4.6-7 This story was sweet, sultry and highly romantic. It's a love at first sight new adult tale of a hot, sensitive musician (Italian, olive-skinned, long dark hair) and a shy insecure Black woman (petite, braids, large doe-eyed, innocent)..which, btw the cover doesn't match how they look so that could be redone completely. The book has moments that made me giddy with the cuteness! The sweetness is nicely balanced with a deep darkness of Wyn's trauma.
I really enjoyed the story, but there were some issues i'll mention:
Wyn could've used more hobbies. Obviously she is traumatized, but that shouldn't be her only defining traits. A personality did shine through more and more as she started to heal for herself, but what does she like to do? What parts of her made her desirable to Rafe besides his physical attraction.
WYN NEEDED THERAPY. Serious therapy. The fact that it wasn't even mentioned was crazy to me. Even if she refused it, the words should've been uttered. Her trauma is deep, ptsd possibly and she's dealing with it all internally. It does show her strength and resilience, but damn.
Petty annoyance: Although it didn't actually affect the story, Ryfe's inner commentary didn't need to mention "she's so different from other girls I dated!" So much. It's just annoying. Again, didn't mean much, but it's like an annoying space filler.
The last few pages: I think we deserved about 10 more pages to make the ending more satisfying. I wanted to see the last deep conversation the two of them had, not just "we talked for hours." It felt like we were being cheated on what would've been a very interesting conversation. It soured things a bit for me, but didn't ruin the book, but the author honestly should go back and write in those extra pages. He also said he loved her to himself, but not to her. I'd like to have seen that spoken to her.
The story is very good, not my usual style of more interpersonal drama, and all the characters' personalities came through very well.