Unpopular opinion alert!
I cannot stand this book and the characters in it and I am DNF'ing it now at 25%. I tend to give the books I DNF only 1 star, so 1 star it is!
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My main reason for disliking the book is I hate this kind of writing: too much telling but not showing. And because it is from the 1st person point of view, we never know what the as*hole hero thinks. In my opinion, all douche-bag heroes must have their chapters from their point of view so that the readers can connect to them. I hated this hero!
I didn't understand how they started a relationship, I didn't feel the chemistry and I didn't witness the development of their relationship all because of its telling but not showing.
Cooper is a hero I didn't like up until the part I DNF'ed the book so I don't know if he gets charming later??!!
There isn’t even one thing about him that was attractive to me. He is described as a hot man, OK, but nothing he does or say is attractive or sexy. He is OTT domineering.
He is cocky, arrogant and rude. He orders around all the time, and with the way he speaks, frankly it felt like he was imitating Max from The Gamble by Kristen Ashley… Ha ha, as if anyone else could be Max! It requires great talent and originality to create an as*hole hero that has a charm; this one didn't have the charm.
And way worse, for me, there was no sign of him being attracted to the heroine and there is no point of view from the hero that will tell us what he thinks and that’s why, the way their relationship started was a “laugh-out-loud” moment for me – just ridiculous!!!
Here’s how it begins in a friends' house they were both invited to:
He enters the bathroom after her and locks the door!
“You’re dating Adam?” I was a bunch of things—shocked, aggravated, and turned on. Yes, I arrived with Adam, but that was only so I could drink and enjoy myself. I know it might have seemed we were together when we walked in holding hands, but the driveway is cobblestone. With the type of footwear I was wearing it was like a death trap, so I held his hand to make sure I didn’t sprain anything.
“No,” I whispered. “He just drove me here so I don’t have to worry about driving home.” I felt his breath on my ear, on my neck. I felt it everywhere. My body was one big fat nerve, and I just wanted to turn my head and make my lips meet his. “I’m your ride home,” he said, and in that moment, he pressed his erection into my core. With him scooping down and me on wedges it was the perfect height, and if I just rubbed a little up and down, I was pretty sure I could have my happy ending.
“You drive me crazy,” he said, and I could swear he was softly kissing my neck, so of course, being the semi drunk hussy that I was, I gave him more access, which then made him really go in for it where he lightly bit and then sucked.
“You don’t even like me.” I panted, my hands grabbing onto his shirt. It was too much. The dark, his smell, my senses on overload.
“I like you plenty.” And just when I went to open my mouth to talk back, his lips met mine.
So here in this dialogue that went on in the darkness of the bathroom, we learn that he was rude and condescending all the time but he liked her plenty. Huh, who would have guessed?!
From then on, he continues to order her around but it is now a bit different. “Call me when you get home” type of orders. etc.
In addition to disliking how they started to be together, I also didn’t witness the development of their relationship as it was usually a summary of events such as the one below:
The days fly by. We’ve gotten into a routine together. He always meets me in the morning with a cup of coffee, because I can never ever get here before him, and if I’m honest I don’t even fucking try. He earns his first peck on the lips of the day. We train for three hours, and I’m always waiting for him when he gets out of the shower. I have to admit I think about him under the water, sometimes tempted to go with him, but I’m not doing that.
And here I am too bored to continue.
The reviews I have read say he is really good with her children etc. but his ex causes a lot of drama later on… Well, I don’t know, I am DNF’ing it now because I cannot stand the book anymore.
I read “Tempt the Boss” from this writer and it was a fun and light read but this one wasn’t my cuppa at all. Sorry...