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Destiny's Crucible #3
Heavier Than a Mountain
21 hours and 14 minutes
Beware of creating your worst enemy.
All Joe Colsco wanted out of life was a reasonably interesting job supporting a quiet, comfortable suburban lifestyle, eventually a small family, and time to pursue hobbies. Instead, a freak accident casts him naked onto a beach of another planet inhabited by humans with technology circa 1700. In time, Joe, now known as Yozef Kolsko, makes the difficult acceptance of a new life, has a respectable position in his new society, and is married with a child on the way. But all is not rosy. He has become embroiled in a struggle beyond any dream he could have had - or any nightmare.
The Narthani are a militant society intent on subjugating the Caedelli, the people he's come to identify with. Despite Yozef's hope to focus his life on transferring scientific knowledge and supporting a quiet life, he finds his life's direction moving beyond his control. As his actions and ideas become more important in resisting the Narthani, he reluctantly finds himself dragged into leadership roles he doesn't believe himself qualified - including efforts to unite the Caedelli clans.
The transformation of Joseph Colsco to Yozef Kolsko is about to take another step. Unwittingly, the Narthani themselves are creating an opponent unlike any they have ever faced, an enemy beyond their conceptions
Beware of creating your worst enemy.
All Joe Colsco wanted out of life was a reasonably interesting job supporting a quiet, comfortable suburban lifestyle, eventually a small family, and time to pursue hobbies. Instead, a freak accident casts him naked onto a beach of another planet inhabited by humans with technology circa 1700. In time, Joe, now known as Yozef Kolsko, makes the difficult acceptance of a new life, has a respectable position in his new society, and is married with a child on the way. But all is not rosy. He has become embroiled in a struggle beyond any dream he could have had - or any nightmare.
The Narthani are a militant society intent on subjugating the Caedelli, the people he's come to identify with. Despite Yozef's hope to focus his life on transferring scientific knowledge and supporting a quiet life, he finds his life's direction moving beyond his control. As his actions and ideas become more important in resisting the Narthani, he reluctantly finds himself dragged into leadership roles he doesn't believe himself qualified - including efforts to unite the Caedelli clans.
The transformation of Joseph Colsco to Yozef Kolsko is about to take another step. Unwittingly, the Narthani themselves are creating an opponent unlike any they have ever faced, an enemy beyond their conceptions
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Published August 29, 2017
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About the author
Olan Thorensen
16 books522 followersOlan is a long-time science fiction fan who has jumped into independent publication with all its pitfalls and unknowns. He thinks all colors go together: clash, what clash? A fan of Dilbert, Non Sequitur, Peanuts (even if old strips), and still think the end of The Far Side was a tragedy. Loves fireflies, rain, thunderstorms, is eclectic in music (classical, western, oldies, smattering of all other), and thinks four seasons are better than one. Gardens, plays piano poorly, used to jog until broke hip, now walks (to be honest, his jog was about as fast as his quick walk).
A sampling of favorite movies include Avatar, Master and Commander, The Last Mimsy, Six Days and Seven Nights, Aliens, Jumanji, The Big Short, Trading Places, World War Z, and A Miracle on 34th Street (original). If you can figure out a common theme, let Olan know. :>)
Born in Louisiana, but mainly grew up in a less populated part of Northern California. Played football in high school but did minimum studying so as not to interfere with his reading novels. Ironic is that he studiously avoided learning things like details of grammar and good writing. He knows how ironic that is now.
Worked as a forest firefighter several summers. In his youth, served in the US Special Forces (one year in Vietnam; SOG, running recon patrols in Laos and the DMZ). Attended university before and after the Army. Has a Phd in Genetics, with around 200 science publications as author and co-author on genetics, molecular biology, and bioinformatics, and is a Fellow of the American Association for the Advancement of Science (AAAS). Worked with people with all the education and no common sense and knows people with little education and a world of smarts.
Retired now in the Blue Ridge country of Virginia and has time to pursue his avocation of writing books – mainly science fiction plus one police/action/character book writing as Kelsey Robicheaux. Thinks it's totally cool someone can read his stories and enjoy them. Loves hearing from readers from all parts of the US and international (his favorite of the latter was from Nepal).
His web page is olanthorensen.com, which has news updates, an occasion blog posting, and downloadable maps (by clicking on them) to help orient readers to the planet Anyar (highly recommended). He’s on Facebook, which also has maps, reader/listener comments, and his responses. He can be emailed at olanthorensen@gmail.com. He reads all emails, though he may not be able to respond to them all. Readers can request to be on a mailing list for news of releases. Advantages of the mail list also include Christmas short stories, new maps, and a coming novella not otherwise available elsewhere.
A sampling of favorite movies include Avatar, Master and Commander, The Last Mimsy, Six Days and Seven Nights, Aliens, Jumanji, The Big Short, Trading Places, World War Z, and A Miracle on 34th Street (original). If you can figure out a common theme, let Olan know. :>)
Born in Louisiana, but mainly grew up in a less populated part of Northern California. Played football in high school but did minimum studying so as not to interfere with his reading novels. Ironic is that he studiously avoided learning things like details of grammar and good writing. He knows how ironic that is now.
Worked as a forest firefighter several summers. In his youth, served in the US Special Forces (one year in Vietnam; SOG, running recon patrols in Laos and the DMZ). Attended university before and after the Army. Has a Phd in Genetics, with around 200 science publications as author and co-author on genetics, molecular biology, and bioinformatics, and is a Fellow of the American Association for the Advancement of Science (AAAS). Worked with people with all the education and no common sense and knows people with little education and a world of smarts.
Retired now in the Blue Ridge country of Virginia and has time to pursue his avocation of writing books – mainly science fiction plus one police/action/character book writing as Kelsey Robicheaux. Thinks it's totally cool someone can read his stories and enjoy them. Loves hearing from readers from all parts of the US and international (his favorite of the latter was from Nepal).
His web page is olanthorensen.com, which has news updates, an occasion blog posting, and downloadable maps (by clicking on them) to help orient readers to the planet Anyar (highly recommended). He’s on Facebook, which also has maps, reader/listener comments, and his responses. He can be emailed at olanthorensen@gmail.com. He reads all emails, though he may not be able to respond to them all. Readers can request to be on a mailing list for news of releases. Advantages of the mail list also include Christmas short stories, new maps, and a coming novella not otherwise available elsewhere.
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August 16, 2017
A long and tedious read
An interesting concept of putting a modern scientist on a medieval planet where invaders are attempting to take over the island where he's been left. However, in an apparent effort to drag this saga through many books, the author pads the story with vast amounts of trivial detail. Don't bother, unless you like this sort of endless boredom.
This criticism applies to all three books in this unfinished series. Book 3 ends, virtually, in mid-sentence
An interesting concept of putting a modern scientist on a medieval planet where invaders are attempting to take over the island where he's been left. However, in an apparent effort to drag this saga through many books, the author pads the story with vast amounts of trivial detail. Don't bother, unless you like this sort of endless boredom.
This criticism applies to all three books in this unfinished series. Book 3 ends, virtually, in mid-sentence
August 24, 2017
Unfortunately this story has fallen prey to series-itis. Even worse, it has devolved into the super-tech versus implacable-enemy story that you can find all too easily on the SF/Fantasy shelves. Also, the writer's skill has not improved over the course of three volumes. It appears to me that it was originally one big volume that was cut into three (or more) parts. Sadly it doesn't end at three. Remember the days when a good story could be told in one (yes, one) book?
May 27, 2017
Hmmm... this series is starting to overextend already. Interesting promise, too whiny main character.
September 19, 2017
I am really not sure why I kept reading.... large parts of the book is so bad that i cannot believe only one author wrote it... I skipped large parts.
December 17, 2017
Ok, I'm bored now.
Per my book rating rules, I'm forced to give this three stars, though I yearn to give it two.
This series posed an interesting situation to explore - a 20th century smart guy thrust onto another planet that is earth-like, but only developed to the rough 1600s-1700s. The first book was full of interesting explorations about how the guy treads on thin ice to introduce more advanced concepts, but not be deemed a scary guy.
The second book shows him getting comfortable with how to live, but the author starts to make this about a looming battle with other peoples from the planet who want to be bullies & take what his friends have - land, liberty, etc. Skirmishes emerge, and in the process the author starts to show he's fond of being a person who knows the art of armies engaging.
This third book is entirely about the latter; how the good guys are battling the bad guys, and the smart guy teaches the good guys how to build equalizing armaments. But the author is slogging through page after page of stuff about cannons, troop movements & tactics, strategy and troop engagements. We see love and family interests emerge, but frankly they've lost the spark from the first book, and now serve only as motivation for locals to fight the interloper bad guys.
The writing & story has become boring to me. If descriptions of how existential battles are going to be fought by 17th century types lights your jets, keep reading. For me, I'm not moving on to book #4.
Per my book rating rules, I'm forced to give this three stars, though I yearn to give it two.
This series posed an interesting situation to explore - a 20th century smart guy thrust onto another planet that is earth-like, but only developed to the rough 1600s-1700s. The first book was full of interesting explorations about how the guy treads on thin ice to introduce more advanced concepts, but not be deemed a scary guy.
The second book shows him getting comfortable with how to live, but the author starts to make this about a looming battle with other peoples from the planet who want to be bullies & take what his friends have - land, liberty, etc. Skirmishes emerge, and in the process the author starts to show he's fond of being a person who knows the art of armies engaging.
This third book is entirely about the latter; how the good guys are battling the bad guys, and the smart guy teaches the good guys how to build equalizing armaments. But the author is slogging through page after page of stuff about cannons, troop movements & tactics, strategy and troop engagements. We see love and family interests emerge, but frankly they've lost the spark from the first book, and now serve only as motivation for locals to fight the interloper bad guys.
The writing & story has become boring to me. If descriptions of how existential battles are going to be fought by 17th century types lights your jets, keep reading. For me, I'm not moving on to book #4.
September 4, 2017
*Minor Spoilers Ahead*
The biggest issue that I feel is holding this book back from a better score is just how little actually happens. The entire time is basically spent setting up the events of the last 1/5 of the book. The only thing of any significance that happened prior to that point was the move to a new city. The previous books had this structure as well, where not much happens throughout most of the story, but at the end a grand battle takes place. Why it works for the other books is that each one fills in the time before the battle with frequent small changes in Joseph's life that it feels like something is always happening. That just isn't the case for this book, and it shows.
The part of the book where Joseph is debating about moving to the new city. His wife went about convincing people to move to move to the new city as well. She essentially goes about making sure that she has as many of the people and things that he likes about his current residence and convince them to move to the new city. Thus removing some of the biggest reasons for him wanting to stay where he likes to live and move them to the city.
Now, this could be argued that she was just trying to make sure he had as many things as possible in the new city to make sure that he would like it there. It can also be argued that she was just helping him make a decision that everyone knew (including the reader) that he was going to make easier. Both of these arguments are something that I can understand and accept. However, when she fails to discuss this with her husband this causes me to believe it less. There was no "if these things were there would you be more willing to move?" type of discussion had. Not even an explanation of what she did to make it easier for him afterwards. It comes off as her manipulating the situation to get the outcome she wants. Maybe I am being a little naive here, but I feel that marriage is supposed to be a partnership, and her actions in this go against that basic idea.
The biggest issue that I feel is holding this book back from a better score is just how little actually happens. The entire time is basically spent setting up the events of the last 1/5 of the book. The only thing of any significance that happened prior to that point was the move to a new city. The previous books had this structure as well, where not much happens throughout most of the story, but at the end a grand battle takes place. Why it works for the other books is that each one fills in the time before the battle with frequent small changes in Joseph's life that it feels like something is always happening. That just isn't the case for this book, and it shows.
The part of the book where Joseph is debating about moving to the new city. His wife went about convincing people to move to move to the new city as well. She essentially goes about making sure that she has as many of the people and things that he likes about his current residence and convince them to move to the new city. Thus removing some of the biggest reasons for him wanting to stay where he likes to live and move them to the city.
Now, this could be argued that she was just trying to make sure he had as many things as possible in the new city to make sure that he would like it there. It can also be argued that she was just helping him make a decision that everyone knew (including the reader) that he was going to make easier. Both of these arguments are something that I can understand and accept. However, when she fails to discuss this with her husband this causes me to believe it less. There was no "if these things were there would you be more willing to move?" type of discussion had. Not even an explanation of what she did to make it easier for him afterwards. It comes off as her manipulating the situation to get the outcome she wants. Maybe I am being a little naive here, but I feel that marriage is supposed to be a partnership, and her actions in this go against that basic idea.
November 26, 2019
Rating 4.0 stars
This story has turned much more towards the military aspect with all most of Yozef's time spent dealing with the war. Hardly an new inventions are made in this book, except for a couple that again were aimed towards war and the defense. While this isn't my favorite part of the story, I am so hooked with the character and the series it hardly matters. I can easily overlook the implausibility of Yozef knowing so much military history since he never served in the military and was a chemistry grad student. Playing role playing and strategy games as kid doesn't cover how much he knows. There is loss and triumph in this book, and I got choked up a couple of times. This is a very good series so far.
This story has turned much more towards the military aspect with all most of Yozef's time spent dealing with the war. Hardly an new inventions are made in this book, except for a couple that again were aimed towards war and the defense. While this isn't my favorite part of the story, I am so hooked with the character and the series it hardly matters. I can easily overlook the implausibility of Yozef knowing so much military history since he never served in the military and was a chemistry grad student. Playing role playing and strategy games as kid doesn't cover how much he knows. There is loss and triumph in this book, and I got choked up a couple of times. This is a very good series so far.
April 21, 2020
Notes:
I would bet that civilization strategy games were an underlying influence on the series. It's like I'm reading the novelization of one of those games. I dub this one Transition Phase Part 2. There's one more book in this particular arc. I hope most of the key elements will be wrapped up.
I would bet that civilization strategy games were an underlying influence on the series. It's like I'm reading the novelization of one of those games. I dub this one Transition Phase Part 2. There's one more book in this particular arc. I hope most of the key elements will be wrapped up.
December 20, 2020
This book confirms my fears from the previous novels by doubling down on the mundane and tedious aspects (the war and politics that we have seen a billion and one times before in other novels) and starts dropping the fascinating premise of a man from another world trying to make this new world better with his knowledge.
Seeing that knowledge be turned purely for war breaks with the spirit of his character. He is trying to make the world a better place, yet here he turns his attentions purely to ways to kill other people. I get that the situation is forcing him into it, but the recreation of things like Napalm is just recreating some of the worst aspects of our world and goes against his ideal of creating a better world (which is how I read his character to this point at least).
The war continues to be boring, with the vast majority of events surrounding it being exposition heavy and involving characters that I just couldn’t care less about.
I finished this novel and went straight onto goodreads to look ahead to see if this downward trend continues, and after reading the reviews of people I trust, I’ve decided that I’m cutting my losses here. I don’t think this series ever really knew what it had that was good, and has thrown it away without realising it. Looking ahead, I don’t think that’s ever going to be rediscovered.
Such a shame.
Seeing that knowledge be turned purely for war breaks with the spirit of his character. He is trying to make the world a better place, yet here he turns his attentions purely to ways to kill other people. I get that the situation is forcing him into it, but the recreation of things like Napalm is just recreating some of the worst aspects of our world and goes against his ideal of creating a better world (which is how I read his character to this point at least).
The war continues to be boring, with the vast majority of events surrounding it being exposition heavy and involving characters that I just couldn’t care less about.
I finished this novel and went straight onto goodreads to look ahead to see if this downward trend continues, and after reading the reviews of people I trust, I’ve decided that I’m cutting my losses here. I don’t think this series ever really knew what it had that was good, and has thrown it away without realising it. Looking ahead, I don’t think that’s ever going to be rediscovered.
Such a shame.
April 19, 2018
OMG.....this is book three and the main character has become even more whiney. All he does is complain (selfishly) and think. And everyone accepts his childish behavior and listens to him because of his "mysterious" origin.
Come on, at some point the people around Yosef Kolsko would apply some critical thought, and not just take his word for his ideas, and really question his origin, his knowledge base, and the fact that he heals so quickly.
The book is flat out boring, probably due to all the time spent thinking and not really accomplishing anything. Also the tactics are elementary, if the enemy is a professional army they would have seen through Kolsko's tactics and recognized the use of technology a lot quicker than the book leads the reader to believe.
Come on, at some point the people around Yosef Kolsko would apply some critical thought, and not just take his word for his ideas, and really question his origin, his knowledge base, and the fact that he heals so quickly.
The book is flat out boring, probably due to all the time spent thinking and not really accomplishing anything. Also the tactics are elementary, if the enemy is a professional army they would have seen through Kolsko's tactics and recognized the use of technology a lot quicker than the book leads the reader to believe.
May 16, 2024
“Heavier Than a Mountain” by Olan Thorensen, the 3rd installment in the Destiny's Crucible series, is a compelling narrative that seamlessly blends elements of science fiction and historical adventure. Narrated by Jonathan Davis, whose voice brings depth and authenticity to the story, the audiobook spans over 21 hours, immersing listeners in a meticulously crafted world.
The story continues the saga of Joe Colsco, an ordinary man who, after a freak accident, finds himself cast naked onto the shores of an alien planet with human civilization reminiscent of Earth's 1700s. The protagonist, now known as Yozef Kolsko, grapples with the acceptance of his new life, holding a respectable position in society, and the joys and challenges of being married with a child on the way. However, the tranquility of his life is overshadowed by the looming threat of the Narthani, a militant society bent on subjugating the Caedelli, the people Yozef has come to identify with.
Thorensen's narrative is a testament to the human spirit's resilience and adaptability. The protagonist's journey from Joe to Yozef is not just a change of name but a transformation of identity. The audiobook excels in depicting this evolution, as Yozef's actions and ideas become pivotal in resisting the Narthani. His reluctant ascent into leadership roles, including efforts to unite the Caedelli clans, is portrayed with a realism that resonates with the listener.
Jonathan Davis's narration is a highlight of the audiobook. His ability to capture the essence of each character and the nuances of their emotions adds a layer of engagement that is often missing in written text. The pacing of his narration matches the unfolding drama, with moments of tension and release that keep the listener hooked.
The world-building in “Heavier Than a Mountain” is intricate and believable. Thorensen's attention to detail in creating the societal norms, technological limitations, and cultural practices of the alien world is commendable. The clash of civilizations theme is explored with depth, as Yozef introduces scientific knowledge from Earth, challenging the status quo and altering the course of history on the planet.
The audiobook also delves into the philosophical, posing questions about destiny, the ethics of intervention, and the consequences of technological advancement in a society unprepared for it. These themes are woven into the narrative without becoming preachy, encouraging the listener to ponder long after the audiobook has ended.
In conclusion, “Heavier Than a Mountain” is a triumph in the science fiction and fantasy genres. It is a story of survival, ingenuity, and the unyielding human desire to seek a better life, even in the most alien of circumstances. Olan Thorensen's writing, combined with Jonathan Davis's narration, creates an audiobook experience that is both thought-provoking and thoroughly entertaining. For those who enjoy rich storytelling and complex characters, this audiobook is a must-listen.
The story continues the saga of Joe Colsco, an ordinary man who, after a freak accident, finds himself cast naked onto the shores of an alien planet with human civilization reminiscent of Earth's 1700s. The protagonist, now known as Yozef Kolsko, grapples with the acceptance of his new life, holding a respectable position in society, and the joys and challenges of being married with a child on the way. However, the tranquility of his life is overshadowed by the looming threat of the Narthani, a militant society bent on subjugating the Caedelli, the people Yozef has come to identify with.
Thorensen's narrative is a testament to the human spirit's resilience and adaptability. The protagonist's journey from Joe to Yozef is not just a change of name but a transformation of identity. The audiobook excels in depicting this evolution, as Yozef's actions and ideas become pivotal in resisting the Narthani. His reluctant ascent into leadership roles, including efforts to unite the Caedelli clans, is portrayed with a realism that resonates with the listener.
Jonathan Davis's narration is a highlight of the audiobook. His ability to capture the essence of each character and the nuances of their emotions adds a layer of engagement that is often missing in written text. The pacing of his narration matches the unfolding drama, with moments of tension and release that keep the listener hooked.
The world-building in “Heavier Than a Mountain” is intricate and believable. Thorensen's attention to detail in creating the societal norms, technological limitations, and cultural practices of the alien world is commendable. The clash of civilizations theme is explored with depth, as Yozef introduces scientific knowledge from Earth, challenging the status quo and altering the course of history on the planet.
The audiobook also delves into the philosophical, posing questions about destiny, the ethics of intervention, and the consequences of technological advancement in a society unprepared for it. These themes are woven into the narrative without becoming preachy, encouraging the listener to ponder long after the audiobook has ended.
In conclusion, “Heavier Than a Mountain” is a triumph in the science fiction and fantasy genres. It is a story of survival, ingenuity, and the unyielding human desire to seek a better life, even in the most alien of circumstances. Olan Thorensen's writing, combined with Jonathan Davis's narration, creates an audiobook experience that is both thought-provoking and thoroughly entertaining. For those who enjoy rich storytelling and complex characters, this audiobook is a must-listen.
October 5, 2017
This is the third book in the chronicles of Joe Colsco, the sole human survivor of a crash between a commercial jet and an alien spacecraft. Joe is healed and awakened by an AI who tells him that he has a choice. Since he knows that aliens are watching earth with invisible spacecraft he can't return home. He can either opt to be painlessly eliminated or be placed on another world that had been seeded with humans by some unknown race. Joe chooses the planet. The previous two books were Cast Under an Alien Sun and The Pen and the Sword.
In other reviews I've compared the series to A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court, by Mark Twain. An intelligent modern human (an engineer in Twain, a chemist in Thorensen) is dropped into a less advanced culture. That theme continues in book three. From the start Joe, known to the locals as Yosef Kolsko, has been a creator and entrepreneur. When a race known as the Narthani begin to raid various territories Yosef also begins inventing war strategies and technology to defend the people he befriended.
In this volume there are three new twists that may impact how the series continues. At the very start of the book one of the artificial intelligences that monitor the planet notes that there has been an increase of war activity on the planet. It doubts this could be the fault of the introduction of one new human. Still, it has decided this needs to be passed up the chain of command for consideration.
Another twist is that Yosef was placed on the planet with some enhancements. These were, in part, to help him deal with a change in gravity, but he was also given nanobots in his bloodstream to speed healing and an eidetic memory for some books that he read on earth. The locals are now beginning to wonder if he is somehow connected to the divine as a messenger. Yosef, not to his credit, exploits that growing rumor to get his way in important decisions.
Third, Yosef learns about smooth and indestructible egg-like stones that are found around the planet. He begins to suspect that these were placed on the planet by the ancient unknown race who seeded life on the planet.
To fight the Narthani, Yosef continues to introduce new military technology. This includes perfecting 6 and 12 pound cannons along with some shudder-worthy arms like landmines and napalm.
Part of the continuing charm of the books are Yosef's relationships with various natives of the planet. He is now married with children and has built close friendships with people at all levels of the society. In this volume some of that gets set aside for some longer segments on how the new technology is being created. It distracts from the heart of the book. Then again it's something of a throwback to Golden Age sci-fi in which a lot of literary quality was sacrificed for interesting science. Thorensen is generally a more astute writer than that, but here he does take some tedious side roads.
There are still threats and dangers ahead, though some issues get solved here. Enough unanswered questions remain for at least one or two more books.
In other reviews I've compared the series to A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court, by Mark Twain. An intelligent modern human (an engineer in Twain, a chemist in Thorensen) is dropped into a less advanced culture. That theme continues in book three. From the start Joe, known to the locals as Yosef Kolsko, has been a creator and entrepreneur. When a race known as the Narthani begin to raid various territories Yosef also begins inventing war strategies and technology to defend the people he befriended.
In this volume there are three new twists that may impact how the series continues. At the very start of the book one of the artificial intelligences that monitor the planet notes that there has been an increase of war activity on the planet. It doubts this could be the fault of the introduction of one new human. Still, it has decided this needs to be passed up the chain of command for consideration.
Another twist is that Yosef was placed on the planet with some enhancements. These were, in part, to help him deal with a change in gravity, but he was also given nanobots in his bloodstream to speed healing and an eidetic memory for some books that he read on earth. The locals are now beginning to wonder if he is somehow connected to the divine as a messenger. Yosef, not to his credit, exploits that growing rumor to get his way in important decisions.
Third, Yosef learns about smooth and indestructible egg-like stones that are found around the planet. He begins to suspect that these were placed on the planet by the ancient unknown race who seeded life on the planet.
To fight the Narthani, Yosef continues to introduce new military technology. This includes perfecting 6 and 12 pound cannons along with some shudder-worthy arms like landmines and napalm.
Part of the continuing charm of the books are Yosef's relationships with various natives of the planet. He is now married with children and has built close friendships with people at all levels of the society. In this volume some of that gets set aside for some longer segments on how the new technology is being created. It distracts from the heart of the book. Then again it's something of a throwback to Golden Age sci-fi in which a lot of literary quality was sacrificed for interesting science. Thorensen is generally a more astute writer than that, but here he does take some tedious side roads.
There are still threats and dangers ahead, though some issues get solved here. Enough unanswered questions remain for at least one or two more books.
January 23, 2017
Gets better and better
This is the third in the series, I had the first one on my kindle for at least a month before finally reading it. Read the next two installments over the next couple of days. Not action packed, but very thought provoking. The most enthralling part for me at least is the the story keeps expanding, actions have consequences and more the main character involves himself the more he is drawn into different and unexpected scenarios. The world is getting bigger with new and exciting storylines opening up. Can't wait for the next one.
This is the third in the series, I had the first one on my kindle for at least a month before finally reading it. Read the next two installments over the next couple of days. Not action packed, but very thought provoking. The most enthralling part for me at least is the the story keeps expanding, actions have consequences and more the main character involves himself the more he is drawn into different and unexpected scenarios. The world is getting bigger with new and exciting storylines opening up. Can't wait for the next one.
November 14, 2017
Series slowing down
I really liked the start of the series, despite the large time gap between books… But this last book was definitely painful… It was like three chapters dragged into a book… Not sure how many books the author plans to write but at this slow pace of plot development it could go on forever
I really liked the start of the series, despite the large time gap between books… But this last book was definitely painful… It was like three chapters dragged into a book… Not sure how many books the author plans to write but at this slow pace of plot development it could go on forever
October 10, 2017
I was more than abbot disappointed in this one. I liked the others in the series but this one seemed to drag on and on. The story just kinda meandered about taking up space and time until the end. Then near the end there is a pick up in excitement that ultimately just fizzles out.
December 16, 2019
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February 26, 2020
It was only the sunk cost fallacy that kept me reading this book.
September 27, 2021
Rating: 0.8/5
Review: This series was gradually getting better. There are still remnants of backstory dialogue between characters that know each other that is reminiscent of a beginning writer, yet it was scant and barely detracted from the whole. Still with us is the grammatical and spelling errors that need correction after 6 years in print.
The story line fell dismal for most of the novel as it revolved around Maera, a new house and fukin’ babies. I mean who gives a fuk?. Is this supposed to build depth for a shallow character? Well sadly it did not and we are forced to read pure drivel for much of the novel. The setup for her husband Joe to bang her best friend Anya, at the beginning of this series, is now in play…..with her blessing of course. In short order Joe will have two wives that are the fairest in all the land.
Joe and Carnigan are growing in characterization while Maera is still a static control freak. Anya was forceful all through her escape and subsequent rescue but now behaves like a timid dormouse. This author changes a characters personality just as suddenly so as to fit the developing story line.
Very little time is spent on the mounting war where the buildup of tactics and strategy were a testament to the novels premise. These were compelling and informative interludes that again, were lacking where the waves of Maera splashed.
It is too bad that this author lacks discretion where story line plots are concerned. Nothing is a surprise as the setups are obvious and poorly concealed. The idea that Joe will get another wife is just a guess and will remain so, as I am done with all knowing Mostly Good YA’s and one dimensional female characters.
Review: This series was gradually getting better. There are still remnants of backstory dialogue between characters that know each other that is reminiscent of a beginning writer, yet it was scant and barely detracted from the whole. Still with us is the grammatical and spelling errors that need correction after 6 years in print.
The story line fell dismal for most of the novel as it revolved around Maera, a new house and fukin’ babies. I mean who gives a fuk?. Is this supposed to build depth for a shallow character? Well sadly it did not and we are forced to read pure drivel for much of the novel. The setup for her husband Joe to bang her best friend Anya, at the beginning of this series, is now in play…..with her blessing of course. In short order Joe will have two wives that are the fairest in all the land.
Joe and Carnigan are growing in characterization while Maera is still a static control freak. Anya was forceful all through her escape and subsequent rescue but now behaves like a timid dormouse. This author changes a characters personality just as suddenly so as to fit the developing story line.
Very little time is spent on the mounting war where the buildup of tactics and strategy were a testament to the novels premise. These were compelling and informative interludes that again, were lacking where the waves of Maera splashed.
It is too bad that this author lacks discretion where story line plots are concerned. Nothing is a surprise as the setups are obvious and poorly concealed. The idea that Joe will get another wife is just a guess and will remain so, as I am done with all knowing Mostly Good YA’s and one dimensional female characters.
September 10, 2017
Still no ending! (sigh)
I've been enjoying this series, but I thought it was a trilogy! I wouldn't have started it otherwise. There appears to be no time estimate for book 4, so I'll probably have forgotten the story line when, or if, it's finally published. I sure hope the author has the sense to wind everything up in book 4. Judging by some of the other comments here, he's already crossed the line where he's losing readers. I've gone from being impressed with his world building, to getting pissed off with him milking this story. I may read some of his future works it they're free-standing, but I won't trust him with a series.
I've been enjoying this series, but I thought it was a trilogy! I wouldn't have started it otherwise. There appears to be no time estimate for book 4, so I'll probably have forgotten the story line when, or if, it's finally published. I sure hope the author has the sense to wind everything up in book 4. Judging by some of the other comments here, he's already crossed the line where he's losing readers. I've gone from being impressed with his world building, to getting pissed off with him milking this story. I may read some of his future works it they're free-standing, but I won't trust him with a series.
March 6, 2018
Third book in the series as our hero Josef becomes more settled into married life and fatherhood, as the enemy now gets closer to what he has grown to love.
Thus book I believe becomes the setup for book four, I assume the conclusion of the series.
Thus book I believe becomes the setup for book four, I assume the conclusion of the series.
January 27, 2017
Well worth the lost sleep and midnight oil! I couldn't put it down.
When last we saw our hero, Yozef Kolsko, in The Pen and the Sword (Destiny’s Crucible, Book 2) he had returned home slightly injured from the major battle of Moreland fought between the Narthani aggressors and the Caedellian defenders; a battle victory claimed by the Caedellian clansmen, but with both sides understanding that a strategic retreat from a losing battle is not an ultimate victory. Now, the Nathani forces will seek to keep the Caedellian forces off balance with strategic attacks while the Caedellian forces strive to build their fighting forces and keep the Nathani guessing as to their real military capabilities. The stakes are rising as Maera gives birth and as the Narthani plot strategic treachery; but are the stakes high enough for the separate clans to overcome their independence and mutual animosity and work together to prevent their defeat by the Narthani?
Heavier than a Mountain is a serious read for anyone who is invested the Destiny’s Crucible series and is cheering for Yozef Kolsko and the Caedellians in the face of an overwhelming enemy. It is well worth the loss of sleep and the midnight oil to see what will happen next. As with the preceding two books, the main characters continue to be developed into lifelike images with human emotions and fears. New characters emerge, both good-buys and bad. In any event, a satisfying story of nail-biting entertainment.
Any lover of action adventures, war drama, political intrigue, or science fiction should do themselves a favor and check out the Destiny’s Crucible Series, beginning with Cast Under an Alien Sun, The Pen and the Sword…and now, Heavier Than a Mountain
When last we saw our hero, Yozef Kolsko, in The Pen and the Sword (Destiny’s Crucible, Book 2) he had returned home slightly injured from the major battle of Moreland fought between the Narthani aggressors and the Caedellian defenders; a battle victory claimed by the Caedellian clansmen, but with both sides understanding that a strategic retreat from a losing battle is not an ultimate victory. Now, the Nathani forces will seek to keep the Caedellian forces off balance with strategic attacks while the Caedellian forces strive to build their fighting forces and keep the Nathani guessing as to their real military capabilities. The stakes are rising as Maera gives birth and as the Narthani plot strategic treachery; but are the stakes high enough for the separate clans to overcome their independence and mutual animosity and work together to prevent their defeat by the Narthani?
Heavier than a Mountain is a serious read for anyone who is invested the Destiny’s Crucible series and is cheering for Yozef Kolsko and the Caedellians in the face of an overwhelming enemy. It is well worth the loss of sleep and the midnight oil to see what will happen next. As with the preceding two books, the main characters continue to be developed into lifelike images with human emotions and fears. New characters emerge, both good-buys and bad. In any event, a satisfying story of nail-biting entertainment.
Any lover of action adventures, war drama, political intrigue, or science fiction should do themselves a favor and check out the Destiny’s Crucible Series, beginning with Cast Under an Alien Sun, The Pen and the Sword…and now, Heavier Than a Mountain
October 7, 2021
Would have been a solid 3.5
Obviously if I’ve gotten this far, I must have been enjoying this series. Gave book one and book two a 4. BUT, I went from “oh cool to oh crud.” There are a couple plot devices that I absolutely abhor. The author pulled one out and I hate, Hate, HATE it. I would have overlooked some of the other weaknesses (dithering going on and on). However, my investment in the series was not rewarded. I tried to slog through but my immersion in the story was gone. In fact, the more I tried to read, the madder I became. There are so many other avenues the author could have used to solve the “problem”. How about: take the kid to work? That would have been a feminine revolution. How about a nanny? How about the family - mom and sisters? What he did? No. No good reason for it. My respect and identification with the characters fell off a cliff. I felt my time, which I cannot retrieve, was disrespected. TERRIBLY DISAPPOINTED.
Obviously if I’ve gotten this far, I must have been enjoying this series. Gave book one and book two a 4. BUT, I went from “oh cool to oh crud.” There are a couple plot devices that I absolutely abhor. The author pulled one out and I hate, Hate, HATE it. I would have overlooked some of the other weaknesses (dithering going on and on). However, my investment in the series was not rewarded. I tried to slog through but my immersion in the story was gone. In fact, the more I tried to read, the madder I became. There are so many other avenues the author could have used to solve the “problem”. How about: take the kid to work? That would have been a feminine revolution. How about a nanny? How about the family - mom and sisters? What he did? No. No good reason for it. My respect and identification with the characters fell off a cliff. I felt my time, which I cannot retrieve, was disrespected. TERRIBLY DISAPPOINTED.
December 2, 2018
While the story continues to be engaging, the author took some liberties with the timeline that really threw me for a loop. I can see where they came together by about 3/4s of the way through it.
While effective for what the author was trying to do, stylistically and prosaically it didn't work as intended and I there were large chunks of the middle part that I kept thinking "I have already read this, no?"
Nonetheless, the last quarter of the book does what the author does really well and that hooks you into a climatic ending that delivers on everything you want, leading you right to the next one.
While effective for what the author was trying to do, stylistically and prosaically it didn't work as intended and I there were large chunks of the middle part that I kept thinking "I have already read this, no?"
Nonetheless, the last quarter of the book does what the author does really well and that hooks you into a climatic ending that delivers on everything you want, leading you right to the next one.
September 11, 2017
I still like this series. It's a fun thought experiment. I do think that this book was not as strong as some of the earlier ones and the story telling jumped around a little more than I'd prefer. It made keeping track of the order of events more challenging.
January 23, 2017
More!
How long till book 4?
If that doesn't tell you what I think of book 3 nothing will.
The story keeps getting better and better.
How long till book 4?
If that doesn't tell you what I think of book 3 nothing will.
The story keeps getting better and better.
January 31, 2017
Clear your schedule for the day
The story was good. Once I started reading I had to continue until l finished. I can't wait for the next book.
The story was good. Once I started reading I had to continue until l finished. I can't wait for the next book.
September 4, 2017
3.5 Stars
May 15, 2018
3.5/5 stars
May 16, 2022
Series in Progress
The Destiny's Crucible series has a main character who is saved from a plane crash by an advanced race of aliens, and cast onto an alien planet where the inhabitants are a number of tech levels behind Earth, as in 'lost in the middle ages.' This series reminds me a bit of a survival adventure I read a few years back called, Island of the Lost: Shipwrecked at the Edge of the World, by Joan Druett. In that book, a few men survive shipwreck on the south end of Faulkland Island, simply by applying their existing knowledge to the new wilderness around them, making their own forge, soap, and everything needed to eventually escape to safety. But, more specifically, this book has a bit in common with the classic, A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court, where the Yankee goes back in time.
But, back to the work at hand, this book, Heavier Than a Mountain, is third in a series that already contains seven books. I am still enjoying reading at this point. To give a fair appraisal of the work, if the author had wanted to go for a book that explored the deep science-fictional questions of his topic, this series could possibly condense the first four books into two books. The great ideas are there. These salient points, are interwoven into the larger conflict between the protagonist's newfound home and an invading empire. And, while stretched out a bit, is not so thin as to lose the reader's interest yet. Also, the plot does not seem to have reached a clear end. So, I anticipate being patient with seeing how this resolves in book four of the series.
From looking ahead, book five is a series of short stories set in the same universe. And, book six seems to take up a different thread with a new protagonist. So, overall I feel like the author is giving the series a bit of justice. I've enjoyed this in the Kindle/ Audible editions, narrated by the same narrator as in the previous two installments. Jonathan Davis was already one of my favorite narrators before this series, and he does a great job here as well. I recommend this for anyone who enjoys sci-fi and adventure stories.
The Destiny's Crucible series has a main character who is saved from a plane crash by an advanced race of aliens, and cast onto an alien planet where the inhabitants are a number of tech levels behind Earth, as in 'lost in the middle ages.' This series reminds me a bit of a survival adventure I read a few years back called, Island of the Lost: Shipwrecked at the Edge of the World, by Joan Druett. In that book, a few men survive shipwreck on the south end of Faulkland Island, simply by applying their existing knowledge to the new wilderness around them, making their own forge, soap, and everything needed to eventually escape to safety. But, more specifically, this book has a bit in common with the classic, A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court, where the Yankee goes back in time.
But, back to the work at hand, this book, Heavier Than a Mountain, is third in a series that already contains seven books. I am still enjoying reading at this point. To give a fair appraisal of the work, if the author had wanted to go for a book that explored the deep science-fictional questions of his topic, this series could possibly condense the first four books into two books. The great ideas are there. These salient points, are interwoven into the larger conflict between the protagonist's newfound home and an invading empire. And, while stretched out a bit, is not so thin as to lose the reader's interest yet. Also, the plot does not seem to have reached a clear end. So, I anticipate being patient with seeing how this resolves in book four of the series.
From looking ahead, book five is a series of short stories set in the same universe. And, book six seems to take up a different thread with a new protagonist. So, overall I feel like the author is giving the series a bit of justice. I've enjoyed this in the Kindle/ Audible editions, narrated by the same narrator as in the previous two installments. Jonathan Davis was already one of my favorite narrators before this series, and he does a great job here as well. I recommend this for anyone who enjoys sci-fi and adventure stories.
April 14, 2018
Read the whole series one after another. If you like books like A Connecticut Yankee in King Author's Court, or Robinson Crusoe, etc. And you don't mind a great deal of exposition, then I recommend these books.
There are tangents of the nature of "then I did this and so that I could reinvent this" and "I only had a vague notion so I suggested what I knew and then magically the craftsmen of the era figured it out" which happen enough to be annoying.
And there's a bit of older generation language around sex and gender rolls. Which isn't annoying to me because we are talking about what amounts to an earlier time. This lessens as the series progresses. But be warned.
What really made me happy is that the author knew a bit about tactics and strategy and wrote much of the 'warfare' parts with actual tactics and strategy. Something many much better known authors are terrible at.
same review for all the books. The last book could have been shortened. The POVs could have been cut down (we didn't need the POV of the third nation at all). Need better maps. because war nerds want battlefield maps on your website!
There are tangents of the nature of "then I did this and so that I could reinvent this" and "I only had a vague notion so I suggested what I knew and then magically the craftsmen of the era figured it out" which happen enough to be annoying.
And there's a bit of older generation language around sex and gender rolls. Which isn't annoying to me because we are talking about what amounts to an earlier time. This lessens as the series progresses. But be warned.
What really made me happy is that the author knew a bit about tactics and strategy and wrote much of the 'warfare' parts with actual tactics and strategy. Something many much better known authors are terrible at.
same review for all the books. The last book could have been shortened. The POVs could have been cut down (we didn't need the POV of the third nation at all). Need better maps. because war nerds want battlefield maps on your website!
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