This was, well, it was okay. The biggest problem is that I just didn't buy these protagonists at their stated age. And since they say it over and over again, I had to ramp up the editor in my head to catch and flag those so I could mentally subtract eight years or so for anything at all to work. They're both early-ish in their careers, having taken risks that are just paying off after a couple of years of hard work. They haven't gotten over the breakup when they were young (so they claim, later in the story, that they've always been in love and never were out of it). If you stretch all of that out to mean seventeen years since they broke up and it's just too danged long.
Look, if you haven't moved on, in your heart, after seventeen years apart from someone and literally never seeing or hearing from or about them in all that time, you are damaged goods and an emotionally stunted goblin. Stop trying to sell this as romantic or treating it like it's a thing. Someone that stunted isn't ready for a relationship, however much they think they want one.
So yeah, they're mid to late twenties. At best. Because anything beyond that doesn't work. Everything else slots in very nicely once you make that adjustment to this story, though. That's enough time that someone would know better the mistakes they made "back then" and to have thought through what they'd do better and how they'd make up for it.
Well, okay, it's still a little glossy around the edges. The career thing is a little fuzzy for both of them. Harriet does something businessy for artists. Sally does something artsy for businesses. There's lots of detail, but it didn't feel substantial. And don't get me started on the pastiche that is Aunt Paula. Oh, she's cool and all. Kinda. wonderfully over the top. But I can't help feeling like she's just the McGuffin to catalyze the plot with money like a lesbian godmother come to create artist collectives and low-rent apartments from Whole Foods crates and kombucha rinds (wait, is kombucha a fruit? I have no hipster-cred so it's okay to admit that I have no idea what it is, right?).
Anyway. I liked the story well-enough. The leads were engaging once I got used to mentally adjusting things. And as long as I didn't think about how they were all hormones and chemistry and not actually doing anything to connect in a lasting way or anything. Sigh. Fine. I just want to give it three stars because I don't feel like I wasted my time or money and left it feeling entertained. Even though I can't think of any way to justify that in a review that makes sense. So take that as you will. I liked it. I can't articulate why.
A note about Steamy: There were three explicit sex scenes, I think. Including one in the past. So it's about the middle of my steam tolerance, though the last chronologically was completely gratuitous (and a missed opportunity as it would have been great to see them truly connect on an intimate level and it was just more of the same, really).