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Queendom of the Seven Lakes
“Your Majesty, I take life. I am not certain that my skills actually extend to preserving it.”
There are always those who are willing to pay for someone else’s death. Having grown up amongst the Family of Assassins, ELEN-AI knows well the prices people are willing to pay to see their enemies fall quickly, quietly, and discreetly. When she is asked to preserve life rather than take it, she is surprised. Upon hearing that her charge is the Queen’s only child GIDYON, who is secretly being groomed to succeed his mother, she is horrified. To ensure political stability, no man has ever sat on the throne of the Queendom of the Seven Lakes. Yet one does not easily refuse a Queen, and so reluctantly, Elen-ai accepts the contract.
Her fears only deepen upon meeting the sixteen-year-old Prince Gidyon, who treats her as no better than a petty murderer. However, following an attack on his life, Elen-ai is forced to admit that the danger of leaving this boy-prince alone may be even worse than leaving him to his own devices. Elen-ai reluctantly accompanies Gidyon across the country to identify those within the seven most powerful families who are responsible for the attempt on the Prince’s life.
Somewhere in their travels from the calm waters of Lake Tak to the looming cliffs above Lake Bertak, the two form an unlikely yet profound friendship, and Elen-ai begins to see that Gidyon has the makings of a great ruler within him. As they meet with the families of power, it becomes increasingly clear that secrets and power games run far deeper throughout the Queendom of the Seven Lakes than either of them ever suspected.
There are always those who are willing to pay for someone else’s death. Having grown up amongst the Family of Assassins, ELEN-AI knows well the prices people are willing to pay to see their enemies fall quickly, quietly, and discreetly. When she is asked to preserve life rather than take it, she is surprised. Upon hearing that her charge is the Queen’s only child GIDYON, who is secretly being groomed to succeed his mother, she is horrified. To ensure political stability, no man has ever sat on the throne of the Queendom of the Seven Lakes. Yet one does not easily refuse a Queen, and so reluctantly, Elen-ai accepts the contract.
Her fears only deepen upon meeting the sixteen-year-old Prince Gidyon, who treats her as no better than a petty murderer. However, following an attack on his life, Elen-ai is forced to admit that the danger of leaving this boy-prince alone may be even worse than leaving him to his own devices. Elen-ai reluctantly accompanies Gidyon across the country to identify those within the seven most powerful families who are responsible for the attempt on the Prince’s life.
Somewhere in their travels from the calm waters of Lake Tak to the looming cliffs above Lake Bertak, the two form an unlikely yet profound friendship, and Elen-ai begins to see that Gidyon has the makings of a great ruler within him. As they meet with the families of power, it becomes increasingly clear that secrets and power games run far deeper throughout the Queendom of the Seven Lakes than either of them ever suspected.
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First published November 1, 2017
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About the author
A.B. Endacott
9 books43 followersAlice Jane Boer-Endacott was born and raised in Melbourne, Australia, amid a home filled with books and cats. From her earliest days as a bored young child she has always used her imagination to escape the drudgery of reality by creating works of fiction. Her first manuscript was a gripping saga involving a ghost horse creatively named Ghost, written at the tender age of nine.
After procrastinating assignments during her Masters degree in Executive Management and Corporate Anthropology, and discovering that she had accidentally written three novels, in a not-so-shocking-twist, she decided to become an author.
Her first book, QUEENDOM OF THE SEVEN LAKES, was written at a time when she was playing Dragon Age Inquisition (and is thus living proof that computer games are socially valuable activities). Alice’s hobbies include eating, reading, writing, woodworking, and having deeply analytical discourses about contemporary media with her three cats.
Queendom of the Seven Lakes can be found at: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B077GTFNG6
Its sequel, King of the Seven Lakes, is available at: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07BB35CD3/
And the standalone novel (set in the same world), The Ruthless Land, is available at: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07DK57KX2/
After procrastinating assignments during her Masters degree in Executive Management and Corporate Anthropology, and discovering that she had accidentally written three novels, in a not-so-shocking-twist, she decided to become an author.
Her first book, QUEENDOM OF THE SEVEN LAKES, was written at a time when she was playing Dragon Age Inquisition (and is thus living proof that computer games are socially valuable activities). Alice’s hobbies include eating, reading, writing, woodworking, and having deeply analytical discourses about contemporary media with her three cats.
Queendom of the Seven Lakes can be found at: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B077GTFNG6
Its sequel, King of the Seven Lakes, is available at: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07BB35CD3/
And the standalone novel (set in the same world), The Ruthless Land, is available at: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07DK57KX2/
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June 16, 2018
4.5/5
Full review to come but can I just say that Alice is an incredible human being/author? (Yeah, authors are a species by themselves 😂) I didn’t realise this was self published until I got to the acknowledgments AND she’s a fellow Melbournian and I don’t know about you but I am inspired!
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The description for Queendom of the Seven Lakes piqued my interest because it was both intriguing and informative at the same time. It gave me little about what I really expect from what I was about to read and I was so pleasantly surprised when I started and everything was above and beyond what I could have ever thought possible. Endacott does an incredible twist and turn of intricate braids that weave political bonds and emotional relationships, in a setting that completely turns what we see, as a society, on its head.
Our story follows Elen-ai of the Family, a group of assassin's in the Second Country, who is tasked with protecting the life of Gidyon, the soon-to-be-named heir to the throne. Of course, it isn't always that simple – the Queendom prides itself on a tradition where the firstborn daughter of the Queen would take up the throne, any son's (whether older or younger) acting as advisors and the father of these children to remain unknown to maintain loyalties between noble families and the Royal House. I absolutely loved this concept for a Queendom, where it showed a united front within families but also the plots and double-edged words that come about in all politics. It kind of showcased this equality in the book, except that not quite – every time it was mentioned that men didn't have the same right to the throne, or to speak within a family, my gut twisted and I felt a little sick. This is not me being "not a real feminist" – if you know the definition of that word, you'll probably agree with me on some level but it was just those tiny details in some scenes that made me drop this book from 5 to 4.5 stars. Besides that tiny, itty-bitty little fact (which is more of my own personal opinion impacting how I read it) the entirety of Endacott's world-building was incredible, even the stuff I didn't like (because it still made sense why it was there too) and it was layered in a way that showed us glimpses of other facets of politics, religion, everyday life, all of which I really would love to continue exploring.
And I'm not usually one for politics (some people just don't seem logical in a political setting), and there are usually few authors who can write about politics so explicitly within their own well-built world and I find myself enjoying it. This also tied in well with the mystery component of the storyline, which sees the Queen suspecting her only child may be murdered before he can become King – ergo, the need for Elen-ai.
Elen-ai was great. For an assassin in a young adult book, Endacott wrote her superbly and without those over-used tropes often found. There was always an explanation for Elen-ai's training and life, which introduced us to the conflicting use of religion within the Seven Lakes (and also to other Countries). The world built, as I said, has so many layers that are simply unexplored in this first book and I really hope that they're seen more in the second! There are also no secrets that Elen-ai is not perfect. At all. She makes mistakes and must learn from them – another thing I loved about the Family is that they had a lot of the tough-love thing going on that wasn't this violent or brutal but instead this kind of balance between their loyalty to each other and their loyalty to their Shadow God. I absolutely would love to see more about the Family in detail, because they do and don't fit into this "assassins-found-in-YA" box and I love that.
It was difficult to see Gidyon as younger than Elen-ai – I think mostly because these two didn't fit the usual mould for young adult fiction cliches that a lot of us are used to. Not that I don't love them all the same; their relationship was actually really refreshing to read (and that's a lot, coming from me, the reader who loves romance). Endacott doesn't rush anything, and everything that's written has a purpose – everything came back as something that should have been noted down in the first place.
There are actually so many other characters I want to comment on – the Councillors? I want a story just on them. I'd read it. I'd love it. And I'd get to see how the other Countries function as well, which would be amazing to read about because Endacott has a way with world-building so well that it reads real.
It's a surprise to me that this book was a debut. It was even more of a surprise that it was a self-published debut. And that it was a really fresh outlook on a whole different kind of world that brought fantasy to fiction. I highly recommend this book to anyone interested in reading a YA book about assassin's, royalty and a new take on those tropes you always see.
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4.5/5
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This book was provided upon request via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Full review to come but can I just say that Alice is an incredible human being/author? (Yeah, authors are a species by themselves 😂) I didn’t realise this was self published until I got to the acknowledgments AND she’s a fellow Melbournian and I don’t know about you but I am inspired!
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The description for Queendom of the Seven Lakes piqued my interest because it was both intriguing and informative at the same time. It gave me little about what I really expect from what I was about to read and I was so pleasantly surprised when I started and everything was above and beyond what I could have ever thought possible. Endacott does an incredible twist and turn of intricate braids that weave political bonds and emotional relationships, in a setting that completely turns what we see, as a society, on its head.
Our story follows Elen-ai of the Family, a group of assassin's in the Second Country, who is tasked with protecting the life of Gidyon, the soon-to-be-named heir to the throne. Of course, it isn't always that simple – the Queendom prides itself on a tradition where the firstborn daughter of the Queen would take up the throne, any son's (whether older or younger) acting as advisors and the father of these children to remain unknown to maintain loyalties between noble families and the Royal House. I absolutely loved this concept for a Queendom, where it showed a united front within families but also the plots and double-edged words that come about in all politics. It kind of showcased this equality in the book, except that not quite – every time it was mentioned that men didn't have the same right to the throne, or to speak within a family, my gut twisted and I felt a little sick. This is not me being "not a real feminist" – if you know the definition of that word, you'll probably agree with me on some level but it was just those tiny details in some scenes that made me drop this book from 5 to 4.5 stars. Besides that tiny, itty-bitty little fact (which is more of my own personal opinion impacting how I read it) the entirety of Endacott's world-building was incredible, even the stuff I didn't like (because it still made sense why it was there too) and it was layered in a way that showed us glimpses of other facets of politics, religion, everyday life, all of which I really would love to continue exploring.
And I'm not usually one for politics (some people just don't seem logical in a political setting), and there are usually few authors who can write about politics so explicitly within their own well-built world and I find myself enjoying it. This also tied in well with the mystery component of the storyline, which sees the Queen suspecting her only child may be murdered before he can become King – ergo, the need for Elen-ai.
Elen-ai was great. For an assassin in a young adult book, Endacott wrote her superbly and without those over-used tropes often found. There was always an explanation for Elen-ai's training and life, which introduced us to the conflicting use of religion within the Seven Lakes (and also to other Countries). The world built, as I said, has so many layers that are simply unexplored in this first book and I really hope that they're seen more in the second! There are also no secrets that Elen-ai is not perfect. At all. She makes mistakes and must learn from them – another thing I loved about the Family is that they had a lot of the tough-love thing going on that wasn't this violent or brutal but instead this kind of balance between their loyalty to each other and their loyalty to their Shadow God. I absolutely would love to see more about the Family in detail, because they do and don't fit into this "assassins-found-in-YA" box and I love that.
It was difficult to see Gidyon as younger than Elen-ai – I think mostly because these two didn't fit the usual mould for young adult fiction cliches that a lot of us are used to. Not that I don't love them all the same; their relationship was actually really refreshing to read (and that's a lot, coming from me, the reader who loves romance). Endacott doesn't rush anything, and everything that's written has a purpose – everything came back as something that should have been noted down in the first place.
There are actually so many other characters I want to comment on – the Councillors? I want a story just on them. I'd read it. I'd love it. And I'd get to see how the other Countries function as well, which would be amazing to read about because Endacott has a way with world-building so well that it reads real.
It's a surprise to me that this book was a debut. It was even more of a surprise that it was a self-published debut. And that it was a really fresh outlook on a whole different kind of world that brought fantasy to fiction. I highly recommend this book to anyone interested in reading a YA book about assassin's, royalty and a new take on those tropes you always see.
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4.5/5
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This book was provided upon request via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
January 22, 2018
You ever pick up a book with a summary that piqued your interest yet you didn't have any high expectations set for it, only to wind up having it surprise you? This is definitely one of them.
I will always advocate for self-published authors. Publishing any manuscript is huge and can be intimidating. Self-publishing is downright daunting, because you will face the challenges on your own that a traditional publisher will pay people to do for your manuscript. However, there seems to be a woeful lack of true diamonds-in-the-rough among self-published books, and you usually have to go through many mediocre and some dreadful books in order to find those hidden gems. I am happy to report that this is most certainly one such diamond-in-the-rough.
The story follows through the third-person-limited narrative of an assassin, contracted to protect the prince of a queendom after his mother makes a brazen move to name him her heir after years of being unable to have a daughter. Our assassin protagonist is uncertain about this job, especially as she struggles to take the teenaged prince seriously at times and she's unaccustomed to moving in the world of political subterfuge. To say much more would toe the line of spoiling the story, but I will say that those interested should definitely give this a shot.
Queendom of the Seven Lakes's pros, in my opinion, lie a lot with the start to Endacott's worldbuilding and giving an overview of the setting with its precariously-balanced web of political power and gameplay. The story flows pretty easily and naturally, and the combination of a fantasy world with a lot of underlying intrigue moving the story tends to be right up my alley. (In fact, I believe many hardcore Eberron fans might enjoy what Endacott has to offer with her original world.) Plus, the assassin organization known as the "Family" is intriguing to me on a personal level, as I enjoy seeing the structure of assassin networks in fantasy worlds.
Areas of the book in which I think improvements could be made are few in number, but no less important for it.
1. There were some spelling and grammatical errors in this book, and thankfully they were minimal, but I would suggest perhaps a couple more Beta-readers to proofread the manuscript. After all, many sets of eyes will probably catch more than just one or two.
2. The cover. While I think the sketch of Elen-ai is pretty interesting, I have a lot of issues with the cover. It is very difficult to look at and on my physical copy of this book, the summary on the back is impossible to read between the size/color/type of font it's written in, the orange block it's written on, and the wrinkled-paper background behind it. Overall the cover feels very, very rough, and I think in some cases it will definitely make or break whether or not someone picks the book up.
3. Pacing of the plot and character emotion are another. I feel like the pacing in this book was awkward at times, and I struggle to really pinpoint where the rising action occurs. There is no sense of rapid build-up, at least not that I could see in what I read. The climax of the book simply happens without much to lead up to it beforehand. I do think the crafting of a plot's rising action and transition into the climax is tricky, and for that reason I can empathize with any struggles Endacott may have had with those scenes. But there is room for improvement, and I hope she will show that improvement in the next book. As for character emotions, that might simply be a personal thing on my part. Being able to emotionally connect with a protagonist isn't always a necessity, but I struggled with emotional disconnect a lot with Elen-ai. Perhaps that's simply a part of the fact she's an assassin and as such, her display of emotions is limited, but I was able to connect more easily with the characters of Queen Latana and Prince Gidyon.
All-in-all this book is, as previously stated, a diamond-in-the-rough. But in spite of this, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Endacott's world feels very alive and well-crafted in a way that shows her love and effort towards her story, and I very much look forward to seeing the second book in her "Legends of the Godskissed Continent" series.
I will always advocate for self-published authors. Publishing any manuscript is huge and can be intimidating. Self-publishing is downright daunting, because you will face the challenges on your own that a traditional publisher will pay people to do for your manuscript. However, there seems to be a woeful lack of true diamonds-in-the-rough among self-published books, and you usually have to go through many mediocre and some dreadful books in order to find those hidden gems. I am happy to report that this is most certainly one such diamond-in-the-rough.
The story follows through the third-person-limited narrative of an assassin, contracted to protect the prince of a queendom after his mother makes a brazen move to name him her heir after years of being unable to have a daughter. Our assassin protagonist is uncertain about this job, especially as she struggles to take the teenaged prince seriously at times and she's unaccustomed to moving in the world of political subterfuge. To say much more would toe the line of spoiling the story, but I will say that those interested should definitely give this a shot.
Queendom of the Seven Lakes's pros, in my opinion, lie a lot with the start to Endacott's worldbuilding and giving an overview of the setting with its precariously-balanced web of political power and gameplay. The story flows pretty easily and naturally, and the combination of a fantasy world with a lot of underlying intrigue moving the story tends to be right up my alley. (In fact, I believe many hardcore Eberron fans might enjoy what Endacott has to offer with her original world.) Plus, the assassin organization known as the "Family" is intriguing to me on a personal level, as I enjoy seeing the structure of assassin networks in fantasy worlds.
Areas of the book in which I think improvements could be made are few in number, but no less important for it.
1. There were some spelling and grammatical errors in this book, and thankfully they were minimal, but I would suggest perhaps a couple more Beta-readers to proofread the manuscript. After all, many sets of eyes will probably catch more than just one or two.
2. The cover. While I think the sketch of Elen-ai is pretty interesting, I have a lot of issues with the cover. It is very difficult to look at and on my physical copy of this book, the summary on the back is impossible to read between the size/color/type of font it's written in, the orange block it's written on, and the wrinkled-paper background behind it. Overall the cover feels very, very rough, and I think in some cases it will definitely make or break whether or not someone picks the book up.
3. Pacing of the plot and character emotion are another. I feel like the pacing in this book was awkward at times, and I struggle to really pinpoint where the rising action occurs. There is no sense of rapid build-up, at least not that I could see in what I read. The climax of the book simply happens without much to lead up to it beforehand. I do think the crafting of a plot's rising action and transition into the climax is tricky, and for that reason I can empathize with any struggles Endacott may have had with those scenes. But there is room for improvement, and I hope she will show that improvement in the next book. As for character emotions, that might simply be a personal thing on my part. Being able to emotionally connect with a protagonist isn't always a necessity, but I struggled with emotional disconnect a lot with Elen-ai. Perhaps that's simply a part of the fact she's an assassin and as such, her display of emotions is limited, but I was able to connect more easily with the characters of Queen Latana and Prince Gidyon.
All-in-all this book is, as previously stated, a diamond-in-the-rough. But in spite of this, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Endacott's world feels very alive and well-crafted in a way that shows her love and effort towards her story, and I very much look forward to seeing the second book in her "Legends of the Godskissed Continent" series.
March 13, 2021
Tonight I finished Queendom of the Seven Lakes by A.B. Endacott, a book that was sent to me in exchange for an honest review.
I gave this book a rating of 2.75/5 stars, there are obvious things that don't work, but it's close to 3 stars because despite everything I wanted to finish it in order to find out how the story would end.
This is a fantasy book that revolves around the journey undertaken by Elen-ai, an assassin hired as a bodyguard, and Gidyon, future heir to the throne of the Queendom of the Seven Lakes. The two are looking for the one person who attempted on the life of the Queen and the Prince, and in order to find the culprit they will have to cross the lands of the noble families, trying to "read" their intentions during each small stay.
Precisely because of this narrative aspect, the book is very repetitive (travel-stay-travel-stay) and there are lots of characters, who are almost impossible to remember, not that there is anything important to remember, given that the characterization was as thin as a sheet of paper. Basically, this is the classic example of "less, but better".
This book had a good general plot, but the execution wasn't all that excellent. Despite everything, it is a book which is easy and fast to read.
I gave this book a rating of 2.75/5 stars, there are obvious things that don't work, but it's close to 3 stars because despite everything I wanted to finish it in order to find out how the story would end.
This is a fantasy book that revolves around the journey undertaken by Elen-ai, an assassin hired as a bodyguard, and Gidyon, future heir to the throne of the Queendom of the Seven Lakes. The two are looking for the one person who attempted on the life of the Queen and the Prince, and in order to find the culprit they will have to cross the lands of the noble families, trying to "read" their intentions during each small stay.
Precisely because of this narrative aspect, the book is very repetitive (travel-stay-travel-stay) and there are lots of characters, who are almost impossible to remember, not that there is anything important to remember, given that the characterization was as thin as a sheet of paper. Basically, this is the classic example of "less, but better".
This book had a good general plot, but the execution wasn't all that excellent. Despite everything, it is a book which is easy and fast to read.
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May 30, 2020Full review: https://girlswithguns.org/queendom-of...
Despite some interesting wrinkles, this doesn’t capitalize on the worldview. Indeed, by using a male heir instead, it largely negates much of the role reversal which has gone before. I’m also hard pushed to imagine Latana is the first ever queen who failed to have a daughter. The main issue though, is I really would have liked to know more about Elen-Ai. The very concept of the Family – a tacitly-accepted guild of assassins – merits considerably more exploration. How she reached the point of being commissioned by royalty as a bodyguard, seems considerably more interesting than her traipsing across country as some kind of lethally mobile baby-sitter. This seems like a sad waste of her talents, a bit like reading a Sherlock Holmes book devoted entirely to his post-retirement life as a bee-keeper. While I didn’t feel like I’d wasted the time, there wasn’t enough here to convince me to go further into the series.
Despite some interesting wrinkles, this doesn’t capitalize on the worldview. Indeed, by using a male heir instead, it largely negates much of the role reversal which has gone before. I’m also hard pushed to imagine Latana is the first ever queen who failed to have a daughter. The main issue though, is I really would have liked to know more about Elen-Ai. The very concept of the Family – a tacitly-accepted guild of assassins – merits considerably more exploration. How she reached the point of being commissioned by royalty as a bodyguard, seems considerably more interesting than her traipsing across country as some kind of lethally mobile baby-sitter. This seems like a sad waste of her talents, a bit like reading a Sherlock Holmes book devoted entirely to his post-retirement life as a bee-keeper. While I didn’t feel like I’d wasted the time, there wasn’t enough here to convince me to go further into the series.
January 20, 2018
Queendom of the Seven Lakes by A.B. Endacott
**I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review**
"You are the flame in the dark, the rain in the heat, the food given to me as I starve. Without you, my anchor, I am lost, cannot find my way."
So Throne of Glass is one of my favorite series ever. I am currently re-reading it again and it gets better every time I read it. This book caught my eye on NetGalley and the description reminded me of Throne of Glass and I had to read it.
This story is about an assassin named Elen-Ai. She is contracted by the Queen to protect her son from attempts on his life. The kingdom they live in only has Queens who bed members of the 7 families so it is not known who that the children are fathered by. Since the Queen has only a son, Gidyon, she wishes to name her him her heir and she knows there will be attempts on his life because of this.
The story mostly consists of Gidyon and Elen-Ai traveling to the see the other families to get their support for him. I really enjoyed this story. It was kind of confusing to keep all the names of each of the family members straight, but it didn't take anything away from the story. Without spoiling anything, some events go down and it moves the story along quite well. I was honestly surprised to find that this was a debut novel. The writing was excellent aside from some pretty obvious editing issues, but it wasn't too distracting.
I always love books that have strong female leads and it makes me happy when authors don't force some sort of romance when there are two characters who share a lot of time together. I feel that may be a possibility moving forward in the series, but it makes more sense for it to develop instead of that "insta-love" that seems to come with a lot of stories.
I was really glad I read this book and I look forward to seeing how this story progresses in the next one!
**I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review**
"You are the flame in the dark, the rain in the heat, the food given to me as I starve. Without you, my anchor, I am lost, cannot find my way."
So Throne of Glass is one of my favorite series ever. I am currently re-reading it again and it gets better every time I read it. This book caught my eye on NetGalley and the description reminded me of Throne of Glass and I had to read it.
This story is about an assassin named Elen-Ai. She is contracted by the Queen to protect her son from attempts on his life. The kingdom they live in only has Queens who bed members of the 7 families so it is not known who that the children are fathered by. Since the Queen has only a son, Gidyon, she wishes to name her him her heir and she knows there will be attempts on his life because of this.
The story mostly consists of Gidyon and Elen-Ai traveling to the see the other families to get their support for him. I really enjoyed this story. It was kind of confusing to keep all the names of each of the family members straight, but it didn't take anything away from the story. Without spoiling anything, some events go down and it moves the story along quite well. I was honestly surprised to find that this was a debut novel. The writing was excellent aside from some pretty obvious editing issues, but it wasn't too distracting.
I always love books that have strong female leads and it makes me happy when authors don't force some sort of romance when there are two characters who share a lot of time together. I feel that may be a possibility moving forward in the series, but it makes more sense for it to develop instead of that "insta-love" that seems to come with a lot of stories.
I was really glad I read this book and I look forward to seeing how this story progresses in the next one!
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October 18, 2019Read for the Fantasy Hive team as part of SPFBO5: https://fantasy-hive.co.uk/2019/10/sp...
This was my first SPFBO5 read, and the positive reviews on Goodreads had me excited; but despite my overall enthusiasm, this one left me wanting more.
Don’t judge a book by its cover – we all know the saying. But this cover doesn’t do it ANY favours. So, turning to ‘the back’ I checked out the blurb. That didn’t help either (it just kept going on and on and on). So I opened the pages and began to read.
If that sounds a bit over the top to you, that’s intentional. Because that is what this reads like.
What immediately struck me was that this is VERY tell heavy, lacking almost any form of ‘show’. And the more I read, I realised it’s not just tell heavy, it’s overly descriptive and overly wordy, too. It doesn’t need an editor or a beta reader, it needs rewriting to trim the fat and get down to the bones of the story, as opposed to chewing on excess.
The whole tell and over describing things completely eliminated my ability to connect with the characters on an emotional level, who, I must add, don’t seem to display any emotions. The Queen doesn’t seem overly afraid for her son; Elen’ai as a character is someone I feel nothing from apart from confidence in her own abilities as an assassin; and even though the aforementioned Queen has suspicions concerning various parties, INCLUDING THE ROYAL GUARD, there is none of the tension or uncertainty you’d expect or hope for.
The plot almost sounds like Age of Assassins from the POV of the ‘master’ (who is also female like Merela Khan from AoA) hired by the queen to protect the young prince. And I see a lot of GR readers liken it to books like Throne of Glass and Graceling. But, this one has work to do before it can get to the same level as its comparisons, at least in my honest opinion.
This was my first SPFBO5 read, and the positive reviews on Goodreads had me excited; but despite my overall enthusiasm, this one left me wanting more.
Don’t judge a book by its cover – we all know the saying. But this cover doesn’t do it ANY favours. So, turning to ‘the back’ I checked out the blurb. That didn’t help either (it just kept going on and on and on). So I opened the pages and began to read.
If that sounds a bit over the top to you, that’s intentional. Because that is what this reads like.
What immediately struck me was that this is VERY tell heavy, lacking almost any form of ‘show’. And the more I read, I realised it’s not just tell heavy, it’s overly descriptive and overly wordy, too. It doesn’t need an editor or a beta reader, it needs rewriting to trim the fat and get down to the bones of the story, as opposed to chewing on excess.
The whole tell and over describing things completely eliminated my ability to connect with the characters on an emotional level, who, I must add, don’t seem to display any emotions. The Queen doesn’t seem overly afraid for her son; Elen’ai as a character is someone I feel nothing from apart from confidence in her own abilities as an assassin; and even though the aforementioned Queen has suspicions concerning various parties, INCLUDING THE ROYAL GUARD, there is none of the tension or uncertainty you’d expect or hope for.
The plot almost sounds like Age of Assassins from the POV of the ‘master’ (who is also female like Merela Khan from AoA) hired by the queen to protect the young prince. And I see a lot of GR readers liken it to books like Throne of Glass and Graceling. But, this one has work to do before it can get to the same level as its comparisons, at least in my honest opinion.
March 3, 2018
First off, I would like to thank the publisher and author for providing me this ARC to review. Please note that the version I read was an advanced copy, and certain events/language may be changed in the published edition.
Stars (Out of 10): 7.5/10 Stars
Favorite Character: Elen-ai
Spoiler Free: Ever since the release, and popularity, of the Throne of Glass, tons of books following the lives of teenage/young adult assassins. While there have been many hits, and very many misses, I have to count this one amongst the hints.
Prefacing this, I am not sure if the copy I read is a finalized copy or not, but there were admittedly a ton of editing mistakes. Some had typos that ended up changing the meaning of the sentence (although I was usually still able to determine the true meaning), but the most annoying issue that came from this was the constant changing in spelling of names. At first I mainly noticed this for characters with suffixes in their names, such as Elen-ai, alternated between having that dash and having the two parts connected with no space (ex: Elenai). While this I got used to, near the end Gidyon’s name also started being spelled as Gideon, and this was much more off putting. Basically, the book needs a look through by an editor to catch all these tiny mistakes, as it did end up drawing a bit from the book itself.
However, that is probably the biggest issue I had with the book! When it came to the characters, the author showed us the traits of the characters, not simply told us (a issue many people had with Celaena from Throne of Glass), and this especially applied to her killing skills. No matter the scene unfolding, you constantly see her on alert and paying attention to her job. And even with that, you grow to like her, and see her as more than just an assassin. Additionally, you see this in the relationships between all the characters, specifically the familial relationships. Having Elen-ai as our narrator means we also have a close eye on all the characters and how they interact, and whenever Elen-ai told us a revelation, it was backed up constantly throughout the story.
Additionally, while the book is shown as only 250 pages, it reads almost like a 300-350 book. Every moment means something, and I found myself enjoying every line and page. I also wasn’t left with the feeling the book had gone by too fast or had been rushed! (I am dying for the next book though! Wish there was a clear release date somewhere for that.)
In terms of the world, there were some minor issues in the beginning with an overload of information, as we had numbered countries, seven Families, and The Family all to learn about and keep separate from each other (personally I think the assassin’s guild should’ve been referred to as something else). But in the end, I fell in love with the world and quickly caught on to the secrets each held. (Just don’t quiz me on the goods of each Family!)
Lastly, I really enjoyed the plot. It kept a good amount of intrigue and tension without having to rely on overused and annoying tropes (which I see many smaller novels do), and I was hooked from the first chapter. I am super excited to see where the next book takes the world!
Stars (Out of 10): 7.5/10 Stars
Favorite Character: Elen-ai
Spoiler Free: Ever since the release, and popularity, of the Throne of Glass, tons of books following the lives of teenage/young adult assassins. While there have been many hits, and very many misses, I have to count this one amongst the hints.
Prefacing this, I am not sure if the copy I read is a finalized copy or not, but there were admittedly a ton of editing mistakes. Some had typos that ended up changing the meaning of the sentence (although I was usually still able to determine the true meaning), but the most annoying issue that came from this was the constant changing in spelling of names. At first I mainly noticed this for characters with suffixes in their names, such as Elen-ai, alternated between having that dash and having the two parts connected with no space (ex: Elenai). While this I got used to, near the end Gidyon’s name also started being spelled as Gideon, and this was much more off putting. Basically, the book needs a look through by an editor to catch all these tiny mistakes, as it did end up drawing a bit from the book itself.
However, that is probably the biggest issue I had with the book! When it came to the characters, the author showed us the traits of the characters, not simply told us (a issue many people had with Celaena from Throne of Glass), and this especially applied to her killing skills. No matter the scene unfolding, you constantly see her on alert and paying attention to her job. And even with that, you grow to like her, and see her as more than just an assassin. Additionally, you see this in the relationships between all the characters, specifically the familial relationships. Having Elen-ai as our narrator means we also have a close eye on all the characters and how they interact, and whenever Elen-ai told us a revelation, it was backed up constantly throughout the story.
Additionally, while the book is shown as only 250 pages, it reads almost like a 300-350 book. Every moment means something, and I found myself enjoying every line and page. I also wasn’t left with the feeling the book had gone by too fast or had been rushed! (I am dying for the next book though! Wish there was a clear release date somewhere for that.)
In terms of the world, there were some minor issues in the beginning with an overload of information, as we had numbered countries, seven Families, and The Family all to learn about and keep separate from each other (personally I think the assassin’s guild should’ve been referred to as something else). But in the end, I fell in love with the world and quickly caught on to the secrets each held. (Just don’t quiz me on the goods of each Family!)
Lastly, I really enjoyed the plot. It kept a good amount of intrigue and tension without having to rely on overused and annoying tropes (which I see many smaller novels do), and I was hooked from the first chapter. I am super excited to see where the next book takes the world!
June 15, 2022
I am really impressed with this story line! I have become invested in many of the main characters of the Queens Palace and family, especially the prince who is about to change the history of all of their people from the distant passed up to now and possibly forever after, "as near as I can figure?" making it from a Queendom as it had always been into a Kingdom. They have lived in a very different society from our modern times, and now everything is about to change.
There are 7 lakes, one in each country and there are seven countries all with their own rulers with their own specialties in their monetary trades. This had been a matriarchal society and all of its inhabitants lived by the Queens laws and rules. There is one character named Elen-Ai she is a member of a separate society that lives by an entirely different rule, outside of the Queendom being that of a dark guild of Assassins and Thief's with special talents and powers. The Assassins are loners and don't normally associate with any of the other people.
However, during this much disputed change, things are massively changing in many ways, but none of them voluntarily, that is when Elen-Ai is brought into the palace as a protector for the royals, and now things start to get very interesting.
There are 7 lakes, one in each country and there are seven countries all with their own rulers with their own specialties in their monetary trades. This had been a matriarchal society and all of its inhabitants lived by the Queens laws and rules. There is one character named Elen-Ai she is a member of a separate society that lives by an entirely different rule, outside of the Queendom being that of a dark guild of Assassins and Thief's with special talents and powers. The Assassins are loners and don't normally associate with any of the other people.
However, during this much disputed change, things are massively changing in many ways, but none of them voluntarily, that is when Elen-Ai is brought into the palace as a protector for the royals, and now things start to get very interesting.
September 7, 2018
A quick and enjoyable read full of assassins, royalty, and political manoeuvring!
January 3, 2021
I've read this book twice now and loved it both times! I'll put my review from my second reading at the end.
This was one of my first requests when I originally signed up to NetGalley and it has been pushed to the bottom of the pile for a while, which is a great pity as I absolutely loved it! Before I go any further I’d like to thank NetGalley for the eARC of this book.
This story follows Elen-ai as she is enlisted, as an assassin, to guard the Queen’s son. In this world, only women may rule the Queendom as it allows for any familial lineage to be unknown and therefore leaves the seven families of the Queendom at the same level, with no rise in power coming from having a child with the monarch. Elen-ai must protect Gidyon, as the Queen has decreed her son will be the first ever Prince of the Queendom. Obviously, this makes all the families lose their footing and scramble to get one up over everyone including the Queen herself.
I wasn’t too sure how this story was going to develop, would there be a cheesy romance? Would the plot be stereotypical and obvious? The answer is HELL NO! This fantasy read did everything in such good proportions, with the relationship between our protagonist and her charge developing in a way which felt very natural and realistic and makes you root for their side intrinsically. Although there is much about the world that I feel I do not know, I knew what I needed to in order to comprehend the events in the book and I am sure that the sequel (yes there is a sequel, I am so excited!) will explain further about the world and develop this fantasy read even more.
I am very glad I picked this up and was able to read it and I 100% recommend that you at least read the synopsis to see if this is your sort of book, as I had believed I would be getting an averagely told fantasy with a mediocre plotline (because I am apparently an idiot/have been let down by a lot of books lately) and instead I am now finding myself with a new favourite world that I can’t wait to return to! Definitely, need to get to King of the Seven Lakes when I can!!
2nd Time Through!
Re-reading this book was so much fun, and it had been long enough that the finer points of the plot had been forgotten and I got to enjoy them all over again. I'm definitely one who enjoys a re-read! Seeing the developing relationship between Elen-ai and Gidyon as well as refreshing my memory of the political structure of the Second Country was so enjoyable and I rediscovered my love of this world. This is an amazing YA fantasy that I 100% recommend, it was such an immersive read for me and I'm so glad I pick this book up!
Merged review:
This was one of my first requests when I originally signed up to NetGalley and it has been pushed to the bottom of the pile for a while, which is a great pity as I absolutely loved it! Before I go any further I’d like to thank NetGalley for the eARC of this book.
This story follows Elen-ai as she is enlisted, as an assassin, to guard the Queen’s son. In this world, only women may rule the Queendom as it allows for any familial lineage to be unknown and therefore leaves the seven families of the Queendom at the same level, with no rise in power coming from having a child with the monarch. Elen-ai must protect Gidyon, as the Queen has decreed her son will be the first ever Prince of the Queendom. Obviously, this makes all the families lose their footing and scramble to get one up over everyone including the Queen herself.
I wasn’t too sure how this story was going to develop, would there be a cheesy romance? Would the plot be stereotypical and obvious? The answer is HELL NO! This fantasy read did everything in such good proportions, with the relationship between our protagonist and her charge developing in a way which felt very natural and realistic and makes you root for their side intrinsically. Although there is much about the world that I feel I do not know, I knew what I needed to in order to comprehend the events in the book and I am sure that the sequel (yes there is a sequel, I am so excited!) will explain further about the world and develop this fantasy read even more.
I am very glad I picked this up and was able to read it and I 100% recommend that you at least read the synopsis to see if this is your sort of book, as I had believed I would be getting an averagely told fantasy with a mediocre plotline (because I am apparently an idiot/have been let down by a lot of books lately) and instead I am now finding myself with a new favourite world that I can’t wait to return to! Definitely, need to get to King of the Seven Lakes when I can!!
This was one of my first requests when I originally signed up to NetGalley and it has been pushed to the bottom of the pile for a while, which is a great pity as I absolutely loved it! Before I go any further I’d like to thank NetGalley for the eARC of this book.
This story follows Elen-ai as she is enlisted, as an assassin, to guard the Queen’s son. In this world, only women may rule the Queendom as it allows for any familial lineage to be unknown and therefore leaves the seven families of the Queendom at the same level, with no rise in power coming from having a child with the monarch. Elen-ai must protect Gidyon, as the Queen has decreed her son will be the first ever Prince of the Queendom. Obviously, this makes all the families lose their footing and scramble to get one up over everyone including the Queen herself.
I wasn’t too sure how this story was going to develop, would there be a cheesy romance? Would the plot be stereotypical and obvious? The answer is HELL NO! This fantasy read did everything in such good proportions, with the relationship between our protagonist and her charge developing in a way which felt very natural and realistic and makes you root for their side intrinsically. Although there is much about the world that I feel I do not know, I knew what I needed to in order to comprehend the events in the book and I am sure that the sequel (yes there is a sequel, I am so excited!) will explain further about the world and develop this fantasy read even more.
I am very glad I picked this up and was able to read it and I 100% recommend that you at least read the synopsis to see if this is your sort of book, as I had believed I would be getting an averagely told fantasy with a mediocre plotline (because I am apparently an idiot/have been let down by a lot of books lately) and instead I am now finding myself with a new favourite world that I can’t wait to return to! Definitely, need to get to King of the Seven Lakes when I can!!
2nd Time Through!
Re-reading this book was so much fun, and it had been long enough that the finer points of the plot had been forgotten and I got to enjoy them all over again. I'm definitely one who enjoys a re-read! Seeing the developing relationship between Elen-ai and Gidyon as well as refreshing my memory of the political structure of the Second Country was so enjoyable and I rediscovered my love of this world. This is an amazing YA fantasy that I 100% recommend, it was such an immersive read for me and I'm so glad I pick this book up!
Merged review:
This was one of my first requests when I originally signed up to NetGalley and it has been pushed to the bottom of the pile for a while, which is a great pity as I absolutely loved it! Before I go any further I’d like to thank NetGalley for the eARC of this book.
This story follows Elen-ai as she is enlisted, as an assassin, to guard the Queen’s son. In this world, only women may rule the Queendom as it allows for any familial lineage to be unknown and therefore leaves the seven families of the Queendom at the same level, with no rise in power coming from having a child with the monarch. Elen-ai must protect Gidyon, as the Queen has decreed her son will be the first ever Prince of the Queendom. Obviously, this makes all the families lose their footing and scramble to get one up over everyone including the Queen herself.
I wasn’t too sure how this story was going to develop, would there be a cheesy romance? Would the plot be stereotypical and obvious? The answer is HELL NO! This fantasy read did everything in such good proportions, with the relationship between our protagonist and her charge developing in a way which felt very natural and realistic and makes you root for their side intrinsically. Although there is much about the world that I feel I do not know, I knew what I needed to in order to comprehend the events in the book and I am sure that the sequel (yes there is a sequel, I am so excited!) will explain further about the world and develop this fantasy read even more.
I am very glad I picked this up and was able to read it and I 100% recommend that you at least read the synopsis to see if this is your sort of book, as I had believed I would be getting an averagely told fantasy with a mediocre plotline (because I am apparently an idiot/have been let down by a lot of books lately) and instead I am now finding myself with a new favourite world that I can’t wait to return to! Definitely, need to get to King of the Seven Lakes when I can!!
December 18, 2017
*Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review*
"The mind of a queen is a thing to fear. A queen is used to giving commands, not obeying them; And her rage once roused is hard to appease."
This story was truly iconic. I am shocked it was a debut. I am always awed when an author writes a five-star debut novel it leaves me with the idea that their stories will just get better. Queendom of the Seven Lakes follows the story of an Assassin named Elen-ai as she accepts Queen Latana's contract to protect her son, Prince Gidyon, from being killed. I haven't read a story about an assassin yet and I loved every minute of this. It was thrilling and not romantic. I will not lie I expected a love story and I wasn't looking forward to it but the author surprised me immensely. We didn't have to sit through a cliche romance but got to witness a blooming friendship between a guy and girl (yes those are real *GASP* I know.) It was lovely and a different take than I was expecting but a welcome take.
Elen-ai was an awesome character. I want a whole movie on her so I can witness her awesome fighting skills on a big screen. I loved her for many reasons. One she knew her own strength and how powerful/tactful she was. Her aloof nature with people and ability to stay in the shadows was something I liked that we got to see a lot because it made her more authentic as what she was. One of my favorite scenes with her is when she first fights Gidyon and she shows him what's up. She is smart, calculating, strong, and obviously can kick butt. The queen hires her because she is the most skilled assassin and best to keep him safe. I love the growth in Gidyon. At first, he doesn't want Elen-ai around and he is arrogant but then we see his bond with her and him grow into a king. And we saw him always look to her and want her around as the story progressed. Their friendship cracked me up a lot and I can't wait to see more of it in book two.
"My Prince, if I may offer you a piece of advice: beware of the charms of an attractive and interested person. More people have been brought to ruin by lust than I can possibly count."
The writing and dialogue were really good as well. I think the author did a wonderful job of putting things where they needed to be but furthering the story along. There was dialogue when necessary and description when necessary. I loved the world building as well. It flowed gradually into the story as we saw each of the seven families and different parts of the kingdom. I liked that we got history and knowledge about the kingdom and how it's run (like why a man was never on the throne, the skills of the Family (Assassins), the different religions, and cultures) in snippets and chunks instead of whole chapters. This made for a fun and exciting story instead of a boring and tedious history lesson. Another thing is how we learned that some people developed gifts from their gods and again it was migrated into the story and not a whole chapter. We were shown these things through the writing and not just told.
Lastly, I loved the pace and plot twists/plot in general. I loved this idea of a female protecting the male and remaining the one with the fighting skill it made it more realistic as she is an assassin. I loved trying to guess who was trying to kill the prince and the queen and as things were unfolding I was figuring things out. Also again how the author was authentic with how Elen-ai figures things out as well and the Prince's naive nature sometimes. Like about Rania trying to bed him, or the men who were possibly his fathers, and who was the one who planned to kill them. The ending with the Queen left me speechless because it was so left field. It made sense but I was NOT expecting it.
"The true skill of the Family lay not in their ability to take life but to make it seem as though that life had not been deliberately taken."
End Note
Read this story please if you get the chance. It was amazing and deserves more love and hype.
Love, Kat
"The mind of a queen is a thing to fear. A queen is used to giving commands, not obeying them; And her rage once roused is hard to appease."
This story was truly iconic. I am shocked it was a debut. I am always awed when an author writes a five-star debut novel it leaves me with the idea that their stories will just get better. Queendom of the Seven Lakes follows the story of an Assassin named Elen-ai as she accepts Queen Latana's contract to protect her son, Prince Gidyon, from being killed. I haven't read a story about an assassin yet and I loved every minute of this. It was thrilling and not romantic. I will not lie I expected a love story and I wasn't looking forward to it but the author surprised me immensely. We didn't have to sit through a cliche romance but got to witness a blooming friendship between a guy and girl (yes those are real *GASP* I know.) It was lovely and a different take than I was expecting but a welcome take.
Elen-ai was an awesome character. I want a whole movie on her so I can witness her awesome fighting skills on a big screen. I loved her for many reasons. One she knew her own strength and how powerful/tactful she was. Her aloof nature with people and ability to stay in the shadows was something I liked that we got to see a lot because it made her more authentic as what she was. One of my favorite scenes with her is when she first fights Gidyon and she shows him what's up. She is smart, calculating, strong, and obviously can kick butt. The queen hires her because she is the most skilled assassin and best to keep him safe. I love the growth in Gidyon. At first, he doesn't want Elen-ai around and he is arrogant but then we see his bond with her and him grow into a king. And we saw him always look to her and want her around as the story progressed. Their friendship cracked me up a lot and I can't wait to see more of it in book two.
"My Prince, if I may offer you a piece of advice: beware of the charms of an attractive and interested person. More people have been brought to ruin by lust than I can possibly count."
The writing and dialogue were really good as well. I think the author did a wonderful job of putting things where they needed to be but furthering the story along. There was dialogue when necessary and description when necessary. I loved the world building as well. It flowed gradually into the story as we saw each of the seven families and different parts of the kingdom. I liked that we got history and knowledge about the kingdom and how it's run (like why a man was never on the throne, the skills of the Family (Assassins), the different religions, and cultures) in snippets and chunks instead of whole chapters. This made for a fun and exciting story instead of a boring and tedious history lesson. Another thing is how we learned that some people developed gifts from their gods and again it was migrated into the story and not a whole chapter. We were shown these things through the writing and not just told.
Lastly, I loved the pace and plot twists/plot in general. I loved this idea of a female protecting the male and remaining the one with the fighting skill it made it more realistic as she is an assassin. I loved trying to guess who was trying to kill the prince and the queen and as things were unfolding I was figuring things out. Also again how the author was authentic with how Elen-ai figures things out as well and the Prince's naive nature sometimes. Like about Rania trying to bed him, or the men who were possibly his fathers, and who was the one who planned to kill them. The ending with the Queen left me speechless because it was so left field. It made sense but I was NOT expecting it.
"The true skill of the Family lay not in their ability to take life but to make it seem as though that life had not been deliberately taken."
End Note
Read this story please if you get the chance. It was amazing and deserves more love and hype.
Love, Kat
January 8, 2018
I was really excited to read this book after I read the synopsis. And I am so glad I read this. Queendom of the Seven Lakes is a story of an Assassin named Elen-ai who accepts Queen Latana's contract to protect her son, Prince Gidyon, from being killed.
The story was so different. And I was so surprised that this was a debut novel. The book was so well written. I am always left in awe when debut novels get 4 or 5-star ratings.
I loved every minute of this book. I loved Elen-ai and Gidyon. Even Queen Latana. I was expecting a love story to blossom between Elen-ai and Gidyon, but that didn't happen. And it was a pleasant surprise. I always love reading books that have two MC's that have so much chemistry together and are yet shown as friends and nothing more.
Though, OVER TIME, if they do fall for each other I wouldn't mind. *wink**wink* I would really ship them so hard!
Can we talk about Gidyon's character arc though? IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! To see him grow the way he did, left me speechless. He went from being a teenager to a prince and finally to KING! And the author handled it all so well. I loved how even though he was being more responsible and king like he still held on some parts of his childhood. Because he is 17. I would have hated it if he suddenly over ONE book started acting like a 30-year-old.
Elen-ai, what do I say about her? She is my new fav bad ass assassin. She was so COOL! She knew what she was good at, and she was confident in her strengths. Not once did she doubt her skills and I LOVED THAT!
The writing, like I said, was really good. I loved the magic system and the world building. I also enjoyed how we were given the history in batches rather than all at once. The reason why only queens would rule the nation and why men weren't allowed was well explained. How we were slowly introduced to all the seven kingdoms was done really well.
However, I am giving it 4 stars for two reasons.
1. There were instances of fat shaming (not directly to any person but about them in the MC's head) and it left a bad taste in my mouth. They were only said ONCE throughout the book and I UNDERSTAND why they were said, (out of anger that was very much justified) however, I think it could have been avoided.
2. The book needs an editor. It took me a long time to finish this book because of the bad editing.
Apart from all that, I loved the book. The plot was great. I fell in love with the characters. I really want to read what happens in the next book.
This book was provided by the publisher (via NetGalley) for free in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
The story was so different. And I was so surprised that this was a debut novel. The book was so well written. I am always left in awe when debut novels get 4 or 5-star ratings.
I loved every minute of this book. I loved Elen-ai and Gidyon. Even Queen Latana. I was expecting a love story to blossom between Elen-ai and Gidyon, but that didn't happen. And it was a pleasant surprise. I always love reading books that have two MC's that have so much chemistry together and are yet shown as friends and nothing more.
Though, OVER TIME, if they do fall for each other I wouldn't mind. *wink**wink* I would really ship them so hard!
Can we talk about Gidyon's character arc though? IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! To see him grow the way he did, left me speechless. He went from being a teenager to a prince and finally to KING! And the author handled it all so well. I loved how even though he was being more responsible and king like he still held on some parts of his childhood. Because he is 17. I would have hated it if he suddenly over ONE book started acting like a 30-year-old.
Elen-ai, what do I say about her? She is my new fav bad ass assassin. She was so COOL! She knew what she was good at, and she was confident in her strengths. Not once did she doubt her skills and I LOVED THAT!
The writing, like I said, was really good. I loved the magic system and the world building. I also enjoyed how we were given the history in batches rather than all at once. The reason why only queens would rule the nation and why men weren't allowed was well explained. How we were slowly introduced to all the seven kingdoms was done really well.
However, I am giving it 4 stars for two reasons.
1. There were instances of fat shaming (not directly to any person but about them in the MC's head) and it left a bad taste in my mouth. They were only said ONCE throughout the book and I UNDERSTAND why they were said, (out of anger that was very much justified) however, I think it could have been avoided.
2. The book needs an editor. It took me a long time to finish this book because of the bad editing.
Apart from all that, I loved the book. The plot was great. I fell in love with the characters. I really want to read what happens in the next book.
This book was provided by the publisher (via NetGalley) for free in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
February 2, 2018
Queendom of the Seven Lakes is a unique novel in the fantasy world. It has a strong female assassin protagonist, and manages to somehow avoid most of the tropes that plague NA/YA fantasy novels. Elen-ai is able to maintain herself and her personality throughout the novel. While she is tasked with protecting a male, they just have a close friendship develop in this novel (although could see it develop into something more later in the series). She is always stronger and more skilled than he is, no damsel in distress anywhere in sight. She is blunt and true to herself. She even has flaws! Elen-ai is really a breath of fresh air as far as protagonists go. Even Prince Gidyon is a solid male counterpart. Well rounded, thoughtful, and still maintains the impulsiveness of youth, he is incredibly realistic. I just adored this novel primarily for the characters (although the plot was fast paced and enjoyable as well) and cannot wait to read the sequel.
December 11, 2017
I read an ARC of this book. I tend to really enjoy this epic story telling style. I found this to be somewhat predictable but still enjoyable. I really liked the religion and magic model in the book.
I will likely read the next book in the series to see what happens.
As a note: the ARC I read had a lack of simple editing. I did stop reading this book for about a week before continuing on. I don't know if that left a bad impression on me or not.
I will likely read the next book in the series to see what happens.
As a note: the ARC I read had a lack of simple editing. I did stop reading this book for about a week before continuing on. I don't know if that left a bad impression on me or not.
December 15, 2018
Wow. This book is spectacular. I cannot even begin to explain how much I enjoyed the world Alice has created.
From the royal system, to the families around the Queendom, not Kingdom. The relationship between Gidyon and Elen-ai the entire novel is so well structured and thought out.
I cannot wait to read the next installment. A. B Endacott has become an auto-buy author for me. ❤
From the royal system, to the families around the Queendom, not Kingdom. The relationship between Gidyon and Elen-ai the entire novel is so well structured and thought out.
I cannot wait to read the next installment. A. B Endacott has become an auto-buy author for me. ❤
February 11, 2019
4.5 Stars ✨
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and for a debut novel, it is extremely well written with amazing world building, loveable and loathable characters and a well defined plot. My only complaint is that as it is a fantasy, I wish it was a little longer.
I would highly recommend for anyone who is looking for a new fantasy book who loves the politics games.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and for a debut novel, it is extremely well written with amazing world building, loveable and loathable characters and a well defined plot. My only complaint is that as it is a fantasy, I wish it was a little longer.
I would highly recommend for anyone who is looking for a new fantasy book who loves the politics games.
September 6, 2018
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3 / 5
~review to come~
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Queendom of the Seven Lakes had a rough start for me. It reminded me of all the reasons I didn't like Graceling (Kristin Cashore), but once it got going I was definitely invested
3 / 5
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Queendom of the Seven Lakes had a rough start for me. It reminded me of all the reasons I didn't like Graceling (Kristin Cashore), but once it got going I was definitely invested
November 26, 2021
It's been a good year for finding new favourite authors. One of the standouts has been A.B. Endacott. I really enjoyed Deliverance of the Blessed, was swept away by The Ruthless Land but I LOVED the Queendom duology . I wanted to race ahead while at the same time, I didn't want it to end.
It all came down to the characters. I think the part I was most taken with was the friendship that developed between Elen-ai and Gidyon, which happens beautifully across the two books. Paid assassin Elen-ai is hired to keep watch on the Queen's son as the Queen is about to make a huge change to the succession precedents that will likely put him in danger. We go from reluctant companions to seeing real trust and companionship develop between the two - beyond more than just a Prince needing a protector. You could really feel the affection and respect Elen-ai developed for Gidyon across the course of the two books.
So the characters are amazing, but don't worry there's plenty of action here too - especially when simultaneous attacks are made on the Queen and Gidyon. But who have the seven powerful families in the Queendom has an axe to grind? This is all helped along by the excellent world-building established by Endacott. You can read any of the books in this world ("The Godskissed Continent") in any order - for me it was Deliverance/Ruthless/Queendom and then I'll go onto the Dark Trilogy and they all complement each other beautifully without giving away any spoilers.
The Queendom of the Seven Lakes has been one of my favourite reads this year <3 so much love here and I miss the characters already - luckily I don't think we are quite done with them which is great news for me! Now I go off to read the Dark Trilogy, knowing that MC Freya will cross paths with our favourite assassin in the future.
It all came down to the characters. I think the part I was most taken with was the friendship that developed between Elen-ai and Gidyon, which happens beautifully across the two books. Paid assassin Elen-ai is hired to keep watch on the Queen's son as the Queen is about to make a huge change to the succession precedents that will likely put him in danger. We go from reluctant companions to seeing real trust and companionship develop between the two - beyond more than just a Prince needing a protector. You could really feel the affection and respect Elen-ai developed for Gidyon across the course of the two books.
So the characters are amazing, but don't worry there's plenty of action here too - especially when simultaneous attacks are made on the Queen and Gidyon. But who have the seven powerful families in the Queendom has an axe to grind? This is all helped along by the excellent world-building established by Endacott. You can read any of the books in this world ("The Godskissed Continent") in any order - for me it was Deliverance/Ruthless/Queendom and then I'll go onto the Dark Trilogy and they all complement each other beautifully without giving away any spoilers.
The Queendom of the Seven Lakes has been one of my favourite reads this year <3 so much love here and I miss the characters already - luckily I don't think we are quite done with them which is great news for me! Now I go off to read the Dark Trilogy, knowing that MC Freya will cross paths with our favourite assassin in the future.
October 10, 2021
I was lucky enough to be given a copy of The Queendom of the Seven Lakes to review. So please bare with me while I attempt to put my thoughts to writing.
The first instalment of this duology follows our main character Elen-ai. She is apart of a group of Assassins called “the family” and is contracted by the Queen to protect her son who is to become heir to the throne, Gidyon .
In any other novel that is out there these days that wouldn’t seem like a bad thing. But in this amazing role reversal story. Being a man and becoming king is against tradition! Which I have to say I love that aspect of the story.
So because of that the Queen believes someone or multiple someone’s will try and kill the prince. And who better to protect someone from being assassinated then an Assassin? This is where the adventures begin.
I really liked the dynamics between Elen-ai and Gidyon. They had many hurdles though out to overcome and though they typically didn’t get along they had an interesting relationship. Though at this point I’m still not sure where the author is taking their relationship, and I’m torn with how I want it to end up.
If you like a book that has royalty, some political background, assassins, unlikely friendships and a little mystery. Then I recommend 😇 super easy to read and always keen to pick it back up.
The first instalment of this duology follows our main character Elen-ai. She is apart of a group of Assassins called “the family” and is contracted by the Queen to protect her son who is to become heir to the throne, Gidyon .
In any other novel that is out there these days that wouldn’t seem like a bad thing. But in this amazing role reversal story. Being a man and becoming king is against tradition! Which I have to say I love that aspect of the story.
So because of that the Queen believes someone or multiple someone’s will try and kill the prince. And who better to protect someone from being assassinated then an Assassin? This is where the adventures begin.
I really liked the dynamics between Elen-ai and Gidyon. They had many hurdles though out to overcome and though they typically didn’t get along they had an interesting relationship. Though at this point I’m still not sure where the author is taking their relationship, and I’m torn with how I want it to end up.
If you like a book that has royalty, some political background, assassins, unlikely friendships and a little mystery. Then I recommend 😇 super easy to read and always keen to pick it back up.
June 16, 2020
Elen-ai is an assassin and has accepted a rather unusual job. Rather than kill, she's been hired to protect the Heir of the Queendom. Soon she's much more involved in politics and mysteries than she'd like to be.
The world building of the godkissed continent was really well done - the delicate power balance between the 7 high families was fantastic. I especially loved how the balance was maintained by having the monarch only ever be a queen, so that an heir could be born without the father being known, therefore no family would be elevated above another. I also really enjoyed the low magic setting - it was refreshing to have a fantasy world that wasn't soaked in magic.
As much as I missed the angst I'm so used to in YA novels, it was great to see a male and female being such close friends without having any romantic drama! This is definitely something we don't see enough of. We did get our much needed angst in the latter part of this duology - and it was deliciously done!
I do think the book could have benefited from having some scenes from Gidyons point of view, but overall this was a fantastic read! I look forward to diving into the godkissed continent again.
The world building of the godkissed continent was really well done - the delicate power balance between the 7 high families was fantastic. I especially loved how the balance was maintained by having the monarch only ever be a queen, so that an heir could be born without the father being known, therefore no family would be elevated above another. I also really enjoyed the low magic setting - it was refreshing to have a fantasy world that wasn't soaked in magic.
As much as I missed the angst I'm so used to in YA novels, it was great to see a male and female being such close friends without having any romantic drama! This is definitely something we don't see enough of. We did get our much needed angst in the latter part of this duology - and it was deliciously done!
I do think the book could have benefited from having some scenes from Gidyons point of view, but overall this was a fantastic read! I look forward to diving into the godkissed continent again.
December 19, 2017
An interesting dive into a realm ruled by political machination.
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. It started off a wee bit weak and the names struck me as a tad pretentious, but it wasn't long before I was genuinely engaged in the story. The author's writing style is a bit rough around the edges, but she skillfully managed to build a believable world filled with intriguing characters and plot turns that left me unable to predict the coming events. I read the last half of the book in one sitting once I got really stuck into the story and am eagerly awaiting a future installment.
Kudos to the author. She shows great promise and, with the even greater refinement that comes with further writing experience, I'm certain she will craft many more enjoyable stories for many moons to come.
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. It started off a wee bit weak and the names struck me as a tad pretentious, but it wasn't long before I was genuinely engaged in the story. The author's writing style is a bit rough around the edges, but she skillfully managed to build a believable world filled with intriguing characters and plot turns that left me unable to predict the coming events. I read the last half of the book in one sitting once I got really stuck into the story and am eagerly awaiting a future installment.
Kudos to the author. She shows great promise and, with the even greater refinement that comes with further writing experience, I'm certain she will craft many more enjoyable stories for many moons to come.
February 14, 2018
Walking a royal tightrope
I quite enjoyed this story, which contained a lot of psychology as well as adventure. It was difficult to guess who was behind the attacks on the queen and her son since there were so many disgruntled and ambitious suspects. The ending was something of a cliffhanger relative to the future role of the main character, the assassin. There were several minor mistakes in the text, usually words inadvertently omitted. The worst mistake was excessive use of the non-word "alright," which should be "all right." Look it up. It can probably be attributed to self-publication.
I quite enjoyed this story, which contained a lot of psychology as well as adventure. It was difficult to guess who was behind the attacks on the queen and her son since there were so many disgruntled and ambitious suspects. The ending was something of a cliffhanger relative to the future role of the main character, the assassin. There were several minor mistakes in the text, usually words inadvertently omitted. The worst mistake was excessive use of the non-word "alright," which should be "all right." Look it up. It can probably be attributed to self-publication.
June 30, 2018
I was kindly sent a review copy of this novel by the author, in exchange for an honest review.
Wow. This book is nothing short of amazing. I was immediately drawn into the world of the Queendom, not only through the world building, but also through the characters. Elen-ai and Gidyon are well rounded, multi-dimensional characters. Characters who you instantly build a connection with. I love the honesty and rawness to this book, and how the Queendom is exactly that, no male has ruled the Seven Lakes and the controversy that follows the change of ascension.
This novel is well written and intriguing, there is still so much more that I want to know! A great read!
Wow. This book is nothing short of amazing. I was immediately drawn into the world of the Queendom, not only through the world building, but also through the characters. Elen-ai and Gidyon are well rounded, multi-dimensional characters. Characters who you instantly build a connection with. I love the honesty and rawness to this book, and how the Queendom is exactly that, no male has ruled the Seven Lakes and the controversy that follows the change of ascension.
This novel is well written and intriguing, there is still so much more that I want to know! A great read!
November 19, 2018
4.5/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫
First off thankyou so much Alice for sending me a copy to read and review!
Not only did I read a fantastic book, but I gained a friend as well 🙂
I really enjoyed this book. The young characters growth was awesome to follow, the addition of the other 6 families had a great representation and I loved the plot. The quirky map in the front make it easy to track the princes journey across the kingdom and keep up with the many characters. and the ending! 😵 did not see that ending coming!
I’m excited to continue on the journey and jump back into the world in the second book.
First off thankyou so much Alice for sending me a copy to read and review!
Not only did I read a fantastic book, but I gained a friend as well 🙂
I really enjoyed this book. The young characters growth was awesome to follow, the addition of the other 6 families had a great representation and I loved the plot. The quirky map in the front make it easy to track the princes journey across the kingdom and keep up with the many characters. and the ending! 😵 did not see that ending coming!
I’m excited to continue on the journey and jump back into the world in the second book.
December 22, 2018
What a wonderful experience
I started reading Queendom of the Seven Lakes with a certain lack of expectation, not belong familiar with Miss Endacott or her style of writing. I am now familiar with her style, at least in part, and my expectations have risen quite high.. I normally am a voracious reader of Space Opera, I now really appreciate this young lady's absolutely wonderful way of putting a story together, believable, even possible, Thank you for allowing me to ride along on your journey, I now am ordering the second installment right now. Dan
I started reading Queendom of the Seven Lakes with a certain lack of expectation, not belong familiar with Miss Endacott or her style of writing. I am now familiar with her style, at least in part, and my expectations have risen quite high.. I normally am a voracious reader of Space Opera, I now really appreciate this young lady's absolutely wonderful way of putting a story together, believable, even possible, Thank you for allowing me to ride along on your journey, I now am ordering the second installment right now. Dan
November 16, 2021
Thank you Alice for sending me an e-ARC of the duology bindup in exchange for an honest review!
I really enjoyed this book and it’s sequel! It’s definitely YA and it’s a great example of how great character development and political intrigue can create such an interesting storyline and keep the audience hooked
The companionship between Elen-ai and Gidyon was fantastic to read and seeing their relationship grow on their journey was so endearing
Overall, if you like a classic YA book with political power plays and a character-focused plot, definitely check out this duology!
I really enjoyed this book and it’s sequel! It’s definitely YA and it’s a great example of how great character development and political intrigue can create such an interesting storyline and keep the audience hooked
The companionship between Elen-ai and Gidyon was fantastic to read and seeing their relationship grow on their journey was so endearing
Overall, if you like a classic YA book with political power plays and a character-focused plot, definitely check out this duology!
May 1, 2018
A great find!
Don’t let the simple cover fool you. This book has great world-building and a well written story that will draw you in. I love the court intrigue, attention to detail, assassin society, and strong female protagonist! I hope this series gets more attention from readers browsing amazon for something new. It deserves it! If you are a fan of Sara J Maas you will love it.
Don’t let the simple cover fool you. This book has great world-building and a well written story that will draw you in. I love the court intrigue, attention to detail, assassin society, and strong female protagonist! I hope this series gets more attention from readers browsing amazon for something new. It deserves it! If you are a fan of Sara J Maas you will love it.
March 19, 2018
A great novel from an up and coming Australian author in young adult fiction. The story grabs one's attention from the start and has enough intrigue to keep readers interested. The fantasy genre is not a favourite of mine, but I found this novel well worth reading until the very end. Looking forward to the next installment.
December 25, 2018
A sweeping depiction
The second country comes to life umder the authors pen.
This is a pacey story with well drawn characters. We feel for them or hate them this keeps us reading.
My only negative comment is that the cover works against the sweep of the novel. It may disaude readers who would enjoy the work. Still its only one page.
The second country comes to life umder the authors pen.
This is a pacey story with well drawn characters. We feel for them or hate them this keeps us reading.
My only negative comment is that the cover works against the sweep of the novel. It may disaude readers who would enjoy the work. Still its only one page.
January 13, 2022
This is a fab self-published novel and it's such a fun fast paced story! Elen-ai makes a great assassin and I love her relationship with Gidyon. I've immediately started book 2 and I'm enjoying this world and the different politics at play.
This is a great first book in a young adult fantasy duology and I'd really recommend it 😊
This is a great first book in a young adult fantasy duology and I'd really recommend it 😊
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