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Out of Obscurity
At a dinner party in London during the season, Fitzwilliam Darcy meets an enchanting young woman. Though he recognizes her beauty and poise, he is struck by a sense of familiarity and realizes she is someone connected to him. What follows is a whirlwind of events in which the woman’s lineage is discovered and her true identity is established. Darcy quickly realizes she is a woman estimable in her own right, and he finds himself besotted. But amid the miraculous events of a lost soul returning home, dark forces conspire against the young woman, for her loss was not an accident. And so it is that a man is moved to action by a boon long denied, determined to avoid being cheated by Miss Elizabeth Bennet again.
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Published December 21, 2017
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Jann Rowland
87 books192 followersJann Rowland is a Canadian, born and bred. Other than a two-year span in which he lived in Japan, he has been a resident of the Great White North his entire life, though he professes to still hate the winters.
Though Jann did not start writing until his mid-twenties, writing has grown from a hobby to an all-consuming passion. His interests as a child were almost exclusively centered on the exotic fantasy worlds of Tolkien and Eddings, among a host of others. As an adult, his interests have grown to include historical fiction and romance, with a particular focus on the works of Jane Austen.
When Jann is not writing, he enjoys rooting for his favorite sports teams. He is also a master musician (in his own mind) who enjoys playing piano and singing as well as moonlighting as the choir director in his church’s congregation.
Jann lives in Alberta with his wife of more than twenty years, two grown sons, and one young daughter. He is convinced that whatever hair he has left will be entirely gone by the time his little girl hits her teenage years. Sadly, though he has told his daughter repeatedly that she is not allowed to grow up, she continues to ignore him.
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Though Jann did not start writing until his mid-twenties, writing has grown from a hobby to an all-consuming passion. His interests as a child were almost exclusively centered on the exotic fantasy worlds of Tolkien and Eddings, among a host of others. As an adult, his interests have grown to include historical fiction and romance, with a particular focus on the works of Jane Austen.
When Jann is not writing, he enjoys rooting for his favorite sports teams. He is also a master musician (in his own mind) who enjoys playing piano and singing as well as moonlighting as the choir director in his church’s congregation.
Jann lives in Alberta with his wife of more than twenty years, two grown sons, and one young daughter. He is convinced that whatever hair he has left will be entirely gone by the time his little girl hits her teenage years. Sadly, though he has told his daughter repeatedly that she is not allowed to grow up, she continues to ignore him.
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January 3, 2025
Things that were hard to bear are sweet to remember. ~ Seneca
Quote from the book: Throughout the evening, one young woman had caught his eye. She was pretty and petite, her long mahogany locks tied up in an elegant knot, her eyes dark and mysterious. But it was not the young lady’s looks which drew his attention, nor was it her conversation, though he thought she was quite intelligent, regardless of his not having spoken with her. Rather, there was something about her which drew his notice, something he could not quite define. Was it an echo of something else, a sense of understanding or magnetism which drew him? Darcy could not be certain.
So begins our story. Darcy with a nagging awareness of this melancholy young woman: something trips in his thoughts when he hears her laughter.
Recalling days of sadness, memories haunt me. Recalling days of happiness, I haunt my memories. ~ Robert Brault
Darcy has fond memories of his childhood days with his cousins and sad memories of the days of the family’s grief. He must investigate this young woman who so resembles his aunt.
He finds her name – Elizabeth Bennet – and discovers she is currently residing in London with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. A meeting with Mr. Gardiner reveals that Darcy’s suspicions are indeed possible. A meeting with Miss Bennet follows and her identity is confirmed by the Fitzwilliams. Elizabeth has a scar from a childhood accident and miraculously (!!!) the dress she was wearing when she disappeared has also survived! (I found it a little hard to believe the dress had survived being handed down and was now being worn by the sixth little girl.)
Memory ... is the diary that we all carry about with us. ~ Oscar Wilde, "The Importance of Being Earnest"
Lady Elizabeth begins to move in the first circles and adjusts to her change in circumstances. She is blessed with a loving and supportive family as she begins her transition.
The usual villains are quickly dealt with – Lady Catherine reveals a kinder, gentler side; Wickham meets his fate; and Caroline Bingley: will that girl ever learn?
It is necessary to remove those lesser villains because the real villain from 18 years past is still alive and still able to exact revenge.
Despite avowals from Elizabeth and her parents that she will not consider a betrothal for at least a year, the heiress is pursued relentlessly. Three men who are old enough to remember her childhood seem to be actively courting her. Could any of these men have an ulterior motive?
The past is never dead, it is not even past. ~ William Faulkner
A toddler could not disappear in Derbyshire and be discovered in Cambridge a few days later without adult intervention. But why was she taken?
We see thoughts from “the hunter” throughout the story. But who is the hunter? What is his motivation for a murder plot?
The basic story here has been done before – Elizabeth born a Fitzwilliam and lost as a child. But the mystery surrounding our heroine is well done and held my interest to the end.
Memory is a way of holding onto the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose. ~ From the television show The Wonder Years
Quote from the book: Throughout the evening, one young woman had caught his eye. She was pretty and petite, her long mahogany locks tied up in an elegant knot, her eyes dark and mysterious. But it was not the young lady’s looks which drew his attention, nor was it her conversation, though he thought she was quite intelligent, regardless of his not having spoken with her. Rather, there was something about her which drew his notice, something he could not quite define. Was it an echo of something else, a sense of understanding or magnetism which drew him? Darcy could not be certain.
So begins our story. Darcy with a nagging awareness of this melancholy young woman: something trips in his thoughts when he hears her laughter.
Recalling days of sadness, memories haunt me. Recalling days of happiness, I haunt my memories. ~ Robert Brault
Darcy has fond memories of his childhood days with his cousins and sad memories of the days of the family’s grief. He must investigate this young woman who so resembles his aunt.
He finds her name – Elizabeth Bennet – and discovers she is currently residing in London with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. A meeting with Mr. Gardiner reveals that Darcy’s suspicions are indeed possible. A meeting with Miss Bennet follows and her identity is confirmed by the Fitzwilliams. Elizabeth has a scar from a childhood accident and miraculously (!!!) the dress she was wearing when she disappeared has also survived! (I found it a little hard to believe the dress had survived being handed down and was now being worn by the sixth little girl.)
Memory ... is the diary that we all carry about with us. ~ Oscar Wilde, "The Importance of Being Earnest"
Lady Elizabeth begins to move in the first circles and adjusts to her change in circumstances. She is blessed with a loving and supportive family as she begins her transition.
The usual villains are quickly dealt with – Lady Catherine reveals a kinder, gentler side; Wickham meets his fate; and Caroline Bingley: will that girl ever learn?
It is necessary to remove those lesser villains because the real villain from 18 years past is still alive and still able to exact revenge.
Despite avowals from Elizabeth and her parents that she will not consider a betrothal for at least a year, the heiress is pursued relentlessly. Three men who are old enough to remember her childhood seem to be actively courting her. Could any of these men have an ulterior motive?
The past is never dead, it is not even past. ~ William Faulkner
A toddler could not disappear in Derbyshire and be discovered in Cambridge a few days later without adult intervention. But why was she taken?
We see thoughts from “the hunter” throughout the story. But who is the hunter? What is his motivation for a murder plot?
The basic story here has been done before – Elizabeth born a Fitzwilliam and lost as a child. But the mystery surrounding our heroine is well done and held my interest to the end.
Memory is a way of holding onto the things you love, the things you are, the things you never want to lose. ~ From the television show The Wonder Years
January 16, 2018
This is another version of Lizzy Bennet isn't really a Bennet instead she is discovered to be the daughter of an Earl, which Earl why Darcy's Uncle of course. Before she can be found she must be lost and the author stirs things up a bit by having Lizzy is opportuned by Wickham and forced to leave Meryton when Mrs Bennet reveals to everyone that Lizzy isn't really Bennet but a foundling. So Lizzy is sent to the Gardiners while Mrs. Bennet destroys her reputation in Hertfordshire.
What else is different, well she never met Darcy in Hertfordshire because almost immediately upon his arrival at Netherfield Miss Bingley tried to compromise him and Bingley's tepid response has him fleeing into the night and hasn't spoken to Bingley since.
So to recount Darcy hasn't met Lizzy, hasn't insulted Lizzy and Wickham had no reason to spread his story about Darcy and he has shown his bad side to Lizzy. Ergo no pride and no prejudice.
The Earl's daughter disappeared when she was two years old and after an extensive (for 1792) search she was lost. When Darcy meets her at a London dinner party he is reminded of someone, and eventually he realizes it is his Aunt.
And bunch of stupid stuff happens and Lizzy is reunited with the Fitzwilliams and everyone is joyful... except the person who had orchestrated her kidnapping and planned murder. He is unhappy. The author creates two possible villains who are both heavy handed and annoying; apparently no one at the Earl's homes ever heard of 'not home to' or of locking doors.
There were a lot of things I didn't like about this book. One was the faux angst, or angst for people with ADD. For a time it seemed that Caroline Bingley was going to blow Lizzy's cover, bring up her humble origins and guarantee that Caro will be a pariah, then she doesn't. Lady Catherine is expected to be a big obstacle and she isn't, not only that she is a bit of sweetie. Wickham has now caused trouble for 2 of Darcy's relations but he is quickly dealt with. And even the baddie who has been a threat to Lizzy for the entire book doesn't get to lay even a hand upon her and is quickly dispatched. Even Mrs. Bennet's trespass is muted and isolated and merely annoying and again the entire scene could have been omitted and the book shorter if only the Butler knew "Not at Home To"
One didn't just walk into an Earl's, or anyone else for that matter, home. You would approach the door during calling hours and present your card. The Butler would take the card and CLOSE THE DOOR. Then it would be determined if the person was home to them and were receiving.
Lizzy's two annoying suitors would have been dealt with yet the Earl, Viscount, Colonel and Darcy all seem powerless to keep these two creeps away from Lady Elizabeth.
The book also has a creepy undertone I have seen in other 'Lizzy is an heiress' themed stories. They say that Darcy (age 10) Loved his cousin (age 2) a lot. I am sure this is supposed to imply some sort of predestination but it is creepy in 2018.
What else is different, well she never met Darcy in Hertfordshire because almost immediately upon his arrival at Netherfield Miss Bingley tried to compromise him and Bingley's tepid response has him fleeing into the night and hasn't spoken to Bingley since.
So to recount Darcy hasn't met Lizzy, hasn't insulted Lizzy and Wickham had no reason to spread his story about Darcy and he has shown his bad side to Lizzy. Ergo no pride and no prejudice.
The Earl's daughter disappeared when she was two years old and after an extensive (for 1792) search she was lost. When Darcy meets her at a London dinner party he is reminded of someone, and eventually he realizes it is his Aunt.
And bunch of stupid stuff happens and Lizzy is reunited with the Fitzwilliams and everyone is joyful... except the person who had orchestrated her kidnapping and planned murder. He is unhappy. The author creates two possible villains who are both heavy handed and annoying; apparently no one at the Earl's homes ever heard of 'not home to' or of locking doors.
There were a lot of things I didn't like about this book. One was the faux angst, or angst for people with ADD. For a time it seemed that Caroline Bingley was going to blow Lizzy's cover, bring up her humble origins and guarantee that Caro will be a pariah, then she doesn't. Lady Catherine is expected to be a big obstacle and she isn't, not only that she is a bit of sweetie. Wickham has now caused trouble for 2 of Darcy's relations but he is quickly dealt with. And even the baddie who has been a threat to Lizzy for the entire book doesn't get to lay even a hand upon her and is quickly dispatched. Even Mrs. Bennet's trespass is muted and isolated and merely annoying and again the entire scene could have been omitted and the book shorter if only the Butler knew "Not at Home To"
One didn't just walk into an Earl's, or anyone else for that matter, home. You would approach the door during calling hours and present your card. The Butler would take the card and CLOSE THE DOOR. Then it would be determined if the person was home to them and were receiving.
Lizzy's two annoying suitors would have been dealt with yet the Earl, Viscount, Colonel and Darcy all seem powerless to keep these two creeps away from Lady Elizabeth.
The book also has a creepy undertone I have seen in other 'Lizzy is an heiress' themed stories. They say that Darcy (age 10) Loved his cousin (age 2) a lot. I am sure this is supposed to imply some sort of predestination but it is creepy in 2018.
February 10, 2018
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This tended to be more of a suspenseful mystery than a romance, IMHO. We learn of a kidnapping early but we are never given a motive. That question was always rattling around in my brain as I read of a young lady of 20 years reunited with her family on the slimmest of evidence. She resembles "her mother", has her laugh and was adopted as a foundling when as a two-year-old she bumps into Mr. Bennet, a professor at Cambridge. So much coincidence: that fact that she is in London, at a ball, when she has been reared in Hertfordshire, the fact that she could only say "Lizbeth", the name one family member had called her, but there is that scar and then that child's dress (which should have rotten away after 18 years) but now worn by "Aunt Gardiner's" own daughter.
The story is a long one: the relationships with her rediscovered biological family are warm and accepting but we read of how they reintroduce her into the extended family and society. We also read of two older would-be suitors who are persistent even if repugnant. The fact that Darcy is the one who "discovered" her places him at the forefront in her new situation. There is no rush with the romance as her family wants to keep her close and guard her against being taken away...again. After all the culprit was never identified nor captured.
Aunt Catherine's behavior was so changed but also so dear to read about. She actually came to some wise insights, some with the help of Anne and some on her own. And, like others in the new family, she, too is watchful of who approaches Elizabeth.
You will love Attila and know from the onset as we meet him that he will play a significant part in our girl's life. And what of the Bennets? Mrs. Bennet actually is at fault (or is it that she does E. a big favor?) in how she treats "her adopted daughter" when certain gossip swirls in Meryton.
This definitely kept my interest. It has a lot of details concerning Elizabeth's new life as she is promoted to a higher level of society and as she learns to discriminate between social climbers and those who may become true friends.
This tended to be more of a suspenseful mystery than a romance, IMHO. We learn of a kidnapping early but we are never given a motive. That question was always rattling around in my brain as I read of a young lady of 20 years reunited with her family on the slimmest of evidence. She resembles "her mother", has her laugh and was adopted as a foundling when as a two-year-old she bumps into Mr. Bennet, a professor at Cambridge. So much coincidence: that fact that she is in London, at a ball, when she has been reared in Hertfordshire, the fact that she could only say "Lizbeth", the name one family member had called her, but there is that scar and then that child's dress (which should have rotten away after 18 years) but now worn by "Aunt Gardiner's" own daughter.
The story is a long one: the relationships with her rediscovered biological family are warm and accepting but we read of how they reintroduce her into the extended family and society. We also read of two older would-be suitors who are persistent even if repugnant. The fact that Darcy is the one who "discovered" her places him at the forefront in her new situation. There is no rush with the romance as her family wants to keep her close and guard her against being taken away...again. After all the culprit was never identified nor captured.
Aunt Catherine's behavior was so changed but also so dear to read about. She actually came to some wise insights, some with the help of Anne and some on her own. And, like others in the new family, she, too is watchful of who approaches Elizabeth.
You will love Attila and know from the onset as we meet him that he will play a significant part in our girl's life. And what of the Bennets? Mrs. Bennet actually is at fault (or is it that she does E. a big favor?) in how she treats "her adopted daughter" when certain gossip swirls in Meryton.
This definitely kept my interest. It has a lot of details concerning Elizabeth's new life as she is promoted to a higher level of society and as she learns to discriminate between social climbers and those who may become true friends.
February 11, 2025
I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Apart from the characters it has very little to do with the JA's original P&P, but Jann Rowland is a gifted storyteller and his writing is so sweet. I love escaping into his retellings of the love between Elizabeth and Darcy.
February 15, 2018
Finding Elizabeth
I know that this story has gotten mixed reviews and I understand it. But I personally loved the story line. Elizabeth Bennet was a foundling that the Bennet’s raised as their own and 18 years later she is discovered. The story line is really mostly about Elizabeth, Darcy and the Fitzwilliams. The Bennet’s have very little air time in this story and there is really no angst to speak of. That would be my only complaint. The story is well thought out and keeps you going right till the end.
I know that this story has gotten mixed reviews and I understand it. But I personally loved the story line. Elizabeth Bennet was a foundling that the Bennet’s raised as their own and 18 years later she is discovered. The story line is really mostly about Elizabeth, Darcy and the Fitzwilliams. The Bennet’s have very little air time in this story and there is really no angst to speak of. That would be my only complaint. The story is well thought out and keeps you going right till the end.
April 13, 2018
I was frustrated with this book. The idea is a good one... Elizabeth was taken in by the Bennet family when she was found in the street at 2 years old. Years later, she is recognised and reclaimed by her birth family who are none other than the Fitzwilliam family. Darcy recognises her but there is the need in the story for him to raise this issue when he doesn't know her... so introduces himself to the Gardiner's and casually asks about her parentage over the dinner table at their first meeting! I found it really difficult to get over this... it's so arrogant and unlikely that it influenced my perception of the rest of the book.
The book is predominantly about Elizabeth, the reasons for her kidnap and the risks on her recovery. Her relationship with Darcy is so slow it's almost non existent. As in other books with this author, we get to the point where things should be coming together and the book just ends with an Epilogue in the future where everyone is living their happily ever after lives. For me, too much is left unresolved.... Elizabeth was keen to distance herself from the Bennet family and they have no part in the book but the Epilogue is predominantly about them. The identity of 'the hunter' isn't resolved and we don't see the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy. We don't even get to a proposal!
I liked the characters, I liked the ideas but I am just too frustrated to say I enjoyed it.
The book is predominantly about Elizabeth, the reasons for her kidnap and the risks on her recovery. Her relationship with Darcy is so slow it's almost non existent. As in other books with this author, we get to the point where things should be coming together and the book just ends with an Epilogue in the future where everyone is living their happily ever after lives. For me, too much is left unresolved.... Elizabeth was keen to distance herself from the Bennet family and they have no part in the book but the Epilogue is predominantly about them. The identity of 'the hunter' isn't resolved and we don't see the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy. We don't even get to a proposal!
I liked the characters, I liked the ideas but I am just too frustrated to say I enjoyed it.
April 10, 2024
Awesome plot and writing
There are plenty of reviews by others, so...
I thought the scene of Lady Susan and Elizabeth meeting was very moving, brought a few tears to my eyes. Good work by the author.
There are plenty of reviews by others, so...
I thought the scene of Lady Susan and Elizabeth meeting was very moving, brought a few tears to my eyes. Good work by the author.
February 25, 2023
I enjoyed most of this book. The ending was a bit underwhelming but nothing happened to the dog so that is worth at least 1/2 a star.
November 16, 2023
As you can guess from the summary, this is a Elizabeth is not a Bennet trope. Interesting premise and and the story kept up with the hint of intrigue til the end. My only and I think, constant complaint with this author is that the romance and chemistry between Darcy and Elizabeth is always meh! I love clean stories but this author generally tends more towards sterile.
March 27, 2025
What if Elizabeth was kidnapped from her birth family and been brought up as a Bennet and then discovered by none other than Mr. Darcy? In this latest Jann Rowland, there is ‘Elizabeth isn’t a Bennet’ variation trope, family, adoption, class difference, intrigue, and slow burn romance combined for one engaging plot.
I’ve been enjoying Jann Rowland books narrated by the incomparable Harry Frost for the last few years and these P&P variations are something of an auto-buy for me at this point.
That said, this one started so strong and absorbing for me only to fizzle out in the latter half to a story I limped through for a moderately engaging finish.
So, let’s get to it. The kidnapping, the early days of Darcy discovering Elizabeth as his cousin, her learning the truth and the truth being presented to her birth family, then her adopted family learns about her true status, the reason Lizzy was forced out of her adopted home to live in London, the suspense of the ‘Hunter’ learning his plans twenty years before were foiled, early days of being presented to extended family and the Ton, and early stirrings of love were ‘chef’s kiss’ lovely.
Elizabeth has to face those who might be a hindrance like Miss Bingley, her ambitious adopted mother Mrs. Bennet, and Lady Catherine. I enjoyed the surprise choices on how these conflicts turned out.
But,
Then it just stalled out for the middle third of the book. During Elizabeth’s societal debut, she encounters men who turn her off and a few are practically stalkers. Elizabeth says no, all her male relations including her father an earl says no, and yet for several chapters it is rinse, wash, repeat of these same guys still making their play. It made no sense. Elizabeth isn’t the only titled heiress in the world and all one of them did was insult her or get offended by her yet he still kept coming back. It was almost comedy to me at this point. I wouldn’t have minded so much, but the budding romance remains a little bud and the mysterious ‘hunter’ is also busy with the villain grumblings and cacklings and little else. I had to set it aside for other books including another by this author that I adored so much, but then came back to it hoping upon hope that the last third would pick up and finish strong.
Ahem… while not as dull as the central third, I found the hunter’s reveal and motives were a sad letdown since I felt the motive didn’t explain the drastic measures of a kidnapping and continued efforts against the adult Elizabeth. The romance which had been percolating in the background since their meeting never really got that special sparkle though, of course, I loved them together.
In summary, Harry Frost was lights out fabulous and the first third to half of the book was five-star marvelous, but it left me wanting after that. So, a moderately good gentle historical romance by a talented author and narrator.
I rec'd an audio copy from Tantor Audio to listen to in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at The Reading Frenzy 3.27.25.
I’ve been enjoying Jann Rowland books narrated by the incomparable Harry Frost for the last few years and these P&P variations are something of an auto-buy for me at this point.
That said, this one started so strong and absorbing for me only to fizzle out in the latter half to a story I limped through for a moderately engaging finish.
So, let’s get to it. The kidnapping, the early days of Darcy discovering Elizabeth as his cousin, her learning the truth and the truth being presented to her birth family, then her adopted family learns about her true status, the reason Lizzy was forced out of her adopted home to live in London, the suspense of the ‘Hunter’ learning his plans twenty years before were foiled, early days of being presented to extended family and the Ton, and early stirrings of love were ‘chef’s kiss’ lovely.
Elizabeth has to face those who might be a hindrance like Miss Bingley, her ambitious adopted mother Mrs. Bennet, and Lady Catherine. I enjoyed the surprise choices on how these conflicts turned out.
But,
Then it just stalled out for the middle third of the book. During Elizabeth’s societal debut, she encounters men who turn her off and a few are practically stalkers. Elizabeth says no, all her male relations including her father an earl says no, and yet for several chapters it is rinse, wash, repeat of these same guys still making their play. It made no sense. Elizabeth isn’t the only titled heiress in the world and all one of them did was insult her or get offended by her yet he still kept coming back. It was almost comedy to me at this point. I wouldn’t have minded so much, but the budding romance remains a little bud and the mysterious ‘hunter’ is also busy with the villain grumblings and cacklings and little else. I had to set it aside for other books including another by this author that I adored so much, but then came back to it hoping upon hope that the last third would pick up and finish strong.
Ahem… while not as dull as the central third, I found the hunter’s reveal and motives were a sad letdown since I felt the motive didn’t explain the drastic measures of a kidnapping and continued efforts against the adult Elizabeth. The romance which had been percolating in the background since their meeting never really got that special sparkle though, of course, I loved them together.
In summary, Harry Frost was lights out fabulous and the first third to half of the book was five-star marvelous, but it left me wanting after that. So, a moderately good gentle historical romance by a talented author and narrator.
I rec'd an audio copy from Tantor Audio to listen to in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at The Reading Frenzy 3.27.25.
December 22, 2017
Another great read from Jann Rowland.
This was another lovely story from this author, and again I found I did not want to put it down. The story starts with Elizabeth Bennet in London, and when she meets Darcy he suspects there is much more to her and her story. What unfolds is both lovely and intriguing. This is a book well worth reading, and definitely not your usual variation. I highly recommend it.
This was another lovely story from this author, and again I found I did not want to put it down. The story starts with Elizabeth Bennet in London, and when she meets Darcy he suspects there is much more to her and her story. What unfolds is both lovely and intriguing. This is a book well worth reading, and definitely not your usual variation. I highly recommend it.
April 26, 2020
3/5 - liked it
Out of Obscurity has a strong start but rushes to its conclusion. I was incredibly invested in the premise that Elizabeth was adopted by the Bennets after being abducted from her real parents, the Earl and Countess Fitzwilliam. It’s a novel, engrossing background that allows Elizabeth to move among high society after her recovery as well as have nuanced relationships with familiar characters such as Lady Catherine de Bourgh. The underlying mystery of Elizabeth’s disappearance and current security is likewise attention-grabbing. Unfortunately, Out of Obscurity slowly strays toward tedium, then abruptly resolves all issues. In the last few pages, there are a few too many coincidences in a single day: a major realization occurs, the villain shows his hand, and several characters arrive at locations in tandem. I found the villain far too obvious and both his plotting and comeuppance to be dissatisfying.
Additionally, there was surprisingly little story dedicated to Darcy and Elizabeth’s romance. Darcy’s yearning is well developed throughout their interactions, but Elizabeth spends most of the novel steadfastly swearing to remain unattached then suddenly commits herself, even speaking of Darcy as her future husband before a formal courtship. There are several great scenes between Elizabeth and her family members in which they tell her it’s okay to like Darcy; a few more moments depicting Elizabeth’s private reflections and growing attraction would have helped the relationship progress more naturally.
Out of Obscurity has a strong start but rushes to its conclusion. I was incredibly invested in the premise that Elizabeth was adopted by the Bennets after being abducted from her real parents, the Earl and Countess Fitzwilliam. It’s a novel, engrossing background that allows Elizabeth to move among high society after her recovery as well as have nuanced relationships with familiar characters such as Lady Catherine de Bourgh. The underlying mystery of Elizabeth’s disappearance and current security is likewise attention-grabbing. Unfortunately, Out of Obscurity slowly strays toward tedium, then abruptly resolves all issues. In the last few pages, there are a few too many coincidences in a single day: a major realization occurs, the villain shows his hand, and several characters arrive at locations in tandem. I found the villain far too obvious and both his plotting and comeuppance to be dissatisfying.
Additionally, there was surprisingly little story dedicated to Darcy and Elizabeth’s romance. Darcy’s yearning is well developed throughout their interactions, but Elizabeth spends most of the novel steadfastly swearing to remain unattached then suddenly commits herself, even speaking of Darcy as her future husband before a formal courtship. There are several great scenes between Elizabeth and her family members in which they tell her it’s okay to like Darcy; a few more moments depicting Elizabeth’s private reflections and growing attraction would have helped the relationship progress more naturally.
January 16, 2024
A solid, if rather wordy, variation
This is an exploration of Elizabeth Bennet as she comes to terms with her true self. There is romance but that is not the point if the story. The characters are generally warm and believable. This is a variation worth reading although another edit to streamline it would be of benefit.
This is an exploration of Elizabeth Bennet as she comes to terms with her true self. There is romance but that is not the point if the story. The characters are generally warm and believable. This is a variation worth reading although another edit to streamline it would be of benefit.
September 4, 2025
This book could have been phenomenal but instead I'm left shaking my head. I could not put down the book in the beginning. Who is the Hunter, why would he want to take away a 2 year old GIRL who has 2 other brothers (this is a good legitimate question). Also, we slowly learn why Elizabeth is living with the Gardiners and the reason is truly good. I felt that part was so gripping. Then we have Darcy meeting E at a party (well seeing her but not "meeting her" but then running after her carriage when he thinks he recognizes her). Then we are off on our tale of who is Elizabeth. I will say the evidence supporting who she is is a bit shaky. I believe the dress could have been fine assuming that it was worn seldom. But, I think the author could have added a bit more to make it more "believable."
Then, we have long long bits of nothing but Elizabeth being introduced to the Ton and adjusting to her life. This section became tedious. We have some bits of drama (Caroline being a shrew and ALMOST pissing off E and the Countess, Darcy having burgeoning feelings for E but they are not displayed for the reader). I found the Caroline plot to be anticlimactic and was disappointed. I wanted her to ruin herself, it would have been a lot more entertaining and believable. her "transformation" really didn't make sense with her character. Also, the lack of romance between Darcy and Elizabeth is my main problem with this book. The author had an opportunity to really give us some romance. Instead we read about growing feelings but are not privy to any romantic scenes or conversations. In fact, the chances were there could have been romance we so friendly (almost like brotherly) that I was truly unsatisfied. This is where the book lacks to me. If Darcy loves E and his family can see it, why can't we as the reader. We only get some glimpses into his thoughts, but no wooing conversations, no flirty comments, nothing! Sigh! UGH!!!
Finally, we have a resolution as to "why" Elizabeth was taken but it was completely unsatisfying. I was annoyed that the family never truly got the full story (even thought we as the reader did). Then we end up with a rushed conclusion and Epilogue devoid of romance and only showing possible endings with additional fringe characters (Mary and Jane). All in all it was a stellar read in the beginning, then because a bit of a slog then rushed unsatisfying ending. I enjoyed the book and would recommend it. But it could have been so much better.
Finally, I noticed many grammatical/spelling issues that should not be in published works. There were too many in this work not to make note of them.
Then, we have long long bits of nothing but Elizabeth being introduced to the Ton and adjusting to her life. This section became tedious. We have some bits of drama (Caroline being a shrew and ALMOST pissing off E and the Countess, Darcy having burgeoning feelings for E but they are not displayed for the reader). I found the Caroline plot to be anticlimactic and was disappointed. I wanted her to ruin herself, it would have been a lot more entertaining and believable. her "transformation" really didn't make sense with her character. Also, the lack of romance between Darcy and Elizabeth is my main problem with this book. The author had an opportunity to really give us some romance. Instead we read about growing feelings but are not privy to any romantic scenes or conversations. In fact, the chances were there could have been romance we so friendly (almost like brotherly) that I was truly unsatisfied. This is where the book lacks to me. If Darcy loves E and his family can see it, why can't we as the reader. We only get some glimpses into his thoughts, but no wooing conversations, no flirty comments, nothing! Sigh! UGH!!!
Finally, we have a resolution as to "why" Elizabeth was taken but it was completely unsatisfying. I was annoyed that the family never truly got the full story (even thought we as the reader did). Then we end up with a rushed conclusion and Epilogue devoid of romance and only showing possible endings with additional fringe characters (Mary and Jane). All in all it was a stellar read in the beginning, then because a bit of a slog then rushed unsatisfying ending. I enjoyed the book and would recommend it. But it could have been so much better.
Finally, I noticed many grammatical/spelling issues that should not be in published works. There were too many in this work not to make note of them.
January 5, 2025
It began rather nicely but then seemed to drag on. There are certain aspects of the story that make it hard to enjoy without thinking about it. The biggest thing for me was Elizabeth's sudden distance from the Bennet's, it felt too out of character especially when applied to Jane. I can not imagine any Elizabeth in any universe (unless Jane is written as a villain) who would not love and adore Jane to the point where she would insist on her presence by her side. Elizabeth fiercely loves the Bennet's especially Jane, she would never stop thinking of her as her most precious sister. Elizabeth isn't the type of character who would discard her relations so in the manner she did in this book and their absence is felt. And finally my biggest problem is the love story. There is hardly any actual romance or chemistry between Darcy and Elizabeth and we don't even have a proposal. Thing dragged on too long with too many faux villains and then the real one who kidnapped her was so quick and lacklustre. If one removes Wickham, Caroline and Mrs Bennet then we have a shorter but more concise story that could have left more room for the real point: Darcy and Elizabeth's romance.
March 16, 2018
I loved this book. It's just so sweet a story! And it's not just a D/E, but a family story! D'awww! It also is a mystery story of the best sort, since neither the romance nor the sweet family interaction parts suffer at the least because of it. Very much recommendable. (Unless you are a J/B fan in general and Bingley fan in particular, because you won't like his portrayal here as the spineless inconstant puppy he is. Jane gets someone else here. 3 guesses who and the first two don't count.)
Something I especially like: There are several times the author goes meta in this story and uses lampshade-hanging to explain something. The red herrings the author uses are great as well. Also great is one of the would-be suitors, Lord Winchester. He is delightfully narcissistic and persistent, and we readers don't know if he is dangerous or not until it all comes to a head and he is dealt with appropriately. Something else that is awesome and needs mentioned: Darcy is not the king of brooding in this book, but actually jokes around with his family and friends! Yay! (Wish more authors would remember Darcy is Austen's creation, not the Brontë sisters.) Just about all the OCs are great and memorable as well.
To be sure, it can rightly be said tropes like the "Elizabeth is in truth daughter of a peer" and "Elizabeth/Bennets have connections in the ton/are rich/etc." go totally against the point Austen was trying to make in P&P. That doesn't make those tropes any less fun to read if done right, though, like here.
In this case, the "Elizabeth is the daughter of a peer" trope is the basis.
Just about everything in this story depends on coincidence: From little Lizbeth managing to run away and literally running into Mr Bennet, up to at the end the family managing to rescue her in time. But I can't find it in myself to complain about that. After all, let's be honest: canonically, the D/E romance is *wholly* dependent on convenient helpful coincidences as well. In that, this story is very much in line with the original.
Some might complain that the original P&P villains are dealt with too swiftly, but that's not true. What would you have rather? That Wickham escapes prison just to pop up again and again ad nauseam, as he does in some stories, so that we might have a canonical villain? That Caroline not have the least bit of self-preservation instinct? That Lady Catherine be a rabid old woman frothing at the mouth instead of being autocratic but still loving all her family and listening to her daughter's wishes in the end? All those might be fun, but they're overused tropes that could use a little rest. Only the rationalisation of why Collins is not in the story is a bit weak, but who really cares about Collins?
As to some reviewers' complaint here and elsewhere about toddler!Elizabeth's dress having survived beggaring belief: *sigh* 21st century first world luxuries! Are we forgetting about that time in the 90s, when actual left-from-60s clothing was called "vintage wear" and fashionable again? How many of us have clothes in our wardrobe that are 10-20-25 years old? I sure have a lot of them, since I'm not rich. Not to mention: while today's cheaply made children's clothing would probably not survive long due to tear and stains, previous generations had different quality standards. My grandmother had eleven kids, and all of them wore their elder siblings' hand-me-downs. And since they were handmade by her, the quality was sufficient enough that most of them easily survived. Compare it to the dress in this story, which is implied to have been worn only on special occasions due to its quality and remember how fast kids grow out of clothes and I see no reason for disbelief. I don't even understand why the dress was such a memorable point as to be worth mention.
Personally, I have only two minor complaints about this book:
1) Georgiana is shunted to the side and forgotten by the author after she has done her duty as matchmaker - or so it feels like.
2) The helpful coincidence that makes the climax of the story and rescue of Elizabeth from the villain possible:
So yep, this is one very enjoyable book and one that I can heartily recommend!
Something I especially like: There are several times the author goes meta in this story and uses lampshade-hanging to explain something. The red herrings the author uses are great as well. Also great is one of the would-be suitors, Lord Winchester. He is delightfully narcissistic and persistent, and we readers don't know if he is dangerous or not until it all comes to a head and he is dealt with appropriately. Something else that is awesome and needs mentioned: Darcy is not the king of brooding in this book, but actually jokes around with his family and friends! Yay! (Wish more authors would remember Darcy is Austen's creation, not the Brontë sisters.) Just about all the OCs are great and memorable as well.
To be sure, it can rightly be said tropes like the "Elizabeth is in truth daughter of a peer" and "Elizabeth/Bennets have connections in the ton/are rich/etc." go totally against the point Austen was trying to make in P&P. That doesn't make those tropes any less fun to read if done right, though, like here.
In this case, the "Elizabeth is the daughter of a peer" trope is the basis.
Just about everything in this story depends on coincidence: From little Lizbeth managing to run away and literally running into Mr Bennet, up to at the end the family managing to rescue her in time. But I can't find it in myself to complain about that. After all, let's be honest: canonically, the D/E romance is *wholly* dependent on convenient helpful coincidences as well. In that, this story is very much in line with the original.
Some might complain that the original P&P villains are dealt with too swiftly, but that's not true. What would you have rather? That Wickham escapes prison just to pop up again and again ad nauseam, as he does in some stories, so that we might have a canonical villain? That Caroline not have the least bit of self-preservation instinct? That Lady Catherine be a rabid old woman frothing at the mouth instead of being autocratic but still loving all her family and listening to her daughter's wishes in the end? All those might be fun, but they're overused tropes that could use a little rest. Only the rationalisation of why Collins is not in the story is a bit weak, but who really cares about Collins?
As to some reviewers' complaint here and elsewhere about toddler!Elizabeth's dress having survived beggaring belief: *sigh* 21st century first world luxuries! Are we forgetting about that time in the 90s, when actual left-from-60s clothing was called "vintage wear" and fashionable again? How many of us have clothes in our wardrobe that are 10-20-25 years old? I sure have a lot of them, since I'm not rich. Not to mention: while today's cheaply made children's clothing would probably not survive long due to tear and stains, previous generations had different quality standards. My grandmother had eleven kids, and all of them wore their elder siblings' hand-me-downs. And since they were handmade by her, the quality was sufficient enough that most of them easily survived. Compare it to the dress in this story, which is implied to have been worn only on special occasions due to its quality and remember how fast kids grow out of clothes and I see no reason for disbelief. I don't even understand why the dress was such a memorable point as to be worth mention.
Personally, I have only two minor complaints about this book:
1) Georgiana is shunted to the side and forgotten by the author after she has done her duty as matchmaker - or so it feels like.
2) The helpful coincidence that makes the climax of the story and rescue of Elizabeth from the villain possible:
So yep, this is one very enjoyable book and one that I can heartily recommend!
May 13, 2025
BUT THEYRE FIRST DEGREE COUSINS
October 29, 2023
Another great story
Elizabeth is stolen from her family as a baby and lost in the process. Growing up as a Bennett after Mr Bennett finds a toddler in the street. Wickham tries to hurt Elizabeth and the rumors start. Mrs Bennett demands Elizabeth be sent from home as she is not really a Bennett thinking she is saving her daughters. Darcy meets her by chance and Elizabeth is soon reunited with her birth family. The surprisingly lady Catherine or Caroline do not cause too much angst. I only wish there was more.
Elizabeth is stolen from her family as a baby and lost in the process. Growing up as a Bennett after Mr Bennett finds a toddler in the street. Wickham tries to hurt Elizabeth and the rumors start. Mrs Bennett demands Elizabeth be sent from home as she is not really a Bennett thinking she is saving her daughters. Darcy meets her by chance and Elizabeth is soon reunited with her birth family. The surprisingly lady Catherine or Caroline do not cause too much angst. I only wish there was more.
February 8, 2018
3.75 stars. There were some great moments between characters that had me laughing and crying. However, a few things didn’t sit well with me and an anticlimactic ending made me round down. Still an enjoyable read if you get it for free on KU. I wouldn’t pay more than $2.99 for this one.
March 11, 2018
This is a Pride and Prejudice variation by Jann Rowland, author of The Companion, another P&P variation that I reviewed a short time ago. I have to say I enjoyed this one a lot more, in fact more than I expected to when I first read the premise of the story. I waver between 4 and 5 stars for a rating, so I'll call this one a 4.5 star novel.
The premise is that after an aborted visit to Netherfield, which he cuts short after only one day because of a run-in with Miss Caroline Bingley, Mr. Darcy returns to London, convinced his friendship with Charles Bingley may be over. In London, at a party at the Davidsons' home, he spots a young woman whom he finds both attractive and familiar. It seems he's in too unsocial a mood (and possibly too fresh from Miss Bingley's manipulative behavior) to bother asking for an introduction. But the young woman, who is there with her aunt and uncle, is so familiar that she holds his attention, and as she's leaving Darcy finally realizes who she reminds him of. He runs outside, in time to see her and her companions' carriage drive away. Later he asks his host who they were. He learns the man's name is Mr. Edward Gardiner, of Gracechurch Street, in Cheapside.
In the next few days, Darcy makes himself known to Mr. Gardiner and seeks an introduction to his family, explaining that he believes the man's niece, Elizabeth, to be his long lost cousin, who was taken from her family, the Fitzwilliams, at the age of two.
Thus begins a fascinating variation of the story, as Lizzy is introduced to Darcy in a completely new way, and learns of her own history as a foundling and possibly actually the daughter of an earl. Once her identity is suspected as being that of the lost child, we learn the earl's daughter is still in danger from an implacable enemy, but we don't know that enemy's name or the reason they first abducted a two-year-old child and still wish her ill.
The story is well written, mostly true to the original characters, and completely believable. The stakes are very high, and kept me reading, intrigued and anxious to have the mystery solved and the romance wrapped up. It is a long story, but I find this one didn't seem to bog down, and instead kept me wanting to know what would happen next.
P&P variations, and this is no exception, tend to demand that the reader be familiar with the original story they're based on, in order to enjoy the story fully and get the most out of it. Some of these variations remain true to the characters and some don't do so well, and I find that Jann Rowland's variations are mostly true to the characters, though they vary a little in that regard. Some of that is simply because the newer story demands it, such as with how Anne de Bourgh grew in The Companion. But in the two books of his I've read I found Rowland's Caroline Bingleys to be off from how I view her as a character. I see her as more subtle and clandestine in her manipulations than he apparently does. In his stories she becomes quite obvious and shrewish. But his versions do make for better on-page drama.
I enjoyed this variation quite a bit.
The premise is that after an aborted visit to Netherfield, which he cuts short after only one day because of a run-in with Miss Caroline Bingley, Mr. Darcy returns to London, convinced his friendship with Charles Bingley may be over. In London, at a party at the Davidsons' home, he spots a young woman whom he finds both attractive and familiar. It seems he's in too unsocial a mood (and possibly too fresh from Miss Bingley's manipulative behavior) to bother asking for an introduction. But the young woman, who is there with her aunt and uncle, is so familiar that she holds his attention, and as she's leaving Darcy finally realizes who she reminds him of. He runs outside, in time to see her and her companions' carriage drive away. Later he asks his host who they were. He learns the man's name is Mr. Edward Gardiner, of Gracechurch Street, in Cheapside.
In the next few days, Darcy makes himself known to Mr. Gardiner and seeks an introduction to his family, explaining that he believes the man's niece, Elizabeth, to be his long lost cousin, who was taken from her family, the Fitzwilliams, at the age of two.
Thus begins a fascinating variation of the story, as Lizzy is introduced to Darcy in a completely new way, and learns of her own history as a foundling and possibly actually the daughter of an earl. Once her identity is suspected as being that of the lost child, we learn the earl's daughter is still in danger from an implacable enemy, but we don't know that enemy's name or the reason they first abducted a two-year-old child and still wish her ill.
The story is well written, mostly true to the original characters, and completely believable. The stakes are very high, and kept me reading, intrigued and anxious to have the mystery solved and the romance wrapped up. It is a long story, but I find this one didn't seem to bog down, and instead kept me wanting to know what would happen next.
P&P variations, and this is no exception, tend to demand that the reader be familiar with the original story they're based on, in order to enjoy the story fully and get the most out of it. Some of these variations remain true to the characters and some don't do so well, and I find that Jann Rowland's variations are mostly true to the characters, though they vary a little in that regard. Some of that is simply because the newer story demands it, such as with how Anne de Bourgh grew in The Companion. But in the two books of his I've read I found Rowland's Caroline Bingleys to be off from how I view her as a character. I see her as more subtle and clandestine in her manipulations than he apparently does. In his stories she becomes quite obvious and shrewish. But his versions do make for better on-page drama.
I enjoyed this variation quite a bit.
February 17, 2025
Jann Rowland is one of my favorite JAFF authors and this particular book is my all time favorite of his books to date. Darcy and Elizabeth meet early on in London in this story, without the Bingley connection, which eliminates the antagonist behavior of ODC. They are not initially romantically involved, but Darcy begins imagining a close relationship soon after they meet, although he doesn’t act on his feelings for quite a while due to Elizabeth’s unusual circumstances. Elizabeth takes longer to recognize her feelings due to those same circumstances.
In this variation Elizabeth has been sent away to her aunt and uncle Gardeners’ home in London (at Mrs Bennet’s insistence) after she has been accosted by none other than George Wickham. Rumors begin in Meryton about Elizabeth’s behavior and Mrs Bennet throws fuel on the fire by announcing that Elizabeth is not their daughter, but a foundling. Elizabeth is shocked. She has lived for 20 years in the world knowing she is a Bennet. When Mr Bennet reluctantly confirms his wife’s story Elizabeth is sent reeling. Who is she? What will become of her now? When she and Darcy meet at a London party a revelation occurs that will change her life in the most shocking manner.
What I absolutely love about this tale is the absence of the usual villains. Wickham is neutralized early, Caroline is merely a nasty nuisance and Lady Catherine is an estimable character who supports Elizabeth and helps her make a big adjustment into the family of a peer. Instead we have two wonderfully, awful new villains to threaten the happiness of ODC.
The “Elizabeth is not a Bennet” or “Elizabeth is raised outside the Bennet family” is a favorite trope of mine. She is always a cut above the rest of the Bennets and I include Jane in this estimation. Besides Jane’s beauty and serenity she has absolutely no other appealing attributes. She is weak, naive and does not support Elizabeth with the same level of devotion she receives from her (unless some generous author writes a better version of her). I love seeing Elizabeth shine to her fullest potential unhampered by the uncouth Bennets.
This is a long book. I have read it many times both on ku and after purchasing it. Even though Jann’s books are all periodically available on ku I found that sometimes I just want to lose myself in this world and so bought it so I could indulge myself whenever the urge struck me. I usually tell myself that I will skim parts, but I always read it all. The characters are so wonderful I don’t want to miss any part of the story.
In this variation Elizabeth has been sent away to her aunt and uncle Gardeners’ home in London (at Mrs Bennet’s insistence) after she has been accosted by none other than George Wickham. Rumors begin in Meryton about Elizabeth’s behavior and Mrs Bennet throws fuel on the fire by announcing that Elizabeth is not their daughter, but a foundling. Elizabeth is shocked. She has lived for 20 years in the world knowing she is a Bennet. When Mr Bennet reluctantly confirms his wife’s story Elizabeth is sent reeling. Who is she? What will become of her now? When she and Darcy meet at a London party a revelation occurs that will change her life in the most shocking manner.
What I absolutely love about this tale is the absence of the usual villains. Wickham is neutralized early, Caroline is merely a nasty nuisance and Lady Catherine is an estimable character who supports Elizabeth and helps her make a big adjustment into the family of a peer. Instead we have two wonderfully, awful new villains to threaten the happiness of ODC.
The “Elizabeth is not a Bennet” or “Elizabeth is raised outside the Bennet family” is a favorite trope of mine. She is always a cut above the rest of the Bennets and I include Jane in this estimation. Besides Jane’s beauty and serenity she has absolutely no other appealing attributes. She is weak, naive and does not support Elizabeth with the same level of devotion she receives from her (unless some generous author writes a better version of her). I love seeing Elizabeth shine to her fullest potential unhampered by the uncouth Bennets.
This is a long book. I have read it many times both on ku and after purchasing it. Even though Jann’s books are all periodically available on ku I found that sometimes I just want to lose myself in this world and so bought it so I could indulge myself whenever the urge struck me. I usually tell myself that I will skim parts, but I always read it all. The characters are so wonderful I don’t want to miss any part of the story.
December 31, 2017
Another great story by Jann Rowland - possible spoilers ahead
This story was on my to be read list and finally moved to the top. Story is well-written with just a bit of angst to keep you reading.
The premise of the story is a long lost family member who is found through a random meeting at a dinner in London. In this book Darcy only spends one night at Netherfield and abruptly leaves when Caroline tries to force Darcy into marriage.
We first meet Elizabeth in London staying with the Gardiners after being banished from Longbourn by Mrs. Bennett after a long kept secret is revealed -Elizabeth is not really a Bennett. She was adopted by the Bennetts when she was two.
Darcy sees Elizabeth at a dinner and gets a sense of deja vu when he sees her. Finally, at the end of the evening he realizes who she is, but the author keeps the reader in suspense a while longer before revealing that Elizabeth is Lady Elizabeth Fitzwilliam, the daughter of the earl of Matlock who was kidnapped 18 years ago.
The story takes the reader through Elizabeth’s reunion with her family and her introduction into society. At the same time, the reader is introduced to the “Hunter” who was responsible for Elizabeth’s kidnapping and who continues to plot against her.
Be warned, while Darcy and Elizabeth get a HEA, the focus of the story is on Elizabeth and the Fitzwilliams. Also playing backup roles are the Bennetts and the Bingleys. Collins and Wickham are mentioned, but play even smaller roles.
The author tries to keep the reader guessing about who the villain is, but my money was on the person ultimately revealed from early in the story.
Overall another great story by this author.
This story was on my to be read list and finally moved to the top. Story is well-written with just a bit of angst to keep you reading.
The premise of the story is a long lost family member who is found through a random meeting at a dinner in London. In this book Darcy only spends one night at Netherfield and abruptly leaves when Caroline tries to force Darcy into marriage.
We first meet Elizabeth in London staying with the Gardiners after being banished from Longbourn by Mrs. Bennett after a long kept secret is revealed -Elizabeth is not really a Bennett. She was adopted by the Bennetts when she was two.
Darcy sees Elizabeth at a dinner and gets a sense of deja vu when he sees her. Finally, at the end of the evening he realizes who she is, but the author keeps the reader in suspense a while longer before revealing that Elizabeth is Lady Elizabeth Fitzwilliam, the daughter of the earl of Matlock who was kidnapped 18 years ago.
The story takes the reader through Elizabeth’s reunion with her family and her introduction into society. At the same time, the reader is introduced to the “Hunter” who was responsible for Elizabeth’s kidnapping and who continues to plot against her.
Be warned, while Darcy and Elizabeth get a HEA, the focus of the story is on Elizabeth and the Fitzwilliams. Also playing backup roles are the Bennetts and the Bingleys. Collins and Wickham are mentioned, but play even smaller roles.
The author tries to keep the reader guessing about who the villain is, but my money was on the person ultimately revealed from early in the story.
Overall another great story by this author.
December 9, 2024
One of the most wonderful books i have read of this author. Its not similar to original as Darcy and Lizzy doesnt meet in Hertfordshire as on the eve when Darcy reaches Netherfield, Miss bingley tries to trap him and he flees.
When he meets (or sees) Lizzy at a party, he is reminded of someone and he ultimately makes the connection at the end of the party. He does his investigation and voila we have miss Elizabeth Fitzwilliam back. She has been kidnapped at tender age of 2 and mr. Bennet found her in Cambridge. Mrs. Bennet lets the fact known when Wickham importunes Lizzy and she is sent to London to gardiners (lucky break)
The book is more of how E fits into the new family and an elevated lifestyle as Earl's Daughter, deflect unwanted suitors and try to fit in
The usual villains are dealt with quickly because we have a new one here. the person who was responsible for her initial kidnapping was never caught and he is still at large and we get the confrontation at end in Pemberley
The motive for kidnapping is revealed at the end.
E and D's romance is muted and kinda at background. But this Darcy is very well portrayed as how Darcy might have behaved where he is most comfortable. His relationship with all of Fitzwilliam clan in endearing
The highlight of the story is Lady Catherine. though she is still overbearing and classist, she is good at heart and comes with some very good insights.
Attila is a dear and we instinctively know he will play major role in the end. Overall a very good book under 'Lizzy is not Bennet' troupe
When he meets (or sees) Lizzy at a party, he is reminded of someone and he ultimately makes the connection at the end of the party. He does his investigation and voila we have miss Elizabeth Fitzwilliam back. She has been kidnapped at tender age of 2 and mr. Bennet found her in Cambridge. Mrs. Bennet lets the fact known when Wickham importunes Lizzy and she is sent to London to gardiners (lucky break)
The book is more of how E fits into the new family and an elevated lifestyle as Earl's Daughter, deflect unwanted suitors and try to fit in
The usual villains are dealt with quickly because we have a new one here. the person who was responsible for her initial kidnapping was never caught and he is still at large and we get the confrontation at end in Pemberley
The motive for kidnapping is revealed at the end.
E and D's romance is muted and kinda at background. But this Darcy is very well portrayed as how Darcy might have behaved where he is most comfortable. His relationship with all of Fitzwilliam clan in endearing
The highlight of the story is Lady Catherine. though she is still overbearing and classist, she is good at heart and comes with some very good insights.
Attila is a dear and we instinctively know he will play major role in the end. Overall a very good book under 'Lizzy is not Bennet' troupe
June 22, 2024
Darcy recognizes Elizabeth as a long lost cousin and facilitates her return to her rightful family. But they never knew why she disappeared so it is still possible that the original threat still exists.
It is less of a romance and more a story of a family reunion with a side of suspense. I enjoyed Elizabeth's interactions with her family. Our Dear Couple's courtship itself is uneventful, very smooth sailing, apart from all the other dudes who try to accost her. He likes her, she likes him, there is no pride or prejudice to speak of, and it's all just a matter of time. If you're looking for mush you will find it in another book: here there are statements of intentions and meaningful looks but we don't see them getting engaged or anything like that. I knew who the villain would be from the first mention but the motives took some time to be revealed and there is some suspense regarding whether they figure it out in time.
It is less of a romance and more a story of a family reunion with a side of suspense. I enjoyed Elizabeth's interactions with her family. Our Dear Couple's courtship itself is uneventful, very smooth sailing, apart from all the other dudes who try to accost her. He likes her, she likes him, there is no pride or prejudice to speak of, and it's all just a matter of time. If you're looking for mush you will find it in another book: here there are statements of intentions and meaningful looks but we don't see them getting engaged or anything like that. I knew who the villain would be from the first mention but the motives took some time to be revealed and there is some suspense regarding whether they figure it out in time.
August 18, 2025
This variation is not too bad but it is definitely too long, so long in fact that I lost interest. I skipped most of the last chapters. This is not the only problem: Elizabeth loses most of her charm and spunk. The author writes many times that she is beautiful and graceful and everything delightful and charming but I just felt she was insecure. Mr Rowland writes well but his stories (I have read several) always disappoint as far as the romance is concerned. We do not feel Elizabeth and Darcy are in love. We are told they are. The romance clearly is an afterthought and the story is centered on Elizabeth's relationship with her family. Darcy loses his charm and appeal. It took him ages to propose and by the time he did I had completely lost interest. There are plot holes: we never get to know why Lord Chesterfield changed his attitude, or even if it was for real or just a gambit to win Elizabeth. I don't really recommend this lengthy variation even if it is not too bad. I will stick to KU variations by this author in the future and stop paying extra for his books.
November 11, 2022
I have read a few variation with this story line. A toddler torn from their biological parents to be raised by another or eliminated. Reasons for this terrible crime ranges from hatred, greed and selfishness, in this story greed was the primary reason.
This happened to Elizabeth, for eighteen she was Elizabeth Bennett until she recognized by Darcy and reunited with her family, now daughter of a peer. As she assimilated to her new life in society there are two stalkers one of them her assailant.
I liked this variation however, there was some aspects I questions. I felt Elizabeth’s character fluctuated between confidence and doubt. I had expected more internal conflicts between Elizabeth Bennett and Elizabeth Matlock. Bennetts were almost nonexistent except for the event that sent Elizabeth to London and the intrusion of Mrs Bennett at Matlock residence. Considered the relationship between Elizabeth and Mr Bennett, also with Jane, I expected to see each other during the first few months of Elizabeth new status.
Overall it’s well written, characters were developed. I enjoyed and recommended it.
October 19, 2023
Delightful
I appreciate the family dynamic in this tale because every character serves a purpose, making the family bond believable. Just based on my reading, too many times, numerous characters are thrown into a story to create the look of a tight-knit group, but it falls flat. I think Rowland pulled it off.
There are bad guys, a bit of drama, and a subtle romance, but as a whole, the story is sweet and filled with love.
Although they only had supporting roles, I must admit that I liked how the Bingleys were represented. I can see Bingley behaving exactly how he was portrayed in the end, as well as Caroline. I know Caroline is usually shown as over-the-top (and she has her moment), but her turnaround in this story is more believable and natural.
* I don't know if this matters to anyone, but all the dates were in order.
I appreciate the family dynamic in this tale because every character serves a purpose, making the family bond believable. Just based on my reading, too many times, numerous characters are thrown into a story to create the look of a tight-knit group, but it falls flat. I think Rowland pulled it off.
There are bad guys, a bit of drama, and a subtle romance, but as a whole, the story is sweet and filled with love.
Although they only had supporting roles, I must admit that I liked how the Bingleys were represented. I can see Bingley behaving exactly how he was portrayed in the end, as well as Caroline. I know Caroline is usually shown as over-the-top (and she has her moment), but her turnaround in this story is more believable and natural.
* I don't know if this matters to anyone, but all the dates were in order.
February 19, 2025
Mystery- who is Elizabeth Bennet?
In this out of canon story it opens with Elizabeth saying with her beloved aunt and uncle. Questions….why is she there? What’s going on back home? And who exactly is she?
This is an Elizabeth is not a Bennet story that explores her origin along with who and why she was taken as a child. The mystery slowly is unraveled as the story progresses. Darcy is her strong supporter and stands by her as she meets her family. This is such a loving and devoted family that encompasses her into the fold. This Lady Catherine is very likable and gives Elizabeth some truths she needs to hear. Attila, the dog steels the show!
Audiobook: I got this in addition to the book and it brings a 4 star story to a 5! Harry Frost was an excellent choice for narrator. I will gladly listen to this again!
In this out of canon story it opens with Elizabeth saying with her beloved aunt and uncle. Questions….why is she there? What’s going on back home? And who exactly is she?
This is an Elizabeth is not a Bennet story that explores her origin along with who and why she was taken as a child. The mystery slowly is unraveled as the story progresses. Darcy is her strong supporter and stands by her as she meets her family. This is such a loving and devoted family that encompasses her into the fold. This Lady Catherine is very likable and gives Elizabeth some truths she needs to hear. Attila, the dog steels the show!
Audiobook: I got this in addition to the book and it brings a 4 star story to a 5! Harry Frost was an excellent choice for narrator. I will gladly listen to this again!
November 20, 2018
Slow but captivating
I was absolutely delighted with plot and the characters, particularly as the author set the the tale so that the reader would have expected the typically caricatured Miss Bingley and Lady Catherine, but then deftly transformed them into surprisingly relatable people. The story is a definite slow burn, and though I never lost patience with it, I was beginning to wonder toward the end goes long the author was going to take to reveal the identity and the motivation of the villain. But overall excellent writing and kept me enthralled, which is the level of quality and imagination I've come to expect from this author.
I was absolutely delighted with plot and the characters, particularly as the author set the the tale so that the reader would have expected the typically caricatured Miss Bingley and Lady Catherine, but then deftly transformed them into surprisingly relatable people. The story is a definite slow burn, and though I never lost patience with it, I was beginning to wonder toward the end goes long the author was going to take to reveal the identity and the motivation of the villain. But overall excellent writing and kept me enthralled, which is the level of quality and imagination I've come to expect from this author.
April 5, 2020
3.5 rounded up. This was a creative & enjoyable story, but way too long. There’s a delicate balance with suspense & mystery in the amount of information you give and when you give it. If dragged out too much, the reader starts to lose interest & I was dangerously close to that point here. I feel like at least 25% could have been eliminated without detracting from the important points of the tale. With that being said, it was a great story and I loved the characters both old and new. There were some “coincidences” that were a bit far fetched, but didn’t detract from my enjoyment.
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