Good
I’m enjoying this story, and am curious what happens next. One issue I have with this author’s writing style is that there are several scenes, mostly the fighting scenes, where the actions of the characters aren’t written fully. I write myself, so I can understand why and how the author skips over the action. It’s why beta readers are needed, to tell you when the scenes you wrote, the scenes that make perfect sense to you because you can see them in your mind, are disjointed and messy and not detailed at all. This is very apparent in the fighting scenes of this book. The characters will be walking, then suddenly in the next paragraph it says something like this: And the stick flying through the air would have taken her head off if she hadn’t ducked in time. Where did the stick come from, why was it thrown at her, what is going on? Other than that little issue, I’m enjoying this story.