COMPLETELY EDITED AND REVISED!!!! I am going to break you. You are mine. But I can't keep you. They won't let me.
Bane
She destroyed me. She loved me, then she broke me. Now I will break her. After three years in prison Bane Stratus wants nothing more than to take down the woman who put him there. She is the devil. She is death. She is mine. She fooled me once. But not a second time. This time she is on my playground. She is in my house. One of us is going to make it out of here. It isn't going to be her.
Jesse
Years ago I made a decision between life and death. I had to choose to kill the man I love or set him free. He can never know the sacrifices I made for his life. But now he is out, and he hates me. What will happen when the truth comes out? What will happen to me when he catches me?
WARNING: MATURE CONTENT. THIS IS A DARK ROMANCE. SOME MATERIAL MAY BE TRIGGERS OR TABOO. 18+
DNF at 12%. There "might" have been a decent story here, but with the writing, grammar, wrong word usage, and horrific efiting, I will sadle mever know.
The thing I like about 'dark' theme was that the writer can go all out with it. Throw in the romance, erotica, bondage, slavery, spanking, blood, gore, death, anything you can think of. Blend it all and make it's so gruesome that no one can stand a chance of downing it down. This book however, did not reach that level yet. This wasn't the book that will make me check my door and windows multiple times to make sure it was secure. This was more of a romance that didn't know where to go and decided to just throw it all in but play safe. It wasn't helping either that the MCs were unlikable. They made stupid decisions even though given a way out. The only one I like was Danny, hoping he would jumped from a closet and shouted, "SURPRISE."
Too many grammatical errors for a comfortable read. Also please note that this book "is to be continued". This is my major gripe with authors who don't say anything at the beginning about the book being part 1, book 1 etc. I never start to read a series unless I know that the whole series has been published. No idea when next book is published.
A short dark... ish read. I liked the characters and the story line. The plot was addictive. It had me turning the pages in one sitting, enticing me through with what I believed would be the end of Bane & Jesse's story, only to discover 'To Be Continued' splashed across the final page. I'm pleased there is more to come, but I just hope we don't have too long to wait for the conclusion to this enjoyable read.