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80 pages, Paperback
First published August 14, 2018
I'm conflicted about feeld. The formal experimentation is enough to warrant three stars. Every poem appears alien, but when you begin reading you realize these poems aren't as impenetrable as they may appear initially. The form mirrors a facet of people's reluctance to understand identity struggles. To one accustomed to a particular appearance, the trans individual and their identity may feel alien or odd, but they are human all the same, like these poems are English all the same. It's an ingenious way of forming a poem around a subject.
My qualm lies with moments where imagery collides in a way that leaves me dizzy and disoriented. I'm not sure where Charles is trying to go. Where some homonyms feel novel and pithy, others feel cheap and unnecessary, even given the estrangement in spelling. There's an inchoate theme of nature and ecology, but by the final poem the theme still feels inchoate. It demands rereading, but some of this imagery will still collide at the cost of cohesion.