I would like to say, that it's a great start wih the original slokas and the interbetween intervention of the author. As evident, the slow pace of telling the tales, interwoven with other, much like inception movie, is a revelation itself in the great epic, but its great to see the author excel at walking that line, with poise and proper depth, instead of a hurried pace.
The stories in this first volume could be finished in a sitting itself. Its esay, memorable and fun. But thanks for the interactive discussion of the in-depth matters. Its much like amalgamation of Ashok Banker's and Devdutt Pattanaik's turn at the epic. You go slow and easy, with each different context at each chapter.
Kudos to the author to attempt a project of this much magnitude.
Eager for the next chapters! Carry on!