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Mysteries & Matrimony Book #2
The Elizabeth Conspiracy
Can Darcy and Elizabeth work together? Or will one of them be convicted of murder? Elizabeth Bennet values goodness and charm—both qualities Mr. Darcy blatantly lacks. Fitzwilliam Darcy values wit and strong opinions—qualities with which Miss Elizabeth is generously armed. A refused proposal turns into a battle of wills when Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are forced to endure each other’s company at the beautiful estate of Rosings. When an unlikely enemy ends up dead, fingers are eager to point at Elizabeth. As suspicions rise and the evidence mounts, Elizabeth learns the value of a loyal friend and the forgiveness of love… but will it be too late?If you like falling in love with Mr. Darcy and Miss Elizabeth as they fall for each other, then you'll love this sweet romance-mystery variation of Jane Austen's timeless classic, Pride and Prejudice.
356 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 14, 2017
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Jennifer Joy
45 books208 followersWhen Jennifer isn’t busy dreaming up new adventures for her favorite characters, she is reading, baking, or chasing her twins around the park.
She believes in happy endings, sweet romance, and plenty of intrigue. She writes what she most enjoys reading, so expect lighthearted stories with happy endings and a few laughs.
Born on the beautiful Oregon coast, she traveled all around the world until she finally settled in the Andes Mountains of Ecuador with her husband and two kids.
She believes in happy endings, sweet romance, and plenty of intrigue. She writes what she most enjoys reading, so expect lighthearted stories with happy endings and a few laughs.
Born on the beautiful Oregon coast, she traveled all around the world until she finally settled in the Andes Mountains of Ecuador with her husband and two kids.
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March 15, 2023
Every murderer is probably somebody's old friend. ~ Agatha Christie
Quote from the book: Miss de Bourgh rose from the fainting couch, diminutive in the midst of the grand features of her sitting room. Elizabeth would have dismissed her presence in a crowd, but on closer inspection there was something in the tilt of her chin and the flint-like hardness in her eyes that made Elizabeth recall one of her favorite verses of Shakespeare: Though she be but little, she is fierce!
Has Elizabeth Bennet unknowingly made an enemy? Early in her acquaintance with Miss de Bourgh the sickly woman had seemed a non-person, so quiet was she in the company of her Mother. But is there more to the woman? Why does she insist Elizabeth move from the parsonage to reside at Rosings?
Murder is commoner among cooks than among members of any other profession. ~ W. H. Auden
This story begins very slowly with a lot of repetition from Canon P&P. The first 10-15 percent could have been a mere summary. Our story does not really take hold until Elizabeth moves to Rosings. Anne de Bourgh has plans to “pension” off Mrs. Jenkinson (her Aunt in this story) and replace her with Elizabeth. Mrs. Jenkinson resents the plan. But does she blame Elizabeth? … Or Anne? … Or Lady Catherine?
The Grim Reaper strikes on the first night Elizabeth sleeps at Rosings. Is the death from natural causes? Or is something more sinister afoot?
Murder is not the crime of criminals, but that of law-abiding citizens. ~ Emmanuel Teney
Suspicion falls on Darcy because he is heir to the deceased. Elizabeth is tainted by her suspected association. Colonel Fitzwilliam aids in the discovery of the crime – if a crime has been committed – but is he also involved in the murder? If there was a murder, that is. How can we be assured of foul play when the next-of-kin refuses to allow the body to be examined?
The ultimate punishment of the criminal had an element of Sati – the outlawed practice of burning widows on the funeral pyre of the husband. I’m unsure the laws of England were quite that strict but it was poetic justice and a satisfying ending to an episode in the Bennet family.
Although there are some holes in the plot and the resolution of the mystery, this is a well-written, clean, and error-free book that kept my attention to the end. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
All violence is the result of people tricking themselves into believing that their pain derives from other people and that consequently those people deserve to be punished. ~ Marshall Rosenberg
Quote from the book: Miss de Bourgh rose from the fainting couch, diminutive in the midst of the grand features of her sitting room. Elizabeth would have dismissed her presence in a crowd, but on closer inspection there was something in the tilt of her chin and the flint-like hardness in her eyes that made Elizabeth recall one of her favorite verses of Shakespeare: Though she be but little, she is fierce!
Has Elizabeth Bennet unknowingly made an enemy? Early in her acquaintance with Miss de Bourgh the sickly woman had seemed a non-person, so quiet was she in the company of her Mother. But is there more to the woman? Why does she insist Elizabeth move from the parsonage to reside at Rosings?
Murder is commoner among cooks than among members of any other profession. ~ W. H. Auden
This story begins very slowly with a lot of repetition from Canon P&P. The first 10-15 percent could have been a mere summary. Our story does not really take hold until Elizabeth moves to Rosings. Anne de Bourgh has plans to “pension” off Mrs. Jenkinson (her Aunt in this story) and replace her with Elizabeth. Mrs. Jenkinson resents the plan. But does she blame Elizabeth? … Or Anne? … Or Lady Catherine?
The Grim Reaper strikes on the first night Elizabeth sleeps at Rosings. Is the death from natural causes? Or is something more sinister afoot?
Murder is not the crime of criminals, but that of law-abiding citizens. ~ Emmanuel Teney
Suspicion falls on Darcy because he is heir to the deceased. Elizabeth is tainted by her suspected association. Colonel Fitzwilliam aids in the discovery of the crime – if a crime has been committed – but is he also involved in the murder? If there was a murder, that is. How can we be assured of foul play when the next-of-kin refuses to allow the body to be examined?
The ultimate punishment of the criminal had an element of Sati – the outlawed practice of burning widows on the funeral pyre of the husband. I’m unsure the laws of England were quite that strict but it was poetic justice and a satisfying ending to an episode in the Bennet family.
Although there are some holes in the plot and the resolution of the mystery, this is a well-written, clean, and error-free book that kept my attention to the end. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
All violence is the result of people tricking themselves into believing that their pain derives from other people and that consequently those people deserve to be punished. ~ Marshall Rosenberg
May 8, 2022
Whew!! This turns into a bit of a nail-biter! I was proud of myself because I had a vague suspicion as to who-dunnit that actually turned out to be correct for a change. That isn't to say the solution is obvious, because I couldn't come up with an apparent motive when I made my guess, and so I dismissed the idea.
We open at Rosings Park the afternoon that Colonel Fitzwilliam innocently reveals Darcy's role in separating Mr. Bingley from Jane Bennet. Darcy subsequently proposes, Elizabeth spurns him and verbally knocks him upside the head, yada, yada, yada.
But wait! If you don't pay attention to some little details in what appears to be canon here, you might miss clues for the mystery that evolves later. Things take a decided turn from canon the following day when Elizabeth is strong-armed into agreeing to stay at Rosings as Anne de Bourgh's guest. Darcy doesn't trust either Lady Catherine or Anne so, naturally, he extends his visit, which means Colonel Fitzwilliam stays, as well. Things get even dicier when, a day later, a body is discovered and it is determined that this was a murder.
That's when we go from an apparently straightforward Pride and Prejudice variation to a conventional drawing room mystery. Elizabeth and Darcy are essentially under house arrest at Rosings; they are not permitted to leave the grounds until the identity of the murderer is proven.
The writing has a nice flow that allows the reader to become immersed in the story. Some of it is gently humorous, as when Elizabeth gets her first inkling that Darcy has a sense of humor and can laugh at himself. Tension builds with an unknown murderer in their midst, although there are also moments where the tension eases as Darcy and Elizabeth grow closer to each other. The attraction and longing between them is nicely developed. There's a bit of angst that Darcy feels when he learns something that makes him believe Elizabeth can't be trusted, and then the angst goes off the charts when someone is arrested. In fact, the denouement in this book is pretty amazing, with one heart-stopping turn of events after another.
Characters are interesting and work in this book despite some of them not being consistent with Jane Austen's. Specifically, Anne de Bourgh is even nastier than her mother, albeit in more subtle ways. However, she's not the only one who's gone through some changes in personality here.
What prevents me from giving this a full 5 stars despite all the things I admire about it boils down to a common (and annoying) tactic often employed in mysteries: withholding some significant information from the reader until the very end. Anyone remember the classic 1974 movie Murder By Death, which is a hilarious parody of the genre? At the end, Lionel (Truman Capote) lambasts mystery authors for their unfair tactics. I couldn't help flashing on that movie scene as I was reading the big reveal scene here.
In addition, I remain confused about the murder itself. Huh? More explicit explanation would've been nice.
But it's a whopping good P&P variation, and you'll probably love it because it's Darcy and Elizabeth, and they fall in love, and it has all the other elements essential to a satisfying romance. And you'll enjoy the mystery too, as long as you don't take that part of it TOO seriously.
We open at Rosings Park the afternoon that Colonel Fitzwilliam innocently reveals Darcy's role in separating Mr. Bingley from Jane Bennet. Darcy subsequently proposes, Elizabeth spurns him and verbally knocks him upside the head, yada, yada, yada.
But wait! If you don't pay attention to some little details in what appears to be canon here, you might miss clues for the mystery that evolves later. Things take a decided turn from canon the following day when Elizabeth is strong-armed into agreeing to stay at Rosings as Anne de Bourgh's guest. Darcy doesn't trust either Lady Catherine or Anne so, naturally, he extends his visit, which means Colonel Fitzwilliam stays, as well. Things get even dicier when, a day later, a body is discovered and it is determined that this was a murder.
That's when we go from an apparently straightforward Pride and Prejudice variation to a conventional drawing room mystery. Elizabeth and Darcy are essentially under house arrest at Rosings; they are not permitted to leave the grounds until the identity of the murderer is proven.
The writing has a nice flow that allows the reader to become immersed in the story. Some of it is gently humorous, as when Elizabeth gets her first inkling that Darcy has a sense of humor and can laugh at himself. Tension builds with an unknown murderer in their midst, although there are also moments where the tension eases as Darcy and Elizabeth grow closer to each other. The attraction and longing between them is nicely developed. There's a bit of angst that Darcy feels when he learns something that makes him believe Elizabeth can't be trusted, and then the angst goes off the charts when someone is arrested. In fact, the denouement in this book is pretty amazing, with one heart-stopping turn of events after another.
Characters are interesting and work in this book despite some of them not being consistent with Jane Austen's. Specifically, Anne de Bourgh is even nastier than her mother, albeit in more subtle ways. However, she's not the only one who's gone through some changes in personality here.
What prevents me from giving this a full 5 stars despite all the things I admire about it boils down to a common (and annoying) tactic often employed in mysteries: withholding some significant information from the reader until the very end. Anyone remember the classic 1974 movie Murder By Death, which is a hilarious parody of the genre? At the end, Lionel (Truman Capote) lambasts mystery authors for their unfair tactics. I couldn't help flashing on that movie scene as I was reading the big reveal scene here.
In addition, I remain confused about the murder itself. Huh? More explicit explanation would've been nice.
But it's a whopping good P&P variation, and you'll probably love it because it's Darcy and Elizabeth, and they fall in love, and it has all the other elements essential to a satisfying romance. And you'll enjoy the mystery too, as long as you don't take that part of it TOO seriously.
January 28, 2018
Oh my goodness, Ms. Jennifer Joy has done it again. Written a murder mystery into a tumultuous relationship between two proud and prejudiced characters; namely Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. As the slow build up of tension in this story grew, my heart rate kept climbing. I didn't see this one coming, but completely understood it when the culprit was determined.
Thank goodness the Colonel was present at Rosings Park when Mr. Darcy offers up his pretentious proposal...even if he did happen to mention Mr. Bingley to Elizabeth Bennet. However, the Colonel does everything he can to bring these two together.
Others are not as helpful. Lady Catherine de Bourgh is persistent in her demands to have Darcy marry her daughter, Anne de Bourgh, who has improved immensely in her health though her temperament and personality leave a lot to be desired. Even Charlotte warns Elizabeth to be careful of Anne once she is invited to be a guest at Rosings. Darcy and the Colonel are concerned as well. I could just feel the malevolence of Anne seeping through my Kindle.
"Our worst enemies are often closest to us." (Quote from the book)
When a maid finds one of the party at Rosings dead, Lady Catherine has her suspicions...several in fact. She will not allow any to leave the premises until the murderer is identified. Throwing Darcy and Elizabeth together in such close quarters is the perfect opportunity for the Colonel to work his magic. What magic it was to watch these two work through their anger. The Housekeeper, Mrs. Beeton, and one straw bonnet certainly helped as well.
I highly recommend this Pride & Prejudice variation!
Thank goodness the Colonel was present at Rosings Park when Mr. Darcy offers up his pretentious proposal...even if he did happen to mention Mr. Bingley to Elizabeth Bennet. However, the Colonel does everything he can to bring these two together.
Others are not as helpful. Lady Catherine de Bourgh is persistent in her demands to have Darcy marry her daughter, Anne de Bourgh, who has improved immensely in her health though her temperament and personality leave a lot to be desired. Even Charlotte warns Elizabeth to be careful of Anne once she is invited to be a guest at Rosings. Darcy and the Colonel are concerned as well. I could just feel the malevolence of Anne seeping through my Kindle.
"Our worst enemies are often closest to us." (Quote from the book)
When a maid finds one of the party at Rosings dead, Lady Catherine has her suspicions...several in fact. She will not allow any to leave the premises until the murderer is identified. Throwing Darcy and Elizabeth together in such close quarters is the perfect opportunity for the Colonel to work his magic. What magic it was to watch these two work through their anger. The Housekeeper, Mrs. Beeton, and one straw bonnet certainly helped as well.
I highly recommend this Pride & Prejudice variation!
May 18, 2022
This Pride and Prejudice variation begins at Rosings Park. There is the offer, the refusal, and the letter. Then Anne de Bourgh invites Elizabeth to stay at Rosings but what are her motives and aim. Finally there is a death to be solved.
Slow-paced mystery, but an enjoyable and well-written variation with its romance and mystery.
Slow-paced mystery, but an enjoyable and well-written variation with its romance and mystery.
December 15, 2017
I am a P&P what if addict and there are certain authors, including Ms Joy, which I just know I will read thus I didn't read the description of this book. Therefore I was really surprised when there was a mystery and it was a good mystery. Now I shouldn't have been surprised after all she had written a lot of other P&P mysteries but then I wouldn't be me. And I have to admit it somewhat added to my enjoyment. After the mysterious death I was convinced that it was going to turn out to be faked and that the deceased was pranking someone.
The story is set entirely at Rosings / Hunsford so Lizzy is the only Bennet. It is a variation of a locked room mystery as per Agatha Christie.
I book was almost error free except for one fairly weird one
Lizzy has received a mysterious package and is questioned about it and denies knowing who sent it but replies "Mrs. Beeton did provide a name. Any suppositions I might have would be based merely on speculation and of no use to your ladyship" which should have been did not.
The story is set entirely at Rosings / Hunsford so Lizzy is the only Bennet. It is a variation of a locked room mystery as per Agatha Christie.
I book was almost error free except for one fairly weird one
Lizzy has received a mysterious package and is questioned about it and denies knowing who sent it but replies "Mrs. Beeton did provide a name. Any suppositions I might have would be based merely on speculation and of no use to your ladyship" which should have been did not.
October 13, 2022
Big thanks to this author for providing us the opportunity to listen to the audiobook!
Such a fun read and story. (forgot about how it ended)
I am a big fan of JJ books, but this one didn't engage me as much. I have either overloaded on JAFF or this story was not as compelling as others of hers I have read.
Such a fun read and story. (forgot about how it ended)
I am a big fan of JJ books, but this one didn't engage me as much. I have either overloaded on JAFF or this story was not as compelling as others of hers I have read.
December 7, 2022
Great story. reminded me of "Accusing Elizabeth" by the same author. i did guess who did it but that didn' detract from my enjoyment. read Debbie's review too for more info. Highly recommend.
March 7, 2023
The details that engaged the reader in the whole picture around the characters made this mystery and romance story come alive.
This will be a technical review, without synopsis.
- The plot is unusual yet carefully completed with no gaps or unnecessary tangents.
- Pacing is quick so the reader won't fall asleep during this book! The first 14% is a rehash of canon, and could have been shortened to make it even more engaging; however, the new language and visuals within the slightly reworded story keeps the pace up.
- Dramatic tension hovers at a moderate level most of the book, and gets to near intolerable at a couple of points. That's from an angst lover.
- Point of view is third person multiple, deep, changing with the scene. This was well done.
- Showing, not telling, is the method chosen to tell the story. Again, well done. Good balance of narrative and dialogue.
- Language was a good Regency style, with only six non-Regency words and four Americanisms. Four modern expressions were used, pulling the reader out of the moment. An over-used word was "cracked." A too-big word was captious. The verb spelling for chaperon was used for the noun usage.
- One of my pet peeves, "break his fast," was used. Austen said breakfasted or breakfasting.
- "Though" was used in place of "although."
- One of the most magnificent things about this book was how the author painted a picture in the reader's mind about what was going on at the time using Regency elements, the senses, nature, or whatever other literary tool was at hand. This made the story come alive.
- Characterization was excellent, hovering just before making caricatures out of some of the characters without going into silliness, keeping the book serious, and therefore, plucking away potential farcical elements. This made for a good mystery.
- The development of the romance was paced well, seeming reasonable given the circumstances the author placed the protagonists within for this story.
- The cover is too lame for the book, with Elizabeth appearing as if she has a headache in her polyester dress. Font placement has an unbalanced look, and there are some colour rendering issues that sometimes happen with reds and Amazon. It definitely does not draw me to buy this book.
Overall impression of this book is that this is an excellent novel with an amazing premise held together by good characters and especially, scene-setting second to none. This stand-alone novel is the second in a series of similar books. I bought them as a set, but they can be read in any order.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might claim this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
This will be a technical review, without synopsis.
- The plot is unusual yet carefully completed with no gaps or unnecessary tangents.
- Pacing is quick so the reader won't fall asleep during this book! The first 14% is a rehash of canon, and could have been shortened to make it even more engaging; however, the new language and visuals within the slightly reworded story keeps the pace up.
- Dramatic tension hovers at a moderate level most of the book, and gets to near intolerable at a couple of points. That's from an angst lover.
- Point of view is third person multiple, deep, changing with the scene. This was well done.
- Showing, not telling, is the method chosen to tell the story. Again, well done. Good balance of narrative and dialogue.
- Language was a good Regency style, with only six non-Regency words and four Americanisms. Four modern expressions were used, pulling the reader out of the moment. An over-used word was "cracked." A too-big word was captious. The verb spelling for chaperon was used for the noun usage.
- One of my pet peeves, "break his fast," was used. Austen said breakfasted or breakfasting.
- "Though" was used in place of "although."
- One of the most magnificent things about this book was how the author painted a picture in the reader's mind about what was going on at the time using Regency elements, the senses, nature, or whatever other literary tool was at hand. This made the story come alive.
- Characterization was excellent, hovering just before making caricatures out of some of the characters without going into silliness, keeping the book serious, and therefore, plucking away potential farcical elements. This made for a good mystery.
- The development of the romance was paced well, seeming reasonable given the circumstances the author placed the protagonists within for this story.
- The cover is too lame for the book, with Elizabeth appearing as if she has a headache in her polyester dress. Font placement has an unbalanced look, and there are some colour rendering issues that sometimes happen with reds and Amazon. It definitely does not draw me to buy this book.
Overall impression of this book is that this is an excellent novel with an amazing premise held together by good characters and especially, scene-setting second to none. This stand-alone novel is the second in a series of similar books. I bought them as a set, but they can be read in any order.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might claim this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
May 7, 2022
Fantastic writing!
One mystery that keeps the reader glued to the pages to see what happens next, without ever knowing whom to suspect. And what to say about the changes in the romantic front! A total must read!
One mystery that keeps the reader glued to the pages to see what happens next, without ever knowing whom to suspect. And what to say about the changes in the romantic front! A total must read!
December 24, 2020
“Everyone loves a conspiracy.” –Dan Brown, The Da Vinci Code
Rating: clean: angst level: medium to high: watch your manicure, this was a nail-biter
Our Elizabeth had a very different visit to Kent. It was nearly the end of her. There was trouble at Rosings Park and Elizabeth was right in the middle of the bulls-eye as a suspect. Lady Catherine was a tyrant and her daughter Anne didn’t fall far from the tree. Oh-my-gosh, this was such a shock and surprise. I didn’t figure it out. I just couldn’t wrap my mind around the clues and guess who did the deed. I can’t say because that would be a spoiler.
Book 2 in the ‘Mysteries & Matrimony’ series. It was standalone and according to the blurb it is "a heartwarming, wholesome romance interwoven with a fast-paced mystery."
“Where justice is denied, where poverty is enforced, where ignorance prevails, and where any one class is made to feel that society is an organized conspiracy to suppress, rob and degrade them, neither persons nor property will be safe.” –Frederick Douglass
10-4-20 I borrowed this from KU with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. I highly recommend this very different story. Other books in the Mysteries & Matrimony Series are as follows:
Book 1: Accusing Elizabeth
Book 2: The Elizabeth Conspiracy
Book 3: Chasing Elizabeth
Rating: clean: angst level: medium to high: watch your manicure, this was a nail-biter
Our Elizabeth had a very different visit to Kent. It was nearly the end of her. There was trouble at Rosings Park and Elizabeth was right in the middle of the bulls-eye as a suspect. Lady Catherine was a tyrant and her daughter Anne didn’t fall far from the tree. Oh-my-gosh, this was such a shock and surprise. I didn’t figure it out. I just couldn’t wrap my mind around the clues and guess who did the deed. I can’t say because that would be a spoiler.
Book 2 in the ‘Mysteries & Matrimony’ series. It was standalone and according to the blurb it is "a heartwarming, wholesome romance interwoven with a fast-paced mystery."
“Where justice is denied, where poverty is enforced, where ignorance prevails, and where any one class is made to feel that society is an organized conspiracy to suppress, rob and degrade them, neither persons nor property will be safe.” –Frederick Douglass
10-4-20 I borrowed this from KU with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. I highly recommend this very different story. Other books in the Mysteries & Matrimony Series are as follows:
Book 1: Accusing Elizabeth
Book 2: The Elizabeth Conspiracy
Book 3: Chasing Elizabeth
January 7, 2018
Fun mystery!!
Aww this was such a fun mystery! I read a few other reviews, and they all guessed it, so I was like...yeah so I’ll get it immediately.
haha nope. It was a fun adventure. I enjoyed every second. I even doubted for awhile that the person who died actually died. I just think it was wonderfully done and written.
Very short, and a nice easy read! Definitely recommend!
Aww this was such a fun mystery! I read a few other reviews, and they all guessed it, so I was like...yeah so I’ll get it immediately.
haha nope. It was a fun adventure. I enjoyed every second. I even doubted for awhile that the person who died actually died. I just think it was wonderfully done and written.
Very short, and a nice easy read! Definitely recommend!
February 10, 2018
Although the title leads one to believe at first that there is a plot either against Elizabeth or by Elizabeth I found that the finger pointing moved around a bit. Anne de Bourgh is the character who seems to be painted with a dark brush but any premise that she has murderous intent is quickly swept away. I have found with this author you may as well select the most unlikely character when she writes a mystery and be as close to correct as one who relies on clues.
The beginning of this story follows canon with Darcy's Hunsford proposal. Then for reasons she explains Anne de Bourgh decides to coerce Elizabeth into becoming her companion. Is Mrs. Jenkinson happy with this? Mumble, mumble, grumble, dark looks... One night's stay in the mansion and death comes a stalking. While everyone is basically under house arrest, although Lady C. will not allow the body to be seen or examined by a coroner, the dear Colonel is working to undo his words which told E. of Darcy's separating Jane and Bingley. Darcy takes crumbs of Elizabeth's time and attention where and when he is afforded the opportunity.
I did enjoy how the relationship of ODC changed while they were in close company during this tale. And loved it when Darcy asked if they could not begin over. So we have romance with a second chance...if only the murderer is secured away.
This was a story I wanted to read as soon as it was published. My only reason for waiting was a promise to myself to read only those stories which were sitting on my Kindle unread for so long and so I did just that for 2 months. Still have stories waiting but did clear about half off.
I enjoyed this story. The author does have quite an imagination!
The beginning of this story follows canon with Darcy's Hunsford proposal. Then for reasons she explains Anne de Bourgh decides to coerce Elizabeth into becoming her companion. Is Mrs. Jenkinson happy with this? Mumble, mumble, grumble, dark looks... One night's stay in the mansion and death comes a stalking. While everyone is basically under house arrest, although Lady C. will not allow the body to be seen or examined by a coroner, the dear Colonel is working to undo his words which told E. of Darcy's separating Jane and Bingley. Darcy takes crumbs of Elizabeth's time and attention where and when he is afforded the opportunity.
I did enjoy how the relationship of ODC changed while they were in close company during this tale. And loved it when Darcy asked if they could not begin over. So we have romance with a second chance...if only the murderer is secured away.
This was a story I wanted to read as soon as it was published. My only reason for waiting was a promise to myself to read only those stories which were sitting on my Kindle unread for so long and so I did just that for 2 months. Still have stories waiting but did clear about half off.
I enjoyed this story. The author does have quite an imagination!
October 15, 2022
Interesting Plot
In Book 2 of this series, each of which is a stand-alone novel, a visit to Hunsford by Elizabeth will find her accused of a murder at Rosings and features an especially shrewish and manipulative Anne and Lady Catherine.
I thought the plot and mystery good. An observation I made early in the book had me completely expecting something else other than the end result, so in that respect, the story was a success for me. I don’t possess a great talent in figuring out mysteries. Occasionally, I get one right. This wasn’t one!
I didn’t especially love this Darcy, until near the end of the story. I couldn’t like how he let the de Bourghs speak to him the way they did. I felt like he was less of a man for being so manipulated without an effective response. I couldn’t help be reminded of Bingley vs Caroline.
Still enjoyed it very much and it held my attention throughout. I read as I listened along with the audiobook, narrated and brilliantly performed by Stevie Zimmerman. So glad Audible had a super sale this fall. I was able to pick up many older releases I didn’t have, including several by this author. Lucky me!
In Book 2 of this series, each of which is a stand-alone novel, a visit to Hunsford by Elizabeth will find her accused of a murder at Rosings and features an especially shrewish and manipulative Anne and Lady Catherine.
I thought the plot and mystery good. An observation I made early in the book had me completely expecting something else other than the end result, so in that respect, the story was a success for me. I don’t possess a great talent in figuring out mysteries. Occasionally, I get one right. This wasn’t one!
I didn’t especially love this Darcy, until near the end of the story. I couldn’t like how he let the de Bourghs speak to him the way they did. I felt like he was less of a man for being so manipulated without an effective response. I couldn’t help be reminded of Bingley vs Caroline.
Still enjoyed it very much and it held my attention throughout. I read as I listened along with the audiobook, narrated and brilliantly performed by Stevie Zimmerman. So glad Audible had a super sale this fall. I was able to pick up many older releases I didn’t have, including several by this author. Lucky me!
March 23, 2021
Very interesting Pride and Prejudice Variation with misunderstandings, hateful manipulations, humiliating situations and a murder plot twist. I had thought the villain to be someone entirely different than who person turned out to be. The murder turned out to be someone I would have never doubted to be anything but innocent.
As always the Jennifer Joy/Stevie Zimmerman was a winning combination.
As always the Jennifer Joy/Stevie Zimmerman was a winning combination.
January 21, 2024
This book reminds me never to give up on a book that seems to stretch on and on. Just as I was about to give up on it, the story picked up amazingly.
December 9, 2021
Okay
I never planned on giving this book below 3 stars, because of the writing, but I did view it as a low 3 star book. The ending saved it for me. It is rare for me to be surprised by a P&P variation, but this one managed just that. Although it's still 3 stars, it is a satisfying 3 stars if that matters or make sense.
What prevented me from giving it 4 stars was it was hard for me to swallow that Darcy and Elizabeth couldn't leave Rosings because Lady Catherine said so. Lady Catherine even going as far as to assign guards to follow them around and call meetings to question them as if she had power over them. And they accepted it. I told myself to go with it but it did nag at me the entire time, hence the low stars before the ending.
The scenes involving Darcy and Elizabeth was nice. On a side note, I kinda took pleasure in the role reversal. Normally in P&P variations Elizabeth would wrongly accuse Darcy of something and give him the cold shoulder leaving Darcy dejected. In this story Darcy misjudged Elizabeth and Elizabeth was left to miss Darcy's attention. It doesn't stop there, Darcy never truly apologized for the misunderstanding (say it isn't so, only Elizabeth can get away with that.) I admit it, I thought 'about time'.
Darcy, Elizabeth, Richard and Lady Catherine were the main characters with a sprinkle of the Collinses.
I never planned on giving this book below 3 stars, because of the writing, but I did view it as a low 3 star book. The ending saved it for me. It is rare for me to be surprised by a P&P variation, but this one managed just that. Although it's still 3 stars, it is a satisfying 3 stars if that matters or make sense.
What prevented me from giving it 4 stars was it was hard for me to swallow that Darcy and Elizabeth couldn't leave Rosings because Lady Catherine said so. Lady Catherine even going as far as to assign guards to follow them around and call meetings to question them as if she had power over them. And they accepted it. I told myself to go with it but it did nag at me the entire time, hence the low stars before the ending.
The scenes involving Darcy and Elizabeth was nice. On a side note, I kinda took pleasure in the role reversal. Normally in P&P variations Elizabeth would wrongly accuse Darcy of something and give him the cold shoulder leaving Darcy dejected. In this story Darcy misjudged Elizabeth and Elizabeth was left to miss Darcy's attention. It doesn't stop there, Darcy never truly apologized for the misunderstanding (say it isn't so, only Elizabeth can get away with that.) I admit it, I thought 'about time'.
Darcy, Elizabeth, Richard and Lady Catherine were the main characters with a sprinkle of the Collinses.
February 14, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see most beloved characters in a whole new way. Oh my goodness, Ms. Jennifer Joy has done it again. Written a murder mystery into a tumultuous relationship between two proud and prejudiced characters; namely Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. As the slow build up of tension in this story grew, my heart rate kept climbing. I didn't see this one coming, but completely understood it when the culprit was determined. Thank goodness the Colonel was present at Rosings Park when Mr. Darcy offers up his pretentious proposal, even if he did happen to mention Mr. Bingley to Elizabeth Bennet. However, the Colonel does everything he can to bring these two together. Others are not as helpful. Lady Catherine de Bourgh is persistent in her demands to have Darcy marry her daughter, Anne de Bourgh, who has improved immensely in her health though her temperament and personality leave a lot to be desired. Even Charlotte warns Elizabeth to be careful of Anne once she is invited to be a guest at Rosings. Darcy and the Colonel are concerned as well. I could just feel the malevolence of Anne seeping through my Kindle. When a maid finds one of the party at Rosings dead, Lady Catherine has her suspicions, several in fact. She will not allow any to leave the premises until the murderer is identified. Throwing Darcy and Elizabeth together in such close quarters is the perfect opportunity for the Colonel to work his magic. What magic it was to watch these two work through their anger. The Housekeeper, Mrs. Beeton, and one straw bonnet certainly helped as well. This was a fun mystery that does not disappoint. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see most beloved characters in a whole new way. Oh my goodness, Ms. Jennifer Joy has done it again. Written a murder mystery into a tumultuous relationship between two proud and prejudiced characters; namely Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. As the slow build up of tension in this story grew, my heart rate kept climbing. I didn't see this one coming, but completely understood it when the culprit was determined. Thank goodness the Colonel was present at Rosings Park when Mr. Darcy offers up his pretentious proposal, even if he did happen to mention Mr. Bingley to Elizabeth Bennet. However, the Colonel does everything he can to bring these two together. Others are not as helpful. Lady Catherine de Bourgh is persistent in her demands to have Darcy marry her daughter, Anne de Bourgh, who has improved immensely in her health though her temperament and personality leave a lot to be desired. Even Charlotte warns Elizabeth to be careful of Anne once she is invited to be a guest at Rosings. Darcy and the Colonel are concerned as well. I could just feel the malevolence of Anne seeping through my Kindle. When a maid finds one of the party at Rosings dead, Lady Catherine has her suspicions, several in fact. She will not allow any to leave the premises until the murderer is identified. Throwing Darcy and Elizabeth together in such close quarters is the perfect opportunity for the Colonel to work his magic. What magic it was to watch these two work through their anger. The Housekeeper, Mrs. Beeton, and one straw bonnet certainly helped as well. This was a fun mystery that does not disappoint. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
April 8, 2023
If you like murder mysteries and love Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, then Jennifer Joy's The Elizabeth Conspiracy is for you. I listened to this in audiobook narrated by the wonderful Stevie Zimmerman, who has lent her incredible vocal talents to many a P&P variation.
I enjoyed seeing the fallout of what would happen if Darcy and Elizabeth were forced to stay in close proximity after that first disastrous proposal of Darcy's. I like that Jennifer Joy doesn't shy away from the pain and misunderstanding that still ensues as our favorite couple tries to get to understand each other amidst the backdrop of a murder that hits close to home and suspicion that seeks to pull them both in.
As always, I love the role that Colonel Fitzwilliam plays in trying to be a mirror to Darcy and in working to encourage both Darcy and Elizabeth to recognize the amazing potential that each has in finding their soulmate and partner in the other. He is a wonderful friend and I just love the humorous and sassy foil he plays to Darcy's brooding nature.
Another fun and imaginative read from Ms. Joy in the world of Austen that we cannot get enough of!
I enjoyed seeing the fallout of what would happen if Darcy and Elizabeth were forced to stay in close proximity after that first disastrous proposal of Darcy's. I like that Jennifer Joy doesn't shy away from the pain and misunderstanding that still ensues as our favorite couple tries to get to understand each other amidst the backdrop of a murder that hits close to home and suspicion that seeks to pull them both in.
As always, I love the role that Colonel Fitzwilliam plays in trying to be a mirror to Darcy and in working to encourage both Darcy and Elizabeth to recognize the amazing potential that each has in finding their soulmate and partner in the other. He is a wonderful friend and I just love the humorous and sassy foil he plays to Darcy's brooding nature.
Another fun and imaginative read from Ms. Joy in the world of Austen that we cannot get enough of!
February 24, 2021
I like Ms. Joy's writing and have loved other books I've read by her. The cousins trilogy is my favorite so far but I didn't love this one as much.
The books starts prior to Darcy's horrible, failed proposal and then veers off into a Ms. Joy's variation but it took a long time to get to that point. Since I love P&P I didn't mind rereading that part but I think it could have been trimmed down a bit.
I can't do specifics without spoilers so I will say that I had trouble with some of the personality changes in characters. Just wasn't sure if I found them believable. The mystery had some red herrings along the way and I did not suspect the murderer before the reveal but I had a hard time believing it could be that person. It seemed so out of character until I really started thinking about the circumstances. I might be pushed that direction too living in that setting. Overall the storyline is interesting but might have been more believable to me if they weren't P&P characters. Written as people I've never met before I wouldn't have had the same concerns.
I liked it well enough to want to read the next one. I do enjoy getting my Darcy fix.
The books starts prior to Darcy's horrible, failed proposal and then veers off into a Ms. Joy's variation but it took a long time to get to that point. Since I love P&P I didn't mind rereading that part but I think it could have been trimmed down a bit.
I can't do specifics without spoilers so I will say that I had trouble with some of the personality changes in characters. Just wasn't sure if I found them believable. The mystery had some red herrings along the way and I did not suspect the murderer before the reveal but I had a hard time believing it could be that person. It seemed so out of character until I really started thinking about the circumstances. I might be pushed that direction too living in that setting. Overall the storyline is interesting but might have been more believable to me if they weren't P&P characters. Written as people I've never met before I wouldn't have had the same concerns.
I liked it well enough to want to read the next one. I do enjoy getting my Darcy fix.
January 21, 2018
What I enjoy...
I rated this book a five because it really met all my criteria for a great book: clean, solid story, developed characters, low angst (enough in everyday life), and allows me to become immersed in the story. I would have liked to see how Darcy and the Colonel dealt with the "villain" without a death in the plot. I found the premise of Darcy and the Colonel pairing up intriguing and the repartee between those characters enjoyable, thus leading to my desire for more. I found the author to be at her best while at that point in the plot. I still appreciated the story. I don't want to give away too much. If you have read other reviews, you probably already know the villain I speak of anyway. I don't think you would be disappointed in the book.
I rated this book a five because it really met all my criteria for a great book: clean, solid story, developed characters, low angst (enough in everyday life), and allows me to become immersed in the story. I would have liked to see how Darcy and the Colonel dealt with the "villain" without a death in the plot. I found the premise of Darcy and the Colonel pairing up intriguing and the repartee between those characters enjoyable, thus leading to my desire for more. I found the author to be at her best while at that point in the plot. I still appreciated the story. I don't want to give away too much. If you have read other reviews, you probably already know the villain I speak of anyway. I don't think you would be disappointed in the book.
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March 6, 2021A huge surprise at Rosings
Elizabeth is visiting the Collins and Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam are at Rosings. Both Lady Catherine and Anne are as obnoxious and condescending as can be. Anne insists Elizabeth stay at Rosings and offers her the position as Companion which doesn't make Mrs Jenkinson very pleased. Suddenly Anne is dead and her mother decides to investigate before contacting the Magistrate. Her suspicions are on Elizabeth but for ridiculous reasons - refusing a proposal from Darcy, receiving a replacement bonnet for the one he ruined. In the end the real murderer is revealed and it's quite surprising.
It's a decent story that doesn't go overboard with the angst and miscommunication of many other stories.
Elizabeth is visiting the Collins and Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam are at Rosings. Both Lady Catherine and Anne are as obnoxious and condescending as can be. Anne insists Elizabeth stay at Rosings and offers her the position as Companion which doesn't make Mrs Jenkinson very pleased. Suddenly Anne is dead and her mother decides to investigate before contacting the Magistrate. Her suspicions are on Elizabeth but for ridiculous reasons - refusing a proposal from Darcy, receiving a replacement bonnet for the one he ruined. In the end the real murderer is revealed and it's quite surprising.
It's a decent story that doesn't go overboard with the angst and miscommunication of many other stories.
March 13, 2023
I generally enjoyed the writing and I didn't see the solution coming.
But I had a bit of a problem with the way the mystery plot unfolds. Hope to spoil as little as possible but somebody dies and then somebody else refuses to let the coroner examine the body. And then they go on about who's going to hang for the murder.
I dunno... I am not a lawyer nor do I play one on TV. But could anyone hang for a murder if the officers of the law have not been allowed to examine the deceased and determine that a murder took place? If there's been no chance for the officers of the law to determine the cause or manner of death it seems like it would be a piece of cake for any decent defense attorney to argue reasonable doubt, that their client is not guilty because the deceased may have died of natural causes or if they were murdered they may have been killed by the people who refused to let the coroner view the evidence. I wasn't even sure the victim was dead for a while, I thought they might be just pretending to be dead for some reason.
I listened to some of this as an audiobook on Youtube. A good narration.
But I had a bit of a problem with the way the mystery plot unfolds. Hope to spoil as little as possible but somebody dies and then somebody else refuses to let the coroner examine the body. And then they go on about who's going to hang for the murder.
I dunno... I am not a lawyer nor do I play one on TV. But could anyone hang for a murder if the officers of the law have not been allowed to examine the deceased and determine that a murder took place? If there's been no chance for the officers of the law to determine the cause or manner of death it seems like it would be a piece of cake for any decent defense attorney to argue reasonable doubt, that their client is not guilty because the deceased may have died of natural causes or if they were murdered they may have been killed by the people who refused to let the coroner view the evidence. I wasn't even sure the victim was dead for a while, I thought they might be just pretending to be dead for some reason.
I listened to some of this as an audiobook on Youtube. A good narration.
December 17, 2017
Very enjoyable read
This was unusual as I had no need to edit as I went along as I do for 80% at least of P&P fan fiction.
It was a really interesting read, you get insight into the thinking of Lizzy and Darcy and enjoy the interactions at Rosings. Insight also into the much neglected character of Anne De Bourgh. Maybe not everyone is as Ms Austen imagined but who is to say that they couldn't have developed in this way if she had taken up her pen on a different day in a darker mood.
All in all I read most of this in one sitting, putting it down at two this morning wanting another chapter at least. I am now looking out for more from this authorizes.
This was unusual as I had no need to edit as I went along as I do for 80% at least of P&P fan fiction.
It was a really interesting read, you get insight into the thinking of Lizzy and Darcy and enjoy the interactions at Rosings. Insight also into the much neglected character of Anne De Bourgh. Maybe not everyone is as Ms Austen imagined but who is to say that they couldn't have developed in this way if she had taken up her pen on a different day in a darker mood.
All in all I read most of this in one sitting, putting it down at two this morning wanting another chapter at least. I am now looking out for more from this authorizes.
February 7, 2018
Death comes to Rosings
The story begins with Elizabeth visiting the Collinses at Hunsford. Also visiting are Charlotte's sister, Maria, and Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mr. Darcy visiting Rosings.
Anne De Bourgh is a sly, manipulative young woman who invites Elizabeth to extend her visit so she might benefit from the wisdom of her betters. In truth, she intends to make Elizabeth her permanent companion, which would deprive Elizabeth of a life of her own.
After Elizabeth rejects Darcy's proposal, they avoid each other. Then there is an unexpected death -- yes, a murder, and the three suspects are Fitzwilliam Darcy, Richard Fitzwilliam, and Elizabeth Bennet.
10
The story begins with Elizabeth visiting the Collinses at Hunsford. Also visiting are Charlotte's sister, Maria, and Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mr. Darcy visiting Rosings.
Anne De Bourgh is a sly, manipulative young woman who invites Elizabeth to extend her visit so she might benefit from the wisdom of her betters. In truth, she intends to make Elizabeth her permanent companion, which would deprive Elizabeth of a life of her own.
After Elizabeth rejects Darcy's proposal, they avoid each other. Then there is an unexpected death -- yes, a murder, and the three suspects are Fitzwilliam Darcy, Richard Fitzwilliam, and Elizabeth Bennet.
10
May 11, 2022
A good P&P variation...
First, I need to say that I don't understand why so many reviewers are disappointed that any part or character of this story doesn't follow the original. By virtue of being a variation, everything is on the table.
I'm a huge fan of all things P&P. I enjoyed this story and was surprised by the twist ending. I won't give it away by adding anything further. Another original variation by this author.
One star lost for the nearly 90 errors in shall/will and who/whom, along with about a dozen technical and typographical errors. These seem to be an unfortunately standard for this author.
I'll continue to look for more variations by this author.
First, I need to say that I don't understand why so many reviewers are disappointed that any part or character of this story doesn't follow the original. By virtue of being a variation, everything is on the table.
I'm a huge fan of all things P&P. I enjoyed this story and was surprised by the twist ending. I won't give it away by adding anything further. Another original variation by this author.
One star lost for the nearly 90 errors in shall/will and who/whom, along with about a dozen technical and typographical errors. These seem to be an unfortunately standard for this author.
I'll continue to look for more variations by this author.
December 28, 2017
Enjoyable but not for purists
I enjoyed the plot and was surprised by the culprit and how they were revealed. But there are some issues that purists will find offensive. Elizabeth so quickly and openly calling Mr Darcy "William". The idea that Colonel Fitzwilliam would be an adequate or acceptable chaperone in the drawing room let alone in a carriage all the way to London. Just the general impropriety with which both of the leading characters behaved. Nothing shocking but more relevant to the 20th century rather than the 18th.
I enjoyed the plot and was surprised by the culprit and how they were revealed. But there are some issues that purists will find offensive. Elizabeth so quickly and openly calling Mr Darcy "William". The idea that Colonel Fitzwilliam would be an adequate or acceptable chaperone in the drawing room let alone in a carriage all the way to London. Just the general impropriety with which both of the leading characters behaved. Nothing shocking but more relevant to the 20th century rather than the 18th.
July 26, 2020
I had major issues with the mystery. This author's The Honorable Mr. Darcy and The Indomitable Miss Elizabeth had central mysteries that hung together much much better than it did in this novel.
Why was Anne set up as so intelligent and malicious, and such a villain, only to be dead within a few chapters? We didn't see her body, so I was absolutely convinced she had faked her own death until it became apparent that this wasn't the case. Why didn't any of the main characters demand to see her body or double-check that she was actually dead? Elizabeth and Darcy find out she's dead then immediately stand about whispering about how guilty they'll look, rather than doing anything useful or even showing that they care.
Once there was a suspicion of murder and Elizabeth was a suspect, why didn't they send for Mr Bennet immediately? She is not yet of age, it was a serious dereliction for him not to have been informed.
And why is it called "The Elizabeth Conspiracy"? There is no conspiracy. At all. It makes no sense!!
The less said about the bonnet-wooing the better, I found it insufferable.
This was quite disappointing overall. The audio narration was good.
Why was Anne set up as so intelligent and malicious, and such a villain, only to be dead within a few chapters? We didn't see her body, so I was absolutely convinced she had faked her own death until it became apparent that this wasn't the case. Why didn't any of the main characters demand to see her body or double-check that she was actually dead? Elizabeth and Darcy find out she's dead then immediately stand about whispering about how guilty they'll look, rather than doing anything useful or even showing that they care.
Once there was a suspicion of murder and Elizabeth was a suspect, why didn't they send for Mr Bennet immediately? She is not yet of age, it was a serious dereliction for him not to have been informed.
And why is it called "The Elizabeth Conspiracy"? There is no conspiracy. At all. It makes no sense!!
The less said about the bonnet-wooing the better, I found it insufferable.
This was quite disappointing overall. The audio narration was good.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 21, 2019
I loved this Pride and Prejudice variation that took on the flavor of a murder mystery. The storyline was very entertaining and took on a bit of a twist that I was not expecting. It picks up the story just prior to Darcy's failed proposal and shows shows some of the characters in a completely different light. Loved Colonel Fitzwilliam in this tale. And Darcy was, as ever, our brooding, misunderstood, and lovable hero. Very good read!
December 25, 2020
Another great variation
I’ve been reading a lot of variations lately and this was another good one. Just enough angst to where you want to tell the character to speak their mind when something happens but where would then be the angst be. LOL. A nice surprise ending though would have enjoyed one character turn to another and say “shut up” or whatever the correct wording of the time would be.
I’ve been reading a lot of variations lately and this was another good one. Just enough angst to where you want to tell the character to speak their mind when something happens but where would then be the angst be. LOL. A nice surprise ending though would have enjoyed one character turn to another and say “shut up” or whatever the correct wording of the time would be.
February 8, 2021
I really enjoyed this book. I loved how it took a very little bit of time for Elizabeth to regret her refusal of Darcy. I didn't enjoy the misunderstanding between E&D, due to Darcy believing something without actually knowing the whole story.
I couldn't believe who the murderer was. OMG what a surprise, and then the lack of compassion. 😞
Definitely a good read and will probably read/listen again.
I couldn't believe who the murderer was. OMG what a surprise, and then the lack of compassion. 😞
Definitely a good read and will probably read/listen again.
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