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130 pages, Paperback
First published September 15, 2006
Many things about the story are puzzling.This section continued in approximately his vein, and while there were moments of interest, on the whole, it didn't do much for me--emotionally, narratively, or aesthetically. "Great Women of Science" was also my least favorite section of the book, so that may have biased me against some of the poems later on. The pieces I did like were mostly in either [SALT] and "Where's the Body?", especially "[breaks spells]", "[smothers flames]", "informant", and "I want you to see me". That last one might have been my favorite poem in the book, as it gets at the pain of turning pain into laughter: "A crime had turned me into a phone. I tried to get sympathy from Michael but he thought it was funny. It hurt to laugh, but I had to. My receiver was transparent. I kept saying but Mike, I'm a phone. (I was sill a person, in a way. I still had my legs.)"
The women cooking, the men
swimming in the sea.
I believe we need light
inside the body.
Her necklace is
sparkling, see?
See the sparkle lines?