Say It: A BWWM Erotica

by Bella Storm

Nick Brooks observed the crowd with the same enthusiasm as a trip to the dentist. He hated the parties were the women only saw him as a dollar sign; he gazed over at his friend Kevin. Thank God he got a beautiful woman that's interested in more than his checkbook, he thought to himself. She was a beauty no doubt with honey blond hair to the middle of her back and gold green eyes, but to him she was just average. He was looking for a change and it wouldn't be hard considering he was every ladies dream. He was 6'6'' purely muscle thanks to working on the family farm. He had thick blond hair and blue-gray eyes along with dimples to make even an old lady wish she were younger. It didn't help that his father was pressuring him into finding a woman and "making him some grandbabies before he hit the dirt." Then he saw her, the most beautiful woman standing at the balcony looking at the horizon. The emerald dress barely reached her knees, but blended perfectly with her cocoa brown skin. Dark curls fell just a little below her shoulders, he thought about what it would feel like to run his hands through those curls while he pounded into her curvy ass from the back. Just thinking about it made his mouth water for a taste.

52 pages, Kindle Edition

Published December 3, 2017

Reviews

[T.M. Pigatt · Rating 4 out of 5]

Like the book

I must say I loved this book. I think it moved at a fast pace but that was okay. It was a joy to read. Not enough steamy scenes though.

[evette w · Rating 1 out of 5]

Just ok

First let me say that I love when someone pursues their passion and shares it with the world.Know I have to say the idea of this story was not bad but it was missing a lot of steps.It is so very important to have good.editing and a second pair of eyes.I.love the characters but there is something missing and you can't become invested.I think with a good solid rewrite this could be a terrific story.

[Ailysha · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 stars

This was a good ready but it was hard to follow at times. The lack of transition was jarring at times and the time line didn’t have a smooth flow. But the story line was good and had real potential. The characters were great just needs more background. All and all I’d still read more from this author.

[Deb Cochran · Rating 5 out of 5]

A beautiful love story!

I loved Nick and Ninya's story! They both needed love after disastrous past loves and found it with each other. I wish something was said about Crystal and her interference, but it ended beautifully! Thanks, Ms. Storm for a wonderful story!

[Linda D. Christiani · Rating 4 out of 5]

Linda Christiani

Not bad but I needed more depth to the story and some editing otherwise I enjoyed the promise of true mates!!!

[Vivian Byfield · Rating 2 out of 5]

Ok

Not much of a story sadly. Very prescriptive I kept reading and hoping it would get better but sadly not.