This book was a tough one for me to rate. I’m not sure if my lack of enthusiasm for the book is because I’m not a fan of the “relationship with an expiration date” plot, or because of a couple other reasons. But this book just didn’t work very well for me.
Megan has been eight year old Charlie’s nanny for the past five years. She has now finished her schooling though, and is ready to move on to a career as a teacher. With her employment by Charlie’s dad, Adam, coming to an end, Adam has asked Megan to help him find her replacement. Except instead of finding him another nanny, he’s decided what he needs is a wife - a mutually agreeable companion to help him raise his son.
See, Adam has some hang-ups from being raised by an alcoholic father, and then having his wife leave him for a career on the other side of the US. He’s not interested in a marriage based on love, just one of convenience. Megan would be a great fit for him, and Charlie, but he knows Megan’s a “fall in love” type girl, so she’s out of the running. But Megan knows so much about them, so she’s the best person to help pick her replacement. Of course, as they spend more time together, their feelings for each other grow and Adam realizes maybe he can open his heart and be who Megan needs.
I actually almost gave up on this book. At 20 percent, I didn’t really care about the hero or the heroine. Adam is self-absorbed and has his priorities completely out of whack. And Megan is kind and caring, but still didn’t manage to stir much interest in her ordeal with Adam. Mostly I got tired of all the internal monologue of “I can’t be with her because I’m not what she needs” and “I can’t be with him because he’ll never love anyone ever again.” Those thoughts were repeated over and over, and I got bored with it.
Then there were a couple other things that set me off. This author is from Canada but her story takes place in the US - which isn’t a problem. But if you’re going to write a story that takes place somewhere else, make sure your characters are using phrases that they would use if they lived there. Specifically, here in the US we say third grade, or fourth grade. Not grade three, grade four.
Another thing that rubbed me wrong as a reader were the overused hyphenated words: scare-the-hell-out-of-him screamed, how-did-he-not-know-her-legs-were-so-long shorts, heart-stuck-in-his-throat sort of way. Those were all from one short chapter. I’m not sure if an editor would reign that all in, but once or twice is amusing. After that, I wasn’t amused anymore.
Once Adam and Megan give into their attraction with each other, the story picked up. And it was just in the knick of time, because I was about to set this book in my virtual “did not finish” pile. The dialogue between the characters (all of them, actually) was good, and the writing was decent, but this was all overshadowed by the repetitive writing about why Adam and Megan couldn’t be together. Also, the ending was predictable and not as heartfelt as I would want it to be.
That being said, I’d be willing to read another book by Jodi Holford. Most of what I didn’t care for about this book is because I’m generally not a fan of the plot trope used in this story. There were certainly parts that I enjoyed about this book, but overall this one falls in the “it was okay” category.
* thank you to NetGalley and Entangled Publishing, LLD/Entangled: Amara for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review