Ye writers can't speaketh the lingo
'Twas meant to be a prequel, the story of what happened to Breath Coven so long ago. Methought perhaps to peruse the story and enjoy it. Alas, I came upon the dialogue, and never was language so mangled in meaning! Forsooth, my ladies/authors, 'tis the spoken word ye write! 'Tis language, and hath rules and meaning. Dost thou purport to write as the merry folk of the 16th century spake to one another? Then get thee to a library; go, and study those works of the time! Learn, for example, that 'cometh' means 'comes.' Thus, 'she cometh' and 'he cometh' but 'they' only 'come.' Learn that 'thee' is the archaic form of 'you' (object) but that 'Thou' is for 'you' (subject), 'thy' means 'your' but 'thine' means 'of yours' Thus it is: Thou mayest tell thy tale in period dialect, but attend thee well to thy grammar lest thou shalt confuse all.