When the plot was just so promising, but didn’t deliver😭
I was hyped when I read the blurb. Seriously, WHO would not dig a bloody paranormal MC! Like come ON it’s two of my favourite genres ever!
OF COURSE I NEEDED THIS BOOK ASAP!
However, I was slightly disappointed.
Everything in this book was rushed. I do enjoy a good fast paced book, but this was nothing like that. While reading this book I just thought “ How sad, it seems like the author just wants this book to be finished”.
It honestly had all the right elements to be good. The idea IS brilliant- I honestly think the whole “universe” is so unique and it was the only part of this book I liked. The creatures were so well thought of, I enjoyed it so much. The idea of the different MC’s. Their “jobs” and their obligations. I found it really fascinating.
Another “slight” issue of mine was the characters. I will never like a character who says “Yo”. I am sorry, but the whole masculine, badass alpha, just rubs completely off me when they talk like that.
I also found the characters so unbelievable. No chemistry, super “flat”, really not interesting to follow, and simply no personal development. I feel like we just got the top of the iceberg, and if we had gotten a little more depth I am sure I could have enjoyed them. Sadly I didn’t.
In the blurb we are introduced to 2 main characters - Alistair and Elianna. But “surprise” lets just add two other people to the mix. Yes, you read that right. Not only do we follow Alistair and Elianna, but also his VP and Elianna’s sister. We might not have had their direct POV’s, but we followed them the entire book, like they were glued to the “real” main characters hips. Unfortunately that did nothing good to this story. It simply didn’t work.
The book is already on the shorter side, and with the “added characters” it was simply not enough pages to make the book awesome.
It had no flow because of how rushed it was, the inner dialogues were vague, and really similar to each other so it was very hard to get a feel of the characters personalities.
I was just not impressed. And I really really wanted to be, because seriously a PARANORMAL MC, how COOL is that!
Read: 01/11/2018
Genre: Paranormal/ MC/Romance
1st rating: 2 stars
Cover: 2 stars
Will I recommend: No
Bonus info: I still haven’t decided if I want to try book no. 2. It was the book I was drawn to in the first place, so I feel like I should? 🤔We will see.