Rounded from 3.5
Esoteric religious magic and disgraced court bodyguards cross their streams in this high fantasy with deep world building and compelling characters. I read the 2024 “Updated and Revised” version of this book, originally published in 2000, and I can’t speak to the differences, but I can say that this novel will show new fans of Martha Wells who know her only for her Murderbot series that she can do fantasy really well, too, and has been doing so for more than two decades. What I appreciated most about this story was the world building and the way the world was introduced to us, which was slowly and in pieces. There were no lengthy exposition dumps, instead we follow two characters from different cultures and through them we slowly learn more and more about this world, with new little details even come in the ending chapters. It was a wonderful way to build out the world, because it left a whole lot open-ended. We know there are all these distinct countries/provinces that have their own customs, religions, and magic systems, and we get glimpses and tastes of them in this story but are mostly focused on one particular country/religious system. It really just was a well-developed, exciting world that felt unique and also felt like it had more mysteries to share, and it was complemented by the way it was explored and the ways we learned about it. The imagery of the world was also striking, not the kind of imagery we see in other fantasy novels, and while I can speculate what inspired a lot of that imagery what was fun was that Wells didn’t lean on any existing cultures or ideas, she just celebrate some imagery and maybe cultural ideas in what felt like a non-exploitative way, building her own, uncommon world.
We had one main character and one secondary almost main character, and we shifted between their perspectives (though not equally, more like 70/30) and this gave us good insight into these characters. I liked both the main characters, they felt like they had deep histories that we got little bits and pieces of, but there was still more saved. Those unexplored parts of their histories were actually great, they let the characters feel dynamic and it let me feel like my relationship was continually deepening with them as the story progressed. And the story itself was actually a lot of fun. I liked the overall mystery/puzzle to be worked out, I liked the heavy turn things took at about the 60% mark when you thought you were grasping on to some answers, and I thought the eventual reveal and resolution was unexpected.
The big thing that held this story back for me was the pacing, to be honest. I don’t mind slow fantasy stories, especially when a lot of that time is committed to world building and character development. But this just felt really slow, at least the first third or so, slower than it had to be. We did get an interesting exploration of the character and the world during that time, but the character reveal and world-building continued through the story, so it didn’t feel like that slow pace was really necessary. One of the central pivot points around which our main character rotates is that she has been cursed and exiled, and we don’t find out what for until near the very, very end of the story! There is a continual slow development of the world and the characters, which is fin, but it makes that early, slower section stand out and feel like it dragged a little. Also, there is a romantic subplot, and I can appreciate why those particular characters’ personalities would be attractive to each other, but it felt like it came out of nowhere, with no build-up, no character deliberation or consideration, it just kind of happened, and it felt somewhere between rushed and not necessary. I appreciate how their relationship mediated some of their actions in the finale, so I suppose I am glad it happened, but for a slow-paced book that relationship felt really sudden.
I had a good time with this book, even though it was slow. I can see some folks being a little frustrated. It does move slowly, and it ends with a clear resolution to the primary conflict of this particular story, but the worlds and characters still have a lot of mystery about them. It is hard to ever feel you know what a character is going to do, because your understanding of their histories and motivations and experiences is developed in this slow drip throughout the story. That does create some emotional distance from the characters—it is hard to see yourself in them if you are still learning new things about them in the last chapter. And both of the main characters are really cool, and some of the ancillary characters are equally fun and seem like they have the potential for really robust histories that we only get hints of. So, I can appreciate folks being critical of the pacing and the open-ended character and world development. The pacing did drag a little for me, in the first half, as I mentioned, but I didn’t mind the distance we had from the characters. It kept them always intriguing, each one a different puzzle box, and the world was rich and fantastical enough that I enjoyed it, and I enjoyed knowing there is a whole lot more of it that is yet to learn.
Ultimately this high-fantasy novel doesn’t exactly reinvent the wheel but it has some really beautiful imagery in an intricately constructed world that has compelling magic systems, flawed and exciting characters, and an overall story that combines spirituality and magic (and occasional violence) in open-ended and fun ways that complicate them all, and it was a fun world to fall into. Martha Wells has a number of different fantasy series, including her current “Rising World” series which will have a new book coming out soon, and part of me would love to see this book being republished so she can continue to write in this world, because I would happily jump back in.
I want to thank the editors and authors, the publisher Tor Books, and NetGalley, who provided a complimentary eARC for review. I am leaving this review voluntarily.