Warning alert: super clean story up ahead. And as another reviewer said, not even a kiss for the married couple in the whole story. I can actually fall in love with a clean story as long as there is romance, or the showing of the couple falling in love. I didn't feel that here at all, granted I didn't make it thru the whole book, but from the part that I did get thru... the heroine was a defiant little shrew. As soon as I realized that instead of romance, there would be evil guys chasing our couple thru the highlands, I was out. I felt that the author did a great job though setting up the story, explaining all of the characters well and I never felt lost. I could see editing errors that make me stop reading to question myself, 'sales' vs. 'sails', 'an' vs. 'and', and then a lot of repetition, like whole paragraphs copied, cut and pasted it seemed. I guess this is bound to happen when going thru the list of freebies I have accumulated.