I received a copy of this in exchange for an honest review.
The first paragraph of a story can either get a reader eagerly wanting more, or get a reader to put a book down in disgust, and walk away. While establishing story questions is good, too much confusion can frustrate a reader. In the first paragraph, this sentence: “Bursts of flame licked the treetops as the beasts circled, great eyes staring down at them.” Is quite confusing. Who are “them”? That should be a question that is answered right there, instead of expecting the reader to guess, or patiently read on. At that point, most readers perusing the book, would put it down and walk away, a sale lost. While this is the second book in a series, there still needs to be some clarification to someone who just walks up and picks up the book. Or, if online, curiously scrolls through the first chapter to see if it’s something to purchase. To avoid confusion that would make the reader frustrated enough to put the book down and walk away, the sentence should instead read, “Bursts of flame licked the treetops as the beasts circled, great eyes staring down at Eric and his companions.”
There are a few instances where slang that is a bit too modern is used. For example, the word “fan” meaning someone who likes something a lot, and which comes from the word “fanatic” is used when Eric says: “…the Storm God is not a great fan of me…” That threw me off a bit, because it’s such a modern word, considering that this world appears to be a medieval style world.
Additionally, the story ends on a cliffhanger. Understandably, there’s another book coming, but I prefer at least some sort of payoff, some questions answered rather than the book just ending.
Having said that, the vast majority of the book was extremely well done, and really pulled me in. The writing flowed quite well, and showed me a very clear picture.
Here’s an example: "Even from a distance the jagged cliffs towered over their little vessel. Scraggly trees grew from the rock faces, their crooked branches reaching out for them like fingers. Behind them, the ocean stretched out to the horizon. He was glad they would not be venturing that way; the great expanse of water filled him with a dread he could not shake.”
I also think the author did a fantastic job creating the characters.
Eric, Gabriel, Enala, etc. are characters that are believable, consistent, and three-dimensional. I appreciate believable characters, especially ones I can relate to, and believe in. Maybe not necessarily like, but believe in.
One thing I liked especially, was the map at the beginning. Oh, I do love maps! They really help readers picture the story, in my opinion, including directions, and where a river etc. goes.
The author did a great job world building, creating the dragons, demons, landscape, etc. I would recommend this for someone who enjoys fantasy, and who doesn’t mind abrupt cliffhangers, with books in a series.