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What a disappointing finale, it was so generic what with Penryn's constant swooning and angsting over Raffe whilst her sister and the world were imploding around her, her nauseating romance with Raffe was all that mattered to her. I really thought this series would stand out from the rest of the YA crap - even though World After was rubbish, Angelfall had a lot going for it and I was expecting the same from this. Unfortunately, when it came to down to it, End of Days was another YA series in which the focus was mainly on the lame romance.
-The story was somehow both a mess and annoyingly straightforward: Penryn and Raffe drifted here and there, they tried to find a way to beat Uriel and stop his fake apocalypse and bid for power, there was some fighting and weird creatures, and then an anti-climactic showdown, and that was pretty much it.
I couldn't fully immerse into the story as the motivations/reasons behind what Uriel was doing felt weak and unclear. Then there were the masses of angels who acted like brain dead sheep, what with them orchestrating an apocalypse and almost wiping out the human race without actually being 100% certain that that was what they were meant to do. Their leader (Gabriel) was suspiciously killed and then power-hungry-politician Uriel started to take over and call all the shots, yet none of the angels were suspicious about Uriel's sudden take over and quest for Gabriel's job/power. Why did they not question his motives? Why didn't they investigate Gabriel's convenient death? Why were they such sheep? Why was there no dissent when it came to killing off all the humans? Ugh, it was all so nonsensical
-I was so bored of Penryn's mundane thoughts, her monologuing about how sad her life was and how Raffe wouldn't fuck her was boring to read. She didn't have one original or genuinely selfless thought. I can't believe I used to actually like Penryn, in this she was nothing but a desperate-pervy-loser who cared more about herself and the guy she'd known for a few months than her traumatised sister and the rest of humanity.
-I couldn't stand Penryn's non-stop fangirling of Raffe, every other sentence she was banging on about how sexy he looked or how he made her girly parts tingle. Raffe was all that mattered to her. Never mind, her brutally tortured 7 year old sister who was slowly starving to death or the war and apocalypse around her, the only things on her mind were Raffe's sexy abs and hot wings.
-What the hell happened to Penryn?! She was a normal enough character in the first book but she turned into a rapey, desperate, ugly fucker in this. She practically molested Raffe in the first few chapters, the mad cow maneuvered him in his sleep so he'd be touching her nipples. What the fuck?! UGH, UGH, UGH. I HATED HER. ALL RESPECT LOST.
-Penryn really didn't understand the word 'no'. She kept pawing at Raffe and slobbering all over him even when he repeatedly told her to back the fuck off. She was a desperate, disgusting grade A pervert.
-Penryn used to be somewhat smart, but she lost all her intelligence when she fell for Raffe. She let herself be manipulated and used for the most pathetic of reasons. She was seriously TSTL with Beliel, she knew he was manipulative but she still let herself be tricked by him, all so she could spy on more of Raffe's memories. The silly cow's actions probably resulted in the deaths of dozens of humans, those hellions she released must have killed a few people when they escaped, but that thought never crossed her thick, selfish mind.
-I had to laugh at Raffe finally giving in to Penryn's desperation and hornyness, the poor guy seemed defeated by the whole thing and no doubt gave in because he didn't know what else to do. Raffe/Penryn's relationship was so one sided, by the end it really did feel like Raffe was only with Penryn because he felt obliged to be with her. There was very little emotion and affection on his side, he just halfheartedly decided to get with her because he was vulnerable and lost and had no idea what else to do.
-Why was Paige the chosen one when it came to the locusts? How could she control them? Where did that power and ability to come from? Did Doc engineer it that way? If so, how? And why Paige?
-Layla's off-page turn around was awfully convenient. One minute she was evil and happily experimenting on humans, the next she was little miss helpful. Naturally, her turn around just so happened to coincide with Raffe and Penryn needing assistance with their unique medical issues.
-How did Penryn's mum manage to survive? Surely her insanity would make it difficult for her to successfully navigate herself in a post apocalyptic world? How did she manage to turn into such an ace strategist and a military mastermind??
-Raffe's sword suddenly having the ability to transport his super-warriors to the present day was a total deus ex machina. There was never any hint that the sword could do that, it only ever showed memories, but out of nowhere it was able to transport people through time and space. It was unbelievably contrived.
-Why would an eons old archangel who has seen and experienced so much be remotely interested in an insufferable teenage girl? What did he see in Penryn? I know she was meant to be brave and selfless (even though she was actually nothing like that), but would that seriously make an old, powerful angel feel all mushy and lovey-dovey for her? He must have met loads of women who were far more braver and more brilliant than her yet for some unknown reason Penryn was the one he halfheartedly fell for. Ridiculous.
-Who the hell were the angels? Were they just another race from a different world or were they actually real angels? If they were real angels then wouldn't they have been in heaven or close to god or something? Wouldn't they be religious? Wouldn't most of them be inherently good or at least fair? How did they even get to Earth from their world? If they were really angels wouldn't they have been punished for killing innocents and having a hand in causing an apocalypse? When the angels were living in their own world what were they doing? What sort of lives they did live? Did they have cities and jobs and families? Were they able to have kids with other angels? If they were all born/made warriors then who were they fighting in all those eons they were away from Earth? Were they just training all that time?
-So Gabriel was lying about everything? It wasn't very clear but it was kind of suggested that he wasn't actually a messenger of god and that angels in general weren't god's army, that they were just another species from a different world. It was frustrating that there was little clarity on Gabriel and the angels and the world they came from. Why did Gabriel lie about nephilim being monsters? Was he a purist or something or did he hate humans and want no interbreeding? Also, the angels who did break the law about sexing humans didn't even end up in hell, they were just sent to another world where they were tortured. Did Gabriel lie for the power or control or something? There weren't any satisfying reasons to all of Gabriel's rules and lies when it was the cause of pretty much all the bad that had happened in the world.
I needed more information about the origins and driving force behind all that had happened.
-Why did the angels (except for a select few) have no personalities? Why did some of them have empathy and compassion and the rest didn't? Why did they only want to fight and kill? Why were they so eager to kill humans? I know they thought it was their duty, but why were there so gleeful about killing off a whole species? Was I just meant to believe they were warriors who loved war because that's just how they were? Was I supposed to just accept that the majority of them were evil yet a handful were able to show compassion and remorse?
-Where were all the female characters? Apart from Penryn's mum and sister, there were no other significant female characters. Was the author afraid to add a female character who wasn't related to Paige and who could also hold her own? Penryn was yet again the only girl allowed to hang out with the guys. The author managed to introduce loads of male characters, but she seemed to have trouble bringing in females who had speaking roles and who were in the thick of all the decisions and actions.
-Why were the 'Daughters of Men' such a temptation when there were female angels who must have been far more superior? Angels were perfect in every way so why would they want human women when they could have their own far superior women? Did angels even have sex and procreate? Because there were no parents or siblings between the angels, they were all unrelated. What was angel society and structure and family like?!
-Where were all the female angels? There was only Laylah and she was a duplicitous-opportunistic-nutbag who didn't even appear on page. Where were the rest of them? If the angel race were meant to be warriors, why wouldn't the female angels be in the thick of the action as well? Were they just at home in their own world making sandwiches in the kitchen despite being part of a fearsome warrior race and being old enough to hold their own? As if.
-Didn't like Dee or Dum in this, their dialogue was trying too hard to be funny, their snarky comments and interactions with Penryn and each other were so forced.
-Why did the Watchers talk like modern teenagers? They were super old and lived in the olden days and hadn't even experienced modern times. So why didn't they talk how people used to talk centuries/millenia ago?
-What was with Penryn's vault in which she stuffed all of her thoughts?! Every time it was mentioned I felt like punching her, it was so irritating to read.
-How convenient that two major plot points were sorted out off page, Leylah fixing Raffe's wings and then fixing Paige's whatever the hell was wrong with her. It was irritating that the problems Paige/Raffe faced for two books were quickly dealt with and glossed over in a brief sentence or two.
-A talent show? Really? An apocalypse was going on and Penryn and co decided it was good idea to host a talent show minutes before their final showdown. I know it was meant to be a showcase of humanity and all that rubbish, but it just came across as silly and cringey.
-The only characters I felt connected to were Belial and Paige, everyone else were either soulless, unrealistic, insufferable, or a caricature. I didn't think I'd end up rooting for for Belial when he was such a heartless-murdering-psychopath, but getting some insight into his history made me rather like him. I didn't blame him for becoming twisted and hateful when he lost everything and was abandoned and betrayed by his so called brothers. Yes, I know he would have done the same thing if one of his brothers had been the gateway, but that didn't make what happened to him any less fucked up and wrong.
Poor Paige, hated by everyone for something she had no control over. It was only her mum who supported her and loved her unconditionally. Penryn was still an utter bitch to her, there were never any moments (like in book 1) where Penryn's love for her shone through. Nope, Penryn only cared about her precious Raffe. She should have focused on her sister and helped her through all the trauma she'd been through, but apparently ogling Raffe was more important to her. Bitch.
-I hated Raffe/Penryn getting together at the end, it was so predictable and cheesy. Why can't one YA series finish with the teenage heroine being single and ready to date around? Why did she have to be practically married by the end? Also, how the hell will Raffe/Penryn have a healthy and happy relationship when Raffe's immortal? There's no way they'd be able to survive as a couple once Penryn starts to age. Penryn would end up bitter and resentful of Raffe's youth. Not to mention Raffe would no doubt treat Penryn more like a grandma than a lover as she grew older. Their relationship made no sense.
-What was with all that Michael nonsense? He was so against being the leader of angels that he did NOTHING when his angels were destroying an entire world, but at the end we were just meant to believe that he'd finally get his act together? That he'd just shrug off all his issues and put down his cup of tea and grudgingly accept the job as angel-leader? Really? After doing jack all when millions were being killed, he would suddenly decide to put on his big boy knickers and take charge? Ugh, nonsensical and ridiculous.
-I couldn't help but scoff at Penryn and co's secret weapons against the angels: sharks, bright lights, and rock music. No joke.
-The ending was rushed with the fight at the bridge and Raffe/the messengers sending all the angels home, after all that had happened it all seemed too neat and easy.
-The writing was generic and mediocre, I don't think I went a page without rolling my eyes. Some random quotes I hated (there were so many to choose from):
1. Wearing a backpack this way might not look great on someone else, but on him, it looks like a fitted piece of military gear strapped tight to his broad chest.
Ugh, of course Raffe can pull anything off because he's just so damn sexy. And naturally, Penryn can't stop ogling him, no matter how inappropriate it is, (what with all the pain and misery surrounding her).
2. All I feel is the kiss. All I am is Raffe’s girl.
Penryn wasn't her own person, she was Raffe's girl throughout the book (even though he didn't want her to be). It was Raffe this and Raffe that and ooh, I wonder how Raffe's feeling?
3. Despite Raffe’s supporters being outnumbered, they are the toughest, fiercest, most skilled fighters.
Of course Raffe had the best team ever. How else could he be the quintessential Gary Stu without being the bestest and sexiest and most skilled guy ever, and in extension all his people have to be the bestest too. Ugh.
4. ‘And everybody thinks you’re both hot,’ says Dee.
I scoff. ‘Now I know you’re full of it.’
‘You’re seriously going to tell us you haven’t noticed the way guys look at you?’
‘What guys? What are you talking about?’
They exchange glances. ‘Girl,’ says Dee, ‘even before your latest stunt, you were becoming the most requested fighter of all our events. Butt-kicking girls have always been smokin’ hot, but in the postapocalyptic world we live in, the hottest thing around is a sword-wielding, angel-slaying, foulmouthed—’
Wow, a YA heroine that's not only a speshul snowflake but also the hottest and desired girl around? There's something I've never read before! Heaven forbid, a YA heroine who is normal looking and doesn't have countless guys getting wet over her.
4. His snowy wings are wide and frame his statuesque body perfectly. The edges of his feathers are downy, giving him a soft glow in the light.
I still can’t believe he has his wings back. They look amazing on him. Perfect in every way.
Those were Penryn's pathetic fangirly thoughts a couple of minutes after she nearly died. Because that's what people do when they nearly die, get swoony and sappy and descriptive over someone else's looks.
5. ‘Look, I know that we’re from different worlds and different people. But I've realized that it doesn't matter.’
Naturally, all the many issues and obstacles between Penryn/Raffe's relationships weren't even discussed, everything was brushed under the carpet because True Love conquers all. Ugh.
I could go on forever about how bad End of Days was, but I've banged on long enough. It was rubbish. No doubt YA lovers and Raffe fangirls will love this, but I needed more than the usual uninspired, generic YA story/character/relationships, plus the broody-sexy-old-enough-to-be-a-great-great-great-etc-granddad-angel-with-perfect-abs-hero did nothing for me.