Cute
Cute story. Quick read, before I knew it was more than halfway through the book.
Really like the characters, esp the royal siblings. Can't wait to read more about them.
In some ways, Carrie seemed a bit unreal/perfect. Rarely losing temper, getting mad or frustrated. She was also very quick to forgive or help.
A few things didn't add up to me in the fic, why Edward lead the press down the secret passages, revealing such passages and why he and Carrie jumped into bed when they knew the press was right behind them. I understand trying to cover for his bro, but if I was the press pursuing them it would've made me suspicious that they stopped and planted themselves where they could be discovered (esp in such an obvious way), rather than getting 'caught' in a more subtle way.
Also, if Carrie knew someone was interested in her shop & she needed money, why bother going through a realtor that would take a portion of that money?
Those were the main things, but I understand some of it was plot driven. Still, an enjoyable story w/o interesting and unusual characters, again, the royal subs especially.