“Black Gold” is the latest novel from indie writer Augustine Sam. By my count, this is his fourth novel, and he has another one on the way. The novel is quite short, and resides in the gray area somewhere between a novella and a full-length novel.
Perhaps the most interesting thing about the novel is the novelist himself. Mr. Sam describes himself as “a journalist by profession, a novelist by choice, and a poet by chance.” As you can imagine, with a background like that, the author can really turn a phrase, and “Black Gold” is chock-full of lyrical imagery and metaphors. Frequently, the result is beautiful:
“Eager to gauge the sentiments of others, the sisters cast a furtive glance around them, noticing as they did so, a woebegone look on their mother’s face. They turned in time to see their father’s ugly stare before he narrowed his eyes-a telltale sign of trouble-disillusionment transforming his desolate visage into something akin to a grim, fragmentary sculpture.”
At other times, however, it feels like the author is overwriting, and needlessly trying to impress the reader. One such example is the frequent use of “envisage” (“She grinned as they moved up the queue quicker than envisaged.” Not my favorite word, but a matter of preference.)
I’d describe the plot and theme as almost John Grishamesque: An eager, successful young couple become swept up by the promise of astounding wealth, and they fall prey to a multinational corporation’s dangerous schemes. Despite the beautiful language, much of the novel felt somewhat underdeveloped and a little implausible to me, including the protagonist’s relationship, the shady corporate recruitment, the family reunion, and the ending. I think if the author wrote a longer novel, there would have been more time to fully develop some of these things.
Additionally, I’m not a fan of this book’s cover. If I didn’t know anything about the book, based on the cover I would assume it was more of a romance/erotica bit of titillation, and not the serious book that it is. I think the novel would be better served by a different cover.
Bottom line, Augustine Sam is a fascinating writer with loads of talent. With a fifth book on the way and tons of accolades for his poetry, he is establishing himself in the literary world. Despite the frequently delightful language, I thought the relationships and plot in this short novel were a little under-developed, and I rate the book 3.5 stars. This is an intriguing author, however, and I have my eye on some of his other works, especially “Conspiracy of Silence.”