I don't generally like stories told from the first person perspective, but there's something about Delancey Stewart's writing that just keeps me reading anyway. This book was no different. I finished it all in one sitting, and if you had any idea how annoying I found the heroine, the fact that I didn't DNF this is a testament to the readability of this author's writing.
Like other reviewers have said, the heroine of this story is not likable at all. I couldn't identify with her. She was superficial, paralyzed by the bad choices she'd made in the past, and worst of all, dumb. I'm not trying to be mean and I suppose it was evidence of how much she allowed her ex-husband to control her, but honestly, she was stuck in some serious life ruts. I marveled at how long she took to come up with real solutions to her problems. Seriously. And maybe even worse than her slowness was how long it took her to stop basically blaming everything bad that happened in her life on her ex. By the time she finally saw how shallow her previous existence was, I was just about to dump this ebook on my DNF shelf. I'm glad she finally started turning things around and stopped wallowing in her deep puddle of self pity because I about had it with her.
We never get the H's perspective and I think this story would've benefited from it. Not only would we have gotten a break from the h's ridiculous inner monologue, but we would have been able to see that the H wasn't a cardboard cutout. After the mystery was solved (even though to call it a mystery would be a bit of a misnomer), the H was sweet enough, but he wasn't a very developed character. I also wish that we had answers re: the pictures of him and his bruised ex-girlfriends.
Overall, I appreciated that this story isn't erotica. I didn't have to skip any scenes (yay!) and the H also didn't seem like a manho, which is always a good thing in my book. However, the h almost ruined this story for me. Had she not started making changes when she did, this would have received one star. As it was though, I admire her for finally getting her act together, which is more than some fictional (and non-fictional) characters can say.