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384 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 11, 2017
Great premise, lukewarm execution![]()
To keep my review succinct, I will focus on the two things that stood out to me the most: The characters and the science.
“You’re afraid that if the bots get creativity…”
“They’ll become super intelligent, way surpassing humans!”
The author did a great job humanizing the little companion bot and ever scene I saw her in just made my heart happy. I actually liked her more than the main characters!
“I would die for you, Rebecca.” My heart swelled, but then she added, “That is the extreme of what I am programmed for.”
Rebecca just absolutely excels at every single aspect of her life - she's amazing at theater, has a promising creative writing career and manages to work science projects detailed enough for several PhD's all while balancing her undergrad courses.
"I gasped out the last few notes of my big solo, belting my heart out, my arms stretched up to either side of the stage. I could feel my voice hit the back wall, and I knew I sounded breathtaking."
When you have a direct line to the net in your brain...how do you come up with a good ol' chicken boil for the hot-totally-not-a-date? How is boiling the chicken even an instinct??
“You’re going to boil the chicken?” he asked at last, watching me prep.
“Yes.”
I am not denying that undergrads can (and do!) absolutely amazing things in labs...but they are undergrads.
"My thesis is on the possible neuropeptide of human desire."
Now, if you've managed to read the entire word-vomit experiment, you'll notice how...incredibly vague both her premise and her experiment seemed.
"I… was thinking we’d recruit people who had been through five or more years of therapy,” I whispered back, “so that they could succinctly identify their core motivations—that would be analogous to the core purpose of the bots—and also their deepest unmet desires. Then we’d design Artificial Experience scenarios in which their desires could come true, but only if they violate their core motivations."
To put this into context, for a neuro student not to know what ATP is (DESPITE RUNNING COMPLEX BRAIN EXPERIMENTS!!) is the equivalent to an artist asking "Sooo....what's acrylic again?" or for a carpenter to say, "Whew. Never heard of a hammer before."
“Some decades ago, there was a theory that a weak acid like hydrochloric might be able to artificially produce ATP…”
I shook my head. “What’s ATP?”