An interesting look at a possible future with biohazardous, sentient vegetation and dragon shifters.
Well, technically, the title should be Incendiary Magick because there is a difference between the art of illusion and the art/science of nature-based energies and alchemy (the science of everything in the infinite universes). This is a novella and Book 1 of the Dragon Mage Chronicles. I’ve been told that this is a young adult preternatural series, but after reading it, I guess it’s given that label because of its [movie] rating more than anything. However, I’ve learned a LONG time ago not to discount these books because many times, they are ten times better than a lot of the more adult tales available on the market.
Length: Barely a novella. I would have called this a prequel rather than a “Book 1”.
Character development: The tough part in writing a novella is that you have much less time to do a decent character development, showing the progression of a person at Point A and how that person becomes by the time s/he reaches Point B. (In my writings, it’s usually Point D. I like to be complicated.) The character of Fee is very interesting as you actually see her personality be revealed by how her name starts, changes, and eventually ends up. As for Mason, his character development centers around his accelerating slippage towards death (“fading”) and how he is rescued (and rescues himself) from this odd fate of dragon shifters. Of course, there is never a good story without an antagonist, and Malachi (don’t let his Biblical name fool you) is a true sociopath with a scheming mind though I wish we could see a little more of him.
Emotional factor: Oh, I definitely got into these characters as Ms. Easterling didn’t pull any punches here. I really saw Mason as a very sympathetic soul and Fee a misguided young fire mage but with a heart trying to be more gold-like. Working with an evil character is difficult, especially when we’re talking about him being Fee’s father. Ms. Easterling recognizes the conflict in the following statement: “I may like my father, but I really hate him.” (An actual quote by a cousin of mine.) How do you justify hatred and your emotionally familial obligations? Fee might have discovered a compromise she can live with.
Speed of action: I am amazed on how much was done in a limited number of pages without feeling rushed. Kudos to you, Ms. Easterling!
Predictability: Definitely not as predictable as I had originally assumed. This was a breath of fresh air to my brain.
Credibility issues: I wished we could have had a better explanation regarding the Green. (Well, I do have a very scientifically curious mind which needed more details.) I rather liked her thoughts about fading and dragon physiology. The writer also paid attention to her environment which says she spent time developing this interesting, twisted biosphere.
Grammar and technical errors: Still needed a few read-overs because there were misspellings and wrong words that would pass with flying colors with a spellchecker. I also wished we had a better picture of what our characters looked like as there really was a lack of sufficient exposition. (All I remember is that Fee had red hair.) My other gripe is that, as mentioned before, this is a novella, not a book. I do not believe that if we’re dealing with “youthful readers” that we need to dumb them down via page count. (Remember The Lord of the Rings and the Chronicles of Narnia??) That’s why this review is only getting four stars rather than five. When talking about a series, you need some girth to the books! If they are going to be novella-sized, then put them together in one volume and call it a collection.
I really liked this story enough to read the other two I see on Amazon. My only issue is that she’s developed such a cool universe, these stories need to be LONGER!! I WANT MORE! My head is already full of some great ways to have fleshed this story out for a more decent-sized novella (at least), let alone novel.
Addendum: Okay, I'm confused. Amazon has this novella listed as Book #1. Since when did this become Book 2.5??