was more of a steady burn as we really began to learn so much more about the characters. .
As I just mentioned the character building in book two was just great in my opinion. Sure we already met many of these characters but we deep dive into what makes them who they are in this installment. We see light shined on internal struggles as well as how strained so many of the relationships are for several of our characters.
The pacing was smooth. This was the second book in this series that I knocked out in just a couple of days. They aren't long by any means but they aren't super short either. They just flow from page to page so well for me.
The world build expanded not just in scope but like our characters in depth. We learn much more about several regions only really mentioned previously. And the region that Amarah and Kohl end up in is described so well. This was definitely one of the edge of your seat moments for me!
To sum this up, this series is quickly becoming one of my favorites and I hope to continue reading and enjoying it.
I'd recommend this book and this series so far to just about anyone looking for an easy read epic fantasy. We have dragons, races that shapeshift into animals (which is comical at times but ultimately so cool!), action/fighting and a good sprinkle of political intrigue along with different types of magic!
Even though book two was quite a bit different, it still kept to the overall feel from book one. It just seemed a bit darker and slowly building to what felt like inevitable tragedy. I dropped the author a note about midway through just to share my observation of this and how I felt so strongly for our characters in this book. There was so much struggle and burden being felt by so many of them. I still felt the first book had a lot more edge of your seat waiting for the next thing to happen where this was more of a steady burn as we really began to learn so much more about the characters. .
As I just mentioned the character building in book two was just great in my opinion. Sure we already met many of these characters but we deep dive into what makes them who they are in this installment. We see light shined on internal struggles as well as how strained so many of the relationships are for several of our characters.
The pacing was smooth. This was the second book in this series that I knocked out in just a couple of days. They aren't long by any means but they aren't super short either. They just flow from page to page so well for me.
The world build expanded not just in scope but like our characters in depth. We learn much more about several regions only really mentioned previously. And the region that Amarah and Kohl end up in is described so well. This was definitely one of the edge of your seat moments for me!
To sum this up, this series is quickly becoming one of my favorites and I hope to continue reading and enjoying it.
I'd recommend this book and this series so far to just about anyone looking for an easy read epic fantasy. We have dragons, races that shapeshift into animals (which is comical at times but ultimately so cool!), action/fighting and a good sprinkle of political intrigue along with different types of magic!
February 22, 2024
Bit slower start than the last book, Moroda, but stuck with it and it picked up. Now to buy the next one. 😀
January 25, 2023
Another interesting read. Palom builds on the foundations established in Moroda. The new locations introduced in this volume helped with immersion into the World of Linaria especially the Arillian’s home and Palom’s home. The book introduces new characters and also focuses more on Isa and she has become one of my favourite characters in the series.
July 5, 2021
*I received a free copy of this book, with thanks to the author. The decision to review and my opinions are my own.*
Palom is the second book in the World of Linaria series, and if you haven’t already read Moroda I really recommend doing that first, as it not only sets up the world and characters, but begins a main storyline that is continued here.
We already met Palom in Moroda – the strong, quiet blacksmith Ittallan who, with his friend and companion Anahrik, joined Moroda’s crew of misfit adventurers to defeat Aciel’s rampaging Arillian army. We join him immediately after the events of that book concluded and find him drowning in grief, guilt and self-pity, and highly resistant to taking any further action for fear of the resultant consequences.
Meanwhile, Amarah and Kohl have formed an unlikely pairing as they head to his mysterious homeland to search for a way to help Moroda; Morgen has returned to Niversai and the Imperial Guard, but with his eyes opened as to a bigger picture; and Sapora and Princess Isa have taken on responsibilities in the capital, but with very different goals and motivations. Rather than all working towards a common aim or against a common foe, everyone is now focused more on their own concerns, which do intersect at points but mostly keep them separately engages.
Most of the character arcs in this instalment involve searching for something or someone – redemption, revenge, power, familial love – with the notable exception of Palom, who spends most of the story running from himself and his past.
Similarly to the last book, this story is very much character driven, and without a unified goal for the group this time, it did feel a little slow and scattered in places, and Palom’s internal flagellation got a little tiresome. It was fascinating to see events from his very different perspective, but his inner struggles prevented him from being a very active main character in his own story. Still, Sapora, Amorah and Kohl kept pushing forward (if in different directions!) and it was really good to see Isa come into her own a little more as she tries to find a balance between loyalty to her brother, her people, and her own convictions.
The book ends on a cliffhanger, again, with all of the characters on their way towards their individual goals, having learnt and developed on their journeys so far. The next book features Amarah as the main character, and I look forward to the stubborn determination and world-weary humour she brings to proceedings!
'He had killed people before, but only in self-defence. Last night seemed different. Had he really enjoyed watching the Varkain suffer?
Had the war changed him so much?
Lathri’s voice rang in his mind. ‘Emonos.’
He ignored it.
The sword had saved their lives. How could such a weapon be evil? It was just a sword—a piece of metal. It couldn’t be good or evil. It just was.
Palom rubbed his nose. Emotions coursed through him: sadness, guilt, loss, rage, even hatred. He told himself he felt these things towards Aciel and his war, losing his companions, losing Lathri, and to the Varkain who dared attack him… but deep down, they were emotions he felt towards himself.'
– L.L. McNeil, Palom
Review by Steph Warren of Bookshine and Readbows blog
https://bookshineandreadbows.wordpres...
Palom is the second book in the World of Linaria series, and if you haven’t already read Moroda I really recommend doing that first, as it not only sets up the world and characters, but begins a main storyline that is continued here.
We already met Palom in Moroda – the strong, quiet blacksmith Ittallan who, with his friend and companion Anahrik, joined Moroda’s crew of misfit adventurers to defeat Aciel’s rampaging Arillian army. We join him immediately after the events of that book concluded and find him drowning in grief, guilt and self-pity, and highly resistant to taking any further action for fear of the resultant consequences.
Meanwhile, Amarah and Kohl have formed an unlikely pairing as they head to his mysterious homeland to search for a way to help Moroda; Morgen has returned to Niversai and the Imperial Guard, but with his eyes opened as to a bigger picture; and Sapora and Princess Isa have taken on responsibilities in the capital, but with very different goals and motivations. Rather than all working towards a common aim or against a common foe, everyone is now focused more on their own concerns, which do intersect at points but mostly keep them separately engages.
Most of the character arcs in this instalment involve searching for something or someone – redemption, revenge, power, familial love – with the notable exception of Palom, who spends most of the story running from himself and his past.
Similarly to the last book, this story is very much character driven, and without a unified goal for the group this time, it did feel a little slow and scattered in places, and Palom’s internal flagellation got a little tiresome. It was fascinating to see events from his very different perspective, but his inner struggles prevented him from being a very active main character in his own story. Still, Sapora, Amorah and Kohl kept pushing forward (if in different directions!) and it was really good to see Isa come into her own a little more as she tries to find a balance between loyalty to her brother, her people, and her own convictions.
The book ends on a cliffhanger, again, with all of the characters on their way towards their individual goals, having learnt and developed on their journeys so far. The next book features Amarah as the main character, and I look forward to the stubborn determination and world-weary humour she brings to proceedings!
'He had killed people before, but only in self-defence. Last night seemed different. Had he really enjoyed watching the Varkain suffer?
Had the war changed him so much?
Lathri’s voice rang in his mind. ‘Emonos.’
He ignored it.
The sword had saved their lives. How could such a weapon be evil? It was just a sword—a piece of metal. It couldn’t be good or evil. It just was.
Palom rubbed his nose. Emotions coursed through him: sadness, guilt, loss, rage, even hatred. He told himself he felt these things towards Aciel and his war, losing his companions, losing Lathri, and to the Varkain who dared attack him… but deep down, they were emotions he felt towards himself.'
– L.L. McNeil, Palom
Review by Steph Warren of Bookshine and Readbows blog
https://bookshineandreadbows.wordpres...
June 3, 2021
Palom is the second book in the world of Linaria, taking us back to a country that has, in appearance, just defeated their worst enemy through the desperate sacrifice of Moroda, in book 1.
The world that is being rebuilt is now being threatened from the inside, with a king hungry for power and fame that will stop at nothing to bring respect to the Varkrain, the race of which he is part only in half, and that doesn't fully trusts him due to his mixed blood. Threatened by Arillians, Varkrain and Ittallans alike, king Sapora has a lot to prove, a lot to gain, and even more to lose.
Palom, the namesake for book two, is the beloved blacksmith who, at the end of book one, forged the Valta Forinja, a deadly weapon created by harnessing the power contained in a dragon's crystal. Fearsome and deadly, the weapons gave Palom, Amarah and Morgen the edge needed to stave off the Arillians until Moroda managed to lock herself away with Aciel.
Palom is now left alone, his companion Anahrik now dead, and the friends he made along the way either dead or off on their own quests.
With nothing left, and refused from the woman he loves, he moves on, walking a seemingly erratic path in order to find himself once more. With the Valta Forinja weighing on his shoulder and on his soul, his feelings appear to be taking a dangerous turn, fuelling his own anger and despair and multiplying them tenfold.
Throughout the entire book, I could feel Palom's despair as my own, his feelings weighing on my own heart like a stone. The author has managed to convey feelings stunningly, and the pages of the book flew under my fingers, the words running past, too intrigued into knowing what would happen.
After the ending of Moroda, and the resolution of the war, I found myself very intrigued by what story the author wanted to tell in the books that followed.
Palom is a book full of feelings, which makes for a very emotional read, while still thickening the plot and taking the reader for a wild ride across Linaria.
This second book is, if possible, even better than the first book in the series, and now I have finished it I am ready to delve into it again with Amarah.
If you are looking for a good fantasy world to get lost into, with fantastic worldbuilding and amazingly portrayed character then, by all means, buy this books. Lauren McNeil did not disappoint.
The world that is being rebuilt is now being threatened from the inside, with a king hungry for power and fame that will stop at nothing to bring respect to the Varkrain, the race of which he is part only in half, and that doesn't fully trusts him due to his mixed blood. Threatened by Arillians, Varkrain and Ittallans alike, king Sapora has a lot to prove, a lot to gain, and even more to lose.
Palom, the namesake for book two, is the beloved blacksmith who, at the end of book one, forged the Valta Forinja, a deadly weapon created by harnessing the power contained in a dragon's crystal. Fearsome and deadly, the weapons gave Palom, Amarah and Morgen the edge needed to stave off the Arillians until Moroda managed to lock herself away with Aciel.
Palom is now left alone, his companion Anahrik now dead, and the friends he made along the way either dead or off on their own quests.
With nothing left, and refused from the woman he loves, he moves on, walking a seemingly erratic path in order to find himself once more. With the Valta Forinja weighing on his shoulder and on his soul, his feelings appear to be taking a dangerous turn, fuelling his own anger and despair and multiplying them tenfold.
Throughout the entire book, I could feel Palom's despair as my own, his feelings weighing on my own heart like a stone. The author has managed to convey feelings stunningly, and the pages of the book flew under my fingers, the words running past, too intrigued into knowing what would happen.
After the ending of Moroda, and the resolution of the war, I found myself very intrigued by what story the author wanted to tell in the books that followed.
Palom is a book full of feelings, which makes for a very emotional read, while still thickening the plot and taking the reader for a wild ride across Linaria.
This second book is, if possible, even better than the first book in the series, and now I have finished it I am ready to delve into it again with Amarah.
If you are looking for a good fantasy world to get lost into, with fantastic worldbuilding and amazingly portrayed character then, by all means, buy this books. Lauren McNeil did not disappoint.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 8, 2022
A haunted hero struggles with the past and present. Fortunately with an adorable companion! While a sky pirate explores more new incredible magical lands! Fantastic sequel! Linaria is such a fascinating world! Looking forward to book 3!
February 12, 2019
Palom is an excellent sequel to Moroda.
It follows the journey of a troubled Itallan, Palom, who struggles to come to terms with his past and himself, especially since Aciel's war. We get to see more of Linaria in this wonderful book including the Arillian home city of Oren, an impressive sky city guarded by mythical ice golems.
The story is well-paced and captivating. The characters are extremely well-built to the extent that I actually care for them. McNeil has written the villains in such a way that I find myself rooting for the snake king, Sapora despite his ill intentions. the world of Linaria is, itself, finely crafted and totally accurate to itself. I could find no inconsistencies with the land or the rules of the world which kept me immersed.
My only criticism is the use of passive voice. I did find myself pulled away from the action a little with a chunk of the narrative written with a passive voice, however, it's written in such a way that it serves as more of an internal monologue of certain characters.
Overall, I'd recommend the first two books of the Linaria series to any fantasy enthusiast looking for a dragon-filled adventure with tangible characters.
It follows the journey of a troubled Itallan, Palom, who struggles to come to terms with his past and himself, especially since Aciel's war. We get to see more of Linaria in this wonderful book including the Arillian home city of Oren, an impressive sky city guarded by mythical ice golems.
The story is well-paced and captivating. The characters are extremely well-built to the extent that I actually care for them. McNeil has written the villains in such a way that I find myself rooting for the snake king, Sapora despite his ill intentions. the world of Linaria is, itself, finely crafted and totally accurate to itself. I could find no inconsistencies with the land or the rules of the world which kept me immersed.
My only criticism is the use of passive voice. I did find myself pulled away from the action a little with a chunk of the narrative written with a passive voice, however, it's written in such a way that it serves as more of an internal monologue of certain characters.
Overall, I'd recommend the first two books of the Linaria series to any fantasy enthusiast looking for a dragon-filled adventure with tangible characters.
August 17, 2018
A great follow up to L.L McNeil's debut novel Moroda, the story picks up right where the first one finished. Whilst Moroda was all about grand conflict, battles and action scenes, Palom is a much more measured affair. Palom is a brilliant exploration of the immediate aftermath of the conflict and the damage it inflicts not just physically but also mentally on our heroes. This is a much neglected area in the fantasy genre where it can sometimes feel like characters can die at the authors whim, and are not given any further consideration, or any reaction from the other characters. In Palom there is a real sense of survivors guilt and a feeling of PTSD which is very delicately explored. As such the characters motivations throughout the second book feel realistic.
Although Palom is slower, it doesn't drag. The action scenes scattered throughout are engaging, and after the ending of Moroda, the stakes feel high. I was pleasantly surprised, as Palom was not one of the characters I particularly connected with in the first novel. I was glad to find out more of his backstory, and in doing so I now look forward to seeing where the next book will take him. Palom lays the groundwork well for the third novel, establishing an intriguing mythology and new antagonist. I can't wait for the next novel!
Although Palom is slower, it doesn't drag. The action scenes scattered throughout are engaging, and after the ending of Moroda, the stakes feel high. I was pleasantly surprised, as Palom was not one of the characters I particularly connected with in the first novel. I was glad to find out more of his backstory, and in doing so I now look forward to seeing where the next book will take him. Palom lays the groundwork well for the third novel, establishing an intriguing mythology and new antagonist. I can't wait for the next novel!
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