Good merciful LAWD, was this BAD.
First of all, in order to be a Navy SEAL, you have to 1) have a SSN, which Amish do not, 2) have a GED/diploma, which Amish do not, 3) make it thru basic, which is against Amish custom/beliefs, 4)have a year of service as regular Navy, which Amish do not, and 5) then they have to qualify over EVERY. OTHER. APPLICANT. And the list is extensive. We're talking in-depth knowledge of electronics (which Amish DO NOT have), above average intelligence, high scores in math/retention... NO. JUST NO.
There is NO WAY that Jeremiah was a Navy SEAL. Not a chance. You don't meet a SEAL in Lancaster County (!?!?!) and spend a year with them, become enamored, and *voila!* you are a SEAL, too. First, no SEAL is going to spend a YEAR anywhere - they deploy constantly, and are in constant training the rest of the time. So they're never *IN* landlocked Amish country, let alone for an entire year. It's STUPID.
Worth says he spent that year swimming laps, reading about wars late into the night, running miles, and working out with the SEAL almost constantly. In what time? Amish men are *BUSY*, hello - and if he was working in a carpentry shop with his father? He wasn't doing *ANY* of this. On top of work frolics, church, and courting Ava.
Worth tells us that Edward (SEAL mentor) was off on a secret raid that they watched on television, and right after, soldiers came to the door to tell them he was dead. First, family is NEVER told that family is out on a 'raid'... they're told the SEAL has a 'training exercise', so as not to worry the family. Second, 'raids' are televised, not even after the fact - it would compromise future missions and intelligence. Third, the timing of this stupidity is so obviously for d.r.a.m.a... we just roll our eyes, out here.
We're told Jeremiah loved Ava's curly hair. Have you SEEN the cover of this book? Stick-straight hair on the cover? What possesses LI or Worth or WHOever to screw basic things up?!
WHY is Ava - a devout, peaceful, kind, gentle Amish girl - in love with a boy who had 'destructive tendencies', glorified fighting and war, and was bent on avenging Edward? That is SO OUT OF CHARACTER with an Amish girl, it's not funny. There's NO WAY Ava would associate with him, let alone 'fall in love' with him. We're not given one good reason to believe there's anything between them.
So then Jeremiah comes home to help his family, since his father is dying. Except he *DOESN'T* go home, he goes to Edward's family for several weeks in the SAME TOWN... because reasons. But he's already taking baptism classes to become Amish. Because after 12 years of being 'on the battlefield' (←that would be Marines and Army, NOT SEALS, for the love of all that's holy...!!!!!), immediately the bishop would believe in a change of heart he hasn't seen... is that right?
BAD, BAD, BAD, BAD WRITING!!!!!
Pg 27: "Your daed is gravely ill. He might not ever know you are home but he will be glad in his heart to see you return." Go ahead, try to wrap your head around how a man oblivious to the son's return is going to be glad about it. Because BAD WRITING!!!!! GAHHHH!!!
When we start this mess, Ava sees Jeremiah for the first time in twelve years and drops her groceries all over a parking lot. WHY? Because the author says her arms inexplicably gave out? What is that, anyhow... other than stupidity-induced drama fabricated for effect? Ugh, ugh, ugh.
Then Ava goes to a "get together to quilt and bake" that "some might call a frolic, but they also worked and prayed and shared common joys and concerns". ALL OF WHICH IS WHAT HAPPENS AT A FROLIC!!! GAHHHHHHHH!!!!! Does Worth even know what she's writing? I'm sorry, but that's a valid question, at this point. It's obvious she hasn't researched the SEALs, and doesn't know a single thing about the Amish... so what gives???
A few days later, Ava is surprised to see her mom and sister coming over. "Her family lived just around the curve, close enough to walk across the field between her land and theirs... she visited them weekly and they stopped by to check on her often." So if that's the case, WHY is a surprise that they came over, again? Because that's normal, or so we're told, so... NONE OF THIS IS MAKING SENSE.
Her mother wants her to go to Jeremiah's house, because his father is dying and the wife and daughter who are BOTH there with nothing to do but clean, cook, and care for him... can't handle it, and Ava *definitely* has to go over there to help???? What kind of ridiculous plot arc is this, and why are we supposed to buy into it, again?
I'm sorry, this is just beyond stupid, preposterous, and ridiculous. I'm out. DNF @ 36 pages, because it's badly written, horribly characterized, illogically plotted, and HORRIBLY done. Pass on it. It's utter garbage.