This one hurts. Mostly cause I was really looking forward to it and well it disappointed me greatly. You all know how much I love my second chance stories but this one was not for me. Again, it could be a case of it’s me and not the book.
First off, this one is extra OTT dramatic. So much drama, so many “secrets”, big misunderstandings that could’ve been resolved earlier are just dragged and dragged. The entire secret was so silly, and this super smart heroine, is the silliest of them all. She listens to no one and no explanations, and she sounds like a teenager most of the book, which is a contradiction to her supposedly strong, lawyer, prosecutor persona. Also the plots are mega convenient, everything conveniently clicks, especially the whole side story with the fiancé, total cop out. Another thing that bothered me to no end is the faulty timeline and the fact that when they broke up, she was only 19 and a freshman at college, so still had 5 more years of schooling to go (unless it took her less, but wasn’t explained) yet 10 years later she’s some mega accomplished lawyer with years and years of experience, in both a private firm and public sector. Anyway, I just wish authors would tighten their timelines better, I know the typical reader doesn’t give a damn, but when your reader has a legal background it’s a complete turn off. Anyway, this was a rollercoaster of drama and more drama that reached its peak with the biggest twist of all at 83%. The heroine has been whining and hurt the entire book only to find out that her secret was way worse than his stupid secret. What she did to him is unforgivable, if I was him, I would get myself a really good lawyer and I would dump her for good. After that, I just couldn’t enjoy anything else in the book. I actually wished they wouldn’t have ended up together.
This is a new to me author I’ve been meaning to read for a while but I think I might have picked the wrong book to start. Again, it could be me and not the book, but it just didn’t work for me.