I want to lead with that the writing style was very crude, very elementary. I acknowledge that.
However, the story, the characters, the depth given to the often made clichés? I loved. It’s one of my favorite books, because of that. There are plenty of cons, but personally they are outweighed by the pros.
Cons:
-Again, the writing style as I mentioned is highly low grade. It’s mediocre at best, and would almost make me dislike the book at some points. Quiet obvious the authors first novel, and is so similar to an elementary scholars that it’s almost admirable. You’d almost wonder how it’s possible. It’s simple to a fault.
-I hate how parents deaths are handled. They are mentioned offhandedly and nonchalantly as an origin story, but nothing more. It’s as if their deaths are only exist for plot. Which is often with many things in books, but authors usually make it work. This one didn’t. They bring it up once and actually acknowledge it properly, with care, like they have some true showing of the pain and ptsd Addison should have from it, but that’s it.
-Oh yeah and Addison has “Trust Issues” which are also poorly handled, but then she keeps acting the exact same and now they are gone??? What???
-Trigger warning, skip to next bullet point if you need: the way they handle their self harm. I really don’t think that was given the amount of pain and emotion that it comes with. I may be wrong, but still. Each once and now they show each other and hardly talk about it? Ok, but they each only did it once? That’s the part I know is possible, but hard to believe, personally. I just think it could have been handled better, especially sense Addison’s was so recent.
-The use of the word orbs.
Pros:
I don’t even know where to start or how to end! Excuse me if I don’t do this justice.
-CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. Even though the story is mostly made of clichés, the author does really fucking well building the characters to the point it is artfully, and talented in such. The paint the characters as characters should be built, layer by layer, with proper shading and highlights, texture, you can feel the paint. And then as you follow the brush you try and keep up, till you stand back and see the full work and you cry because it’s so beautiful.
-The same goes for plot, the plot is fairly cliché but it handled well, yk?
-Figurative language!! Even if it was not used as much as it could have been, it was used well when used.
-The ending!! It’s realistic and open and I love it!! It fits so well, and is WAY more realistic then most books!!
I know I’m missing so much, but I don’t know how to put the literary renaissance level work into words. It’s wonderful, read it!