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Breaking My Chains
She wanted to lose her virginity – but not to just anyone. She wanted her bodyguard.
He was 210 lbs of tall, dark, and oh so dominant.
Sarah was pretty sure she was a submissive, but when Lance refused to show her his world, she decided to take things into her own hands.
She found his club – his BDSM club. But just when she finally got up the nerve to sneak away and see what it was all about, Lance walked into the club. Damn! Busted – and dragged home in shame.
So I gave him an ultimatum. Either he showed me the “ropes," or I would find a way to find out for myself. He couldn’t be with me 24/7, afterall.
I knew it would work. Lance is way too controlling, too dominant to let someone else take something that he wants. And I know he wants me – he just doesn’t want to cross that line with the daughter of a client. But he’s agreed – finally.
Now if we can just stay safe while my uncle’s crazy stalker tries to kill me, maybe I’ll finally lose my V card.
He was 210 lbs of tall, dark, and oh so dominant.
Sarah was pretty sure she was a submissive, but when Lance refused to show her his world, she decided to take things into her own hands.
She found his club – his BDSM club. But just when she finally got up the nerve to sneak away and see what it was all about, Lance walked into the club. Damn! Busted – and dragged home in shame.
So I gave him an ultimatum. Either he showed me the “ropes," or I would find a way to find out for myself. He couldn’t be with me 24/7, afterall.
I knew it would work. Lance is way too controlling, too dominant to let someone else take something that he wants. And I know he wants me – he just doesn’t want to cross that line with the daughter of a client. But he’s agreed – finally.
Now if we can just stay safe while my uncle’s crazy stalker tries to kill me, maybe I’ll finally lose my V card.
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July 21, 2018
A short hot book, about a 25 year old virgin Sarah. She has decided the time has come, to get rid of her virginity. She has been watching bdsm and is interested in it. She really wants her tall, hot, build bodyguard Lance.
Lance dreams of Sarah, has a feeling she's still a virgin and wants her badly. However, he needs to maintain his professionalism. So, he never reacts to her beauty.
They get thrown together one night and he's going to teach her, just what she wants to know. They touch on some bdsm but it's quite mild. Which, I like better than the hardcore stuff.
So, I'm not an overly huge fan of real short stories, unless it's a prequel, leading too another book. I find there's not enough time to get into the book, nor for the characters, scene building, or story to come alive, to really grab my attention.
I think this Author, did better than most and that's a lot, for me too say about a short story. Actually, for such a short story, this had a lot of story in it.
I received this ARC from the Author, the review is my honest opinion.
Lance dreams of Sarah, has a feeling she's still a virgin and wants her badly. However, he needs to maintain his professionalism. So, he never reacts to her beauty.
They get thrown together one night and he's going to teach her, just what she wants to know. They touch on some bdsm but it's quite mild. Which, I like better than the hardcore stuff.
So, I'm not an overly huge fan of real short stories, unless it's a prequel, leading too another book. I find there's not enough time to get into the book, nor for the characters, scene building, or story to come alive, to really grab my attention.
I think this Author, did better than most and that's a lot, for me too say about a short story. Actually, for such a short story, this had a lot of story in it.
I received this ARC from the Author, the review is my honest opinion.
January 29, 2018
This was short quick read that I liked. Sarah is the poor little rich girl and Lance is her bodyguard he is also a Dom Sarah is a virgin and she doesn't like it. Sarah also has a submissive nature that Lance finds that is getting hard to ignore. Sarah wants Lance to be her first but he says no she follows him to a BDSM club. Sarah wants to see what the BDSM scene is all about so she sneaks in and he catches her but she gives him an ultimatum teach her or she will find someone else. This was a good read the sex scenes were hot and these two had a lot of chemistry. This was my first time reading this author but not my last. This book was well written with no errors in grammar or spelling. I am looking forward to reading more from this author.
February 21, 2018
This is the first book I have read by this author, I found it a nice quick read.
The main characters were interesting and interacted well within the confines of the storyline.
Sarah had a way of pussy-footing around Lance, while Lance used all of his self control to stay distant and professional.
The storyline had just the right amount of fire and temptation to keep this reader intrigued.
The main characters were interesting and interacted well within the confines of the storyline.
Sarah had a way of pussy-footing around Lance, while Lance used all of his self control to stay distant and professional.
The storyline had just the right amount of fire and temptation to keep this reader intrigued.
December 16, 2017
Sarah wanted to lose her virginity but only by her bodyguard Lance and he wouldn't cross the line so she takes matters into her own hands. She finally finds his BDSM club and sneaks away to find out all about being a Submissive for real, what she didn't plan on was Lance walking in and catching her there !!!!!!!!!! Lance likes being in control, a true dominant and certainly won't let someone else take what he wants and has dreamed of taking all for himself....... she is his. Lance needs to keep her safe from her uncle’s crazy stalker who is out to kill her but before that happens Sarah needs to lose her V card to Lance.......... There is some great characters and the plot is brilliant as it certainly keeps you reading.
January 21, 2018
After being introduced to BDSM, Sarah is bound and determined to lose her virginity in a very specific way and she know exactly who she wants to take it. Lance is Sarah's body guard. When he refuses her advances and when he discovers that she has sneaks out to go to a very upscale and secret club that caters to a very specific type of customer, he decides maybe its time she's punished for disobeying him. And she is in for the ride of her.
Wow! What a hot and sexy story. Avery quick read that is a great intro to some BDSM reading. Not too heavy, but just enough to get your reading fix for the afternoon and a small dose of dom/sub action. Definitely enjoyed this read! I gave this a four star "affair"!
Reviewer for Romance Authors that Rock!
Wow! What a hot and sexy story. Avery quick read that is a great intro to some BDSM reading. Not too heavy, but just enough to get your reading fix for the afternoon and a small dose of dom/sub action. Definitely enjoyed this read! I gave this a four star "affair"!
Reviewer for Romance Authors that Rock!
February 1, 2018
This is my first book from Chloe Fischer and I loved it!
Breaking my Chains is filled with action, suspense and steamy BDSM scenes.
Sarah wants to lose her virginity, but not just with anyone, she wants it to be her bodyguard Lance but he doesn't even notice her.
When Lance finds out that Sarah sneaked out and that she's at a BDSM night club he decides that it's time to teach her a lesson she won't forget and when he's done with her she will never forget him too.
I voluntarily read an advanced reader copy of this book.
Breaking my Chains is filled with action, suspense and steamy BDSM scenes.
Sarah wants to lose her virginity, but not just with anyone, she wants it to be her bodyguard Lance but he doesn't even notice her.
When Lance finds out that Sarah sneaked out and that she's at a BDSM night club he decides that it's time to teach her a lesson she won't forget and when he's done with her she will never forget him too.
I voluntarily read an advanced reader copy of this book.
February 4, 2018
Sarah is a twenty-something year old virgin who wants to change her status. She wants to lose her v-card and becomes curious about BDSM. More so since her bodyguard Lance exhibits traits similar to the men she watches on the porn sites.
Lance is a Dom and knows Sarah is pure yet a natural submissive. He wants her but doesn't want to cross the line. Until she forces his hand!
This was a fast and sexy read. It was too short for chatacter and relationship development but still fun and hot!
Lance is a Dom and knows Sarah is pure yet a natural submissive. He wants her but doesn't want to cross the line. Until she forces his hand!
This was a fast and sexy read. It was too short for chatacter and relationship development but still fun and hot!
January 28, 2018
Now here's a adrenaline pumper of a read. 4.5 Stars
Hot male bodyguard Lance is no match for beautiful Sarah, she's out to finally become a woman and he's the one shes after, lol.
A fast, fun, sexy read with that touch of danger and sensual vibes on the dark side.
Mature readers, strong language and sexual content.
I have voluntarily read and reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book by its author.
Reviewer for Nook Books and More Blog.
Hot male bodyguard Lance is no match for beautiful Sarah, she's out to finally become a woman and he's the one shes after, lol.
A fast, fun, sexy read with that touch of danger and sensual vibes on the dark side.
Mature readers, strong language and sexual content.
I have voluntarily read and reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book by its author.
Reviewer for Nook Books and More Blog.
December 26, 2017
I got this book in exchange for a voluntary review. Sarah was still a virgin and her best friend Vikki introduced her to BDSM. Lance, her guard, wasn't pleased about this and decided to train Sarah himself. This book was fantastic showing how vanilla's are introduced to BDSM and the care .dominant's take with submissives. I loved the story.I just felt it ended too soon
January 26, 2018
This was a quick read with some good action as well as some steamy scenes. Lance should be guarding Sarah, but her curiosity and her tendency to ignore instructions lands her in hot water. Good insta-lust book, but I didn't quite catch the connection between Lance and Sarah. Things are just getting started so I wonder if there will be more to this story.
January 26, 2018
this was a short hot read, dominant but reluctant body guard, with a Virgin who is itching to loose her V card but since he is supposed to be taking care of her he tries to resist her, but when she walks into his BDSM Club he takes over refusing to let her give herself to anyone else!
i received an arc of this story that i happily reviewed
i received an arc of this story that i happily reviewed
January 26, 2018
This is a fast paced read. Sarah believes she is a submissive and wants to explore that side of herself, preferably with her bodyguard Lance. When he won't help her she decides to sneak out to a club. Will Lance be able to stay away from the temptation of Sarah? Plenty of drama and steam. Hot chemistry. A good read.
January 27, 2018
I am volunteering to leave a review for an ARC of this book. I enjoyed this short story about Sarah and Lance. There was intrigue along with the sexy build up between Sarah and Lance. Thank goodness they finally get together, and it seems there may be a lasting relationship there. Chloe, will Lance and Sarah be back? Hope so!!!
March 1, 2018
Quick Novella with a bit of action and a lot of steam. I think it was a little too short for all the information stuffed into it. I would have enjoyed the story more had there been more build up to a connection, instead it was more lust-based between the two characters.
I was gifted an ARC in return of an honest review.
I was gifted an ARC in return of an honest review.
May 16, 2018
Short, easy read. The character development was enough to know I liked the MC's, but I wanted there to be more depth to the story. Ending was abrupt. The story had the potential for more. I did enjoy the read, If you're looking for a quick, easy read with a touch of suspense and VERY light BDSM, I recommend this story.
December 3, 2018
You won't want to break away from this one
Sarah has been protected from living life, and Lance is just the latest in a long line of bodyguards her father has hired to protect her. As the story unfolds Sarah is given opportunities to experience life, but ends up getting more than she bargained for. This book is full of suspense, growth, steam and romance.
Sarah has been protected from living life, and Lance is just the latest in a long line of bodyguards her father has hired to protect her. As the story unfolds Sarah is given opportunities to experience life, but ends up getting more than she bargained for. This book is full of suspense, growth, steam and romance.
January 26, 2018
This is a quick coffee break read, is book 3 in the Protect series and I loved it. Lance and Sarah have an awesome chemistry, I couldn't put this book down.
I received a copy and voluntarily leave my own thoughts
I received a copy and voluntarily leave my own thoughts
January 27, 2018
Amazing ! I so loved Sarah and Lances story. The storyline took me on a journey of twist and turns that kept me spellbound. Absolutely amazing book. It definitely deserves a 5 star review. I hole hardly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a great read.
January 27, 2018
Loved this book Lance is a dominant and Sarah wants to see what BDSM is all about lots of twists drama definitely worth reading also loved the cover picture as well worth the five stars would give more if I could I voluntarily reviewed an advance copy of this book.
January 16, 2018
Arc review For honest review. Lance is a Dom and is Sarah bodygaurd but when he finds out she snuck out to go to black leather their adventure begins. Hot and awesome.
January 26, 2018
Sarah and Lance have a dynamic relationship. Vicki and Sarah are up to no good. I would of enjoyed a longer story. I like that Lance finally got Sarah, all puns intended
January 27, 2018
My first read from author Chloe Fischer, a 55 page short that was well-written.
January 30, 2018
This book had me hooked from the very beginning all the way til the end. The long drawn out sex scenes are absolutely incredibly delicious! I want more!!
February 11, 2018
The premise of the story was good but it was just too short and not enough interaction between the main characters. An okay read overall.
June 2, 2019
Great book , sexy alpha takes what he wants & she needs
February 7, 2018
An action-packed MUST-READ, steamy HOT romance with light BDSM. I LOVED IT!
This is one of those books that stays with you – even though the story of Sarah and Lance seemed at first to be a typical young rich girl/poor older boy scenario. What makes this story memorable is the conflict does not come from the usual places – her family or his friends. Instead, Sarah and Lance each have a plan to entice the other into the relationship they both want. And although the reader gets the treat of watching Sarah mature and Lance “instruct” as they come together, reality strikes and the best-laid plans . . . . Well, you know what they say happens to those? Chloe Fisher is a talented writer who has found that important key when writing a suspenseful romance. Her ability to build characters that are rich and easy to like, keep the sexual chemistry off the charts and the sexual tension ready to break makes “Breaking My Chains” an epic romance. Then add to those characters to the perfect ROMANCE plot with an outside force trying to kill our heroes, and you get an action-packed SUPER HIT on your hands. “Breaking My Chains” by Chloe Fisher is that and more. This reader could not put it down! “Breaking My Chains” gets my strongest, highest and MUST READ five-star recommendation. Although I was given an ARC copy of “Breaking My Chains” to prepare this honest and voluntary review, I plan to purchase a copy to support an awesome author. I strongly suggest you purchase your copy of “Breaking My Chains” today! Happy pages! 😉
This is one of those books that stays with you – even though the story of Sarah and Lance seemed at first to be a typical young rich girl/poor older boy scenario. What makes this story memorable is the conflict does not come from the usual places – her family or his friends. Instead, Sarah and Lance each have a plan to entice the other into the relationship they both want. And although the reader gets the treat of watching Sarah mature and Lance “instruct” as they come together, reality strikes and the best-laid plans . . . . Well, you know what they say happens to those? Chloe Fisher is a talented writer who has found that important key when writing a suspenseful romance. Her ability to build characters that are rich and easy to like, keep the sexual chemistry off the charts and the sexual tension ready to break makes “Breaking My Chains” an epic romance. Then add to those characters to the perfect ROMANCE plot with an outside force trying to kill our heroes, and you get an action-packed SUPER HIT on your hands. “Breaking My Chains” by Chloe Fisher is that and more. This reader could not put it down! “Breaking My Chains” gets my strongest, highest and MUST READ five-star recommendation. Although I was given an ARC copy of “Breaking My Chains” to prepare this honest and voluntary review, I plan to purchase a copy to support an awesome author. I strongly suggest you purchase your copy of “Breaking My Chains” today! Happy pages! 😉
January 9, 2019
Just Okay
This Novella was short, hot but rather shallow. Sarah is 25 and a virgin. She’s guarded by Lance, one hot guard and a big fan of BDSM. She’s decided to let him take her v-card and experience all he can teach her about BDSM. There was a little intrigue, hot chemistry, kink and then wrapped up, and left a lot to be desired.
This Novella was short, hot but rather shallow. Sarah is 25 and a virgin. She’s guarded by Lance, one hot guard and a big fan of BDSM. She’s decided to let him take her v-card and experience all he can teach her about BDSM. There was a little intrigue, hot chemistry, kink and then wrapped up, and left a lot to be desired.
February 10, 2018
This was a super short read that just didn't work for me. There was just too much that was packed into this 55 page book.
25 year old virgin wants to lose her virginity. wants her bodyguard to do it. Her BFF introduces her to BDSM and she knows that's what she wants. For some reason, there's a kidnapping thrown into this story of a quest to lose virginity. And when said virginity is finally lost, it was very forgettable for me and was only like the last few pages of the book.
25 year old virgin wants to lose her virginity. wants her bodyguard to do it. Her BFF introduces her to BDSM and she knows that's what she wants. For some reason, there's a kidnapping thrown into this story of a quest to lose virginity. And when said virginity is finally lost, it was very forgettable for me and was only like the last few pages of the book.
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