What Happened?
Decker Thorne worked for Jonna Remington. Jonna is a 24 year old woman who has been running Remington Shipping since she was 15 years old. She has had to be tough and single-minded to keep the business she inherited upon her father's death, profitable. Before Decker came to Remington Shipping, he lived on the streets stealing to eat. He relies on his charm and looks to make his way. No two people could be more different, or are they?
What happened? In "My Steadfast Heart" the action, mystery and romance started immediately and was evenly paced throughout the book. In this book, one had to read 70% through to get to the action, mystery, and romance. Before that there were just two people going through the motions. The sex was soulless and unromantic. There were constant references to secrets, but we were given barely a hint of what they were. The lack of emotion on both the H and the h throughout the first 70% of the book left this reader just bored.
What happened to Decker? In the first book, Decker was portrayed as a devil-may-care, shiftless rogue with a heart of gold, and a teasing sense of humor. I looked forward to Decker's romance, because I thought we would see more of this fun side of Decker. When I read that Jonna was all business and no nonsense, I thought, what a perfect foil for Decker. I expected Decker to tease her out of her single-mindedness. I thought Decker would show her some fun and romance, charming her into loving him. NOT! It turns out that responsibility made Decker boring!
The relationship of the H and h turns out to be all business all the time, with a few sex scenes thrown in. For me, since the love and admiration were missing, the sex scenes missed their mark. The scenes definitely did not move the story along.
This book would have made a great novella. The last 30% of the book was interesting and had a great story, but the first 70% could have been skipped all together.